Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
rrodriguez said:
This is awesome and very well written Michael... bravo!
February 28th, 2018 20:52
rrodriguez said:
This is awesome and very well written Michael... bravo!
February 28th, 2018 20:52
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
Christina8 said:
Excellent poetic form, must have been hard to create with meaning within the confines of the poem. Great job!
February 28th, 2018 18:18
Christina8 said:
Excellent poetic form, must have been hard to create with meaning within the confines of the poem. Great job!
February 28th, 2018 18:18
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING MICHAEL ~ Thanks for your explanation DOUBLE MIRROR TERACTYS ~ It looks ~ reads & sounds excellent ~A Compleat Poem ! LOVE THE snowless Painting ~ very rural ! Yours in awe BRIAN !
February 28th, 2018 06:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING MICHAEL ~ Thanks for your explanation DOUBLE MIRROR TERACTYS ~ It looks ~ reads & sounds excellent ~A Compleat Poem ! LOVE THE snowless Painting ~ very rural ! Yours in awe BRIAN !
February 28th, 2018 06:17
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
Lorna said:
I absolutely applaud your discipline Michael! Both in poetry and your beautiful beautiful paintings! This was fun to read and to follow the \"pattern\" - very clever!
February 28th, 2018 04:49
Lorna said:
I absolutely applaud your discipline Michael! Both in poetry and your beautiful beautiful paintings! This was fun to read and to follow the \"pattern\" - very clever!
February 28th, 2018 04:49
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
orchidee said:
Did this take hours to write? I tend not to be long in writing, but may be long in waffling on in some long poems!
February 28th, 2018 02:47
orchidee said:
Did this take hours to write? I tend not to be long in writing, but may be long in waffling on in some long poems!
February 28th, 2018 02:47
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I doubt I could do a hymn-poem like this. None of that metre, as far as I know.
I do \'easier\' 8.6.8.6. often - called a Common Metre - fits to hundreds of hymns, even loads that I don\'t know the tunes for!
February 28th, 2018 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I doubt I could do a hymn-poem like this. None of that metre, as far as I know.
I do \'easier\' 8.6.8.6. often - called a Common Metre - fits to hundreds of hymns, even loads that I don\'t know the tunes for!
February 28th, 2018 02:46
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
Jamie said:
I always enjoy your paintings, both the canvas and the page.
February 28th, 2018 02:04
Jamie said:
I always enjoy your paintings, both the canvas and the page.
February 28th, 2018 02:04
WOULD SHE SURVIVE ?
Jamie said:
This is intricate, this was not an easy thing to do, and with meaning, bravo, maestro, bravo!
February 28th, 2018 01:21
Jamie said:
This is intricate, this was not an easy thing to do, and with meaning, bravo, maestro, bravo!
February 28th, 2018 01:21
CULTURE
Christina8 said:
Precious indeed! Great artwork to go with the poem!
February 27th, 2018 13:24
Christina8 said:
Precious indeed! Great artwork to go with the poem!
February 27th, 2018 13:24
CULTURE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Culture is an introduction to the life....good writing!
February 27th, 2018 09:58
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Culture is an introduction to the life....good writing!
February 27th, 2018 09:58
CULTURE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Two fine little gems...poem and painting!
Your subject matter is a constant discussion in our household! Trying to keep our culture alive as much as we can!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 05:15
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Two fine little gems...poem and painting!
Your subject matter is a constant discussion in our household! Trying to keep our culture alive as much as we can!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 05:15
CULTURE
Lorna said:
Oh yes - wouldn\'t the world be a flat place without all the different cultures. Only thing I can say for the mish-mash though is that I see kids growing up together and not thinking twice about who is what color or whatever - and perhaps that is a good thing for the future. Will they kill each other less perhaps?
February 27th, 2018 05:06
Lorna said:
Oh yes - wouldn\'t the world be a flat place without all the different cultures. Only thing I can say for the mish-mash though is that I see kids growing up together and not thinking twice about who is what color or whatever - and perhaps that is a good thing for the future. Will they kill each other less perhaps?
February 27th, 2018 05:06
CULTURE
dusk arising said:
Also applies to politics and society. The country i grew up in where we played games which had roots hundreds of years old and the nation followed many historic traditions (look whats happened to sundays) has changed so very much. The boundaries, whatever, you perceive them to be, have been eroded.
Are you posting a \'wake up UK\' notice here?
February 27th, 2018 03:21
dusk arising said:
Also applies to politics and society. The country i grew up in where we played games which had roots hundreds of years old and the nation followed many historic traditions (look whats happened to sundays) has changed so very much. The boundaries, whatever, you perceive them to be, have been eroded.
Are you posting a \'wake up UK\' notice here?
February 27th, 2018 03:21
CULTURE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Oohh, I know, me roots must be kept alive when I dye me hair green! Now come on Orchi, you\'ve missed the point of this poem. Probably lost the plot again! lol.
February 27th, 2018 02:56
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Oohh, I know, me roots must be kept alive when I dye me hair green! Now come on Orchi, you\'ve missed the point of this poem. Probably lost the plot again! lol.
February 27th, 2018 02:56
CULTURE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING VAN GOGH ~ Love the VISUAL \"SURVIVAL\" We all need roots TAP ROOTS for nourishment and stability and LATERAL ROOTS to expand our Boundaries ~ Thanks for reminding ~ BRIAN
February 27th, 2018 02:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING VAN GOGH ~ Love the VISUAL \"SURVIVAL\" We all need roots TAP ROOTS for nourishment and stability and LATERAL ROOTS to expand our Boundaries ~ Thanks for reminding ~ BRIAN
February 27th, 2018 02:26
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I know only ..this is a great poem!
February 26th, 2018 19:39
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I know only ..this is a great poem!
February 26th, 2018 19:39
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Fay Slimm. said:
The strength within this Lady oozes from your tribute to dignity Michael - so much to aim for when that time arrives for us all.
February 26th, 2018 12:54
Fay Slimm. said:
The strength within this Lady oozes from your tribute to dignity Michael - so much to aim for when that time arrives for us all.
February 26th, 2018 12:54
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Christina8 said:
Beautiful painting and I just loved \"woman of dignity\" you did such a great job describing in your poem.
February 26th, 2018 09:37
Christina8 said:
Beautiful painting and I just loved \"woman of dignity\" you did such a great job describing in your poem.
February 26th, 2018 09:37
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Lauraš» said:
A great write with a beautiful painting, Michael!
As I was reading it, it reminded me of Monica Bellucci in the film āMalenaā when she walked through town with her head held up high! Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 26th, 2018 09:19
Lauraš» said:
A great write with a beautiful painting, Michael!
As I was reading it, it reminded me of Monica Bellucci in the film āMalenaā when she walked through town with her head held up high! Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 26th, 2018 09:19
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
myself and me said:
The color in the paint is so lovely and the lady in the poem is just right.
February 26th, 2018 08:44
myself and me said:
The color in the paint is so lovely and the lady in the poem is just right.
February 26th, 2018 08:44
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
orchidee said:
It\'s the Co-op for me - no toffee-noses there!
February 26th, 2018 06:55
orchidee said:
It\'s the Co-op for me - no toffee-noses there!
February 26th, 2018 06:55
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Lorna said:
You\'ve got total command over this poem Michael! She would have been the example my mother held up to show me how to be - and I could never manage........ oh well. Always love your paintings.......
February 26th, 2018 05:12
Lorna said:
You\'ve got total command over this poem Michael! She would have been the example my mother held up to show me how to be - and I could never manage........ oh well. Always love your paintings.......
February 26th, 2018 05:12
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
dusk arising said:
That\'s a lady that is. You can spot \'em... it\'s the way they eat cake.
February 26th, 2018 04:21
dusk arising said:
That\'s a lady that is. You can spot \'em... it\'s the way they eat cake.
February 26th, 2018 04:21
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Michael. But she does sound a little bit stuck up. Or maybe that is just her British side? :-)
February 26th, 2018 03:04
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Michael. But she does sound a little bit stuck up. Or maybe that is just her British side? :-)
February 26th, 2018 03:04
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
orchidee said:
A dignified write and pic there Michael. Would she make me swoon? Or is she too dignified for that?! lol.
February 26th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
A dignified write and pic there Michael. Would she make me swoon? Or is she too dignified for that?! lol.
February 26th, 2018 02:43
A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Goldfinch60 said:
A woman of dignity has surely dignified the words written.
February 26th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
A woman of dignity has surely dignified the words written.
February 26th, 2018 02:05
FOG
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
The title reminded me of Carl Sandburgās poem, āFogā. A required read in school!
Remembering his while reading yours, I see similarities and differences! Both excellent writes! Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 16:11
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
The title reminded me of Carl Sandburgās poem, āFogā. A required read in school!
Remembering his while reading yours, I see similarities and differences! Both excellent writes! Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 16:11
FOG
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ As you know the real pea soup fogs of the 19th (Orchi will remember those !) and the 20th C have largely been abated ! What I love are the MISTS you get in Snowdonia ~ Scotland (Scottish Mist !) and the Lake District ~ if you are on the Hills you have to be guided by the ubiquitous CAIRNS ! It is only when you are in a FOG or a MIST that you fully appreciate BROTHER SUN ! Love the wording of the poem very KEATSIAN ! Yours BRIAN
February 25th, 2018 05:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ As you know the real pea soup fogs of the 19th (Orchi will remember those !) and the 20th C have largely been abated ! What I love are the MISTS you get in Snowdonia ~ Scotland (Scottish Mist !) and the Lake District ~ if you are on the Hills you have to be guided by the ubiquitous CAIRNS ! It is only when you are in a FOG or a MIST that you fully appreciate BROTHER SUN ! Love the wording of the poem very KEATSIAN ! Yours BRIAN
February 25th, 2018 05:03
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