Comments received on poems by Ternic73
Here Comes Summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, enjoy your freedom in the sun.
May 18th, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, enjoy your freedom in the sun.
May 18th, 2018 00:40
Here Comes Summer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TERNIC for a beautiful Summery Poem (70+ F in the UK for Harry & Meghan\'s wedding !) Yur poem vibrates with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ perfect to read & recite ~ well done Yours BRIAN
Please check my POEMS and my new FUSION on ARTISTS (click on DEVELOPING to see it) Thanks B \"
May 17th, 2018 13:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TERNIC for a beautiful Summery Poem (70+ F in the UK for Harry & Meghan\'s wedding !) Yur poem vibrates with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ perfect to read & recite ~ well done Yours BRIAN
Please check my POEMS and my new FUSION on ARTISTS (click on DEVELOPING to see it) Thanks B \"
May 17th, 2018 13:43
Here Comes Summer
dusk arising said:
This needs putting to music, it really is catchy, its bright and immediate!
Great writing - copyright it and get it published as a song.
May 17th, 2018 10:56
dusk arising said:
This needs putting to music, it really is catchy, its bright and immediate!
Great writing - copyright it and get it published as a song.
May 17th, 2018 10:56
Reflections
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing TERESA ! An elegant poem in structure & subject ! I too have witnessed this at Memorial Walls ~ it causes one to cry ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 31st, 2018 05:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing TERESA ! An elegant poem in structure & subject ! I too have witnessed this at Memorial Walls ~ it causes one to cry ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 31st, 2018 05:46
ISSY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TERESA ~ for an elegant poem ~ with a beautiful but sad subject ! We all have friends and supporters in our lives ~ but some (like ISSY) ~ we never forget them ~ BUT ~ when they are called home to Heaven it does leave an irreplaceable gap ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN I have posted a FUSION on \"Favourite Month\" ~ Please add a Poem ~ Thanks B.
January 15th, 2018 16:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TERESA ~ for an elegant poem ~ with a beautiful but sad subject ! We all have friends and supporters in our lives ~ but some (like ISSY) ~ we never forget them ~ BUT ~ when they are called home to Heaven it does leave an irreplaceable gap ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN I have posted a FUSION on \"Favourite Month\" ~ Please add a Poem ~ Thanks B.
January 15th, 2018 16:12
Soldiers are Soldiers
Laura🌻 said:
A well deserving homage to all soldiers! A subject dear to my heart! Beautifully written! Thank you!
November 18th, 2017 17:37
Laura🌻 said:
A well deserving homage to all soldiers! A subject dear to my heart! Beautifully written! Thank you!
November 18th, 2017 17:37
Fire Fight
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TERESA ~ Well done ~ I love this POEM for several reasons !
1. It is Remembrance Sunday
2. We have to remember even though technically it is PEACETIME a Soldier dies somewhere every day !
3. It is a perfect set of 11 Rhyming Couplets except for line 13 which is a singlet ! These rhymes give your poem great flow and rhythm !
4. Your meter (rhythm) is good throughout the poem
5. You have treated a difficult Subject elegantly
6. An excellent POEM in both Structure and Subject ~ well done !
A HUG for excellence ~ BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 18:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TERESA ~ Well done ~ I love this POEM for several reasons !
1. It is Remembrance Sunday
2. We have to remember even though technically it is PEACETIME a Soldier dies somewhere every day !
3. It is a perfect set of 11 Rhyming Couplets except for line 13 which is a singlet ! These rhymes give your poem great flow and rhythm !
4. Your meter (rhythm) is good throughout the poem
5. You have treated a difficult Subject elegantly
6. An excellent POEM in both Structure and Subject ~ well done !
A HUG for excellence ~ BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 18:51
Words On Paper
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW THERESA ~ I\'m so so proud of you~ this lovely POEM has everything ! RHYME ~ RHYTHM ~ REPETITION and REGIME ! The rhyme is DOUBLETS which give the Poem great flow and RHYTHM for ease of recitation which is the hallmark of a good poem. REPETITION of the Title \"Words on Paper\" (lines 1 7 8 15 16) to reinforce the message. The REGIME of versification ~ 2 sextets and a quatrain. A Perfect Poem and one we can all relate to as well. Love the Poem ~ Love You too ~ BRIAN XOX
September 20th, 2017 12:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW THERESA ~ I\'m so so proud of you~ this lovely POEM has everything ! RHYME ~ RHYTHM ~ REPETITION and REGIME ! The rhyme is DOUBLETS which give the Poem great flow and RHYTHM for ease of recitation which is the hallmark of a good poem. REPETITION of the Title \"Words on Paper\" (lines 1 7 8 15 16) to reinforce the message. The REGIME of versification ~ 2 sextets and a quatrain. A Perfect Poem and one we can all relate to as well. Love the Poem ~ Love You too ~ BRIAN XOX
September 20th, 2017 12:28
Journey Home
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Ternic! Every one of them deserves this poem. We can never thank these men and women enough for their ultimate sacrifice.
September 12th, 2017 18:44
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Ternic! Every one of them deserves this poem. We can never thank these men and women enough for their ultimate sacrifice.
September 12th, 2017 18:44
Journey Home
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for the poem remembering our fallen heroes. Enjoyed it!
September 12th, 2017 16:06
rrodriguez said:
Thank you for the poem remembering our fallen heroes. Enjoyed it!
September 12th, 2017 16:06
Thank You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TEREESA for a well written poem with lovely Rhyming Couplets ~ smooth to both read and recite. It is also a very fine (and well earned) tribute to the US Veterans ! It has special significance for me because I know it written from both your experience and your empathetic heart Love BRIAN XOX Please check my ROSES Poem and my latest FUSION on \"Where would you like to live ?\" Thanks B.
September 10th, 2017 17:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TEREESA for a well written poem with lovely Rhyming Couplets ~ smooth to both read and recite. It is also a very fine (and well earned) tribute to the US Veterans ! It has special significance for me because I know it written from both your experience and your empathetic heart Love BRIAN XOX Please check my ROSES Poem and my latest FUSION on \"Where would you like to live ?\" Thanks B.
September 10th, 2017 17:06
Thank You
Elegant_Style said:
Wow, i really like your message! Its also amazing that you rhymed everything absolutely flawlessly. I wish everybody could think the way you do.
September 10th, 2017 13:39
Elegant_Style said:
Wow, i really like your message! Its also amazing that you rhymed everything absolutely flawlessly. I wish everybody could think the way you do.
September 10th, 2017 13:39
MOVE ON
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love this autobiographical poem Teresa it is gem ! The rhyming couplets and good meter give it a powerful rhythm & flow ~ which befits the long time span of the poem ! It would be good to divide it into three sextains (stanzas with six lines) and a final triplet (three line verse) which sums up the whole awesome poem ! Love You for being You ~ BRIAN. Please check my Poem ~ Hour Glass Figure ~ Thanks B.
August 23rd, 2017 16:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love this autobiographical poem Teresa it is gem ! The rhyming couplets and good meter give it a powerful rhythm & flow ~ which befits the long time span of the poem ! It would be good to divide it into three sextains (stanzas with six lines) and a final triplet (three line verse) which sums up the whole awesome poem ! Love You for being You ~ BRIAN. Please check my Poem ~ Hour Glass Figure ~ Thanks B.
August 23rd, 2017 16:50
Walk In Their Boots
Bibbeck said:
Echoing Briansodes\' comment on the rhythm of boots through this; very clever. You take us to share the view from the men and their boots with your words. Thank-you.
August 23rd, 2017 14:55
Bibbeck said:
Echoing Briansodes\' comment on the rhythm of boots through this; very clever. You take us to share the view from the men and their boots with your words. Thank-you.
August 23rd, 2017 14:55
MOVE ON
Bibbeck said:
Good for you! A loss for all those who didn\'t pick you on the team, or ask you to dance, as what you\'ve become is better than them. This speaks to me and I expect will do to many more. Well done.
August 23rd, 2017 14:48
Bibbeck said:
Good for you! A loss for all those who didn\'t pick you on the team, or ask you to dance, as what you\'ve become is better than them. This speaks to me and I expect will do to many more. Well done.
August 23rd, 2017 14:48
Dreams
UnspokenVoice92 said:
People hand in hand... Have I lived to see the milk in honey land? Where hates a dream and love forever stands? Or is this a vision in our mind?
Such a Great Selection of words. 😁
August 19th, 2017 18:38
UnspokenVoice92 said:
People hand in hand... Have I lived to see the milk in honey land? Where hates a dream and love forever stands? Or is this a vision in our mind?
Such a Great Selection of words. 😁
August 19th, 2017 18:38
Dreams
Nicholas Browning said:
Lucid dreaming is a thing.
Hope you find your way back.
August 19th, 2017 11:25
Nicholas Browning said:
Lucid dreaming is a thing.
Hope you find your way back.
August 19th, 2017 11:25
Life Of A Nurse
burning-embers said:
Oh to be in a hospital where poets nurse my thoughts, my aching heart is soothed by rhyme and hope injected daily. Actually i\'m not sick. Loved your piece, was good to read. Thank you.
August 18th, 2017 15:21
burning-embers said:
Oh to be in a hospital where poets nurse my thoughts, my aching heart is soothed by rhyme and hope injected daily. Actually i\'m not sick. Loved your piece, was good to read. Thank you.
August 18th, 2017 15:21
Life Of A Nurse
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL TERESA ~ You know how much I appreciate ALL NURSES. This Poem is straight from your SHIFT but also from your dedicated HEART ! i LOVE the Structure of your poem ~ Rhyming Couplets which match the pace of your day and perfect rhythm & meter makes it a delight to read and recite ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love you ~ BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 14:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL TERESA ~ You know how much I appreciate ALL NURSES. This Poem is straight from your SHIFT but also from your dedicated HEART ! i LOVE the Structure of your poem ~ Rhyming Couplets which match the pace of your day and perfect rhythm & meter makes it a delight to read and recite ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love you ~ BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 14:38
Life Of A Nurse
lasergraph said:
This reflects the days of every nurse I know, and I know a few. I got tired just ready it. I commend both the writing AND the occupation. Part of the unsung heroes.
August 18th, 2017 14:03
lasergraph said:
This reflects the days of every nurse I know, and I know a few. I got tired just ready it. I commend both the writing AND the occupation. Part of the unsung heroes.
August 18th, 2017 14:03
Sunday Mornings
Accidental Poet said:
A very nice way to start out the day. Excellent.
August 6th, 2017 17:51
Accidental Poet said:
A very nice way to start out the day. Excellent.
August 6th, 2017 17:51
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