Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ALL MY OWN
Nicholas Browning said:

A clever little trick of the hand sir. I like it. We need to find one of these for a ballad. You\'re changing things for the better around here! Hear that? It\'s a revolution coming.

April 12th, 2018 03:09

ALL MY OWN
Fay Slimm. said:

Fantastic new form Michael - powerful words - - the abstract reminds me of clean and cold ice - - a treat of a posting and thanks for sharing your work here with us.

April 12th, 2018 02:16

ALL MY OWN
Daveyboyz said:

Mind blowing,
Words flowing,
Great job.

April 12th, 2018 02:06

ALL MY OWN
orchidee said:

Good writes and pic Michael. I dunno any two-words-per-line hymn-poems. I might waffle less if I did! How\'s Ms Berles?!

April 12th, 2018 01:45

ALL MY OWN
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever writes that work very well.

April 12th, 2018 01:11

ANOTHER ESSENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HAPPY being a DAD
Dry NAPPY ~ That\'s my LAD !

Thanks Michael for introducing snazzy form ! Yours BRIAN

April 11th, 2018 11:40

LIMERICK No 52
Lorna said:

There HAS to be an Upper Brayling..... love it! And the hellebores are delightful! Thanks for the garden glimpse!

April 11th, 2018 04:40

ANOTHER ESSENCE
Lorna said:

Yes! Elation at the train rolling! I so agree! Even the commuter train!
As for the rhyme style:
Me fixing the dinner
for all of the sinners



April 11th, 2018 04:24

ANOTHER ESSENCE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Are you Mr Berles, married to Cilla?!

April 11th, 2018 01:53

ANOTHER ESSENCE
Nicholas Browning said:

An interesting concept to be sure. Haven\'t seen one of these before, but I quite like it.

April 11th, 2018 01:26

ANOTHER ESSENCE
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one once more Michael.

April 11th, 2018 01:10

LIMERICK No 52
ron parrish aka wordman said:

buddy you are good with these writes

April 10th, 2018 21:16

LIMERICK No 52
Christina8 said:

Absolutely enjoyed the pictures of flowers! Nice limerick!

April 10th, 2018 17:02

AN ESSENCE
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,
A great pic of your double daffodil! I like your shortie and its name! Thank you for defining what ā€œAn Essenceā€ is so I donā€™t have to look it up and be disappointed that I canā€™t find it! Lol

~Laura~

April 10th, 2018 16:24

WATER DROPLETS
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,
A beautiful Rondelet and garden wall! A great pic! The pics of your garden paint a beautiful picture! Your village sounds delightful!

~Laura~


April 10th, 2018 15:57

LIMERICK No 52
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,
Love the pic! I enjoyed the limerick! Is there such a place as Upper Brayling?

~Laura~


April 10th, 2018 15:15

LIMERICK No 52
Daveyboyz said:

Great poem, the only limerics I know are unrepeatably vulgar.

April 10th, 2018 05:10

LIMERICK No 52
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Similar to the Fire Exit: They found Bill Posters yet, sometimes known as Bill Stickers? And why they want to prosecute him?!

April 10th, 2018 02:00

LIMERICK No 52
Goldfinch60 said:

Frayed ankles can be a nuiscance.

April 10th, 2018 01:26

LIMERICK No 52
Nicholas Browning said:

I like that you write about so many broad subjects. Is it because you find them inspirational, interesting, or both? Whichever it be friend, your writing always astonishes.

April 10th, 2018 00:18

AN ESSENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

On your BIKE ~ MIKE
Short SPIKE ~ I LIKE

A SPIKE is a riposte poem !

Thanks for sharing and educating. The recent
Warm weather (65F) has encouraged the
double DAFFS in our town which is now a
Blaze of White & Yellow. Yours BRIAN
Please check today\'s Poem ~ Ta ~ B.

April 9th, 2018 04:56

AN ESSENCE
Lorna said:

Hi Michael - Happens that I like short concise poems as well - however while you have very logical patterns you study and stick to, I think in my case it is about short attention span.........

April 9th, 2018 04:23

AN ESSENCE
Goldfinch60 said:

Another new type of poem brought into my armoury.

April 9th, 2018 02:22

AN ESSENCE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. You sorting out those syllables?! Ms Berles helped me.

April 9th, 2018 01:39

AN ESSENCE
Daveyboyz said:

Concise, Poem device, will suffice, very nice.

April 9th, 2018 01:18

WATER DROPLETS
Accidental Poet said:

A beautiful view and poem Michael.

April 8th, 2018 07:11

WATER DROPLETS
Lorna said:

Perfect poem Michael and oooooooooooo love your garden wall and plants.... charm charm charm all over the place......... now this is what I think of when I imagine England......

April 8th, 2018 05:29

WITH RESOLUTION
Fay Slimm. said:

Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love that sonnet with such positive finalƩ.

April 8th, 2018 04:59

WATER DROPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:

Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love that high wall for display and for privacy.

April 8th, 2018 04:57

WATER DROPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ A true English Garden should have an IVY WALL (my Parent\'s Garage has one) or at least a Rose Hedge ! Thanks for the Rondelet ~ always a delight to recite ! For me WATER is the ultimate MOLECULE H - O - H (angular 105 degrees) and any poetic tribute WATER (the amphoteric hydroxide of hydrogen !) makes my day ! Thanks for explaining the classical form ~ All poetry sites should explain Classical Structural Form and Rhyme Pattern etc. Thanks BRIAN

April 8th, 2018 03:22



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