Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
KISS ME HARDY
myself and me said:
Love the craft, turned out perfect. Enjoy the light writing.
February 17th, 2018 12:00
myself and me said:
Love the craft, turned out perfect. Enjoy the light writing.
February 17th, 2018 12:00
KISS ME HARDY
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
What a refreshing and witty look at Lord Nelson\'s last moments.
Super write.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:15
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
What a refreshing and witty look at Lord Nelson\'s last moments.
Super write.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:15
KISS ME HARDY
orchidee said:
Slap and tickle? Or not going that far? Was Hardy in a mood?! heehee. Good write M.
February 17th, 2018 02:51
orchidee said:
Slap and tickle? Or not going that far? Was Hardy in a mood?! heehee. Good write M.
February 17th, 2018 02:51
KISS ME HARDY
Goldfinch60 said:
In that battle where he fell
He could not get up and yell
So the words were then misheard
Kismet Hardy was the word.
Good fun write Michael. There is a theory that Nelson did in fact say \"Kismet Hardy\".
February 17th, 2018 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
In that battle where he fell
He could not get up and yell
So the words were then misheard
Kismet Hardy was the word.
Good fun write Michael. There is a theory that Nelson did in fact say \"Kismet Hardy\".
February 17th, 2018 01:50
IN DENIAL
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I could not have said it better myself! Seems to me the USA are regressing back to the days of the wild west. Guns should be made illegal. Period.
February 16th, 2018 16:03
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I could not have said it better myself! Seems to me the USA are regressing back to the days of the wild west. Guns should be made illegal. Period.
February 16th, 2018 16:03
IN DENIAL
dusk arising said:
A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do so many lives have to be lost before the inevitable talks begin.
On a lighter side, no point in banning guns - its the ammunition which kills.
February 16th, 2018 08:57
dusk arising said:
A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do so many lives have to be lost before the inevitable talks begin.
On a lighter side, no point in banning guns - its the ammunition which kills.
February 16th, 2018 08:57
IN DENIAL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TRUMP is still on the THRONE
And he will not dent HIS OWN
No extra BOBBY ~ but a big GUN LOBBY
The result in FLORIDA shown !
Thanks for caring & sharing MIKE
There are 326 Million Americans
There are 326 Million Guns
Draw your own conclusions !
Yours Peacefully ~ BRIAN
February 16th, 2018 05:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TRUMP is still on the THRONE
And he will not dent HIS OWN
No extra BOBBY ~ but a big GUN LOBBY
The result in FLORIDA shown !
Thanks for caring & sharing MIKE
There are 326 Million Americans
There are 326 Million Guns
Draw your own conclusions !
Yours Peacefully ~ BRIAN
February 16th, 2018 05:20
IN DENIAL
Lorna said:
Michael - my town had an infamous school shooting (Newtown) but it made no difference to the NRA. There is a violent streak in this country (US) that is sick beyond redemption. I truly believe if we had a coliseum, they\'d offer us killing games for a month to celebrate.
February 16th, 2018 04:48
Lorna said:
Michael - my town had an infamous school shooting (Newtown) but it made no difference to the NRA. There is a violent streak in this country (US) that is sick beyond redemption. I truly believe if we had a coliseum, they\'d offer us killing games for a month to celebrate.
February 16th, 2018 04:48
IN DENIAL
Fay Slimm. said:
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. - - Great first read of my morning.
February 16th, 2018 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. - - Great first read of my morning.
February 16th, 2018 04:01
IN DENIAL
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, but some just do not understand or want to understand.
February 16th, 2018 03:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, but some just do not understand or want to understand.
February 16th, 2018 03:40
IN DENIAL
orchidee said:
A great and wise write Michael. Like the wooden fish in the pic too!
February 16th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
A great and wise write Michael. Like the wooden fish in the pic too!
February 16th, 2018 02:45
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
dusk arising said:
This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i had lived, peering dreamily over a cold, so cold landscape of the past. No bitterness, no regret, an acceptance of how life has changed me, and moved on. A little dark, a little melancholy. Quite beautiful. Into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 19:20
dusk arising said:
This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i had lived, peering dreamily over a cold, so cold landscape of the past. No bitterness, no regret, an acceptance of how life has changed me, and moved on. A little dark, a little melancholy. Quite beautiful. Into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 19:20
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Michael, this poem is \'a tad sad\' (great expression!), but exciting as well to think that one day we (our souls) will be able to visit that \'domain we once held\'! Beautiful language as usual!
February 15th, 2018 16:56
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Michael, this poem is \'a tad sad\' (great expression!), but exciting as well to think that one day we (our souls) will be able to visit that \'domain we once held\'! Beautiful language as usual!
February 15th, 2018 16:56
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This write is brilliant
in its entirety!
After reading it a few
times, the last stanza
flooded my thinking!
It resonates more than
it should...especially
with the elderly and
those who give up hope!
I see it and hear it when
I visit the nursing homes
and the rehab centers!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 10:33
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This write is brilliant
in its entirety!
After reading it a few
times, the last stanza
flooded my thinking!
It resonates more than
it should...especially
with the elderly and
those who give up hope!
I see it and hear it when
I visit the nursing homes
and the rehab centers!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 10:33
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ! Whether you\'re a MAN or FISH (love all the sculptures !) as one gets over life ebbs and the Glory diminishes and the river of time flows relentlessly. At 35 I\'m still in my PRIME and there is the question of marrying (ANGELA ?) and raising a Family. As far as work is concerned I am still on he WAY UP ! Head of Science ~ VP and then perhaps PRINCIPAL ! Without ambition we stagnate ! But having said that one also sees how one\'s DOMAIN can disappear ~ I\'ve seen it happen and it is NOT NICE ~ A Friend of mine (45) recently suicided off a Motorway Bridge because his WORK DOMAIN disappeared ~ Leaving a grieving WIDOW & three distraught Children ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2018 08:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ! Whether you\'re a MAN or FISH (love all the sculptures !) as one gets over life ebbs and the Glory diminishes and the river of time flows relentlessly. At 35 I\'m still in my PRIME and there is the question of marrying (ANGELA ?) and raising a Family. As far as work is concerned I am still on he WAY UP ! Head of Science ~ VP and then perhaps PRINCIPAL ! Without ambition we stagnate ! But having said that one also sees how one\'s DOMAIN can disappear ~ I\'ve seen it happen and it is NOT NICE ~ A Friend of mine (45) recently suicided off a Motorway Bridge because his WORK DOMAIN disappeared ~ Leaving a grieving WIDOW & three distraught Children ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2018 08:38
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Heather T said:
Sir, this is stunning. I read through twice and then aloud to feel the affecting verses in my mouth. This is a moody beauty. Bravo.
February 15th, 2018 08:30
Heather T said:
Sir, this is stunning. I read through twice and then aloud to feel the affecting verses in my mouth. This is a moody beauty. Bravo.
February 15th, 2018 08:30
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey into failing minds. Another gem from your talented quill which goes straight into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey into failing minds. Another gem from your talented quill which goes straight into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 05:51
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
orchidee said:
Hold on *gets out dictionary for purlieus*. Good write Michael.
February 15th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
Hold on *gets out dictionary for purlieus*. Good write Michael.
February 15th, 2018 02:44
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with words.
February 15th, 2018 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with words.
February 15th, 2018 02:25
LOVE IS >>>
myself and me said:
Love is simple, easy and straight as this yet no so simple, easy and straight to have.
February 14th, 2018 20:52
myself and me said:
Love is simple, easy and straight as this yet no so simple, easy and straight to have.
February 14th, 2018 20:52
LOVE IS >>>
FredPeyer said:
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and sorrows, watching that sunset together, getting wet in the rain together, and.....letting the other one drive the car without any backseat driver comments!!!
February 14th, 2018 14:11
FredPeyer said:
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and sorrows, watching that sunset together, getting wet in the rain together, and.....letting the other one drive the car without any backseat driver comments!!!
February 14th, 2018 14:11
ME AND MY FAMILY
FredPeyer said:
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting and writing. And judging from how you paint and write, I think you have the potential to be an incredible dancer!
Ancestry: My family tree goes way back to before there were humans on this earth, to my ancestors on that far away planet, the generations born in the ship all the way to arrival on earth. There is some indication, not entirely clear though, that some of your ancestors arrived on the same space ship.
February 14th, 2018 14:00
FredPeyer said:
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting and writing. And judging from how you paint and write, I think you have the potential to be an incredible dancer!
Ancestry: My family tree goes way back to before there were humans on this earth, to my ancestors on that far away planet, the generations born in the ship all the way to arrival on earth. There is some indication, not entirely clear though, that some of your ancestors arrived on the same space ship.
February 14th, 2018 14:00
ME AND MY FAMILY
malubotelho said:
Humorous and smart at the same time. Always a joy to read you Michael
February 14th, 2018 13:08
malubotelho said:
Humorous and smart at the same time. Always a joy to read you Michael
February 14th, 2018 13:08
ME AND MY FAMILY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL \"The eye of the Fish is awesome !\" I\'m learning lots from the \"SENIORS* on MPS ~ Adam & Eve indeed ~ in essence we are ALL descended from THEM ! \"Daddy Dancing\" is an oft debated subject ~ but I have no critics and Angela loves to dance with me and we both love STRICTLY ~ It takes TANG to TO~O ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2018 09:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL \"The eye of the Fish is awesome !\" I\'m learning lots from the \"SENIORS* on MPS ~ Adam & Eve indeed ~ in essence we are ALL descended from THEM ! \"Daddy Dancing\" is an oft debated subject ~ but I have no critics and Angela loves to dance with me and we both love STRICTLY ~ It takes TANG to TO~O ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2018 09:14
ME AND MY FAMILY
dusk arising said:
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family can be traced back to when they first slimed and wriggled their way out of the ocean..... Bournemouth i think it was.
I really like the series of pictures you\'\'ve been using recently.
February 14th, 2018 08:35
dusk arising said:
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family can be traced back to when they first slimed and wriggled their way out of the ocean..... Bournemouth i think it was.
I really like the series of pictures you\'\'ve been using recently.
February 14th, 2018 08:35
ME AND MY FAMILY
Christina8 said:
Very good Michael--I like the one about dancing very much!
February 14th, 2018 07:25
Christina8 said:
Very good Michael--I like the one about dancing very much!
February 14th, 2018 07:25
ME AND MY FAMILY
Michael Edwards said:
Got it Orchi:
Biological evolutionists keep getting it wrong
When they say we’ve evolved from primates
Now I’ve been telling them all along
( and the argument never abates)
that in fact the apes evolved from us
and the truth was ever thus!
February 14th, 2018 03:01
Michael Edwards said:
Got it Orchi:
Biological evolutionists keep getting it wrong
When they say we’ve evolved from primates
Now I’ve been telling them all along
( and the argument never abates)
that in fact the apes evolved from us
and the truth was ever thus!
February 14th, 2018 03:01
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