Comments received on poems by JustABird
Foolishness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning JAB ~ Thanks for your wise words ! There is a fool in ALL of US which it is best to supress ! We should always tolerate the Foolishness of others but NEVER encourage it ! Like the concept of the 7x7x7 !
The GOOD BOOK (Proverbs 13 v 20) says *He who walks with the WISE gains WISDOM ~ He who walks with FOOLS come to grief !*
Thanks for sharing please check ours site & Fusion (click on DEVELOPING to see it) ~ Thanks !
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
What State are you in ?
Each is very different !
May 19th, 2020 03:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning JAB ~ Thanks for your wise words ! There is a fool in ALL of US which it is best to supress ! We should always tolerate the Foolishness of others but NEVER encourage it ! Like the concept of the 7x7x7 !
The GOOD BOOK (Proverbs 13 v 20) says *He who walks with the WISE gains WISDOM ~ He who walks with FOOLS come to grief !*
Thanks for sharing please check ours site & Fusion (click on DEVELOPING to see it) ~ Thanks !
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
What State are you in ?
Each is very different !
May 19th, 2020 03:52
escape
MendedFences27 said:
\"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with dementia (alzheimers?). This is a sad tale, but the way you have written it brings a new light onto the subject. How others (family) are affected by it. Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2020 17:42
MendedFences27 said:
\"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with dementia (alzheimers?). This is a sad tale, but the way you have written it brings a new light onto the subject. How others (family) are affected by it. Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2020 17:42
Darkness Surrounds
Bibbeck said:
I enjoyed this; it\'s quite atmospheric. Good write.
May 4th, 2017 15:48
Bibbeck said:
I enjoyed this; it\'s quite atmospheric. Good write.
May 4th, 2017 15:48
Darkness Surrounds
Garry said:
Welcome back. Delighted to see your latest offering does not disappoint the darkness within.
The last two lines particularly are very beautiful.
May 4th, 2017 15:23
Garry said:
Welcome back. Delighted to see your latest offering does not disappoint the darkness within.
The last two lines particularly are very beautiful.
May 4th, 2017 15:23
Darkness Surrounds
LML said:
I like this. It reminds me of some one I know😭 Well written🤗
May 3rd, 2017 22:48
LML said:
I like this. It reminds me of some one I know😭 Well written🤗
May 3rd, 2017 22:48
Beyond the Façade
Garry said:
Welcome back. Worth the wait. I especially love the opening 4 lines.
April 7th, 2017 14:01
Garry said:
Welcome back. Worth the wait. I especially love the opening 4 lines.
April 7th, 2017 14:01
Fear of Rejection
orchidee said:
Good write. Sometimes it\'s just writer\'s block though - or painter\'s block, etc!
March 26th, 2017 11:42
orchidee said:
Good write. Sometimes it\'s just writer\'s block though - or painter\'s block, etc!
March 26th, 2017 11:42
Fear of Rejection
Garry said:
I\'d have been very proud if I\'d written it.
And overall it flows with ease and style.
March 26th, 2017 11:07
Garry said:
I\'d have been very proud if I\'d written it.
And overall it flows with ease and style.
March 26th, 2017 11:07
Fear of Rejection
Garry said:
It\'s a very beautiful poem.
The way I read it in my head i suppose I agree that the very last line didn\'t flow quite as well as the rest, but this brings it to a definite end, so might actually be a good thing.
I mulled it over a few times when I first read it and wondered about
\".... learned to take no chances\"
I think it\'s a very beautiful poem.
March 26th, 2017 11:06
Garry said:
It\'s a very beautiful poem.
The way I read it in my head i suppose I agree that the very last line didn\'t flow quite as well as the rest, but this brings it to a definite end, so might actually be a good thing.
I mulled it over a few times when I first read it and wondered about
\".... learned to take no chances\"
I think it\'s a very beautiful poem.
March 26th, 2017 11:06
Girl In Search Of...
Garry said:
\"everywhere to me\"
so much better than the more familiar \"everything to me\". Describes the situation to a tee. Beautifully written. Your ex colleagues on the magazine don\'t realise what they have missed . Hope you have got over them.
March 23rd, 2017 05:05
Garry said:
\"everywhere to me\"
so much better than the more familiar \"everything to me\". Describes the situation to a tee. Beautifully written. Your ex colleagues on the magazine don\'t realise what they have missed . Hope you have got over them.
March 23rd, 2017 05:05
Love is a Battlefield
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be a battlefield until the right one comes along and then peace and love conquers all. Good write.
March 23rd, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be a battlefield until the right one comes along and then peace and love conquers all. Good write.
March 23rd, 2017 01:29
Love is a Battlefield
MendedFences27 said:
I really like this one. Short and to the point. Very succinct. Love is a battlefield, when it\'s not real. The scars do heal though. All one has to do is find an ally. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:45
MendedFences27 said:
I really like this one. Short and to the point. Very succinct. Love is a battlefield, when it\'s not real. The scars do heal though. All one has to do is find an ally. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:45
Just a Dream
Garry said:
I \'d Love to hear it \'performed\'
I think there is a need for\"loss\" to be a cagegory.
March 22nd, 2017 17:15
Garry said:
I \'d Love to hear it \'performed\'
I think there is a need for\"loss\" to be a cagegory.
March 22nd, 2017 17:15
Speak
Garry said:
Beautiful, and uplifting. There is usually light to found in all the dark patches. Ive been married nearly 30 years and travelled a few tunnels. Great write about how we can make things work out if we want to.
Enjoyed it a lot. Enjoyed all your poems actually, genuinely impressed. Mine all tend to be a bit bleak, i must try harder!
March 22nd, 2017 17:10
Garry said:
Beautiful, and uplifting. There is usually light to found in all the dark patches. Ive been married nearly 30 years and travelled a few tunnels. Great write about how we can make things work out if we want to.
Enjoyed it a lot. Enjoyed all your poems actually, genuinely impressed. Mine all tend to be a bit bleak, i must try harder!
March 22nd, 2017 17:10
Deep Down
Garry said:
Love the starting point. Really good to hear how people get started on a poem.
I think this also worked out really well.
Evocative, mixtures of tentative hopefulness. Realky enjoyed it.
March 22nd, 2017 17:04
Garry said:
Love the starting point. Really good to hear how people get started on a poem.
I think this also worked out really well.
Evocative, mixtures of tentative hopefulness. Realky enjoyed it.
March 22nd, 2017 17:04
Hello, From the Other Side
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Very emotional write. Kept it clear though, not too much sentimentality. That makes for a better write. Did it actually happen as you describe? Fascinating if it did. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
February 13th, 2017 14:06
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Very emotional write. Kept it clear though, not too much sentimentality. That makes for a better write. Did it actually happen as you describe? Fascinating if it did. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
February 13th, 2017 14:06
Hello, From the Other Side
WriteBeLight said:
What a great story! I hope you find comfort and I am sorry about your Dad.
February 13th, 2017 12:17
WriteBeLight said:
What a great story! I hope you find comfort and I am sorry about your Dad.
February 13th, 2017 12:17
Speak
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Expresses how relationships can become robotic. Creatively crafted muse here. Rekindling cold love requires effort. But such situations usually happen to those who fornicated and had a very hot love affair before marriage from the cases I have observed.
The desire to keep and revive love is a common human one. So kudos for this poetry, enjoyed how it rhymes in places.
Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 15th, 2016 01:40
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Expresses how relationships can become robotic. Creatively crafted muse here. Rekindling cold love requires effort. But such situations usually happen to those who fornicated and had a very hot love affair before marriage from the cases I have observed.
The desire to keep and revive love is a common human one. So kudos for this poetry, enjoyed how it rhymes in places.
Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 15th, 2016 01:40
Speak
Augustus said:
Conversation is an important part of love making. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2016 19:20
Augustus said:
Conversation is an important part of love making. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2016 19:20
Speak
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It happend JAB when couples are out of synch ! I\'ve never been marries and my relationship with my current GF is always on a high when we are together (we live separate !) BUT if we got married we might (unitentionally) put the fire out ~ it happens ! Thanks fro caring & sharing ~ YOURS ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 14:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It happend JAB when couples are out of synch ! I\'ve never been marries and my relationship with my current GF is always on a high when we are together (we live separate !) BUT if we got married we might (unitentionally) put the fire out ~ it happens ! Thanks fro caring & sharing ~ YOURS ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 14:34
« Return to the profile of JustABird
