Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Lovely!!

March 21st, 2018 04:15

A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2)
Lorna said:

Lovely image of a valley of streams and dreams Michael....... and the second stanza catches so much - don\'t we all do that sometimes!

March 21st, 2018 03:58

A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:

Coulets? Bit of French there?!

March 21st, 2018 02:34

A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:

Fine writes Michael. They walking in the valley of streams now? They were on that narrow way. Oh that was the other day. Cos I recalled I would swoon if they fell by the wayside!

March 21st, 2018 02:34

A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

There are some deep thoughts there Michael, especially number 2.

Great artwork, I could look at that one for a very long time.

March 21st, 2018 01:45

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Laura🌻 said:

Exquisite artwork, Michael!
The painting and the poem
complement each other
beautifully!

~Laura~


March 20th, 2018 17:06

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
willyweed said:

wonderful work as usual Michael the paintings always match the written word. bravo my friend! ww

March 20th, 2018 09:38

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks Michael ~ It reminded me that sometimes in my 18 Years of LOVE ~ trysts have had to be clandestine ~ tasting forbidden fruits ! I have even \"made love\" alfresco invisible in the SNOW ~ BUT never alnudo ! I am a wise MONKEY not a Pornbroker ! Yours BRIAN

March 20th, 2018 06:56

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a clever and artistic combo. of picture and verse - - one of your best for mysterious tale-telling Michael - loved every line.

March 20th, 2018 05:27

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Lorna said:

The artist\'s touch to blend them out of sight........... they are invisible and still they seem to represent lovers from any time in the past - I think because of the lines: And on that pathway pointing east
but little modified by time..... the picture of course is perfect for the poem!!

March 20th, 2018 04:37

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael.

March 20th, 2018 02:54

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Beautiful!...always...

March 20th, 2018 02:44

THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael, \"they blended out of sight.\" is a wonderful line.

Intriguing artwork.

March 20th, 2018 02:16

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
willyweed said:

what dreams may come in a haze.
great art as usual ww

March 19th, 2018 15:09

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem! I am also a fan of your abstracts.

March 19th, 2018 06:27

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
orchidee said:

Suppression, oppression, possession, depression, impression.. .. that\'s a lot of pressing. Who\'s pressing them buttons? And have you got your finger on any of them?!

March 19th, 2018 05:54

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
When I first saw your
painting, I thought of
it as a Phantom!
I love the colors!
A great read! I hope
there’s a continuation
to this fine penned piece!

~Laura~


March 19th, 2018 04:18

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael.

Love the abstract, back in your other style.

March 19th, 2018 02:35

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Well read!

March 19th, 2018 02:27

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Good work sir ..short but great!

March 19th, 2018 02:22

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Lorna said:

Very haunting Michael......... I see so many versions of a woman in your picture - don\'t know if I am imagining it but it is haunting as well...... and love the burst of colors.......

March 19th, 2018 02:07

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Ooh what\'s she up to?!

March 19th, 2018 02:03

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Resa71 said:

Very nice read.
Thank you:)

March 19th, 2018 02:01

OUTSIDE THE BOX
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ for again breaking the boundaries of your BOX in both the Abstract and the Anthem (intriguing concept !). I love reptiles and the abstract clearly shows an alligator swimming to freedom outside its BOX (pool) in Tampa Zoo ! We are all trapped in boxes of our own making ~ some of ignorance as STEPHEN illustrated in his BOOK ~ A Short History of Time ~ Thanks for your comment ~ Yours BRIAN

March 18th, 2018 10:18

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
This is a very interesting and intriguing write! It reminds me of what I see at the rehab center. Drug addicts take drugs to counterbalance the drugs they’re addicted to! As SL stated, it’s a trap!
Great painting, my friend!

~Laura~

March 18th, 2018 09:35

OUTSIDE THE BOX
willyweed said:

I find a dog in the picture and wisdom in the words. ww

March 18th, 2018 08:07

LOVE RENEWED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Ah... there is hope yet?
Thank you Michael

March 18th, 2018 06:58

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Lorna said:

Little boxes, little boxes and they\'re all made out of ticky tacky........ remember this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUoXtddNPAM

March 18th, 2018 04:26

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Goldfinch60 said:

I have moments like that, but the problem is if I think outside the box I can never find the box that I left and if I climb in others boxes they don\'t like it.

Like the abstract.

March 18th, 2018 03:51

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:

a box is very trapping , no wander he cannot think straight ! lol.. he needs to find a circle to jump into lol

March 18th, 2018 03:02



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