Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Crystal Hope said:

a very nice piece. :)

October 6th, 2018 10:55

DOZEN ~ NUMBERS POEM ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:

A good twelve liner A & B.
We often have five around our rectangular dinner table, there will be six tonight.

October 6th, 2018 00:06

SHINE ON SISTER MOON ! A SONNET - BRIAN & ANGELA
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A great interpretation (in sonnet form) of the moon and its creation, whether by science or by creation.

I can still hear Walter Cronkite\'s voice, regarding the moon landing broadcast on that day. :)

October 5th, 2018 18:30

UTOPIA ~ SONNET 1 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Nicely written. The couplet says it all.
Thanks for sharing. :)

October 5th, 2018 17:26

DOZEN ~ NUMBERS POEM ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Really great! Regarding the video, my favorite is the 9 telemarketers. :)

The number 8 is also significant in the Bible. 8 is actually infinity turned on its side.

Thanks for sharing! :)

October 5th, 2018 17:23

DOZEN ~ NUMBERS POEM ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Michael Edwards said:

You\'re talking Jeanne\'s language - she plays a lot with players around the globe. Super work.

October 5th, 2018 14:18

DOZEN ~ NUMBERS POEM ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
orchidee said:

A fine write or dozena B&A!

October 5th, 2018 11:10

UTOPIA ~ SONNET 1 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful place I will meet you all there in time.

October 5th, 2018 00:00

UTOPIA ~ SONNET 1 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:

Puzzled at first but then I read your explanation - and a great write it is.

October 4th, 2018 05:24

UTOPIA ~ SONNET 1 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
chaaz said:

This is really great !!

October 4th, 2018 02:44

UTOPIA ~ SONNET 1 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
orchidee said:

A fine write A&B.

October 4th, 2018 02:24

FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K
Laura🌻 said:

Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella scrittura!
Dennis March’s singing sounds a bit like Don Ho’s singing...very similar!(except for the language, of course)
I love words! That is why I studied many languages!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laur~

October 3rd, 2018 17:51

FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K
Goldfinch60 said:

The right words are so meaningful in all writing.

October 3rd, 2018 15:10

FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely sounding new words to me i;n this witty write about unusual use of vocabulary - - G to K is exciting when written in Maori lingo. Well done again you two lovlies.

October 3rd, 2018 13:09

FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A. here\'s my excellent poem with breath-taking complexity, which took me hours to write:
The cat
Sat on the mat
And wore a hat
Now fancy that!


October 3rd, 2018 07:05

FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K
Michael Edwards said:

Fully agree about word choice. My posting today stretches the language yet hopefully comes together giving an almost abstract impression of its intention..

October 3rd, 2018 04:25

SHINE ON SISTER MOON ! A SONNET - BRIAN & ANGELA
Michael Edwards said:

I recall it so well - off to catch the No7 bus - still got some old style London bus tickets punctured by the clippie. .

October 2nd, 2018 13:13

SHINE ON SISTER MOON ! A SONNET - BRIAN & ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:

That moon trip was so special, I stayed up to watch it.

But then I transported to the moon to greet them. “BEAM ME UP ORCHI “.

October 2nd, 2018 07:55

SHINE ON SISTER MOON ! A SONNET - BRIAN & ANGELA
orchidee said:

Might cost millions by the time space travel takes off - if it ever does? Oh I forgot, the No.7 bus goes there. The fare is a four-penny one!

October 2nd, 2018 04:03

SHINE ON SISTER MOON ! A SONNET - BRIAN & ANGELA
orchidee said:

I\'ll have to swoon over a certain kind of mooning! lol. But I knows the moon you mean - the one made of cheese, with mice living on it. Have they ate all the moon yet?
Gosh, nearly 50 years since the first landing.
Were you there too, as Andy and I were, on the moon, to greet the first astronauts in person when they landed? heehee.

October 2nd, 2018 04:02

SIX SIMPLE SENRYU SYMBIOTICALLY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Goldfinch60 said:

Good 5-7-5 but these are not senryu, senryu are about emotion. 2, 3,4 and 5 could be haiku but 1 & 6 are just 5-7-5s, matey be call them Brianiku.

October 1st, 2018 15:37

SIX SIMPLE SENRYU SYMBIOTICALLY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
orchidee said:

A fine *et of *enryu* B&A. You u*ed up all the \'s\'s in the title. I had to use *.

October 1st, 2018 07:46

SIX SIMPLE SENRYU SYMBIOTICALLY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Fay Slimm. said:

Fine set of senryu magic dear Brian - -and that lovely young voice singing of the joy in flying with snowmen always fills me with merry cheer - - thanks for the smile this raised in the first read of my day. Hugs to you both.

October 1st, 2018 04:12

JESUS : MY SAVIOUR & MY LORD ~ By ANGELA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FOR THIS HONEY BUNCH ~ A very positive Testimony for a SUNDAY MORNING ~ You have had 10 visits which is GOOD ! Loved the Video ~ one of my fave hymns ~ also you comments ! Pleased your weather is improving ~ sorry about AUTUMN. You will be back in Essex (UK) in Autumn 2019 ! Missing you lots ~ Every Blessing ~ All My Love ~ BRIAN ~ Your Teddy Bear 🧡😎🧡

September 30th, 2018 18:05

JESUS : MY SAVIOUR & MY LORD ~ By ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good Faith filled write Angela.

The hymn played for me, perhaps Orchi\'s singing drowned it out so that he couldn\'t hear it.

September 30th, 2018 02:09

JESUS : MY SAVIOUR & MY LORD ~ By ANGELA
orchidee said:

Oops hymn won\'t play for me! A fine write and shining witness that you both are. We may say \'I try to be\', but we know it\'s not all in our own strength.

September 30th, 2018 01:39

THREE TREMENDOUS TRUMP TWEETS !
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good fun write. it fits the tune very well.

September 30th, 2018 01:02

THREE TREMENDOUS TRUMP TWEETS !
Laura🌻 said:

Caro Amico BRIAN,
A NO comment...
IS a comment!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~

September 29th, 2018 16:30

THREE TREMENDOUS TRUMP TWEETS !
Christina8 said:

I would love to comment, but I just don\'t comment publicly on things that are political in nature.

September 29th, 2018 11:43

THREE TREMENDOUS TRUMP TWEETS !
orchidee said:

Woof! Oh no, Fido! You know the line.....verse 2. oohhh heehee. Quiet, Fido!

September 29th, 2018 07:57



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