Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ME AND MY FAMILY
FredPeyer said:
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting and writing. And judging from how you paint and write, I think you have the potential to be an incredible dancer!
Ancestry: My family tree goes way back to before there were humans on this earth, to my ancestors on that far away planet, the generations born in the ship all the way to arrival on earth. There is some indication, not entirely clear though, that some of your ancestors arrived on the same space ship.
February 14th, 2018 14:00
FredPeyer said:
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting and writing. And judging from how you paint and write, I think you have the potential to be an incredible dancer!
Ancestry: My family tree goes way back to before there were humans on this earth, to my ancestors on that far away planet, the generations born in the ship all the way to arrival on earth. There is some indication, not entirely clear though, that some of your ancestors arrived on the same space ship.
February 14th, 2018 14:00
ME AND MY FAMILY
malubotelho said:
Humorous and smart at the same time. Always a joy to read you Michael
February 14th, 2018 13:08
malubotelho said:
Humorous and smart at the same time. Always a joy to read you Michael
February 14th, 2018 13:08
ME AND MY FAMILY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL \"The eye of the Fish is awesome !\" I\'m learning lots from the \"SENIORS* on MPS ~ Adam & Eve indeed ~ in essence we are ALL descended from THEM ! \"Daddy Dancing\" is an oft debated subject ~ but I have no critics and Angela loves to dance with me and we both love STRICTLY ~ It takes TANG to TO~O ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2018 09:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL \"The eye of the Fish is awesome !\" I\'m learning lots from the \"SENIORS* on MPS ~ Adam & Eve indeed ~ in essence we are ALL descended from THEM ! \"Daddy Dancing\" is an oft debated subject ~ but I have no critics and Angela loves to dance with me and we both love STRICTLY ~ It takes TANG to TO~O ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2018 09:14
ME AND MY FAMILY
dusk arising said:
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family can be traced back to when they first slimed and wriggled their way out of the ocean..... Bournemouth i think it was.
I really like the series of pictures you\'\'ve been using recently.
February 14th, 2018 08:35
dusk arising said:
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family can be traced back to when they first slimed and wriggled their way out of the ocean..... Bournemouth i think it was.
I really like the series of pictures you\'\'ve been using recently.
February 14th, 2018 08:35
ME AND MY FAMILY
Christina8 said:
Very good Michael--I like the one about dancing very much!
February 14th, 2018 07:25
Christina8 said:
Very good Michael--I like the one about dancing very much!
February 14th, 2018 07:25
ME AND MY FAMILY
Michael Edwards said:
Got it Orchi:
Biological evolutionists keep getting it wrong
When they say we’ve evolved from primates
Now I’ve been telling them all along
( and the argument never abates)
that in fact the apes evolved from us
and the truth was ever thus!
February 14th, 2018 03:01
Michael Edwards said:
Got it Orchi:
Biological evolutionists keep getting it wrong
When they say we’ve evolved from primates
Now I’ve been telling them all along
( and the argument never abates)
that in fact the apes evolved from us
and the truth was ever thus!
February 14th, 2018 03:01
ME AND MY FAMILY
orchidee said:
I was a dinosaur! What\'s that you say?- you still are! doh! Good write Michael. Well, I for one don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
February 14th, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
I was a dinosaur! What\'s that you say?- you still are! doh! Good write Michael. Well, I for one don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
February 14th, 2018 02:37
ME AND MY FAMILY
Goldfinch60 said:
But if you trace it back to Adam and Eve how did you get back to the records before the Great Flood. Orchi and I were there disguised as baboons.
February 14th, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
But if you trace it back to Adam and Eve how did you get back to the records before the Great Flood. Orchi and I were there disguised as baboons.
February 14th, 2018 01:59
LOVE IS >>>
Christina8 said:
Such simple things but when there is such a deep and meaningful love between two people, you are glad to have that person to share all these things with. Great write!
February 13th, 2018 21:11
Christina8 said:
Such simple things but when there is such a deep and meaningful love between two people, you are glad to have that person to share all these things with. Great write!
February 13th, 2018 21:11
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
FredPeyer said:
As many others already mentioned, had to read it several times too, and it really does grow on the reader. The perfect woman...a paragon of womanhood. And you Michael are on the way of becoming a paragon of poethood!
February 13th, 2018 20:33
FredPeyer said:
As many others already mentioned, had to read it several times too, and it really does grow on the reader. The perfect woman...a paragon of womanhood. And you Michael are on the way of becoming a paragon of poethood!
February 13th, 2018 20:33
LOVE IS >>>
dusk arising said:
Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont let me do the washing up - i tell you it gets damn chilly stood by the sink in february just in undies ...pah! real love.
.omg.... you better believe this is tongue in cheek
February 13th, 2018 15:38
dusk arising said:
Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont let me do the washing up - i tell you it gets damn chilly stood by the sink in february just in undies ...pah! real love.
.omg.... you better believe this is tongue in cheek
February 13th, 2018 15:38
LOVE IS >>>
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Love is lovely ...and your piece is also beautious enough!!
February 13th, 2018 12:18
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Love is lovely ...and your piece is also beautious enough!!
February 13th, 2018 12:18
LOVE IS >>>
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES MIKE ~ In my (limited) experience it always
\"Takes Two to Tango\" When one is in LOVE ~
Sky above is Brighter Blue
Earth beneath is Softer Green
Something gleams in every hue
Loveless Eyes have never seen ......
Thanks for sharing the 24/7 BLESSINGS of LOVE
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Love the boat ~ QUINQUERIME of NINEVEH ?
February 13th, 2018 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES MIKE ~ In my (limited) experience it always
\"Takes Two to Tango\" When one is in LOVE ~
Sky above is Brighter Blue
Earth beneath is Softer Green
Something gleams in every hue
Loveless Eyes have never seen ......
Thanks for sharing the 24/7 BLESSINGS of LOVE
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Love the boat ~ QUINQUERIME of NINEVEH ?
February 13th, 2018 09:35
LOVE IS >>>
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Yes, Love should be all of what you’ve described it to be...and more! It would promote peace and less divorces! I like this write very much! Today, I’m washing the linens
and he’s cooking!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 05:57
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Yes, Love should be all of what you’ve described it to be...and more! It would promote peace and less divorces! I like this write very much! Today, I’m washing the linens
and he’s cooking!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 05:57
LOVE IS >>>
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Love is - me scoffing pork pies and downing sherries. A completely selfish love of course. I could never share them with anyone!
Oh OK I will, but it\'s always porkies and sherries on the menu! heehee.
February 13th, 2018 02:33
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Love is - me scoffing pork pies and downing sherries. A completely selfish love of course. I could never share them with anyone!
Oh OK I will, but it\'s always porkies and sherries on the menu! heehee.
February 13th, 2018 02:33
LOVE IS >>>
Goldfinch60 said:
I am going to wash the linen today!
Being together in all things is so special.
February 13th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I am going to wash the linen today!
Being together in all things is so special.
February 13th, 2018 01:56
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN
February 12th, 2018 03:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN
February 12th, 2018 03:42
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
Laura🌻 said:
Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!
Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:32
Laura🌻 said:
Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!
Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:32
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
dusk arising said:
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.
February 12th, 2018 03:22
dusk arising said:
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.
February 12th, 2018 03:22
NOW FARP THE SHOTS
Laura🌻 said:
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:20
Laura🌻 said:
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:20
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
orchidee said:
Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!
February 12th, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!
February 12th, 2018 02:40
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very powerful write Michael, I have read it several times and I find it so meaningful every time I have read it.
February 12th, 2018 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very powerful write Michael, I have read it several times and I find it so meaningful every time I have read it.
February 12th, 2018 02:28
WHO I AM
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Outstanding.....this is called the liberty of Mind!
February 11th, 2018 09:32
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Outstanding.....this is called the liberty of Mind!
February 11th, 2018 09:32
NOW FARP THE SHOTS
dusk arising said:
i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over the mable.
Such writing deserves a motherment gealth warming.
February 11th, 2018 08:24
dusk arising said:
i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over the mable.
Such writing deserves a motherment gealth warming.
February 11th, 2018 08:24
NOW FARP THE SHOTS
orchidee said:
Have to stamp out \'farping\' on the \'Nothing-ever-too-exciting-must-ever-happen\' Committee! lol.
February 11th, 2018 05:13
orchidee said:
Have to stamp out \'farping\' on the \'Nothing-ever-too-exciting-must-ever-happen\' Committee! lol.
February 11th, 2018 05:13
NOW FARP THE SHOTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a Sunday Morning smile ! SPOONERISMS have always been feature of English Humour & Verse ! Our ENGLISH TEACHER was telling us of a CAT that fell from the window of the tenth story of a Tower Block. Was it hurt one innocent third former enquired ? Oh NO ~ Mister Spinks replied (much to the amusement of the rest of the class) \"He just POPPED on his DRAWERS and ran off\" I often use SPOONERISMS in general speech ! Yours BRIAN
February 11th, 2018 05:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a Sunday Morning smile ! SPOONERISMS have always been feature of English Humour & Verse ! Our ENGLISH TEACHER was telling us of a CAT that fell from the window of the tenth story of a Tower Block. Was it hurt one innocent third former enquired ? Oh NO ~ Mister Spinks replied (much to the amusement of the rest of the class) \"He just POPPED on his DRAWERS and ran off\" I often use SPOONERISMS in general speech ! Yours BRIAN
February 11th, 2018 05:05
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