Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SHE SHOPPED AT LIDL
Lauraš» said:
A great write, Michael!
Iām glad you explained about Waitrose and Lidl! This reminds me of some of the ladies I use to work with showing off their fake Gucci or Chanel or Louis Vuitton handbags! They were only fooling themselves! I guess it made them feel special...But thatās ok...no harm done to the rest of us who might wear the real stuff! We all knew where we came from!
Beautiful red tulips. Nothing fake about them! š
~Laura~
April 23rd, 2018 01:41
Lauraš» said:
A great write, Michael!
Iām glad you explained about Waitrose and Lidl! This reminds me of some of the ladies I use to work with showing off their fake Gucci or Chanel or Louis Vuitton handbags! They were only fooling themselves! I guess it made them feel special...But thatās ok...no harm done to the rest of us who might wear the real stuff! We all knew where we came from!
Beautiful red tulips. Nothing fake about them! š
~Laura~
April 23rd, 2018 01:41
SHE SHOPPED AT LIDL
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, strangely the poem that I am about to put up to day is about a lady at Morrisons where I do the main weekly shop.
April 23rd, 2018 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, strangely the poem that I am about to put up to day is about a lady at Morrisons where I do the main weekly shop.
April 23rd, 2018 01:35
IN A COMMON THEME
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Some fine senrys and beautiful flowers!
History should never be erased. It should be understood. Weāve all endured hardships! Thatās what makes us strong!
We can knock down all the statues we want! The past will not be erased! It is up to all of us to to be civil, humane and understanding to make it better! I never thought weād be where we are...BACKWARDS!
~Laura~
April 22nd, 2018 17:30
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Some fine senrys and beautiful flowers!
History should never be erased. It should be understood. Weāve all endured hardships! Thatās what makes us strong!
We can knock down all the statues we want! The past will not be erased! It is up to all of us to to be civil, humane and understanding to make it better! I never thought weād be where we are...BACKWARDS!
~Laura~
April 22nd, 2018 17:30
IN A COMMON THEME
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem and sentiment, what takes generations to cultivate can be torn down in moments if we aren\'t mindful of it.
April 22nd, 2018 15:00
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem and sentiment, what takes generations to cultivate can be torn down in moments if we aren\'t mindful of it.
April 22nd, 2018 15:00
IN A COMMON THEME
orchidee said:
I know oxo cubes- any relation to oxy-wotsit?!
April 22nd, 2018 11:33
orchidee said:
I know oxo cubes- any relation to oxy-wotsit?!
April 22nd, 2018 11:33
IN A COMMON THEME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Spring has surely Sprung ~ The whole of ESSEX is suddenly Blooming ! Your SENRYU (love them and their Sister HAIKU) seems to me to be in praise of the BRITISH MONARCHY which is now guaranteed to last another 100+ Years due to Charles ~ William ~ George (Great kings of the Past & Future) DV ! With a little help from the Harry & Meghan Show which popularises Global Affection for The British Monarchy in all its Pomp & Circumstance ! Please check my Ode to HMQ ! I am a Northern Socialist Monarchist at heart ~ hope that\'s not an OXYMORON ! Yours as ever BRIAN \"House of Lancaster\"
April 22nd, 2018 09:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Spring has surely Sprung ~ The whole of ESSEX is suddenly Blooming ! Your SENRYU (love them and their Sister HAIKU) seems to me to be in praise of the BRITISH MONARCHY which is now guaranteed to last another 100+ Years due to Charles ~ William ~ George (Great kings of the Past & Future) DV ! With a little help from the Harry & Meghan Show which popularises Global Affection for The British Monarchy in all its Pomp & Circumstance ! Please check my Ode to HMQ ! I am a Northern Socialist Monarchist at heart ~ hope that\'s not an OXYMORON ! Yours as ever BRIAN \"House of Lancaster\"
April 22nd, 2018 09:30
IN A COMMON THEME
Accidental Poet said:
There has to be a reason
Some meaning in the past
Consequences of good or bad
The ripple effect to our future will last
So in the rear view mirror
The past falls away
I know yesterday is gone
But it gave us today
Excellent Michael.
April 22nd, 2018 08:31
Accidental Poet said:
There has to be a reason
Some meaning in the past
Consequences of good or bad
The ripple effect to our future will last
So in the rear view mirror
The past falls away
I know yesterday is gone
But it gave us today
Excellent Michael.
April 22nd, 2018 08:31
IN A COMMON THEME
Lorna said:
Everything evolves but without the past as an anchor things get sad..... I don\'t understand \"revisionist\" history that tries to erase what happened..... it\'s like \"1984\".......... understanding it seems better than erasing it........... we have \"statute destroying\" going on in our South...... by those standards we should knock down the pyramids because they subjugated the people.......... ooops too heavy a comment.
April 22nd, 2018 05:57
Lorna said:
Everything evolves but without the past as an anchor things get sad..... I don\'t understand \"revisionist\" history that tries to erase what happened..... it\'s like \"1984\".......... understanding it seems better than erasing it........... we have \"statute destroying\" going on in our South...... by those standards we should knock down the pyramids because they subjugated the people.......... ooops too heavy a comment.
April 22nd, 2018 05:57
IN A COMMON THEME
Nicholas Browning said:
This is exquisite. Well done, and bravo.
April 22nd, 2018 02:21
Nicholas Browning said:
This is exquisite. Well done, and bravo.
April 22nd, 2018 02:21
IN A COMMON THEME
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I\'m bit traditional (fuddy-duddy?!). Some churches, for example, hardly know what a traditional \'hymn\' is. For them, it\'s the same \'chorus\' or two, sung about 20 times! doh!
April 22nd, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I\'m bit traditional (fuddy-duddy?!). Some churches, for example, hardly know what a traditional \'hymn\' is. For them, it\'s the same \'chorus\' or two, sung about 20 times! doh!
April 22nd, 2018 01:39
IN A COMMON THEME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryus Michael, it is a shame that some of our heritage and culture gets destroyed by war.
April 22nd, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryus Michael, it is a shame that some of our heritage and culture gets destroyed by war.
April 22nd, 2018 00:58
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s the hot weather doing it! heehee. making us bit frisky (or swoony in my case!). And yes, pork pies please!
Amar-wotsit? I can\'t even say it!
April 21st, 2018 10:25
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s the hot weather doing it! heehee. making us bit frisky (or swoony in my case!). And yes, pork pies please!
Amar-wotsit? I can\'t even say it!
April 21st, 2018 10:25
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
Lorna said:
I got pinched in the street once - right on Fifth Avenue .... it was the funniest experience of my life........... hysterical poem Michael........
April 21st, 2018 06:32
Lorna said:
I got pinched in the street once - right on Fifth Avenue .... it was the funniest experience of my life........... hysterical poem Michael........
April 21st, 2018 06:32
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I feel sorry for any bum in the street...especially in the winter...freezing their bum off! Lol
My first laugh of the day!
A great write for an enjoyable read and a beautiful pic to please the eyes!
Totally Awesome...
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 04:42
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I feel sorry for any bum in the street...especially in the winter...freezing their bum off! Lol
My first laugh of the day!
A great write for an enjoyable read and a beautiful pic to please the eyes!
Totally Awesome...
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 04:42
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LA LA
Il faut declare
Au jour d\'hui
Pour DERRIERE !
Thanks MIKE for a Saturday SMILE
Reminds me of the famous Spello
in the GUARDIAN \"Arstits Wanted !\"
Whe God made ADAM he took a good
look and thought I could do better than
that and created EVE !
Thanks for another stunning member of
the AMARILLADACAE ~ Brian
Please check today\'s Poem !
April 21st, 2018 03:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LA LA
Il faut declare
Au jour d\'hui
Pour DERRIERE !
Thanks MIKE for a Saturday SMILE
Reminds me of the famous Spello
in the GUARDIAN \"Arstits Wanted !\"
Whe God made ADAM he took a good
look and thought I could do better than
that and created EVE !
Thanks for another stunning member of
the AMARILLADACAE ~ Brian
Please check today\'s Poem !
April 21st, 2018 03:48
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
orchidee said:
You peeping there? Is your name Tom?!
April 21st, 2018 01:30
orchidee said:
You peeping there? Is your name Tom?!
April 21st, 2018 01:30
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
Goldfinch60 said:
The BUMS have it today then Michael.
April 21st, 2018 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The BUMS have it today then Michael.
April 21st, 2018 01:07
THE EMPTY BEACH
Lorna said:
It sounds like a beach in the fall Michael.... such a sad place. This is one of your best I think! And \"peachy\" flowers!
April 20th, 2018 10:58
Lorna said:
It sounds like a beach in the fall Michael.... such a sad place. This is one of your best I think! And \"peachy\" flowers!
April 20th, 2018 10:58
THE EMPTY BEACH
onepauly said:
on a beautiful beach I am never lonely.
though your poem is quite inspiring.
April 20th, 2018 03:23
onepauly said:
on a beautiful beach I am never lonely.
though your poem is quite inspiring.
April 20th, 2018 03:23
THE EMPTY BEACH
Nicholas Browning said:
Cutting it short if need be is never a bad idea sir, as this is clearly proof. Solid buildup and a striking conclusion. Wonderful.
April 20th, 2018 03:16
Nicholas Browning said:
Cutting it short if need be is never a bad idea sir, as this is clearly proof. Solid buildup and a striking conclusion. Wonderful.
April 20th, 2018 03:16
THE EMPTY BEACH
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
That is a beautiful display of daffodils! They are forever immortalized in your pic!
Great job not only with the immortalization of the daffodils, but also with your poem!
Awesome!
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 03:16
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
That is a beautiful display of daffodils! They are forever immortalized in your pic!
Great job not only with the immortalization of the daffodils, but also with your poem!
Awesome!
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 03:16
THE EMPTY BEACH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE love Daffs ! More like PEACH (or should that be BEACH ?) TRUMPET. Daffs are so sassy great herald of of SPRING ! Should bloom on 1st MARCH (St David\'s Day). Loved the Poem (in same genre as Fay\'s !) I\'m only 10 miles from a beach and I\'m always collecting Shells & Pebbles ! Very Nostalgic ! Please visit my poemm today ~ You will love the CHOIR ~ Yours BRIAN !
April 20th, 2018 01:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE love Daffs ! More like PEACH (or should that be BEACH ?) TRUMPET. Daffs are so sassy great herald of of SPRING ! Should bloom on 1st MARCH (St David\'s Day). Loved the Poem (in same genre as Fay\'s !) I\'m only 10 miles from a beach and I\'m always collecting Shells & Pebbles ! Very Nostalgic ! Please visit my poemm today ~ You will love the CHOIR ~ Yours BRIAN !
April 20th, 2018 01:48
THE EMPTY BEACH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I know why the beach was empty. They were all holidaying at the airport, as we said yesterday! It was so good they didn\'t want to get on the plane after all.
April 20th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I know why the beach was empty. They were all holidaying at the airport, as we said yesterday! It was so good they didn\'t want to get on the plane after all.
April 20th, 2018 01:33
THE EMPTY BEACH
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotion laden write Michael. I have seen that beach.
April 20th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotion laden write Michael. I have seen that beach.
April 20th, 2018 00:46
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
AS ONE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
SUNDAY
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
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