Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
AS ONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
April 17th, 2018 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
April 17th, 2018 03:06
AS ONE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
April 17th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
April 17th, 2018 01:45
AS ONE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
April 17th, 2018 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
April 17th, 2018 01:05
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lorna said:
Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!
April 16th, 2018 06:46
Lorna said:
Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!
April 16th, 2018 06:46
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
orchidee said:
Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!
April 16th, 2018 01:51
orchidee said:
Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!
April 16th, 2018 01:51
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Goldfinch60 said:
Two thought provoking quinzaines Michael.
April 16th, 2018 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Two thought provoking quinzaines Michael.
April 16th, 2018 01:02
TWO MORE EDELECTS
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
I loved this poem
I love the flowers too.
Keep writing
FineB
April 15th, 2018 17:29
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
I loved this poem
I love the flowers too.
Keep writing
FineB
April 15th, 2018 17:29
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Beautiful pic of the white daffodils! Two more fine edelects! I can just see that “cheese churning “...in my tummy! Lol
I like this new form of yours.
Here’s my attempt...
Canvas blank
Painters prank
Japery justified
Children growing
Parents worrying
Society smiling
Constructive criticism welcomed!
~Laura~
April 15th, 2018 08:49
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Beautiful pic of the white daffodils! Two more fine edelects! I can just see that “cheese churning “...in my tummy! Lol
I like this new form of yours.
Here’s my attempt...
Canvas blank
Painters prank
Japery justified
Children growing
Parents worrying
Society smiling
Constructive criticism welcomed!
~Laura~
April 15th, 2018 08:49
TWO MORE EDELECTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAND NATIONAL
Horses Race
Ladies Grace
Tiger Trolls !
Thanks for sharing MICHEAL
Complicated form ~ Hope I
got near it !
Love the EDELECTS as a Scientist
I always seek to be OBJECTIVE and
seek to Prove my Hypotheses !
Cows are WONDERFUL ~ even the
Concrete ones in MILTON KEYNES !
Love the WHITE DAFFODILS
Yours Brian ~ Please check my
FRUIT of the SPIRIT ! I do appreciate
HUMANISTS show the same TRAITS !
April 15th, 2018 04:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAND NATIONAL
Horses Race
Ladies Grace
Tiger Trolls !
Thanks for sharing MICHEAL
Complicated form ~ Hope I
got near it !
Love the EDELECTS as a Scientist
I always seek to be OBJECTIVE and
seek to Prove my Hypotheses !
Cows are WONDERFUL ~ even the
Concrete ones in MILTON KEYNES !
Love the WHITE DAFFODILS
Yours Brian ~ Please check my
FRUIT of the SPIRIT ! I do appreciate
HUMANISTS show the same TRAITS !
April 15th, 2018 04:04
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Daveyboyz said:
That first one sure is the truth... you seem to know about horticulture, I could write all I know on that subject on the back of a stamp.
April 15th, 2018 01:37
Daveyboyz said:
That first one sure is the truth... you seem to know about horticulture, I could write all I know on that subject on the back of a stamp.
April 15th, 2018 01:37
TWO MORE EDELECTS
orchidee said:
Fine ede-wotstis and pic Michael. A nice bit of bread and chunk of cheese to go with it?!
April 15th, 2018 01:23
orchidee said:
Fine ede-wotstis and pic Michael. A nice bit of bread and chunk of cheese to go with it?!
April 15th, 2018 01:23
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are good but the second one gave me my first chuckle of the day.
April 15th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are good but the second one gave me my first chuckle of the day.
April 15th, 2018 00:58
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Nicholas Browning said:
Hah! Changing it up little by little. You\'re not wrong though. I don\'t know much about flowers. Hydrangeas are pretty cool. A shame they don\'t last long.
April 15th, 2018 00:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Hah! Changing it up little by little. You\'re not wrong though. I don\'t know much about flowers. Hydrangeas are pretty cool. A shame they don\'t last long.
April 15th, 2018 00:34
UNWINESQUE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This write is hilarious!
I like the Modigliani inspired artwork!
Great work my friend!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 12:31
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This write is hilarious!
I like the Modigliani inspired artwork!
Great work my friend!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 12:31
AN ARTISTS EYE
Christina8 said:
It\'s amazing what, as an artist, you see and can be transferred to almost any medium. Also, great write! I like the rhyme scheme.
April 14th, 2018 12:28
Christina8 said:
It\'s amazing what, as an artist, you see and can be transferred to almost any medium. Also, great write! I like the rhyme scheme.
April 14th, 2018 12:28
AN ARTISTS EYE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the sketch and the poem!
The following words sum up your message very well...
“...with beauty that is rearely seen
save through an artist’s eye.”
Awesomely done!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 09:50
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the sketch and the poem!
The following words sum up your message very well...
“...with beauty that is rearely seen
save through an artist’s eye.”
Awesomely done!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 09:50
AN ARTISTS EYE
Daveyboyz said:
Good job Michael, both in the poetry and the image.
April 14th, 2018 08:45
Daveyboyz said:
Good job Michael, both in the poetry and the image.
April 14th, 2018 08:45
AN ARTISTS EYE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael ~ It\'s surprising what the sub-conscious can do with a few lines ~ Ah yea I remember her well (2003 - 4 !). Love the rhyme pattern in the Poem abba cddc etc ! I\'m listening to Jazz on Radio 3 ( waiting for the National ~ please check my Poem) and your poem had a Jazz Rhythm ! I have the Mind of an Artist but (as yet) not quite the hand. Just got my Spring Set of Foot & Mouth Paintings ~ perhaps I might do better in either of those modes of painting ! Angela is going on a Year Exchange to New Zealand in May so I will have more time to try ACRYLICS ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
April 14th, 2018 08:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael ~ It\'s surprising what the sub-conscious can do with a few lines ~ Ah yea I remember her well (2003 - 4 !). Love the rhyme pattern in the Poem abba cddc etc ! I\'m listening to Jazz on Radio 3 ( waiting for the National ~ please check my Poem) and your poem had a Jazz Rhythm ! I have the Mind of an Artist but (as yet) not quite the hand. Just got my Spring Set of Foot & Mouth Paintings ~ perhaps I might do better in either of those modes of painting ! Angela is going on a Year Exchange to New Zealand in May so I will have more time to try ACRYLICS ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
April 14th, 2018 08:27
AN ARTISTS EYE
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
You certainly see life in an interesting way through an artist\"s eye.
Lovely poem and I like your sketch it reminds me of Picasso\'s blue woman painting.
Don\'t forget the big Frida Kanlo exhibition on at the V& A from June.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:08
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
You certainly see life in an interesting way through an artist\"s eye.
Lovely poem and I like your sketch it reminds me of Picasso\'s blue woman painting.
Don\'t forget the big Frida Kanlo exhibition on at the V& A from June.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:08
AN ARTISTS EYE
Fay Slimm. said:
A few little lines and the image of beauty is there in your wonderful sketch Michael - - the verse too gives its reminder of what a true artist discerns - -- super read.
April 14th, 2018 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A few little lines and the image of beauty is there in your wonderful sketch Michael - - the verse too gives its reminder of what a true artist discerns - -- super read.
April 14th, 2018 02:08
AN ARTISTS EYE
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing what beauty can be seen when transferred from the artists eye to the canvas.
April 14th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing what beauty can be seen when transferred from the artists eye to the canvas.
April 14th, 2018 01:22
UNWINESQUE
lasergraph said:
Very hot and dry where I am, thanks for giving me a taste of the other side.
April 13th, 2018 15:38
lasergraph said:
Very hot and dry where I am, thanks for giving me a taste of the other side.
April 13th, 2018 15:38
UNWINESQUE
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow you certainly got the feel of his hilarious wording Michael - - if I tried to imitate that I would never be able to return to the norm - great piece of humour and so cleverly wrought.
April 13th, 2018 14:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow you certainly got the feel of his hilarious wording Michael - - if I tried to imitate that I would never be able to return to the norm - great piece of humour and so cleverly wrought.
April 13th, 2018 14:57
UNWINESQUE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ELVIS PRESLEY ~ Swivel - Hippy rhythmic contrapole of the wobblemode of the hipper ! Sideways and with the head a tilty and doggy expression in the eyebold conveyed to the femailode of the species ! This was coupled with a trilty - how on the strims syncypole with his voicemode which reduced teenimodes to hysterium ~ AMEN
There was only one Stanley Unwin (d. 2002) and at parties my Dad used to embarrass us my doing his speeches and party pieces in UNWINESE !
Thanks for sharing and reviving memories of the
last Century ! A fine tribute to STANLEY
Yours ~ BRIAN Love the DOPPLEGANGER carving !
April 13th, 2018 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ELVIS PRESLEY ~ Swivel - Hippy rhythmic contrapole of the wobblemode of the hipper ! Sideways and with the head a tilty and doggy expression in the eyebold conveyed to the femailode of the species ! This was coupled with a trilty - how on the strims syncypole with his voicemode which reduced teenimodes to hysterium ~ AMEN
There was only one Stanley Unwin (d. 2002) and at parties my Dad used to embarrass us my doing his speeches and party pieces in UNWINESE !
Thanks for sharing and reviving memories of the
last Century ! A fine tribute to STANLEY
Yours ~ BRIAN Love the DOPPLEGANGER carving !
April 13th, 2018 08:19
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