Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
EPIGRAM No1
orchidee said:
Ahh so you know my cousin, a professional singer?! He taught me to sing, ya know! Meoowwooo!heehee.
April 4th, 2018 01:52
orchidee said:
Ahh so you know my cousin, a professional singer?! He taught me to sing, ya know! Meoowwooo!heehee.
April 4th, 2018 01:52
FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT
Christina8 said:
I like the senryu formats, especially the last one. Beautiful pictures! Keep sending them, I\'m stuck in winter!
April 3rd, 2018 17:13
Christina8 said:
I like the senryu formats, especially the last one. Beautiful pictures! Keep sending them, I\'m stuck in winter!
April 3rd, 2018 17:13
FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ The sphere of SENRYU
is infinite even stretching from
Passion to Enchantment !
No. 2 is my favourite I always exercise
Patience especially in LOVE !
I love the PULMONARIA the BLUE
ameliorates the GREEN !
I once went down with PULMONARIA
But apart from a WHEEZE
I\'m fully recovered !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN !
April 3rd, 2018 11:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ The sphere of SENRYU
is infinite even stretching from
Passion to Enchantment !
No. 2 is my favourite I always exercise
Patience especially in LOVE !
I love the PULMONARIA the BLUE
ameliorates the GREEN !
I once went down with PULMONARIA
But apart from a WHEEZE
I\'m fully recovered !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN !
April 3rd, 2018 11:22
FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael, if we ever get past the first line: \'Uncontrolled passion\'. Swoon! lol.
Some poets get niggly when I put \'alway\' instead of \'always\'. It can be poetic licence, to get something to rhyme with \'say\', \'day\', etc.
April 3rd, 2018 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael, if we ever get past the first line: \'Uncontrolled passion\'. Swoon! lol.
Some poets get niggly when I put \'alway\' instead of \'always\'. It can be poetic licence, to get something to rhyme with \'say\', \'day\', etc.
April 3rd, 2018 01:52
FROM PASSION TO ENCHANTMENT
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryu write Michael.
Just one thing the second line of the first senryu should it be unwelcomed, there is no d on the word.
April 3rd, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good senryu write Michael.
Just one thing the second line of the first senryu should it be unwelcomed, there is no d on the word.
April 3rd, 2018 00:45
A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR REMINDING US MIKE ~ The whole World\'s a Stage and we mere players ~ BUT ~ We all need an audience ! Consequently a POEM is not a POEM until it is read and its not christened until it\'s recited to at minimum of at least one listener ! A \"sans mot\" Cartoon of course is not a Cartoon until it has been seen etc ! I have small group of MPS friends who both read and comment on my Odd Odes (and v.v) 5 is a good score and (these days) 10 exceptional ! I used to be on a Poetry Programme where the number of comments was flagged up ! If I saw one with ZERO comments I always added ONE to encourage ~ OK ~ Your Friend BRIAN ! Please check my Poem and my FUSION on Chocolate ! Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 08:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR REMINDING US MIKE ~ The whole World\'s a Stage and we mere players ~ BUT ~ We all need an audience ! Consequently a POEM is not a POEM until it is read and its not christened until it\'s recited to at minimum of at least one listener ! A \"sans mot\" Cartoon of course is not a Cartoon until it has been seen etc ! I have small group of MPS friends who both read and comment on my Odd Odes (and v.v) 5 is a good score and (these days) 10 exceptional ! I used to be on a Poetry Programme where the number of comments was flagged up ! If I saw one with ZERO comments I always added ONE to encourage ~ OK ~ Your Friend BRIAN ! Please check my Poem and my FUSION on Chocolate ! Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 08:07
Mrs BROWN
Lorna said:
Mrs. Brown may be the downside to charming little villages! Where do you go to get away! Loved your new style Michael!
April 2nd, 2018 07:44
Lorna said:
Mrs. Brown may be the downside to charming little villages! Where do you go to get away! Loved your new style Michael!
April 2nd, 2018 07:44
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
Lorna said:
Hmmmmm I\'ll have to see if my garden zone will support hellebores! They are lovely........and your brevettes are bravo!
April 2nd, 2018 07:30
Lorna said:
Hmmmmm I\'ll have to see if my garden zone will support hellebores! They are lovely........and your brevettes are bravo!
April 2nd, 2018 07:30
A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE
orchidee said:
I knows it. I usualeee spots it when folk mackes spellyng misteaks. Though this may be correct for around the 11th Century spelling!
Someone might get technical, and say it\'s some \'perfect tense\' or whatever it is - spoke.
And why are they all tense, agitated, stressed?! lol.
April 2nd, 2018 01:46
orchidee said:
I knows it. I usualeee spots it when folk mackes spellyng misteaks. Though this may be correct for around the 11th Century spelling!
Someone might get technical, and say it\'s some \'perfect tense\' or whatever it is - spoke.
And why are they all tense, agitated, stressed?! lol.
April 2nd, 2018 01:46
A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE
Michael Edwards said:
You know the biggest turn-off for me when reading poetry is incorrect use of the language (unless of course it is intentional - written colloquially for example) and bad punctuation and yet here I am using \'spoke\' when it should be \'spoken\'. Heigh ho.
April 2nd, 2018 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
You know the biggest turn-off for me when reading poetry is incorrect use of the language (unless of course it is intentional - written colloquially for example) and bad punctuation and yet here I am using \'spoke\' when it should be \'spoken\'. Heigh ho.
April 2nd, 2018 01:35
A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE
Goldfinch60 said:
Pardon Michael, I seem to have gone deaf.
April 2nd, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Pardon Michael, I seem to have gone deaf.
April 2nd, 2018 00:35
A JOKE IS NOT A JOKE
Michael Edwards said:
Forgive the bad English but it seems to work regardless. Plus a photo of yet more hellebores
April 2nd, 2018 00:32
Michael Edwards said:
Forgive the bad English but it seems to work regardless. Plus a photo of yet more hellebores
April 2nd, 2018 00:32
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVE
CONQUERS
ALL !
Thanks for the brevettes
and the Hellebores
Added a lightness to
our DAY ! No. 2 was
our favourite !
Yours Angela & Brian
April 1st, 2018 03:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVE
CONQUERS
ALL !
Thanks for the brevettes
and the Hellebores
Added a lightness to
our DAY ! No. 2 was
our favourite !
Yours Angela & Brian
April 1st, 2018 03:10
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Here\'s one from me: \'I Woz Ere\'. Well, it has three words, but I\'ve not quite got the hang of brevettes! lol.
April 1st, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Here\'s one from me: \'I Woz Ere\'. Well, it has three words, but I\'ve not quite got the hang of brevettes! lol.
April 1st, 2018 01:41
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
Goldfinch60 said:
Never come across brevettes but it is an interesting way to write and like those you have written can be very powerful in their brevity.
The flowers look wonderful.
April 1st, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Never come across brevettes but it is an interesting way to write and like those you have written can be very powerful in their brevity.
The flowers look wonderful.
April 1st, 2018 00:45
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
Michael Edwards said:
Another photo taken during the last week of hellebores - I have a whole collection of these beautiful plants from near black through maroon, red , pink, yellow, bi-coloured through to white - I just love them.
April 1st, 2018 00:18
Michael Edwards said:
Another photo taken during the last week of hellebores - I have a whole collection of these beautiful plants from near black through maroon, red , pink, yellow, bi-coloured through to white - I just love them.
April 1st, 2018 00:18
Mrs BROWN
Laura🌻 said:
Loved it, Michael!
You have Mrs. Brown and
we have Blanca...once she
gets my attention, she
never stops!
By the way, she’s the one
responsible for all the stray
cats in my mom’s neighborhood!
I enjoyed the read and the
beautiful daffodils!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 06:26
Laura🌻 said:
Loved it, Michael!
You have Mrs. Brown and
we have Blanca...once she
gets my attention, she
never stops!
By the way, she’s the one
responsible for all the stray
cats in my mom’s neighborhood!
I enjoyed the read and the
beautiful daffodils!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 06:26
Mrs BROWN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"She\'s Mrs Brown\"
Yes indeed MIKE they are everywhere !
Even on the Telly \"Mrs Brown\'s Boys\"
But I am sure you never watch it !
ANGELA loves it as so many of her
private massage & physio clients
Are just like Mrs Brown & Granddad !
Love the EL GRECO shape of the poem
Love the DAFFS ! Yours as ever BRIAN !
March 31st, 2018 05:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"She\'s Mrs Brown\"
Yes indeed MIKE they are everywhere !
Even on the Telly \"Mrs Brown\'s Boys\"
But I am sure you never watch it !
ANGELA loves it as so many of her
private massage & physio clients
Are just like Mrs Brown & Granddad !
Love the EL GRECO shape of the poem
Love the DAFFS ! Yours as ever BRIAN !
March 31st, 2018 05:02
Mrs BROWN
Goldfinch60 said:
The Mrs Browns of this world are always out there, they mean no harm but cannot stop talking.
Good fun write Michael.
March 31st, 2018 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
The Mrs Browns of this world are always out there, they mean no harm but cannot stop talking.
Good fun write Michael.
March 31st, 2018 00:09
MOUNTAIN RANGES
Christina8 said:
A beautiful tanka! And might I add you are so lucky to have a garden that blooms with flowers!! Still too cold in the U.S. for that. Thanks for the uplifting picture and Tanka!
March 30th, 2018 19:46
Christina8 said:
A beautiful tanka! And might I add you are so lucky to have a garden that blooms with flowers!! Still too cold in the U.S. for that. Thanks for the uplifting picture and Tanka!
March 30th, 2018 19:46
MOUNTAIN RANGES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ love PRIMULAS ~ colour & contour ! Love TANKAS (57577) Haiku & Senryu with attitude ! I have been doing talks on John Denver for Seniors (helps them to recall & remember) and it reminded me of ROCKY MOUNTAIN HIGH and my beloved Colorado in the Fall ! Yours BRIAN
March 30th, 2018 04:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ love PRIMULAS ~ colour & contour ! Love TANKAS (57577) Haiku & Senryu with attitude ! I have been doing talks on John Denver for Seniors (helps them to recall & remember) and it reminded me of ROCKY MOUNTAIN HIGH and my beloved Colorado in the Fall ! Yours BRIAN
March 30th, 2018 04:33
MOUNTAIN RANGES
orchidee said:
Good shorty and pic Michael. Are the flowers short too - or plenty of them?!
March 30th, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
Good shorty and pic Michael. Are the flowers short too - or plenty of them?!
March 30th, 2018 01:50
MOUNTAIN RANGES
Laura🌻 said:
A fine shorty, Michael!
Love the colors of those primulas. Your garden must be beautiful with all the different colors...
like a symphony of music...
except yours is a symphony of flowers! Awesome!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 00:49
Laura🌻 said:
A fine shorty, Michael!
Love the colors of those primulas. Your garden must be beautiful with all the different colors...
like a symphony of music...
except yours is a symphony of flowers! Awesome!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 00:49
MOUNTAIN RANGES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
March 30th, 2018 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
March 30th, 2018 00:19
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