Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IN A COMMON THEME
Accidental Poet said:
There has to be a reason
Some meaning in the past
Consequences of good or bad
The ripple effect to our future will last
So in the rear view mirror
The past falls away
I know yesterday is gone
But it gave us today
Excellent Michael.
April 22nd, 2018 08:31
Accidental Poet said:
There has to be a reason
Some meaning in the past
Consequences of good or bad
The ripple effect to our future will last
So in the rear view mirror
The past falls away
I know yesterday is gone
But it gave us today
Excellent Michael.
April 22nd, 2018 08:31
IN A COMMON THEME
Lorna said:
Everything evolves but without the past as an anchor things get sad..... I don\'t understand \"revisionist\" history that tries to erase what happened..... it\'s like \"1984\".......... understanding it seems better than erasing it........... we have \"statute destroying\" going on in our South...... by those standards we should knock down the pyramids because they subjugated the people.......... ooops too heavy a comment.
April 22nd, 2018 05:57
Lorna said:
Everything evolves but without the past as an anchor things get sad..... I don\'t understand \"revisionist\" history that tries to erase what happened..... it\'s like \"1984\".......... understanding it seems better than erasing it........... we have \"statute destroying\" going on in our South...... by those standards we should knock down the pyramids because they subjugated the people.......... ooops too heavy a comment.
April 22nd, 2018 05:57
IN A COMMON THEME
Nicholas Browning said:
This is exquisite. Well done, and bravo.
April 22nd, 2018 02:21
Nicholas Browning said:
This is exquisite. Well done, and bravo.
April 22nd, 2018 02:21
IN A COMMON THEME
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I\'m bit traditional (fuddy-duddy?!). Some churches, for example, hardly know what a traditional \'hymn\' is. For them, it\'s the same \'chorus\' or two, sung about 20 times! doh!
April 22nd, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I\'m bit traditional (fuddy-duddy?!). Some churches, for example, hardly know what a traditional \'hymn\' is. For them, it\'s the same \'chorus\' or two, sung about 20 times! doh!
April 22nd, 2018 01:39
IN A COMMON THEME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryus Michael, it is a shame that some of our heritage and culture gets destroyed by war.
April 22nd, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryus Michael, it is a shame that some of our heritage and culture gets destroyed by war.
April 22nd, 2018 00:58
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s the hot weather doing it! heehee. making us bit frisky (or swoony in my case!). And yes, pork pies please!
Amar-wotsit? I can\'t even say it!
April 21st, 2018 10:25
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s the hot weather doing it! heehee. making us bit frisky (or swoony in my case!). And yes, pork pies please!
Amar-wotsit? I can\'t even say it!
April 21st, 2018 10:25
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
Lorna said:
I got pinched in the street once - right on Fifth Avenue .... it was the funniest experience of my life........... hysterical poem Michael........
April 21st, 2018 06:32
Lorna said:
I got pinched in the street once - right on Fifth Avenue .... it was the funniest experience of my life........... hysterical poem Michael........
April 21st, 2018 06:32
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I feel sorry for any bum in the street...especially in the winter...freezing their bum off! Lol
My first laugh of the day!
A great write for an enjoyable read and a beautiful pic to please the eyes!
Totally Awesome...
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 04:42
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I feel sorry for any bum in the street...especially in the winter...freezing their bum off! Lol
My first laugh of the day!
A great write for an enjoyable read and a beautiful pic to please the eyes!
Totally Awesome...
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 04:42
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LA LA
Il faut declare
Au jour d\'hui
Pour DERRIERE !
Thanks MIKE for a Saturday SMILE
Reminds me of the famous Spello
in the GUARDIAN \"Arstits Wanted !\"
Whe God made ADAM he took a good
look and thought I could do better than
that and created EVE !
Thanks for another stunning member of
the AMARILLADACAE ~ Brian
Please check today\'s Poem !
April 21st, 2018 03:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LA LA
Il faut declare
Au jour d\'hui
Pour DERRIERE !
Thanks MIKE for a Saturday SMILE
Reminds me of the famous Spello
in the GUARDIAN \"Arstits Wanted !\"
Whe God made ADAM he took a good
look and thought I could do better than
that and created EVE !
Thanks for another stunning member of
the AMARILLADACAE ~ Brian
Please check today\'s Poem !
April 21st, 2018 03:48
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
orchidee said:
You peeping there? Is your name Tom?!
April 21st, 2018 01:30
orchidee said:
You peeping there? Is your name Tom?!
April 21st, 2018 01:30
TODAY IS A DAY FOR.......!
Goldfinch60 said:
The BUMS have it today then Michael.
April 21st, 2018 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The BUMS have it today then Michael.
April 21st, 2018 01:07
THE EMPTY BEACH
Lorna said:
It sounds like a beach in the fall Michael.... such a sad place. This is one of your best I think! And \"peachy\" flowers!
April 20th, 2018 10:58
Lorna said:
It sounds like a beach in the fall Michael.... such a sad place. This is one of your best I think! And \"peachy\" flowers!
April 20th, 2018 10:58
THE EMPTY BEACH
onepauly said:
on a beautiful beach I am never lonely.
though your poem is quite inspiring.
April 20th, 2018 03:23
onepauly said:
on a beautiful beach I am never lonely.
though your poem is quite inspiring.
April 20th, 2018 03:23
THE EMPTY BEACH
Nicholas Browning said:
Cutting it short if need be is never a bad idea sir, as this is clearly proof. Solid buildup and a striking conclusion. Wonderful.
April 20th, 2018 03:16
Nicholas Browning said:
Cutting it short if need be is never a bad idea sir, as this is clearly proof. Solid buildup and a striking conclusion. Wonderful.
April 20th, 2018 03:16
THE EMPTY BEACH
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
That is a beautiful display of daffodils! They are forever immortalized in your pic!
Great job not only with the immortalization of the daffodils, but also with your poem!
Awesome!
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 03:16
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
That is a beautiful display of daffodils! They are forever immortalized in your pic!
Great job not only with the immortalization of the daffodils, but also with your poem!
Awesome!
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 03:16
THE EMPTY BEACH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE love Daffs ! More like PEACH (or should that be BEACH ?) TRUMPET. Daffs are so sassy great herald of of SPRING ! Should bloom on 1st MARCH (St David\'s Day). Loved the Poem (in same genre as Fay\'s !) I\'m only 10 miles from a beach and I\'m always collecting Shells & Pebbles ! Very Nostalgic ! Please visit my poemm today ~ You will love the CHOIR ~ Yours BRIAN !
April 20th, 2018 01:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE love Daffs ! More like PEACH (or should that be BEACH ?) TRUMPET. Daffs are so sassy great herald of of SPRING ! Should bloom on 1st MARCH (St David\'s Day). Loved the Poem (in same genre as Fay\'s !) I\'m only 10 miles from a beach and I\'m always collecting Shells & Pebbles ! Very Nostalgic ! Please visit my poemm today ~ You will love the CHOIR ~ Yours BRIAN !
April 20th, 2018 01:48
THE EMPTY BEACH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I know why the beach was empty. They were all holidaying at the airport, as we said yesterday! It was so good they didn\'t want to get on the plane after all.
April 20th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I know why the beach was empty. They were all holidaying at the airport, as we said yesterday! It was so good they didn\'t want to get on the plane after all.
April 20th, 2018 01:33
THE EMPTY BEACH
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotion laden write Michael. I have seen that beach.
April 20th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotion laden write Michael. I have seen that beach.
April 20th, 2018 00:46
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
AS ONE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
SUNDAY
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
EARLY MORNING
Christina8 said:
Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!
April 19th, 2018 14:17
Christina8 said:
Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!
April 19th, 2018 14:17
EARLY MORNING
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Iām catching up on my reads! Iām going backwards...as life goes sometimes!
A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! Iāve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!
So youāre going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and donāt forget those tickets!š
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 13:39
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Iām catching up on my reads! Iām going backwards...as life goes sometimes!
A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! Iāve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!
So youāre going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and donāt forget those tickets!š
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 13:39
EARLY MORNING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2018 11:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2018 11:01
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!
April 19th, 2018 09:15
orchidee said:
The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!
April 19th, 2018 09:15
EARLY MORNING
Lorna said:
Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!
April 19th, 2018 06:06
Lorna said:
Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!
April 19th, 2018 06:06
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.
April 19th, 2018 03:13
orchidee said:
Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.
April 19th, 2018 03:13
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