Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THIS LAND
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I went on an \'Arts Trail\' spread over three areas, even bordering different counties. I covered two of the areas, the other one was too far out.
May 19th, 2018 01:07
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I went on an \'Arts Trail\' spread over three areas, even bordering different counties. I covered two of the areas, the other one was too far out.
May 19th, 2018 01:07
BUTTERFLY
SLR said:
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies break free from their chrysalis and grace us with their beauty. Hard to believe they\'re just beautiful insects. The \'flittering and fluttering\' does sound like butterfly wings, but I do also like dusks\' \'pulsing fluff\'. You guys are great!
May 18th, 2018 22:18
SLR said:
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies break free from their chrysalis and grace us with their beauty. Hard to believe they\'re just beautiful insects. The \'flittering and fluttering\' does sound like butterfly wings, but I do also like dusks\' \'pulsing fluff\'. You guys are great!
May 18th, 2018 22:18
BUTTERFLY
dusk arising said:
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight well in your piece. Earlier this year i included the sound of a butterfly\'s beating wings in a poem, i described it as sounding like \'pulsing fluff\'.
Oddly, a lady i met recently was terrified of butterflies to the point of running away screaming. It takes all kinds i suppose.
I think of them as one of the most beautiful of all creations and the peace they bring to our countryside when one is immersed in it is quite tangible.
Thanks for making mme think butterfly.
May 18th, 2018 09:00
dusk arising said:
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight well in your piece. Earlier this year i included the sound of a butterfly\'s beating wings in a poem, i described it as sounding like \'pulsing fluff\'.
Oddly, a lady i met recently was terrified of butterflies to the point of running away screaming. It takes all kinds i suppose.
I think of them as one of the most beautiful of all creations and the peace they bring to our countryside when one is immersed in it is quite tangible.
Thanks for making mme think butterfly.
May 18th, 2018 09:00
BUTTERFLY
FineB said:
A butterfly so symbolic of hot beautiful sunny days.
A sweet, vivid and charming poem!
Thank you Michael!
Keep writing
FineB
May 18th, 2018 03:27
FineB said:
A butterfly so symbolic of hot beautiful sunny days.
A sweet, vivid and charming poem!
Thank you Michael!
Keep writing
FineB
May 18th, 2018 03:27
BUTTERFLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a fine SEXTET Micheal ~ full of flutter & flow ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ Yes the butterflies are out in Mum\'s Garden ~ difficult to photograph with OPEN WINGS ~ BRIAN !
May 18th, 2018 03:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a fine SEXTET Micheal ~ full of flutter & flow ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ Yes the butterflies are out in Mum\'s Garden ~ difficult to photograph with OPEN WINGS ~ BRIAN !
May 18th, 2018 03:23
BUTTERFLY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!
May 18th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!
May 18th, 2018 01:31
BUTTERFLY
Goldfinch60 said:
They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.
May 18th, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.
May 18th, 2018 01:04
MERLOT
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I agree! A good vintage Merlot will do it for me and my husband! Iāll admit that in the past, as an adult, I only drank Pinot Grigio!
My husband is still strictly red!
Depending on the meal,
I do well with both!
So hereās to you š·, Maestro, for a super write and a super painting!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 10:12
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I agree! A good vintage Merlot will do it for me and my husband! Iāll admit that in the past, as an adult, I only drank Pinot Grigio!
My husband is still strictly red!
Depending on the meal,
I do well with both!
So hereās to you š·, Maestro, for a super write and a super painting!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 10:12
MERLOT
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A charming lovely poem.
I see you\'re a red man !
I confess that I am a white wine person all the way!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:52
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A charming lovely poem.
I see you\'re a red man !
I confess that I am a white wine person all the way!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:52
MERLOT
dusk arising said:
Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of moderate to low prices. My fav is cabernet sauvignon but it doesn\'t do to buy a cheaper one.
I have consumed more merlot in recent years. Such good taste!
May 17th, 2018 04:28
dusk arising said:
Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of moderate to low prices. My fav is cabernet sauvignon but it doesn\'t do to buy a cheaper one.
I have consumed more merlot in recent years. Such good taste!
May 17th, 2018 04:28
MERLOT
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Reminds me to reach for the sherry.... What? This time of day? I\'ve started early....! I shall not be ablesh to comment mucsh latersh on. Good acting innit?!
May 17th, 2018 01:25
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Reminds me to reach for the sherry.... What? This time of day? I\'ve started early....! I shall not be ablesh to comment mucsh latersh on. Good acting innit?!
May 17th, 2018 01:25
MERLOT
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good painting Michael.
Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I would always reach for the Rioja.
May 17th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good painting Michael.
Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I would always reach for the Rioja.
May 17th, 2018 01:09
PREJUDICES
SLR said:
So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our minds and hearts to new people, things and even experiences. Great write Mr Michael!
May 16th, 2018 22:55
SLR said:
So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our minds and hearts to new people, things and even experiences. Great write Mr Michael!
May 16th, 2018 22:55
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
SLR said:
This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.
May 16th, 2018 19:44
SLR said:
This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.
May 16th, 2018 19:44
PREJUDICES
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Spot on with this write!
Love the pic of dainty flowers!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 10:37
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Spot on with this write!
Love the pic of dainty flowers!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 10:37
PREJUDICES
dusk arising said:
Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those prejudices are ever present to trip us up.
Are they still there when we\'re \'pegged - out?\' ... sorry, couldn\'t resist that.
May 16th, 2018 10:26
dusk arising said:
Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those prejudices are ever present to trip us up.
Are they still there when we\'re \'pegged - out?\' ... sorry, couldn\'t resist that.
May 16th, 2018 10:26
PREJUDICES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for the \"BEAUTY\" of the Flowers and the \"WARNING\" in the Poem. Thanks for DALI ~ I have posted \"The Persistence of Memories\" hope that was an apt choice ! Please check my SENRYU on LADIES ! Yours BRIAN ~ Unprejudiced ?
May 16th, 2018 03:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for the \"BEAUTY\" of the Flowers and the \"WARNING\" in the Poem. Thanks for DALI ~ I have posted \"The Persistence of Memories\" hope that was an apt choice ! Please check my SENRYU on LADIES ! Yours BRIAN ~ Unprejudiced ?
May 16th, 2018 03:45
PREJUDICES
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh it\'s too psychological this time of day - and far too long a word for this time of day. See ya later, when I\'ve had a lie down to recover!
May 16th, 2018 01:46
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh it\'s too psychological this time of day - and far too long a word for this time of day. See ya later, when I\'ve had a lie down to recover!
May 16th, 2018 01:46
PREJUDICES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may those prejudices soon be dispelled.
May 16th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may those prejudices soon be dispelled.
May 16th, 2018 01:14
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Today must be one of those days! Yours is the second write that Iāve read about a peaceful death!
My dadās was a peaceful death...3:00a.m. ...8 1/2 years ago!
Your exquisite verse beautifully expresses how I felt about my dadās passing! Well done my friend!
Love the pic of the aquilegia! Too bad Iām not allowed to plant flowers at his gravesite! Like you, he loved his garden!
~Laura~
May 15th, 2018 09:34
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Today must be one of those days! Yours is the second write that Iāve read about a peaceful death!
My dadās was a peaceful death...3:00a.m. ...8 1/2 years ago!
Your exquisite verse beautifully expresses how I felt about my dadās passing! Well done my friend!
Love the pic of the aquilegia! Too bad Iām not allowed to plant flowers at his gravesite! Like you, he loved his garden!
~Laura~
May 15th, 2018 09:34
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Christina8 said:
Just loved this poem for today! Loved the last two lines, they were my favorite. Great flower pic!
May 15th, 2018 08:54
Christina8 said:
Just loved this poem for today! Loved the last two lines, they were my favorite. Great flower pic!
May 15th, 2018 08:54
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for a beautiful REQUIEM IN PACE poem ~ My Grandma passed away just like that ~ peacefully ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ like dancing fairies so delicate ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my HAIKU and add an Artist (I will add the picture) to my NEW FUSION ~ thanks BRIAN
May 15th, 2018 04:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for a beautiful REQUIEM IN PACE poem ~ My Grandma passed away just like that ~ peacefully ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ like dancing fairies so delicate ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my HAIKU and add an Artist (I will add the picture) to my NEW FUSION ~ thanks BRIAN
May 15th, 2018 04:36
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
dusk arising said:
Transitional beauty here. I\'m interpreting this as the passing at the end of life. I hope i have this right because anyone reading this piece with thoughts of the end of their days will surely see the passing over as a time of.magical transition.
Lovely words.
May 15th, 2018 03:22
dusk arising said:
Transitional beauty here. I\'m interpreting this as the passing at the end of life. I hope i have this right because anyone reading this piece with thoughts of the end of their days will surely see the passing over as a time of.magical transition.
Lovely words.
May 15th, 2018 03:22
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. She on Cloud Nine now?!
May 15th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. She on Cloud Nine now?!
May 15th, 2018 01:33
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Resa71 said:
So beautifully written.
You always capture such a peaceful feeling when you write.
Iām pretty much the opposite.
Guess we balance things out :)
Resa
May 15th, 2018 00:45
Resa71 said:
So beautifully written.
You always capture such a peaceful feeling when you write.
Iām pretty much the opposite.
Guess we balance things out :)
Resa
May 15th, 2018 00:45
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