Comments received on poems by JustABird



Foolishness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning JAB ~ Thanks for your wise words ! There is a fool in ALL of US which it is best to supress ! We should always tolerate the Foolishness of others but NEVER encourage it ! Like the concept of the 7x7x7 !

The GOOD BOOK (Proverbs 13 v 20) says *He who walks with the WISE gains WISDOM ~ He who walks with FOOLS come to grief !*

Thanks for sharing please check ours site & Fusion (click on DEVELOPING to see it) ~ Thanks !

Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
What State are you in ?
Each is very different !

May 19th, 2020 03:52

escape
MendedFences27 said:

\"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with dementia (alzheimers?). This is a sad tale, but the way you have written it brings a new light onto the subject. How others (family) are affected by it. Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.

April 28th, 2020 17:42

Darkness Surrounds
Bibbeck said:

I enjoyed this; it\'s quite atmospheric. Good write.

May 4th, 2017 15:48

Darkness Surrounds
Garry said:

Welcome back. Delighted to see your latest offering does not disappoint the darkness within.
The last two lines particularly are very beautiful.

May 4th, 2017 15:23

Darkness Surrounds
LML said:

I like this. It reminds me of some one I know😭 Well written🤗

May 3rd, 2017 22:48

Beyond the Façade
Garry said:

Welcome back. Worth the wait. I especially love the opening 4 lines.

April 7th, 2017 14:01

Fear of Rejection
orchidee said:

Good write. Sometimes it\'s just writer\'s block though - or painter\'s block, etc!

March 26th, 2017 11:42

Fear of Rejection
Garry said:

I\'d have been very proud if I\'d written it.
And overall it flows with ease and style.

March 26th, 2017 11:07

Fear of Rejection
Garry said:

It\'s a very beautiful poem.
The way I read it in my head i suppose I agree that the very last line didn\'t flow quite as well as the rest, but this brings it to a definite end, so might actually be a good thing.
I mulled it over a few times when I first read it and wondered about
\".... learned to take no chances\"
I think it\'s a very beautiful poem.

March 26th, 2017 11:06

Fear of Rejection
Garry said:

Why i wonder? Can we ask?

March 24th, 2017 12:24

Girl In Search Of...
Garry said:

\"everywhere to me\"
so much better than the more familiar \"everything to me\". Describes the situation to a tee. Beautifully written. Your ex colleagues on the magazine don\'t realise what they have missed . Hope you have got over them.

March 23rd, 2017 05:05

Fear of Rejection
Garry said:

Great imagery. Some beautiful phrases.

March 23rd, 2017 05:00

Love is a Battlefield
Garry said:

Wow! Really good. Bit scary though.

March 23rd, 2017 04:58

Love is a Battlefield
Goldfinch60 said:

Love can be a battlefield until the right one comes along and then peace and love conquers all. Good write.

March 23rd, 2017 01:29

Love is a Battlefield
MendedFences27 said:

I really like this one. Short and to the point. Very succinct. Love is a battlefield, when it\'s not real. The scars do heal though. All one has to do is find an ally. - Phil A.

March 22nd, 2017 20:45

Pretty Lies
Garry said:

Excellent last stanza.

March 22nd, 2017 17:18

Girl on a Pedestal
Garry said:

Very good. As always.

March 22nd, 2017 17:16

Just a Dream
Garry said:

I \'d Love to hear it \'performed\'
I think there is a need for\"loss\" to be a cagegory.

March 22nd, 2017 17:15

Night Moves
Garry said:

Very dark. Really enjoy your writing style

March 22nd, 2017 17:12

Speak
Garry said:

Beautiful, and uplifting. There is usually light to found in all the dark patches. Ive been married nearly 30 years and travelled a few tunnels. Great write about how we can make things work out if we want to.
Enjoyed it a lot. Enjoyed all your poems actually, genuinely impressed. Mine all tend to be a bit bleak, i must try harder!

March 22nd, 2017 17:10

Deep Down
Garry said:

Love the starting point. Really good to hear how people get started on a poem.
I think this also worked out really well.
Evocative, mixtures of tentative hopefulness. Realky enjoyed it.

March 22nd, 2017 17:04

Hello, From the Other Side
MendedFences27 said:

Wow! Very emotional write. Kept it clear though, not too much sentimentality. That makes for a better write. Did it actually happen as you describe? Fascinating if it did. Loved your poem. - Phil A.

February 13th, 2017 14:06

Hello, From the Other Side
WriteBeLight said:

What a great story! I hope you find comfort and I am sorry about your Dad.

February 13th, 2017 12:17

Hello, From the Other Side
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 13th, 2017 09:36

Night Moves
Quemis said:

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Wow.

December 20th, 2016 00:05

Deep Down
Quemis said:



December 13th, 2016 13:12

Speak
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Expresses how relationships can become robotic. Creatively crafted muse here. Rekindling cold love requires effort. But such situations usually happen to those who fornicated and had a very hot love affair before marriage from the cases I have observed.
The desire to keep and revive love is a common human one. So kudos for this poetry, enjoyed how it rhymes in places.

Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

November 15th, 2016 01:40

Speak
Augustus said:

Conversation is an important part of love making. Nicely done.

November 14th, 2016 19:20

Speak
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

It happend JAB when couples are out of synch ! I\'ve never been marries and my relationship with my current GF is always on a high when we are together (we live separate !) BUT if we got married we might (unitentionally) put the fire out ~ it happens ! Thanks fro caring & sharing ~ YOURS ~ BRIAN

November 14th, 2016 14:34

Speak
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 14th, 2016 13:55

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