Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Goldfinch60 said:
Good job it stops at ten, I have run out of fingers and thumbs.
August 4th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good job it stops at ten, I have run out of fingers and thumbs.
August 4th, 2017 08:06
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - that wonderful number nine did it for me Brian - - love to contemplate those fruits of the spirit - a fine end to your double bill of numbers my friend.
August 4th, 2017 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - that wonderful number nine did it for me Brian - - love to contemplate those fruits of the spirit - a fine end to your double bill of numbers my friend.
August 4th, 2017 04:57
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. Oohh it\'s educational here too! *Swoons with all the information to take in*. I never learnt so much before! heehee.
August 4th, 2017 03:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. Oohh it\'s educational here too! *Swoons with all the information to take in*. I never learnt so much before! heehee.
August 4th, 2017 03:49
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ always Numero Uno ~ First to post and first to comment ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 03:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ always Numero Uno ~ First to post and first to comment ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 03:01
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Michael Edwards said:
I can relate with these great bit of writing Brian
August 4th, 2017 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
I can relate with these great bit of writing Brian
August 4th, 2017 02:55
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Christina8 said:
Perfect set of Tankas, Brian! I personally enjoyed number five! You are so full of talent, these are brilliant! Hugs-Christina
August 3rd, 2017 18:00
Christina8 said:
Perfect set of Tankas, Brian! I personally enjoyed number five! You are so full of talent, these are brilliant! Hugs-Christina
August 3rd, 2017 18:00
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
malubotelho said:
A fun way to read. Difficult to write. Thanks for sharing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:04
malubotelho said:
A fun way to read. Difficult to write. Thanks for sharing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:04
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Fay Slimm. said:
A style and form which demands so much writing experience Brian - - such a light and engaging rhyme .
August 3rd, 2017 13:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A style and form which demands so much writing experience Brian - - such a light and engaging rhyme .
August 3rd, 2017 13:08
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
orchidee said:
Oohh I don\'t care that much if they are iambic (if I knew what it meant!) or penta-wotsit (pentameter). I can\'t tell much difference in poems after me sherries! heehee.
August 3rd, 2017 08:28
orchidee said:
Oohh I don\'t care that much if they are iambic (if I knew what it meant!) or penta-wotsit (pentameter). I can\'t tell much difference in poems after me sherries! heehee.
August 3rd, 2017 08:28
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
orchidee said:
Oohh, we\'re overwhelmed - five in one day! heehee. I sort of take an \'easier\' option sometimes of 8.6.8.6. That\'s Common Metre for hymns - fits many tunes. Of course, I gotta come up with the words as well!
August 3rd, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
Oohh, we\'re overwhelmed - five in one day! heehee. I sort of take an \'easier\' option sometimes of 8.6.8.6. That\'s Common Metre for hymns - fits many tunes. Of course, I gotta come up with the words as well!
August 3rd, 2017 08:27
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Michael Edwards said:
They read well Brian - I find that they can be quite demanding since you have to stick strictly to a structure even though they would work equally well if your ignore it - anyway all works well here.
August 3rd, 2017 04:46
Michael Edwards said:
They read well Brian - I find that they can be quite demanding since you have to stick strictly to a structure even though they would work equally well if your ignore it - anyway all works well here.
August 3rd, 2017 04:46
NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun number tankas Brian
August 3rd, 2017 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun number tankas Brian
August 3rd, 2017 03:09
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
Christina8 said:
I thought I knew a lot about Elvis. Thanks for the poem today. Very enlightening! Great poem!! Hugs-Christina
August 2nd, 2017 12:27
Christina8 said:
I thought I knew a lot about Elvis. Thanks for the poem today. Very enlightening! Great poem!! Hugs-Christina
August 2nd, 2017 12:27
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
malubotelho said:
A nice sweet remembrance. I love dogs and cats. Have no one right now. Thinking in getting a dog. Need to decide witch one
August 2nd, 2017 11:35
malubotelho said:
A nice sweet remembrance. I love dogs and cats. Have no one right now. Thinking in getting a dog. Need to decide witch one
August 2nd, 2017 11:35
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute, Briansodes! Funny, but I was a minority of one, I suppose, who was never impressed with his singing voice. Go figure!
August 2nd, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute, Briansodes! Funny, but I was a minority of one, I suppose, who was never impressed with his singing voice. Go figure!
August 2nd, 2017 08:14
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
Azura Nightsong said:
I know how that is. My mom got a dog a couple years before I was born and she passed in recent years. And when my mom and stepdad divorced we had to leave the new dog with him. I really hope we get another dog soon.
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 2nd, 2017 07:37
Azura Nightsong said:
I know how that is. My mom got a dog a couple years before I was born and she passed in recent years. And when my mom and stepdad divorced we had to leave the new dog with him. I really hope we get another dog soon.
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 2nd, 2017 07:37
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
Michael Edwards said:
I never cease to admire the way we humans can get so attached to a dog and a dog to us. Pity you can\'t say the same about cats . Good write B.
August 2nd, 2017 03:49
Michael Edwards said:
I never cease to admire the way we humans can get so attached to a dog and a dog to us. Pity you can\'t say the same about cats . Good write B.
August 2nd, 2017 03:49
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember the emotion the song evoked Brian - thanks for this reminder of a pet dog\'s value.
August 2nd, 2017 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember the emotion the song evoked Brian - thanks for this reminder of a pet dog\'s value.
August 2nd, 2017 03:31
MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP
Goldfinch60 said:
The King lives in all our lives (at least those who are as old as I am!)
August 2nd, 2017 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The King lives in all our lives (at least those who are as old as I am!)
August 2nd, 2017 02:39
MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet
Azura Nightsong said:
I live in such a valley and I love it with all my heart, it\'s the place I\'ve spent the fifteen years of my life. I\'ve always enjoyed sonnets, but they can pose a challenge. Lovely poem!
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 1st, 2017 19:08
Azura Nightsong said:
I live in such a valley and I love it with all my heart, it\'s the place I\'ve spent the fifteen years of my life. I\'ve always enjoyed sonnets, but they can pose a challenge. Lovely poem!
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 1st, 2017 19:08
MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem, Brian! You\'ve written a wonderful vision of Gods creation. Great job! Hugs-Christina
August 1st, 2017 18:01
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem, Brian! You\'ve written a wonderful vision of Gods creation. Great job! Hugs-Christina
August 1st, 2017 18:01
MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet
jenny.g said:
A beautiful feeling captured in words. Great write Brian!
August 1st, 2017 07:18
jenny.g said:
A beautiful feeling captured in words. Great write Brian!
August 1st, 2017 07:18
MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Another clever write - and a good reminder - thanks for posting Brian.
August 1st, 2017 02:49
Michael Edwards said:
Another clever write - and a good reminder - thanks for posting Brian.
August 1st, 2017 02:49
MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Hills and Valley continue to inspire you Brian.
August 1st, 2017 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Hills and Valley continue to inspire you Brian.
August 1st, 2017 02:10
MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Quiet and virgin valleys are disappearing world-wide dear Brian - - thanks for this clever reminder that they need to be left as they are - touched by the hand of the Lord and treasured by those who care-
- - a lovely sonnet
August 1st, 2017 02:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Quiet and virgin valleys are disappearing world-wide dear Brian - - thanks for this clever reminder that they need to be left as they are - touched by the hand of the Lord and treasured by those who care-
- - a lovely sonnet
August 1st, 2017 02:06
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