Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
KISS ME HARDY
FredPeyer said:
Judging from this shorty, maybe you should write a whole history book! It would definitely get more kids to love history!
February 18th, 2018 13:41
FredPeyer said:
Judging from this shorty, maybe you should write a whole history book! It would definitely get more kids to love history!
February 18th, 2018 13:41
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I enjoyed the read and
visual very much!
The third one is my
favorite! Thatās the one
that truly speaks to me!
A great abstract painting
to accentuate your writing!
Thank you for the
share!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 10:29
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I enjoyed the read and
visual very much!
The third one is my
favorite! Thatās the one
that truly speaks to me!
A great abstract painting
to accentuate your writing!
Thank you for the
share!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 10:29
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the abstract of the FLAMENCO DANCER ~ Love Andalusia ! One liners are always pithy ~ My fave is the last one ~ Strangers on darkened Streets are never Friends ~ I have found this to be TRUE. I am too fit to be mugged but some have tried and some have (almost) died ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion ~ B !
February 18th, 2018 04:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the abstract of the FLAMENCO DANCER ~ Love Andalusia ! One liners are always pithy ~ My fave is the last one ~ Strangers on darkened Streets are never Friends ~ I have found this to be TRUE. I am too fit to be mugged but some have tried and some have (almost) died ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion ~ B !
February 18th, 2018 04:25
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
orchidee said:
A fine write for me to read on my 21st (?) birthday today Michael!
February 18th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write for me to read on my 21st (?) birthday today Michael!
February 18th, 2018 03:06
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
Goldfinch60 said:
Another one of your wonderful abstracts. Thank you.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Another one of your wonderful abstracts. Thank you.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some good ones there Michael. I like them all.
The first one could be reversed by changing \'in\' to \'on\'.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some good ones there Michael. I like them all.
The first one could be reversed by changing \'in\' to \'on\'.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
KISS ME HARDY
myself and me said:
Love the craft, turned out perfect. Enjoy the light writing.
February 17th, 2018 12:00
myself and me said:
Love the craft, turned out perfect. Enjoy the light writing.
February 17th, 2018 12:00
KISS ME HARDY
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
What a refreshing and witty look at Lord Nelson\'s last moments.
Super write.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:15
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
What a refreshing and witty look at Lord Nelson\'s last moments.
Super write.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:15
KISS ME HARDY
orchidee said:
Slap and tickle? Or not going that far? Was Hardy in a mood?! heehee. Good write M.
February 17th, 2018 02:51
orchidee said:
Slap and tickle? Or not going that far? Was Hardy in a mood?! heehee. Good write M.
February 17th, 2018 02:51
KISS ME HARDY
Goldfinch60 said:
In that battle where he fell
He could not get up and yell
So the words were then misheard
Kismet Hardy was the word.
Good fun write Michael. There is a theory that Nelson did in fact say \"Kismet Hardy\".
February 17th, 2018 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
In that battle where he fell
He could not get up and yell
So the words were then misheard
Kismet Hardy was the word.
Good fun write Michael. There is a theory that Nelson did in fact say \"Kismet Hardy\".
February 17th, 2018 01:50
IN DENIAL
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I could not have said it better myself! Seems to me the USA are regressing back to the days of the wild west. Guns should be made illegal. Period.
February 16th, 2018 16:03
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I could not have said it better myself! Seems to me the USA are regressing back to the days of the wild west. Guns should be made illegal. Period.
February 16th, 2018 16:03
IN DENIAL
dusk arising said:
A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do so many lives have to be lost before the inevitable talks begin.
On a lighter side, no point in banning guns - its the ammunition which kills.
February 16th, 2018 08:57
dusk arising said:
A true gem of wisdom you have produced here sir! Begs the question why do so many lives have to be lost before the inevitable talks begin.
On a lighter side, no point in banning guns - its the ammunition which kills.
February 16th, 2018 08:57
IN DENIAL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TRUMP is still on the THRONE
And he will not dent HIS OWN
No extra BOBBY ~ but a big GUN LOBBY
The result in FLORIDA shown !
Thanks for caring & sharing MIKE
There are 326 Million Americans
There are 326 Million Guns
Draw your own conclusions !
Yours Peacefully ~ BRIAN
February 16th, 2018 05:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TRUMP is still on the THRONE
And he will not dent HIS OWN
No extra BOBBY ~ but a big GUN LOBBY
The result in FLORIDA shown !
Thanks for caring & sharing MIKE
There are 326 Million Americans
There are 326 Million Guns
Draw your own conclusions !
Yours Peacefully ~ BRIAN
February 16th, 2018 05:20
IN DENIAL
Lorna said:
Michael - my town had an infamous school shooting (Newtown) but it made no difference to the NRA. There is a violent streak in this country (US) that is sick beyond redemption. I truly believe if we had a coliseum, they\'d offer us killing games for a month to celebrate.
February 16th, 2018 04:48
Lorna said:
Michael - my town had an infamous school shooting (Newtown) but it made no difference to the NRA. There is a violent streak in this country (US) that is sick beyond redemption. I truly believe if we had a coliseum, they\'d offer us killing games for a month to celebrate.
February 16th, 2018 04:48
IN DENIAL
Fay Slimm. said:
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. - - Great first read of my morning.
February 16th, 2018 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. - - Great first read of my morning.
February 16th, 2018 04:01
IN DENIAL
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, but some just do not understand or want to understand.
February 16th, 2018 03:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, but some just do not understand or want to understand.
February 16th, 2018 03:40
IN DENIAL
orchidee said:
A great and wise write Michael. Like the wooden fish in the pic too!
February 16th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
A great and wise write Michael. Like the wooden fish in the pic too!
February 16th, 2018 02:45
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
dusk arising said:
This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i had lived, peering dreamily over a cold, so cold landscape of the past. No bitterness, no regret, an acceptance of how life has changed me, and moved on. A little dark, a little melancholy. Quite beautiful. Into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 19:20
dusk arising said:
This read like a winter seasons reflection upon places i had known, life i had lived, peering dreamily over a cold, so cold landscape of the past. No bitterness, no regret, an acceptance of how life has changed me, and moved on. A little dark, a little melancholy. Quite beautiful. Into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 19:20
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Michael, this poem is \'a tad sad\' (great expression!), but exciting as well to think that one day we (our souls) will be able to visit that \'domain we once held\'! Beautiful language as usual!
February 15th, 2018 16:56
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Michael, this poem is \'a tad sad\' (great expression!), but exciting as well to think that one day we (our souls) will be able to visit that \'domain we once held\'! Beautiful language as usual!
February 15th, 2018 16:56
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
This write is brilliant
in its entirety!
After reading it a few
times, the last stanza
flooded my thinking!
It resonates more than
it should...especially
with the elderly and
those who give up hope!
I see it and hear it when
I visit the nursing homes
and the rehab centers!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 10:33
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
This write is brilliant
in its entirety!
After reading it a few
times, the last stanza
flooded my thinking!
It resonates more than
it should...especially
with the elderly and
those who give up hope!
I see it and hear it when
I visit the nursing homes
and the rehab centers!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2018 10:33
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ! Whether you\'re a MAN or FISH (love all the sculptures !) as one gets over life ebbs and the Glory diminishes and the river of time flows relentlessly. At 35 I\'m still in my PRIME and there is the question of marrying (ANGELA ?) and raising a Family. As far as work is concerned I am still on he WAY UP ! Head of Science ~ VP and then perhaps PRINCIPAL ! Without ambition we stagnate ! But having said that one also sees how one\'s DOMAIN can disappear ~ I\'ve seen it happen and it is NOT NICE ~ A Friend of mine (45) recently suicided off a Motorway Bridge because his WORK DOMAIN disappeared ~ Leaving a grieving WIDOW & three distraught Children ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2018 08:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ! Whether you\'re a MAN or FISH (love all the sculptures !) as one gets over life ebbs and the Glory diminishes and the river of time flows relentlessly. At 35 I\'m still in my PRIME and there is the question of marrying (ANGELA ?) and raising a Family. As far as work is concerned I am still on he WAY UP ! Head of Science ~ VP and then perhaps PRINCIPAL ! Without ambition we stagnate ! But having said that one also sees how one\'s DOMAIN can disappear ~ I\'ve seen it happen and it is NOT NICE ~ A Friend of mine (45) recently suicided off a Motorway Bridge because his WORK DOMAIN disappeared ~ Leaving a grieving WIDOW & three distraught Children ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2018 08:38
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Heather T said:
Sir, this is stunning. I read through twice and then aloud to feel the affecting verses in my mouth. This is a moody beauty. Bravo.
February 15th, 2018 08:30
Heather T said:
Sir, this is stunning. I read through twice and then aloud to feel the affecting verses in my mouth. This is a moody beauty. Bravo.
February 15th, 2018 08:30
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey into failing minds. Another gem from your talented quill which goes straight into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey into failing minds. Another gem from your talented quill which goes straight into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 05:51
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
orchidee said:
Hold on *gets out dictionary for purlieus*. Good write Michael.
February 15th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
Hold on *gets out dictionary for purlieus*. Good write Michael.
February 15th, 2018 02:44
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with words.
February 15th, 2018 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with words.
February 15th, 2018 02:25
LOVE IS >>>
myself and me said:
Love is simple, easy and straight as this yet no so simple, easy and straight to have.
February 14th, 2018 20:52
myself and me said:
Love is simple, easy and straight as this yet no so simple, easy and straight to have.
February 14th, 2018 20:52
LOVE IS >>>
FredPeyer said:
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and sorrows, watching that sunset together, getting wet in the rain together, and.....letting the other one drive the car without any backseat driver comments!!!
February 14th, 2018 14:11
FredPeyer said:
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and sorrows, watching that sunset together, getting wet in the rain together, and.....letting the other one drive the car without any backseat driver comments!!!
February 14th, 2018 14:11
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