Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
RESTITUTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ nice poem ~ nice structure (flexible ?) ~ nice subject ~ RESTITUTION ! I love \"rhyming couplets\" because I\'m a PP (Performance Poet) and I used them in my DODECET (6 RC\'s mainly in iambic pentameter) Syllabi rule OK ~ Many of our MPS Family find Syllable counts in poems difficult and I do get sent some otherwise excellent poems to syllabise ! THE CON-VERSE structure has both a syllabus pattern and a rhyme pattern ~ which in my \"classical book\" makes it a PROPER POEM ~ OK !
Thanks for educating ~ Yours BRIAN \"A Form poet !\"
May 4th, 2018 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ nice poem ~ nice structure (flexible ?) ~ nice subject ~ RESTITUTION ! I love \"rhyming couplets\" because I\'m a PP (Performance Poet) and I used them in my DODECET (6 RC\'s mainly in iambic pentameter) Syllabi rule OK ~ Many of our MPS Family find Syllable counts in poems difficult and I do get sent some otherwise excellent poems to syllabise ! THE CON-VERSE structure has both a syllabus pattern and a rhyme pattern ~ which in my \"classical book\" makes it a PROPER POEM ~ OK !
Thanks for educating ~ Yours BRIAN \"A Form poet !\"
May 4th, 2018 16:03
RESTITUTION
Christina8 said:
Always love to see your poems in new forms. And pictures from your garden!
May 4th, 2018 12:02
Christina8 said:
Always love to see your poems in new forms. And pictures from your garden!
May 4th, 2018 12:02
RESTITUTION
orchidee said:
Ms Berles been helping again?! A fine write and pic Michael.
May 4th, 2018 09:48
orchidee said:
Ms Berles been helping again?! A fine write and pic Michael.
May 4th, 2018 09:48
RESTITUTION
Lorna said:
Terrific short pictures Michael! Says so much in so little....... and I love your Forget Me Nots (I think that\'s what I\'m seeing)........
May 4th, 2018 05:08
Lorna said:
Terrific short pictures Michael! Says so much in so little....... and I love your Forget Me Nots (I think that\'s what I\'m seeing)........
May 4th, 2018 05:08
RESTITUTION
Birddie Jane said:
I am taking a screen shot of this and making it my screen saver.... Bravo
May 4th, 2018 02:02
Birddie Jane said:
I am taking a screen shot of this and making it my screen saver.... Bravo
May 4th, 2018 02:02
WORDS
ron parrish aka wordman said:
words written or spoken will be with someone for eternity
May 3rd, 2018 23:37
ron parrish aka wordman said:
words written or spoken will be with someone for eternity
May 3rd, 2018 23:37
WORDS
FineB said:
A wonderful vivid and superb write Michael on Words and their power.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:39
FineB said:
A wonderful vivid and superb write Michael on Words and their power.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:39
WORDS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
An impressive write! I’m fascinated by words! As an English language learner, I’m always curious about words and their usage!
Beautiful red tulips! Great pic of them! They look very velvety!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 09:48
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
An impressive write! I’m fascinated by words! As an English language learner, I’m always curious about words and their usage!
Beautiful red tulips! Great pic of them! They look very velvety!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 09:48
WORDS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ The pen has always (ad ultimatum) been mightier than the sword ! I love the ultimate definition of MODERN POETRY ~ and the are many examples on MPS !
MODERN POETRY ~ is just WORDS
any WORDS in any ORDER !
Generally without RHYME and ~
often without REASON !
Thanks for posting ~ Love WORDS
Love TULIPS ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my Internal Organs ~ I will
post a MODERN POEM ~ tomorrow !
May 3rd, 2018 06:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ The pen has always (ad ultimatum) been mightier than the sword ! I love the ultimate definition of MODERN POETRY ~ and the are many examples on MPS !
MODERN POETRY ~ is just WORDS
any WORDS in any ORDER !
Generally without RHYME and ~
often without REASON !
Thanks for posting ~ Love WORDS
Love TULIPS ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my Internal Organs ~ I will
post a MODERN POEM ~ tomorrow !
May 3rd, 2018 06:13
ONCE HONED
Fay Slimm. said:
Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear about you and yours being rained on so much during your break - Norfolk can be beautiful when the sun favours the days - -still you were all together as a happy family and celebrating a special birthday with moments to treasure no doubt - good to have your work back again with this piece which shows such wise perception of time\'s gift to family elders. Great read.
May 3rd, 2018 02:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear about you and yours being rained on so much during your break - Norfolk can be beautiful when the sun favours the days - -still you were all together as a happy family and celebrating a special birthday with moments to treasure no doubt - good to have your work back again with this piece which shows such wise perception of time\'s gift to family elders. Great read.
May 3rd, 2018 02:11
WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:
Words are so important in our lives, they can be so powerful both for good and evil. Good write Michael.
May 3rd, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Words are so important in our lives, they can be so powerful both for good and evil. Good write Michael.
May 3rd, 2018 00:39
ONCE HONED
Lorna said:
Such a great message! You got rained on..... but at least someone else made the bed and cooked the meals! Welcome back.
May 2nd, 2018 09:36
Lorna said:
Such a great message! You got rained on..... but at least someone else made the bed and cooked the meals! Welcome back.
May 2nd, 2018 09:36
ONCE HONED
Laura🌻 said:
Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
Andy really honed in to the message conveyed in your poem! A great write and beautiful pic!
~Laura~
May 2nd, 2018 08:05
Laura🌻 said:
Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
Andy really honed in to the message conveyed in your poem! A great write and beautiful pic!
~Laura~
May 2nd, 2018 08:05
ONCE HONED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Violets ~ very Springy ! Thanks for a very thoughtful poem ~ I\'m 35 this year so I can look back ~ nostalgically ~ but also forward and your Poem give me hope for the future ! Nice to have a \"MICHEAL\" to ponder on at work today ! Yours BRIAN
May 2nd, 2018 03:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Violets ~ very Springy ! Thanks for a very thoughtful poem ~ I\'m 35 this year so I can look back ~ nostalgically ~ but also forward and your Poem give me hope for the future ! Nice to have a \"MICHEAL\" to ponder on at work today ! Yours BRIAN
May 2nd, 2018 03:25
ONCE HONED
orchidee said:
I\'ll threaten to sing this! heehee. It reads rather melodically! That will blunt one\'s blade! A fine write M.
May 2nd, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
I\'ll threaten to sing this! heehee. It reads rather melodically! That will blunt one\'s blade! A fine write M.
May 2nd, 2018 01:50
ONCE HONED
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life into a glorious future.
Good write Michael.
May 2nd, 2018 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life into a glorious future.
Good write Michael.
May 2nd, 2018 00:41
LIMERICK No54
FineB said:
Thank you Michael!
That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.
Keep writing
FineB
April 27th, 2018 07:20
FineB said:
Thank you Michael!
That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.
Keep writing
FineB
April 27th, 2018 07:20
LIMERICK No54
kitcat said:
Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too
April 26th, 2018 15:08
kitcat said:
Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too
April 26th, 2018 15:08
LIMERICK No54
onepauly said:
enjoyed it.
I do wish people would
write poetry for poetry sake.
April 26th, 2018 09:24
onepauly said:
enjoyed it.
I do wish people would
write poetry for poetry sake.
April 26th, 2018 09:24
LIMERICK No54
orchidee said:
BOO!!! Some poets writing on sleepy themes today. Did that wake you?! heehee. And how\'s Miss Berles?
April 26th, 2018 08:32
orchidee said:
BOO!!! Some poets writing on sleepy themes today. Did that wake you?! heehee. And how\'s Miss Berles?
April 26th, 2018 08:32
LIMERICK No54
Lorna said:
Fun and funny! At least she didn\'t put them on the outside of her clothes - I\'ve seen that! But mostly teenage boys....... whatever floats their boats!!! ha ha
April 26th, 2018 07:15
Lorna said:
Fun and funny! At least she didn\'t put them on the outside of her clothes - I\'ve seen that! But mostly teenage boys....... whatever floats their boats!!! ha ha
April 26th, 2018 07:15
LIMERICK No54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I\'ve been to LIMERICK and its a droll as your Poem ! thanks for sharing ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check MINE ~ B ! Love the muted shades in you art ~ very soothing !
April 26th, 2018 06:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I\'ve been to LIMERICK and its a droll as your Poem ! thanks for sharing ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check MINE ~ B ! Love the muted shades in you art ~ very soothing !
April 26th, 2018 06:37
LIMERICK No54
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for personal angst - - - but loved the grin your limerick raised as my first read of the morning Michael. - - A smile is a great tonic.
April 26th, 2018 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for personal angst - - - but loved the grin your limerick raised as my first read of the morning Michael. - - A smile is a great tonic.
April 26th, 2018 03:42
LIMERICK No54
orchidee said:
Ooh swoon heehee! Not a poem about Miss Sue E. Side. I wouldn\'t like to meet her!
April 26th, 2018 01:54
orchidee said:
Ooh swoon heehee! Not a poem about Miss Sue E. Side. I wouldn\'t like to meet her!
April 26th, 2018 01:54
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