Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No 52
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the pic! I enjoyed the limerick! Is there such a place as Upper Brayling?
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 15:15
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the pic! I enjoyed the limerick! Is there such a place as Upper Brayling?
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 15:15
LIMERICK No 52
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem, the only limerics I know are unrepeatably vulgar.
April 10th, 2018 05:10
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem, the only limerics I know are unrepeatably vulgar.
April 10th, 2018 05:10
LIMERICK No 52
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Similar to the Fire Exit: They found Bill Posters yet, sometimes known as Bill Stickers? And why they want to prosecute him?!
April 10th, 2018 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Similar to the Fire Exit: They found Bill Posters yet, sometimes known as Bill Stickers? And why they want to prosecute him?!
April 10th, 2018 02:00
LIMERICK No 52
Nicholas Browning said:
I like that you write about so many broad subjects. Is it because you find them inspirational, interesting, or both? Whichever it be friend, your writing always astonishes.
April 10th, 2018 00:18
Nicholas Browning said:
I like that you write about so many broad subjects. Is it because you find them inspirational, interesting, or both? Whichever it be friend, your writing always astonishes.
April 10th, 2018 00:18
AN ESSENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
On your BIKE ~ MIKE
Short SPIKE ~ I LIKE
A SPIKE is a riposte poem !
Thanks for sharing and educating. The recent
Warm weather (65F) has encouraged the
double DAFFS in our town which is now a
Blaze of White & Yellow. Yours BRIAN
Please check today\'s Poem ~ Ta ~ B.
April 9th, 2018 04:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
On your BIKE ~ MIKE
Short SPIKE ~ I LIKE
A SPIKE is a riposte poem !
Thanks for sharing and educating. The recent
Warm weather (65F) has encouraged the
double DAFFS in our town which is now a
Blaze of White & Yellow. Yours BRIAN
Please check today\'s Poem ~ Ta ~ B.
April 9th, 2018 04:56
AN ESSENCE
Lorna said:
Hi Michael - Happens that I like short concise poems as well - however while you have very logical patterns you study and stick to, I think in my case it is about short attention span.........
April 9th, 2018 04:23
Lorna said:
Hi Michael - Happens that I like short concise poems as well - however while you have very logical patterns you study and stick to, I think in my case it is about short attention span.........
April 9th, 2018 04:23
AN ESSENCE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You sorting out those syllables?! Ms Berles helped me.
April 9th, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You sorting out those syllables?! Ms Berles helped me.
April 9th, 2018 01:39
WATER DROPLETS
Lorna said:
Perfect poem Michael and oooooooooooo love your garden wall and plants.... charm charm charm all over the place......... now this is what I think of when I imagine England......
April 8th, 2018 05:29
Lorna said:
Perfect poem Michael and oooooooooooo love your garden wall and plants.... charm charm charm all over the place......... now this is what I think of when I imagine England......
April 8th, 2018 05:29
WITH RESOLUTION
Fay Slimm. said:
Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love that sonnet with such positive finalé.
April 8th, 2018 04:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love that sonnet with such positive finalé.
April 8th, 2018 04:59
WATER DROPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love that high wall for display and for privacy.
April 8th, 2018 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love that high wall for display and for privacy.
April 8th, 2018 04:57
WATER DROPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ A true English Garden should have an IVY WALL (my Parent\'s Garage has one) or at least a Rose Hedge ! Thanks for the Rondelet ~ always a delight to recite ! For me WATER is the ultimate MOLECULE H - O - H (angular 105 degrees) and any poetic tribute WATER (the amphoteric hydroxide of hydrogen !) makes my day ! Thanks for explaining the classical form ~ All poetry sites should explain Classical Structural Form and Rhyme Pattern etc. Thanks BRIAN
April 8th, 2018 03:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ A true English Garden should have an IVY WALL (my Parent\'s Garage has one) or at least a Rose Hedge ! Thanks for the Rondelet ~ always a delight to recite ! For me WATER is the ultimate MOLECULE H - O - H (angular 105 degrees) and any poetic tribute WATER (the amphoteric hydroxide of hydrogen !) makes my day ! Thanks for explaining the classical form ~ All poetry sites should explain Classical Structural Form and Rhyme Pattern etc. Thanks BRIAN
April 8th, 2018 03:22
WATER DROPLETS
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yep, I must get those pesky syllables correct. Well ,they\'re not too pesky! lol
April 8th, 2018 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yep, I must get those pesky syllables correct. Well ,they\'re not too pesky! lol
April 8th, 2018 01:43
WATER DROPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
April 8th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
April 8th, 2018 00:45
WITH RESOLUTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for composing and sharing this excellent 6-6-2 Blank verse sonnet ! I can emphasise with the metaphor of Life & Sailing ! I was raised on the W Coast and live on the E Coast and have spent many hours \"messing about in boats\" I have lots of salt in my Blood Stream. Verse 1. When you are in mid-ocean ~ You always long for the shore Verse 2. WE learn more about the reality of life \"afloat\" than on the shore ! Verse 3. Sailors always believe the next cruise will be the BEST ! My Parents have a Patio outside the french Windows and this afternoon (55F) I enjoyed a Pot of Earl Grey and scones ! thanks for Sharing ~ BRIAN.
April 7th, 2018 16:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for composing and sharing this excellent 6-6-2 Blank verse sonnet ! I can emphasise with the metaphor of Life & Sailing ! I was raised on the W Coast and live on the E Coast and have spent many hours \"messing about in boats\" I have lots of salt in my Blood Stream. Verse 1. When you are in mid-ocean ~ You always long for the shore Verse 2. WE learn more about the reality of life \"afloat\" than on the shore ! Verse 3. Sailors always believe the next cruise will be the BEST ! My Parents have a Patio outside the french Windows and this afternoon (55F) I enjoyed a Pot of Earl Grey and scones ! thanks for Sharing ~ BRIAN.
April 7th, 2018 16:30
WITH RESOLUTION
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A great sonnet! I love your garden...especially that view outside your studio! I can picture you and your wife sitting there enjoying your gin and tonic! Perfect pic! Thank you for indulging us with your beautiful pics and super writes! Enjoy your day at the rummage sale. I hope a lot of funds are raised for a very worthy cause!
~Laura~
April 7th, 2018 09:13
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A great sonnet! I love your garden...especially that view outside your studio! I can picture you and your wife sitting there enjoying your gin and tonic! Perfect pic! Thank you for indulging us with your beautiful pics and super writes! Enjoy your day at the rummage sale. I hope a lot of funds are raised for a very worthy cause!
~Laura~
April 7th, 2018 09:13
WITH RESOLUTION
FineB said:
A superb sonnet.
Brilliant write.
Keep writing
FineB
April 7th, 2018 08:46
FineB said:
A superb sonnet.
Brilliant write.
Keep writing
FineB
April 7th, 2018 08:46
WITH RESOLUTION
Lorna said:
I loved the poem and riding with the sea of sorrows...... can you tell me what you meant by \"censored souls\" - your garden nook is so cozy and inviting!
April 7th, 2018 04:20
Lorna said:
I loved the poem and riding with the sea of sorrows...... can you tell me what you meant by \"censored souls\" - your garden nook is so cozy and inviting!
April 7th, 2018 04:20
WITH RESOLUTION
Daveyboyz said:
Some vivid imagery there, I could see rough seas, though I am not sure I could paint them.
April 7th, 2018 03:39
Daveyboyz said:
Some vivid imagery there, I could see rough seas, though I am not sure I could paint them.
April 7th, 2018 03:39
WITH RESOLUTION
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Sounds a bit hymnal. I could maybe turn it to a hymn-poem, if you wish?
We got a bit of rhubarb at back of our garden. You on that gin yet?!
April 7th, 2018 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Sounds a bit hymnal. I could maybe turn it to a hymn-poem, if you wish?
We got a bit of rhubarb at back of our garden. You on that gin yet?!
April 7th, 2018 02:01
WITH RESOLUTION
Goldfinch60 said:
Super sonnet, always leave the shadows behind you.
Did you get the rhubarb and ginger gin?
April 7th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Super sonnet, always leave the shadows behind you.
Did you get the rhubarb and ginger gin?
April 7th, 2018 00:50
EPIGRAM No 3
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - - what hidden depths you quill in today\'s epigram Michael -- - love this cheeky but clever touch of fun. Great picture of a colourful corner out in your garden too.
April 6th, 2018 11:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - - what hidden depths you quill in today\'s epigram Michael -- - love this cheeky but clever touch of fun. Great picture of a colourful corner out in your garden too.
April 6th, 2018 11:24
EPIGRAM No 3
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Thank you for the picture! Very colorful! I like the variety of flowers! Do the other borders have flowers also?
The epigram is hilarious! From reading all the comments, I see you got a lot of mileage out of that number three! I could make a joke, but I’ll restrain myself! I’ve enjoyed my first read of the day very much!
I’ll have my gin and tonic (one of my favorites) later on in the day! You said it needs to be made properly! What’s your recipe? Another favorite of mine is a very dry Martini!
Thanks again, Michael! You’re awesome!
~Laura~
April 6th, 2018 09:09
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Thank you for the picture! Very colorful! I like the variety of flowers! Do the other borders have flowers also?
The epigram is hilarious! From reading all the comments, I see you got a lot of mileage out of that number three! I could make a joke, but I’ll restrain myself! I’ve enjoyed my first read of the day very much!
I’ll have my gin and tonic (one of my favorites) later on in the day! You said it needs to be made properly! What’s your recipe? Another favorite of mine is a very dry Martini!
Thanks again, Michael! You’re awesome!
~Laura~
April 6th, 2018 09:09
EPIGRAM No 3
Christina8 said:
LOL thanks for the giggle first thing in the morning. Lovely garden image!
April 6th, 2018 06:53
Christina8 said:
LOL thanks for the giggle first thing in the morning. Lovely garden image!
April 6th, 2018 06:53
EPIGRAM No 2
Lorna said:
You know the saying \"parenting doesn\'t come with a manual\"....... must be the hardest job ever...... more pictures of your garden please..... I\'ll post some of mine (some day, some year).......
April 6th, 2018 05:46
Lorna said:
You know the saying \"parenting doesn\'t come with a manual\"....... must be the hardest job ever...... more pictures of your garden please..... I\'ll post some of mine (some day, some year).......
April 6th, 2018 05:46
EPIGRAM No 3
Lorna said:
I can only imagine! Such pictures spring to mind...... on well....... I love seeing your garden pictures. Keep them coming! No restrictions there!
April 6th, 2018 05:35
Lorna said:
I can only imagine! Such pictures spring to mind...... on well....... I love seeing your garden pictures. Keep them coming! No restrictions there!
April 6th, 2018 05:35
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