Comments received on poems by Ternic73
My heart is broken
Raven333 said:
very touching poem, I felt the anger and sadness in these words. nice rhyming
June 22nd, 2022 11:45
Raven333 said:
very touching poem, I felt the anger and sadness in these words. nice rhyming
June 22nd, 2022 11:45
My heart is broken
L. B. Mek said:
emancipation, that lasts
is that we gift: ourselves
more power to you!
strive for what you believe in
try to not let the ignorant cruelty
of others
steal you, of your kindness
and empathy
while still fighting for your share
of tangible warmth and safety..
stay Strong! thanks for sharing
June 20th, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
emancipation, that lasts
is that we gift: ourselves
more power to you!
strive for what you believe in
try to not let the ignorant cruelty
of others
steal you, of your kindness
and empathy
while still fighting for your share
of tangible warmth and safety..
stay Strong! thanks for sharing
June 20th, 2022 04:13
Voices of the Night
JudyStella said:
The imagery is perfect! Made me visualize the picture of nighttime ✨ and the sounds related. Loved this poem❤️
May 24th, 2022 16:02
JudyStella said:
The imagery is perfect! Made me visualize the picture of nighttime ✨ and the sounds related. Loved this poem❤️
May 24th, 2022 16:02
With My Thoughts
orchidee said:
Yes, best wishes. Sometimes I DON\'T write about some things - it may seem to add to the gloom, depression, etc. I may think \'OMG not that theme again\'. Moderated to OMD - Oh My Days!
But other times, yes, it can be good and therapeutic to write things out.
June 26th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
Yes, best wishes. Sometimes I DON\'T write about some things - it may seem to add to the gloom, depression, etc. I may think \'OMG not that theme again\'. Moderated to OMD - Oh My Days!
But other times, yes, it can be good and therapeutic to write things out.
June 26th, 2020 01:51
With My Thoughts
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon Teresa. Being a NURSE during the COVID 19 is very stressful. Ima PHYSIO so most of my clients are *orthopedic* - but COVID 19 casts a shadow over the whole Hospital. Your POEM is SAD - but you are right in wanting to be HAPPY ! WE are praying that in all things GOD will give You Peace & Joy !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *COFFEE MORNING ~ OPEN* Thanks !
June 25th, 2020 13:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon Teresa. Being a NURSE during the COVID 19 is very stressful. Ima PHYSIO so most of my clients are *orthopedic* - but COVID 19 casts a shadow over the whole Hospital. Your POEM is SAD - but you are right in wanting to be HAPPY ! WE are praying that in all things GOD will give You Peace & Joy !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *COFFEE MORNING ~ OPEN* Thanks !
June 25th, 2020 13:23
With My Thoughts
peto said:
They will never win ternic
Your happy place is closer than you think
Ready when you are
Keep writing out those thoughts
Such a sad write from someone who has helped so many
We can\'t forget ourselves
Be good to you
Even just for the day
Keep writing my friend
June 25th, 2020 04:57
peto said:
They will never win ternic
Your happy place is closer than you think
Ready when you are
Keep writing out those thoughts
Such a sad write from someone who has helped so many
We can\'t forget ourselves
Be good to you
Even just for the day
Keep writing my friend
June 25th, 2020 04:57
With My Thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
May those thoughts soon become filled with the wonder that is in your life and happiness overwhelms you.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
May those thoughts soon become filled with the wonder that is in your life and happiness overwhelms you.
Andy
June 25th, 2020 00:20
Two Lonely Hearts
Goldfinch60 said:
May that life together go on forever, i am sure it will.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
May that life together go on forever, i am sure it will.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 01:29
Time of Unknown
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening *T* how are things ? Thanks for your Poem it highlights one of the most tragic aspects of LOCKDOWN & COVID 19. As a Nurse yu must find it most stressful. In the UK C-19 Patients are not allowed visitors and only about 10 are allowed @ the funeral - shocking. We are lifting a few restrictions in the UK but we are still having to self isolate (6 feet apart) from Strangers. Lets hope a vaccine will soon be found and we can all be inoculated - as we currently are fo FLU - which is also a Coronavirus. Love the structure of your Poem !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check or SITE ~ THANKS !
May 10th, 2020 15:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening *T* how are things ? Thanks for your Poem it highlights one of the most tragic aspects of LOCKDOWN & COVID 19. As a Nurse yu must find it most stressful. In the UK C-19 Patients are not allowed visitors and only about 10 are allowed @ the funeral - shocking. We are lifting a few restrictions in the UK but we are still having to self isolate (6 feet apart) from Strangers. Lets hope a vaccine will soon be found and we can all be inoculated - as we currently are fo FLU - which is also a Coronavirus. Love the structure of your Poem !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check or SITE ~ THANKS !
May 10th, 2020 15:34
Time of Unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in these Strange Times, it can be hard sometime being alone.
Andy
May 10th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in these Strange Times, it can be hard sometime being alone.
Andy
May 10th, 2020 00:23
Heaven Above
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that angel will be forever with you.
January 31st, 2020 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that angel will be forever with you.
January 31st, 2020 01:53
Alcohol and Drugs
FineB said:
Hello Ternic73,
A good write.
Read the latest biography on the great Janis Joplin sadly she lost the battle with alcohol and drugs.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 05:45
FineB said:
Hello Ternic73,
A good write.
Read the latest biography on the great Janis Joplin sadly she lost the battle with alcohol and drugs.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 05:45
Alcohol and Drugs
myself and me said:
It is a hard and long battle to fight, and the battle is to against yourself.
Well done.
January 2nd, 2020 14:08
myself and me said:
It is a hard and long battle to fight, and the battle is to against yourself.
Well done.
January 2nd, 2020 14:08
Another Year Over
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI TERESA BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing a delightful Poem about the end of the YEAR and also the Children fleeing the NEST ! Something ANGELA & I have to look forward to in about 30 years time ! A very balanced DODECADRON (Poem with 12 lines) in six rhyming couplets ~ perfection ! It also has excellent meter which makes it smooth to recite ! MORE PLEASE ! Please check our Site & Fusion !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS for 2020
Love Brian & Angela ~ 💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 26th, 2019 14:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI TERESA BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing a delightful Poem about the end of the YEAR and also the Children fleeing the NEST ! Something ANGELA & I have to look forward to in about 30 years time ! A very balanced DODECADRON (Poem with 12 lines) in six rhyming couplets ~ perfection ! It also has excellent meter which makes it smooth to recite ! MORE PLEASE ! Please check our Site & Fusion !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS for 2020
Love Brian & Angela ~ 💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 26th, 2019 14:01
A Place To Belong
Goldfinch60 said:
You have certainly found yourself on here with wonderful words like these.
November 8th, 2019 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
You have certainly found yourself on here with wonderful words like these.
November 8th, 2019 01:38
A Place To Belong
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI TERESA ~ Lovely to hear from YOU ! Love the structure of the Poem ~ Full of RHYME (Couplets) & RYTHM making it a JOY to recite. The SUBJECT is a bit melancholoy and unlike You because of your PROFESSION ? ! YOU are always kind & helpfuland you sure belong to MPS ! You never belong o n the outside ~ dont just look in ~ COME IN & SHARE ! We both love the final three Lines ........
Found the Place
Smile on your Face
Belong to that place ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ MYSTERIOUSNESS
Please check our latest FUSION on PETS
Click on DEVELOPING to see it ~ OK
November 7th, 2019 15:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI TERESA ~ Lovely to hear from YOU ! Love the structure of the Poem ~ Full of RHYME (Couplets) & RYTHM making it a JOY to recite. The SUBJECT is a bit melancholoy and unlike You because of your PROFESSION ? ! YOU are always kind & helpfuland you sure belong to MPS ! You never belong o n the outside ~ dont just look in ~ COME IN & SHARE ! We both love the final three Lines ........
Found the Place
Smile on your Face
Belong to that place ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ MYSTERIOUSNESS
Please check our latest FUSION on PETS
Click on DEVELOPING to see it ~ OK
November 7th, 2019 15:51
Rest in Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful tribute to a lost friend, that friend will always be with you.
October 23rd, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful tribute to a lost friend, that friend will always be with you.
October 23rd, 2019 00:38
Rest in Heaven
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING TERNIC ~ Thank you for a very beautiful eulogy to a Departed Friend. It is well Structured and easy to recite ~ but painful to read because of its Subject ! We all have Demons from Time to Time but most of us are able to overcome them. Some ~ like your SUBJECT are overcome by their Demons ~ RIP. Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check our site ~ THANKS
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 22nd, 2019 15:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING TERNIC ~ Thank you for a very beautiful eulogy to a Departed Friend. It is well Structured and easy to recite ~ but painful to read because of its Subject ! We all have Demons from Time to Time but most of us are able to overcome them. Some ~ like your SUBJECT are overcome by their Demons ~ RIP. Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check our site ~ THANKS
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 22nd, 2019 15:14
I am Sad
Ternic73 said:
Sorry this time I am writing theough feelings. Only way I know how.
May 15th, 2019 17:01
Ternic73 said:
Sorry this time I am writing theough feelings. Only way I know how.
May 15th, 2019 17:01
COME HOME
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days can be so hard when we lose someone but rest assured they will be looking down on you and will always be with you.
May 7th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days can be so hard when we lose someone but rest assured they will be looking down on you and will always be with you.
May 7th, 2019 00:27
COME HOME
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI TERESA ~ We\'ve missed you ! Thanks for sharing this Poem. Good structure ~ six rhymng doublets ~ then a triplet and a final very sad line. *I look at your picture ~ you said you would come home*. The scanning is good and it does flow ! The subject is very sad (killed on Active Service) ~ Millions (mainly Men) were killed in WW2 ~ leaving a Generation of Single Mothers and Fatherless Children. That is the reality of a Global War ~ please pray to GOD that we will never experience another one ! Please check our site !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 6th, 2019 16:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI TERESA ~ We\'ve missed you ! Thanks for sharing this Poem. Good structure ~ six rhymng doublets ~ then a triplet and a final very sad line. *I look at your picture ~ you said you would come home*. The scanning is good and it does flow ! The subject is very sad (killed on Active Service) ~ Millions (mainly Men) were killed in WW2 ~ leaving a Generation of Single Mothers and Fatherless Children. That is the reality of a Global War ~ please pray to GOD that we will never experience another one ! Please check our site !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 6th, 2019 16:28
God Called You Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, yes they will be together again one day but your friend\'s mother will always be with them.
March 29th, 2019 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, yes they will be together again one day but your friend\'s mother will always be with them.
March 29th, 2019 01:50
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