Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Seasons In a Year.
David Wakeling said:

What a beautiful poem.It reads like a song.Excellent

March 3rd, 2025 17:03

Seasons In a Year.
Cheeky Missy said:

Very lovely and evocative. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a hauntingly romantic poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

March 3rd, 2025 16:02

Seasons In a Year.
Neville said:



Thank you for allowing me to literarily accompany you throughout your entire journey .. I can now see much more clearly what all the fuss is about ..

March 3rd, 2025 14:26

Seasons In a Year.
hzugman said:

I enjoyed reading your trip around the seasons. Well done.

March 3rd, 2025 12:06

Seasons In a Year.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Profoundly powerful, Tobani. Loved the message. The positive presence of another cannot be underestimated. Truth! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 3rd, 2025 09:14

Seasons In a Year.
sorenbarrett said:

Tobani you completed the cycle well. In this poem the cycle of nature in seasons and so it is with life as well in metaphor this poem should speak to us all. Very nice with the emphasis on the company we have throughout the cycle.

March 3rd, 2025 05:12

Seasons In a Year.
Salvia.S said:

Wow! Beautiful poem! Loved it.

March 3rd, 2025 02:49

Fun in (Sun)Day
James Michael said:

Very much enjoyed the last stanza!

March 2nd, 2025 20:25

To Be Alone
Cassie58 said:

Isn’t it strange how things can go full circle and how we can eventually wish for what we once feared. A fine poem dear Tobani.

March 2nd, 2025 17:43

Fun in (Sun)Day
David Wakeling said:

So much wisdom here.Made me think.Wonderful.

March 2nd, 2025 17:40

Fun in (Sun)Day
Cassie58 said:

Dear Tobani, I am very much a fan of your wise man says pieces. Combined wisdom and humour. A fine combination for sure.

March 2nd, 2025 17:35

Fun in (Sun)Day
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

March 2nd, 2025 15:51

Fun in (Sun)Day
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha! There\'s nothing like common sense which herein is rendered to effect with a twinkle of good humor to soften the reality until the imagery daintily trimming it seems like powdered sugar as the poignant facts hang, suspended. Thank you for sharing.

March 2nd, 2025 11:59

Fun in (Sun)Day
Neville said:



Wise words indeed .. and now pinned forever upon a most appreciative page .. Neville

March 2nd, 2025 11:40

Fun in (Sun)Day
MDStone said:

Tobani,
Wise words indeed. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read very much.

March 2nd, 2025 07:59

Fun in (Sun)Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:

That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of proverbs from Wise Man. Always looking forward to more. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 2nd, 2025 07:18

Fun in (Sun)Day
sorenbarrett said:

Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday. Loved then all

March 2nd, 2025 04:34

Fun in (Sun)Day
cellinic said:

This poem triggers a long train of thoughts. best wishes

March 2nd, 2025 04:02

Fun in (Sun)Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words and some home truths Tobani.

Andy

March 2nd, 2025 03:00

Fun in (Sun)Day
arqios said:

Definitely will come to a volume wherein a book is compiled πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

March 2nd, 2025 02:27

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
John Prophet said:

Interesting work….John

March 1st, 2025 16:46

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 1st, 2025 10:50

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This was a lot of fun, Tobani. I good follow up to your last go \'round with Mary and Harry. It felt a bit like the shell game, trying to figure out under whose shell Mary might appear! LOL! Well done, my friend! πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

March 1st, 2025 08:24

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
arqios said:

Now that’s the stuff of popular daytime drama 🎭 πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 1st, 2025 06:42

Value of Gifts
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice And Poignant Tobani

March 1st, 2025 06:11

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
sorenbarrett said:

Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.

March 1st, 2025 05:31

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good writes T.

March 1st, 2025 03:29

Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun writes Tobani.

Andy

March 1st, 2025 02:53

To Be Alone
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.

Andy

March 1st, 2025 02:44

The Same Picture Frame
NafisaSB said:

a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written

February 28th, 2025 23:55



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