Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Azura Nightsong said:

All of this is so true these days. It is needed and I hope it comes.

August 6th, 2017 10:30

PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
orchidee said:

A fine write B. The Psalm was originally a prayer for King Solomon, I think! I would do a \'full face avi\' too, but the camera lens keep cracking! hmmm. lol.

August 6th, 2017 09:47

PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
rrodriguez said:

Excellent poem... we need peace & justice today. Wonderful poem my brother. Be blessed!

August 6th, 2017 09:28

PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Michael Edwards said:

May all those who have a God be touched by Him

August 6th, 2017 02:29

PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Goldfinch60 said:

Amen.

August 6th, 2017 02:24

L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
SMD said:

This is amazing Brian!A tribute to your work :)

August 5th, 2017 17:16

MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
SMD said:

Beautiful!!

August 5th, 2017 15:24

TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

Deeply honoured for the dedication my friend - - the tragic tale of Isolde the \"trophy bride\" and told with your flair for the romantic captures the feel of Wagner\'s opera and brings back the sounds of its wonderful music. A real classic and penned as a sonnet is fit for a Queen !! This goes for sure into my favourites.

August 5th, 2017 10:33

TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
malubotelho said:

Nice writing Brian. Bought classically from old times. I love those past classic romances. Thanks for sharing

August 5th, 2017 09:38

TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
orchidee said:

Oohh I\'m too un-culture - in me sherry times anyway! - to know all this. A fine write Brian!

August 5th, 2017 08:55

TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
Adri said:

\"Be careful what you drink, and who you drink it with,\" such a true statement. I always loved the story of Tristan and Isolde such a beautiful love story filled with sadness. I really enjoyed this poem Brian! Another one perfectly written! 🦋

August 5th, 2017 08:53

MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Adri said:

Hell Brian! Just catching up on reading some poems! The title caught my attention. The word, \"tapestry\" brought fond memories back. This was an excellent poem it literally gave me chills. It captured my beliefs however, I also agree with Louis about the \"higher self.\" Your poems are always amazing! Thank you for sharing, always, 🦋

August 5th, 2017 08:40

TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Like he choice of painting - our chemist is out of love potion at the moment. Informative poem Brian - thanks for posting.

August 5th, 2017 08:00

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
malubotelho said:

The number 9 is for me. Thanks for this beauty Brian.

August 4th, 2017 19:25

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Christina8 said:

Another great example of Tanka! You never cease to amaze me with your positivity and educational bits you insert into your writes. Love it! Hugs--Christina

August 4th, 2017 19:24

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
WriteBeLight said:

Adds up to a great one Brian.

August 4th, 2017 12:31

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
ShannonXx said:

A wonderful write!

August 4th, 2017 09:33

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Goldfinch60 said:

Good job it stops at ten, I have run out of fingers and thumbs.

August 4th, 2017 08:06

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - that wonderful number nine did it for me Brian - - love to contemplate those fruits of the spirit - a fine end to your double bill of numbers my friend.

August 4th, 2017 04:57

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Oohh it\'s educational here too! *Swoons with all the information to take in*. I never learnt so much before! heehee.

August 4th, 2017 03:49

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ always Numero Uno ~ First to post and first to comment ~ Thanks BRIAN

August 4th, 2017 03:01

SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Michael Edwards said:

I can relate with these great bit of writing Brian

August 4th, 2017 02:55

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Christina8 said:

Perfect set of Tankas, Brian! I personally enjoyed number five! You are so full of talent, these are brilliant! Hugs-Christina

August 3rd, 2017 18:00

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
malubotelho said:

A fun way to read. Difficult to write. Thanks for sharing.

August 3rd, 2017 17:04

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Fay Slimm. said:

A style and form which demands so much writing experience Brian - - such a light and engaging rhyme .

August 3rd, 2017 13:08

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 3rd, 2017 10:25

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
orchidee said:

Oohh I don\'t care that much if they are iambic (if I knew what it meant!) or penta-wotsit (pentameter). I can\'t tell much difference in poems after me sherries! heehee.

August 3rd, 2017 08:28

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
orchidee said:

Oohh, we\'re overwhelmed - five in one day! heehee. I sort of take an \'easier\' option sometimes of 8.6.8.6. That\'s Common Metre for hymns - fits many tunes. Of course, I gotta come up with the words as well!

August 3rd, 2017 08:27

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Michael Edwards said:

They read well Brian - I find that they can be quite demanding since you have to stick strictly to a structure even though they would work equally well if your ignore it - anyway all works well here.

August 3rd, 2017 04:46

NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun number tankas Brian

August 3rd, 2017 03:09



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