Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
O ! PINK FLAMINGOS ~ Acrostic Sonnet ~ BRIAN
orchidee said:
You off to the wedding today - Brian, in UK?! See you there?!
October 12th, 2018 01:56
orchidee said:
You off to the wedding today - Brian, in UK?! See you there?!
October 12th, 2018 01:56
O ! PINK FLAMINGOS ~ Acrostic Sonnet ~ BRIAN
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful creatures to see with words to grace their beauty.
October 12th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful creatures to see with words to grace their beauty.
October 12th, 2018 00:27
O ! PINK FLAMINGOS ~ Acrostic Sonnet ~ BRIAN
Songbird said:
Love all the facts you included. Very entertaining!
October 11th, 2018 20:57
Songbird said:
Love all the facts you included. Very entertaining!
October 11th, 2018 20:57
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
Songbird said:
Beautiful write, loved the whole thing and enjoyed reading it!
October 11th, 2018 20:55
Songbird said:
Beautiful write, loved the whole thing and enjoyed reading it!
October 11th, 2018 20:55
O ! PINK FLAMINGOS ~ Acrostic Sonnet ~ BRIAN
Christina8 said:
Well, I guess I learned something today! They are pink because of their diet! Cute write!
October 11th, 2018 20:37
Christina8 said:
Well, I guess I learned something today! They are pink because of their diet! Cute write!
October 11th, 2018 20:37
O ! PINK FLAMINGOS ~ Acrostic Sonnet ~ BRIAN
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. Oohh, must get one for me back garden!
Sings *Pretty flamingo* song from 1966, I discovered. The song could be swoony for me though. lol.
October 11th, 2018 10:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. Oohh, must get one for me back garden!
Sings *Pretty flamingo* song from 1966, I discovered. The song could be swoony for me though. lol.
October 11th, 2018 10:12
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I too have been birdwatching for over sixty years, I started as a child with my father. I am not a twitcher though, I will not go flying all around the British Isles in the faint hope of seeing a Greater Spotted Orchi.
So many birds endangered now all round the world, homo sapiens has a great deal for which to answer.
October 10th, 2018 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I too have been birdwatching for over sixty years, I started as a child with my father. I am not a twitcher though, I will not go flying all around the British Isles in the faint hope of seeing a Greater Spotted Orchi.
So many birds endangered now all round the world, homo sapiens has a great deal for which to answer.
October 10th, 2018 23:53
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
Christina8 said:
A nice write about birds. LOVE birds!! (short break you guys took!) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
October 10th, 2018 13:41
Christina8 said:
A nice write about birds. LOVE birds!! (short break you guys took!) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
October 10th, 2018 13:41
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
Michael Edwards said:
Fine observant write.
October 10th, 2018 12:58
Michael Edwards said:
Fine observant write.
October 10th, 2018 12:58
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
FineB said:
Hello Angela,
An enchanting poem and vivid reflection on Essex nature and wildlife.
Charming.
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 12:28
FineB said:
Hello Angela,
An enchanting poem and vivid reflection on Essex nature and wildlife.
Charming.
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 12:28
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad that so many New Zealand birds are extinct or vulnerable - as your poem asks of birds - \"who taught you to return \" yearly to the same place - we have no idea of the devastation to Nature when one of any species becomes extinct. An appealing read dear A and B. xx
October 10th, 2018 12:16
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad that so many New Zealand birds are extinct or vulnerable - as your poem asks of birds - \"who taught you to return \" yearly to the same place - we have no idea of the devastation to Nature when one of any species becomes extinct. An appealing read dear A and B. xx
October 10th, 2018 12:16
BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Angela. Twitchers? Will that cause me to swoon?! heehee. \'Woof?\' Fido is unsure whether to bark or not!
October 10th, 2018 11:23
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Angela. Twitchers? Will that cause me to swoon?! heehee. \'Woof?\' Fido is unsure whether to bark or not!
October 10th, 2018 11:23
THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM
Michael Edwards said:
Gave me a smile and brightened the afternoon.
October 8th, 2018 11:46
Michael Edwards said:
Gave me a smile and brightened the afternoon.
October 8th, 2018 11:46
THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun right, those old millars can be frightening at times.
October 8th, 2018 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun right, those old millars can be frightening at times.
October 8th, 2018 08:03
THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A, but woof, woof! Why is Fido barking? Well, he think this poem may be too scary for me. lol.
October 8th, 2018 07:17
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A, but woof, woof! Why is Fido barking? Well, he think this poem may be too scary for me. lol.
October 8th, 2018 07:17
THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love this Brian so many things hit me being young and feeling afraid of something and it turning out ti be nothing at all
The scariest thing is our imagination
Well done
October 8th, 2018 07:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love this Brian so many things hit me being young and feeling afraid of something and it turning out ti be nothing at all
The scariest thing is our imagination
Well done
October 8th, 2018 07:03
THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM
Christina8 said:
A very good Halloween poem! You guys did a great job! Like the rhyme and that the miller was just covered in flour----great read!!!
October 8th, 2018 06:30
Christina8 said:
A very good Halloween poem! You guys did a great job! Like the rhyme and that the miller was just covered in flour----great read!!!
October 8th, 2018 06:30
THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - - this fun-piece raised more than a smile for my first read of the morning......... Love the concept of a mill being haunted with folk covered in flour - ha ha .
October 8th, 2018 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - - this fun-piece raised more than a smile for my first read of the morning......... Love the concept of a mill being haunted with folk covered in flour - ha ha .
October 8th, 2018 05:15
UTOPIA : SONNET 3 : ANGELA & BRIAN
Goldfinch60 said:
The aliens have been watching us for eons but will not conact us until we become mature.
October 8th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
The aliens have been watching us for eons but will not conact us until we become mature.
October 8th, 2018 00:54
UTOPIA : SONNET 3 : ANGELA & BRIAN
Christina8 said:
Very nice write on what aliens might feel we look like to them. A beautiful society which I hope we can evolve to someday, albeit a very long time in the future. (without guns and knives)
October 7th, 2018 13:00
Christina8 said:
Very nice write on what aliens might feel we look like to them. A beautiful society which I hope we can evolve to someday, albeit a very long time in the future. (without guns and knives)
October 7th, 2018 13:00
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 1 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
FineB said:
Hello Brian and Angela.
An excellent write. Utopia, in this complex, world we are all searching for our own Utopia! The pictures are beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
October 7th, 2018 10:07
FineB said:
Hello Brian and Angela.
An excellent write. Utopia, in this complex, world we are all searching for our own Utopia! The pictures are beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
October 7th, 2018 10:07
UTOPIA : SONNET 3 : ANGELA & BRIAN
FineB said:
Hello Brian and Angela.
A very vivid, interesting and super poem on alien life.
If we went to outer space and any of the other planets we would probably look strange to them. We often see this the other way round the aliens coming to us and them being strange.
Keep writing
FineB
October 7th, 2018 09:22
FineB said:
Hello Brian and Angela.
A very vivid, interesting and super poem on alien life.
If we went to outer space and any of the other planets we would probably look strange to them. We often see this the other way round the aliens coming to us and them being strange.
Keep writing
FineB
October 7th, 2018 09:22
UTOPIA : SONNET 3 : ANGELA & BRIAN
orchidee said:
A fine fantasy(?) write there B&A. You seen E.T? He gone home? Where is his home?!
October 7th, 2018 08:16
orchidee said:
A fine fantasy(?) write there B&A. You seen E.T? He gone home? Where is his home?!
October 7th, 2018 08:16
UTOPIA : SONNET 3 : ANGELA & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:
I look forward to meeting you - what do hairdressers do on your planet - are they all on the dole? :) :) :)
October 7th, 2018 06:01
Michael Edwards said:
I look forward to meeting you - what do hairdressers do on your planet - are they all on the dole? :) :) :)
October 7th, 2018 06:01
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:
As I said before, I will meet you there.
October 7th, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
As I said before, I will meet you there.
October 7th, 2018 00:26
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
FineB said:
Hello Brian and Angela,
Hope you are both well?
What an interesting and vivid poem.
The state of the world at present is far from perfect and far removed from Utopia a lot of the time.
Keeo writing
FineB
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October 6th, 2018 18:55
FineB said:
Hello Brian and Angela,
Hope you are both well?
What an interesting and vivid poem.
The state of the world at present is far from perfect and far removed from Utopia a lot of the time.
Keeo writing
FineB
.
October 6th, 2018 18:55
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Its the same with flights to NEW ZEALAND nobody ever wants to go home : me included ! Pleased you enjoyed the concept BRIAN & I both love SF and have reinvented ourselves as BROS & AOS on Planet TRIOS! Love & Blessings ANGELA 🧡 & BRIAN 😎
October 6th, 2018 12:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Its the same with flights to NEW ZEALAND nobody ever wants to go home : me included ! Pleased you enjoyed the concept BRIAN & I both love SF and have reinvented ourselves as BROS & AOS on Planet TRIOS! Love & Blessings ANGELA 🧡 & BRIAN 😎
October 6th, 2018 12:57
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. I\'m just about to catch the No. 7 bus. I believe it goes to Utopia. It always returns empty though, as everyone stays there!
October 6th, 2018 12:39
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. I\'m just about to catch the No. 7 bus. I believe it goes to Utopia. It always returns empty though, as everyone stays there!
October 6th, 2018 12:39
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Unusual blank verse sonnet. I\'ve not seen this form previously, but I like it.
The subject would interest the scientific mind.
The lines \"Life on UTOPIA ~ is excellent
Good climate ~ no stress or strife ~ PERFECTION !\" is a bit of a stretch or wishful thinking. :)
If you want to get into space travel you may want to research superconductors.
Thanks for posting.
October 6th, 2018 11:19
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Unusual blank verse sonnet. I\'ve not seen this form previously, but I like it.
The subject would interest the scientific mind.
The lines \"Life on UTOPIA ~ is excellent
Good climate ~ no stress or strife ~ PERFECTION !\" is a bit of a stretch or wishful thinking. :)
If you want to get into space travel you may want to research superconductors.
Thanks for posting.
October 6th, 2018 11:19
UTOPIA ~ SONNET 2 ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Michael Edwards said:
You took me away beyond - great write.
October 6th, 2018 11:17
Michael Edwards said:
You took me away beyond - great write.
October 6th, 2018 11:17
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