Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
Goldfinch60 said:
Never come across brevettes but it is an interesting way to write and like those you have written can be very powerful in their brevity.
The flowers look wonderful.
April 1st, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Never come across brevettes but it is an interesting way to write and like those you have written can be very powerful in their brevity.
The flowers look wonderful.
April 1st, 2018 00:45
A BEVY OF BREVETTES
Michael Edwards said:
Another photo taken during the last week of hellebores - I have a whole collection of these beautiful plants from near black through maroon, red , pink, yellow, bi-coloured through to white - I just love them.
April 1st, 2018 00:18
Michael Edwards said:
Another photo taken during the last week of hellebores - I have a whole collection of these beautiful plants from near black through maroon, red , pink, yellow, bi-coloured through to white - I just love them.
April 1st, 2018 00:18
Mrs BROWN
Laura🌻 said:
Loved it, Michael!
You have Mrs. Brown and
we have Blanca...once she
gets my attention, she
never stops!
By the way, she’s the one
responsible for all the stray
cats in my mom’s neighborhood!
I enjoyed the read and the
beautiful daffodils!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 06:26
Laura🌻 said:
Loved it, Michael!
You have Mrs. Brown and
we have Blanca...once she
gets my attention, she
never stops!
By the way, she’s the one
responsible for all the stray
cats in my mom’s neighborhood!
I enjoyed the read and the
beautiful daffodils!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 06:26
Mrs BROWN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"She\'s Mrs Brown\"
Yes indeed MIKE they are everywhere !
Even on the Telly \"Mrs Brown\'s Boys\"
But I am sure you never watch it !
ANGELA loves it as so many of her
private massage & physio clients
Are just like Mrs Brown & Granddad !
Love the EL GRECO shape of the poem
Love the DAFFS ! Yours as ever BRIAN !
March 31st, 2018 05:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"She\'s Mrs Brown\"
Yes indeed MIKE they are everywhere !
Even on the Telly \"Mrs Brown\'s Boys\"
But I am sure you never watch it !
ANGELA loves it as so many of her
private massage & physio clients
Are just like Mrs Brown & Granddad !
Love the EL GRECO shape of the poem
Love the DAFFS ! Yours as ever BRIAN !
March 31st, 2018 05:02
Mrs BROWN
Goldfinch60 said:
The Mrs Browns of this world are always out there, they mean no harm but cannot stop talking.
Good fun write Michael.
March 31st, 2018 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
The Mrs Browns of this world are always out there, they mean no harm but cannot stop talking.
Good fun write Michael.
March 31st, 2018 00:09
MOUNTAIN RANGES
Christina8 said:
A beautiful tanka! And might I add you are so lucky to have a garden that blooms with flowers!! Still too cold in the U.S. for that. Thanks for the uplifting picture and Tanka!
March 30th, 2018 19:46
Christina8 said:
A beautiful tanka! And might I add you are so lucky to have a garden that blooms with flowers!! Still too cold in the U.S. for that. Thanks for the uplifting picture and Tanka!
March 30th, 2018 19:46
MOUNTAIN RANGES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ love PRIMULAS ~ colour & contour ! Love TANKAS (57577) Haiku & Senryu with attitude ! I have been doing talks on John Denver for Seniors (helps them to recall & remember) and it reminded me of ROCKY MOUNTAIN HIGH and my beloved Colorado in the Fall ! Yours BRIAN
March 30th, 2018 04:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ love PRIMULAS ~ colour & contour ! Love TANKAS (57577) Haiku & Senryu with attitude ! I have been doing talks on John Denver for Seniors (helps them to recall & remember) and it reminded me of ROCKY MOUNTAIN HIGH and my beloved Colorado in the Fall ! Yours BRIAN
March 30th, 2018 04:33
MOUNTAIN RANGES
orchidee said:
Good shorty and pic Michael. Are the flowers short too - or plenty of them?!
March 30th, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
Good shorty and pic Michael. Are the flowers short too - or plenty of them?!
March 30th, 2018 01:50
MOUNTAIN RANGES
Laura🌻 said:
A fine shorty, Michael!
Love the colors of those primulas. Your garden must be beautiful with all the different colors...
like a symphony of music...
except yours is a symphony of flowers! Awesome!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 00:49
Laura🌻 said:
A fine shorty, Michael!
Love the colors of those primulas. Your garden must be beautiful with all the different colors...
like a symphony of music...
except yours is a symphony of flowers! Awesome!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 00:49
MOUNTAIN RANGES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
March 30th, 2018 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
March 30th, 2018 00:19
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
It sounds like a great afternoon!
I enjoyed your great poem!
The only one I’ve met up close and personal of the Beatles is Sir Paul at Madison Square Garden thanks to a mutual friend of ours! I do enjoy their music!
Beautiful daffodils! I like the color contrast!
~Laura
March 29th, 2018 08:57
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
It sounds like a great afternoon!
I enjoyed your great poem!
The only one I’ve met up close and personal of the Beatles is Sir Paul at Madison Square Garden thanks to a mutual friend of ours! I do enjoy their music!
Beautiful daffodils! I like the color contrast!
~Laura
March 29th, 2018 08:57
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the DAFFS ~ I\'m a THIRD Welsh (and 1/3 Scottish 1/3 Irish and 1/3 English !) The last Beatles Tribute Band I heard were all White Haired or BALD ~ But then Sir Paul is 75 and John & George are both partaking of Glory ! Great poem based on an actual event ! Pleases check \"Annie\'s Song for Angela ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2018 03:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the DAFFS ~ I\'m a THIRD Welsh (and 1/3 Scottish 1/3 Irish and 1/3 English !) The last Beatles Tribute Band I heard were all White Haired or BALD ~ But then Sir Paul is 75 and John & George are both partaking of Glory ! Great poem based on an actual event ! Pleases check \"Annie\'s Song for Angela ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2018 03:38
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
orchidee said:
Oohh, grey and white hair makes one look distinguished I think. I\'m a little grey around the gills myself! Did they rave all night?! Or take Horlicks or cocoa and be in bed by 9pm?
March 29th, 2018 02:00
orchidee said:
Oohh, grey and white hair makes one look distinguished I think. I\'m a little grey around the gills myself! Did they rave all night?! Or take Horlicks or cocoa and be in bed by 9pm?
March 29th, 2018 02:00
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, at least they got to the gig.
March 29th, 2018 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, at least they got to the gig.
March 29th, 2018 01:30
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Great poem.
Alas all creatures great and small are not infallible yes all of this down to the owners.
Keep writing
FineB
March 28th, 2018 13:13
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Great poem.
Alas all creatures great and small are not infallible yes all of this down to the owners.
Keep writing
FineB
March 28th, 2018 13:13
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
UNPOOPULAR MICHAEL ~ That is too kind a word ! If you were not one of my best Friends on MPS (I have a great respect for you !) I would riposte with a scourge on all DOGS ~ but I won\'t ! I can\'t have a CAT in a FLAT or even a CAT in a HAT. My Parents still have Cats and I visit often just to discuss Relativity etc now that Stephen Hawking has been called Home to Glory ! Dogs can be Domesticated (as you know) and Dogs in our extended Family are well behaved ~ and know their place ! Cats on the other hand are Mystical and Majestic and consider themselves to be well above Humans in the pecking order. They are too aloof and elegant to be domesticated and as for being constrained on a lead ~ it would unleash worldwide CATACLYSM ! They don\'t need us to feed Pus and the large colonies of Feral Cats in Athens and other Cities are a good example ! BUT they are very CrAfTy and in return for regular GOURMET WHISKERS etc they well allow you a stroke and will purrrrrrrrrr (not an aggressive BAAAAAARK) and will rub your leg in return ! Cats just do \"what comes naturally\" ~ just like Teenagers ! and we should LOVE THEM (Cats & Teens) for it ! I case my rest Yours BRIAN I am very tolerant today because (as you know) it is my DAY of ENGAGEMENT ~ Your Best friend on MPS ~ BRIAN ~ ANGELA sends her Love ~ her parents are CANINOPHILES ~ but I still love her even though I know she will want a DOG when we have Kids or (GOD forbid !) earlier !
March 28th, 2018 05:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
UNPOOPULAR MICHAEL ~ That is too kind a word ! If you were not one of my best Friends on MPS (I have a great respect for you !) I would riposte with a scourge on all DOGS ~ but I won\'t ! I can\'t have a CAT in a FLAT or even a CAT in a HAT. My Parents still have Cats and I visit often just to discuss Relativity etc now that Stephen Hawking has been called Home to Glory ! Dogs can be Domesticated (as you know) and Dogs in our extended Family are well behaved ~ and know their place ! Cats on the other hand are Mystical and Majestic and consider themselves to be well above Humans in the pecking order. They are too aloof and elegant to be domesticated and as for being constrained on a lead ~ it would unleash worldwide CATACLYSM ! They don\'t need us to feed Pus and the large colonies of Feral Cats in Athens and other Cities are a good example ! BUT they are very CrAfTy and in return for regular GOURMET WHISKERS etc they well allow you a stroke and will purrrrrrrrrr (not an aggressive BAAAAAARK) and will rub your leg in return ! Cats just do \"what comes naturally\" ~ just like Teenagers ! and we should LOVE THEM (Cats & Teens) for it ! I case my rest Yours BRIAN I am very tolerant today because (as you know) it is my DAY of ENGAGEMENT ~ Your Best friend on MPS ~ BRIAN ~ ANGELA sends her Love ~ her parents are CANINOPHILES ~ but I still love her even though I know she will want a DOG when we have Kids or (GOD forbid !) earlier !
March 28th, 2018 05:42
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
orchidee said:
I always thought cats clean up after themselves. I\'ve seen them digging holes to do their business, then covering it up again. Then they wash themselves. They can be independent though. You couldn\'t play \'fetch\' with Tiddles as you can play it with Fido!
March 28th, 2018 01:55
orchidee said:
I always thought cats clean up after themselves. I\'ve seen them digging holes to do their business, then covering it up again. Then they wash themselves. They can be independent though. You couldn\'t play \'fetch\' with Tiddles as you can play it with Fido!
March 28th, 2018 01:55
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Michael, you get my vote. As a bird watcher for over sixty years I find that cats are arrogant monsters.
The statistics show that for every bird taken for food by a raptor four hundred get taken by cats to paly with!
March 28th, 2018 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Michael, you get my vote. As a bird watcher for over sixty years I find that cats are arrogant monsters.
The statistics show that for every bird taken for food by a raptor four hundred get taken by cats to paly with!
March 28th, 2018 01:02
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
orchidee said:
She got there yet - in that boat - wherever she\'s going?!
March 27th, 2018 14:34
orchidee said:
She got there yet - in that boat - wherever she\'s going?!
March 27th, 2018 14:34
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Lorna said:
No cursor jumping so the picture was perfect - my your gardens are so far advanced from ours at this time of year..... loved the positive of this poem! She\'s chooses happiness!
March 27th, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
No cursor jumping so the picture was perfect - my your gardens are so far advanced from ours at this time of year..... loved the positive of this poem! She\'s chooses happiness!
March 27th, 2018 07:05
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ Sound like all the Ladies ~ I have ever known ! Knocked down ~ BUT ~ never knocked out ! Love PRIMROSES ~ very PRIM & very ROSY ! Sorry you\'ve dropped the HEADER ~ write to JULIAN ! I love them and mine (PETS) is very apposite today ! Love the tenor of you ode ! Yours BRIAN
March 27th, 2018 04:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ Sound like all the Ladies ~ I have ever known ! Knocked down ~ BUT ~ never knocked out ! Love PRIMROSES ~ very PRIM & very ROSY ! Sorry you\'ve dropped the HEADER ~ write to JULIAN ! I love them and mine (PETS) is very apposite today ! Love the tenor of you ode ! Yours BRIAN
March 27th, 2018 04:18
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem, Michael! So vivid!
As vivid as the beautiful primroses from your garden (I assume)!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 04:15
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem, Michael! So vivid!
As vivid as the beautiful primroses from your garden (I assume)!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 04:15
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman\'s answer to adversity so aptly described in this super write Michael.
March 27th, 2018 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman\'s answer to adversity so aptly described in this super write Michael.
March 27th, 2018 04:05
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, you old romantic you.
March 27th, 2018 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, you old romantic you.
March 27th, 2018 02:09
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Hope her boat had no holes in it? Did she get to the other shore, wherever she was going?!
March 27th, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Hope her boat had no holes in it? Did she get to the other shore, wherever she was going?!
March 27th, 2018 01:50
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