Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



EARLY MORNING
Christina8 said:

Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!

April 19th, 2018 14:17

EARLY MORNING
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
I’m catching up on my reads! I’m going backwards...as life goes sometimes!

A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! I’ve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!

So you’re going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and don’t forget those tickets!😉

~Laura~

April 19th, 2018 13:39

EARLY MORNING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN

April 19th, 2018 11:01

EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:

The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!

April 19th, 2018 09:15

EARLY MORNING
Lorna said:

Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!

April 19th, 2018 06:06

EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:

Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.

April 19th, 2018 03:13

EARLY MORNING
Fay Slimm. said:

Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for that coming trip.

April 19th, 2018 02:11

EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:

Where ya going? Bognor by plane?! They say Margate\'s the No.1 dirge spot now. Apologies to folk living in either place. A fine write and pic Michael.

April 19th, 2018 01:42

EARLY MORNING
Goldfinch60 said:

May the trip be filled with wonder and love.

April 19th, 2018 01:07

SUNDAY
Christina8 said:

Very nice rhyming poem, enjoyed it very much. Love Sundays! Also loved the picture of your Anemone. Hopefully soon enough I shall see flowers!

April 18th, 2018 20:33

SUNDAY
Lorna said:

I disagree! I think you caught the whole of the day....... it all runs beautifully and picks up all the pieces of life on a Sunday........ (although here there are no fathers out doing their own gardens - that\'s why they have to work until 10 pm so they can pay the gardeners - fathers were always doing their own gardening when I was young - oh well their loss)............ I love the picture of the diddly plunkit.......

April 18th, 2018 05:04

SUNDAY
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes Sunday is many a place. Love the picture of your gorgeous Anemone Pulsatilla .

April 18th, 2018 03:28

SUNDAY
Goldfinch60 said:

A good write about Sundays Michael. They were always special but not quite the same nowadays.

April 18th, 2018 01:31

SUNDAY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic still M. Is this a quinze-wotsit or whatever? Any more brilliantly inspired troisaine thingys?!

April 18th, 2018 01:28

AS ONE
Christina8 said:

Great job on this especially with the rhyme! And as always, love the picture of the flowers!

April 17th, 2018 17:15

AS ONE
orchidee said:

I got another gem. Another troisane:
Four
Five
Six

April 17th, 2018 09:53

AS ONE
Lorna said:

Love the simplicity - the whole cycle of beauty, love and marriage wrapped up in a few lines....... are your flowers a form of aster?

April 17th, 2018 06:15

AS ONE
Nicholas Browning said:

One of these days I\'m going to conjure up a new type of free verse ballad. When I stop being lazy! Enough about me. This is simply wonderful sir. It gets better every time.

April 17th, 2018 04:29

AS ONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND

Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !

Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE

Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta

April 17th, 2018 03:06

AS ONE
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three


April 17th, 2018 01:45

AS ONE
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.

April 17th, 2018 01:05

AS ONE
RiverJordan said:

PHEONOMENAL..all caps..haha

April 17th, 2018 00:19

A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Daveyboyz said:

I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.

April 16th, 2018 09:23

A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?


Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !

Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !

Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN

April 16th, 2018 07:22

TWO MORE EDELECTS
Lorna said:

It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.

April 16th, 2018 07:05

A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lorna said:

Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!

April 16th, 2018 06:46

A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
orchidee said:

Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!


April 16th, 2018 01:51

A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Goldfinch60 said:

Two thought provoking quinzaines Michael.

April 16th, 2018 01:02

TWO MORE EDELECTS
ron parrish aka wordman said:

well you nailed it

April 15th, 2018 21:47

TWO MORE EDELECTS
FineB said:

Thank you Michael.

I loved this poem

I love the flowers too.

Keep writing
FineB

April 15th, 2018 17:29



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