Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NOVEMBER
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A beautful poem!
I remember November as a child - Gosh the skies were pitch black and how darkness and winter descended upon us!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:14
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A beautful poem!
I remember November as a child - Gosh the skies were pitch black and how darkness and winter descended upon us!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:14
THE PATH
Lauraš» said:
Loved it, Michael!
INSPIRATION served you
well I see! She found her
path...and slowly, so am I!
Awesome last stanza!
Of course, your painting
is beautiful! It reminds me
of a lovely Bed&Breakfast
place by a lake that I\'ve
had the pleasure to stay at!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 04:26
Lauraš» said:
Loved it, Michael!
INSPIRATION served you
well I see! She found her
path...and slowly, so am I!
Awesome last stanza!
Of course, your painting
is beautiful! It reminds me
of a lovely Bed&Breakfast
place by a lake that I\'ve
had the pleasure to stay at!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 04:26
NOVEMBER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ November always stirs my MUSE ! Especially Bonfires & Fireworks and ~ If I\'m in the STATES ~ Thanksgiving ! Please check my DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ~ I copied your idea Thanks ! Love the NOVEMBERNESS of your POEM \'n PIC ! Yours as ever BRIAN
February 21st, 2018 03:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ November always stirs my MUSE ! Especially Bonfires & Fireworks and ~ If I\'m in the STATES ~ Thanksgiving ! Please check my DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ~ I copied your idea Thanks ! Love the NOVEMBERNESS of your POEM \'n PIC ! Yours as ever BRIAN
February 21st, 2018 03:10
NOVEMBER
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
An absolutely exquisite
poem illustrated by a
beautiful painting!
Excellent!
November...a special
meaning for me...my
Momās birth month!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 03:04
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
An absolutely exquisite
poem illustrated by a
beautiful painting!
Excellent!
November...a special
meaning for me...my
Momās birth month!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 03:04
NOVEMBER
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael, once more the imagery is brilliant.
February 21st, 2018 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael, once more the imagery is brilliant.
February 21st, 2018 02:56
NOVEMBER
orchidee said:
I dunno what year it is, let alone what season it is (no change there then?!). I\'m sure it\'s Christmas next week. Hmmmm. A fine write and pic Michael.
February 21st, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
I dunno what year it is, let alone what season it is (no change there then?!). I\'m sure it\'s Christmas next week. Hmmmm. A fine write and pic Michael.
February 21st, 2018 02:40
LOVE IS...etcetera
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much, Michael, I got exactly four (4) smiles, so you should get four (4) stars!
February 21st, 2018 02:02
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much, Michael, I got exactly four (4) smiles, so you should get four (4) stars!
February 21st, 2018 02:02
LOVE IS...etcetera
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Lol. ...great piece of writing!
February 20th, 2018 21:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Lol. ...great piece of writing!
February 20th, 2018 21:37
LOVE IS...etcetera
dusk arising said:
Laugh out loud at the Elton John quip, better sounds are heard at the mothers union under 12\'s karaoke festival i fear. What ever happened to that mans singing ability ...it used to be good but...
No 4 reminds me that the best place for silent discharge cannot be other than in the check-out queue on a friday night shopping trip accompanied by a disgraceful grimace \'pointed\' at the person ahead of you in the queue.
Definately brought good fun to me again here... thank you.
February 20th, 2018 07:40
dusk arising said:
Laugh out loud at the Elton John quip, better sounds are heard at the mothers union under 12\'s karaoke festival i fear. What ever happened to that mans singing ability ...it used to be good but...
No 4 reminds me that the best place for silent discharge cannot be other than in the check-out queue on a friday night shopping trip accompanied by a disgraceful grimace \'pointed\' at the person ahead of you in the queue.
Definately brought good fun to me again here... thank you.
February 20th, 2018 07:40
LOVE IS...etcetera
Christina8 said:
LOL these are great! As is your watercolor painting. Enjoyed!
February 20th, 2018 07:14
Christina8 said:
LOL these are great! As is your watercolor painting. Enjoyed!
February 20th, 2018 07:14
LOVE IS...etcetera
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - a most unexpected read Michael - loved every line of clever description.
February 20th, 2018 06:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - a most unexpected read Michael - loved every line of clever description.
February 20th, 2018 06:46
LOVE IS...etcetera
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ One liners are (relatively) easy to write but difficult to digest ~ I like the \"pattern\" of this poem and it\'s one I might plagiarise ! Now abideth these FOUR ~ but the greatest if these is: ELTON JOHN WITHOUT VOCALS He trained at the Royal Academy to be a CONCERT PIANIST ~ which he is ~ but his hands (a necessity for a pianist) were the wrong size & shape. When he left the Academy someone suggested he tried singing and the rest is MYSTERY ! the same is true of LIBERACE etc. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
February 20th, 2018 02:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ One liners are (relatively) easy to write but difficult to digest ~ I like the \"pattern\" of this poem and it\'s one I might plagiarise ! Now abideth these FOUR ~ but the greatest if these is: ELTON JOHN WITHOUT VOCALS He trained at the Royal Academy to be a CONCERT PIANIST ~ which he is ~ but his hands (a necessity for a pianist) were the wrong size & shape. When he left the Academy someone suggested he tried singing and the rest is MYSTERY ! the same is true of LIBERACE etc. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
February 20th, 2018 02:58
LOVE IS...etcetera
Goldfinch60 said:
So you put washing up liquid in your Pinot Grigio eh?
February 20th, 2018 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So you put washing up liquid in your Pinot Grigio eh?
February 20th, 2018 02:42
THE PATH
FredPeyer said:
What is amazing is not only this poem, but when you say you will do something you go out and do it!
Great work, Michael!
February 19th, 2018 11:59
FredPeyer said:
What is amazing is not only this poem, but when you say you will do something you go out and do it!
Great work, Michael!
February 19th, 2018 11:59
THE PATH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Who is Rectitude? Will he/she help me find the path too? (I wish I would shut up. lol).
February 19th, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Who is Rectitude? Will he/she help me find the path too? (I wish I would shut up. lol).
February 19th, 2018 02:58
THE PATH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ love the painting ~ I stayed in cottages like that ~ In WALES ~ as a child ! Love the poem a great tribute to THERESA MAY ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem \'n Pic ~ Perhaps KINCAID could paint like that ?
February 19th, 2018 02:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ love the painting ~ I stayed in cottages like that ~ In WALES ~ as a child ! Love the poem a great tribute to THERESA MAY ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem \'n Pic ~ Perhaps KINCAID could paint like that ?
February 19th, 2018 02:40
THE PATH
dusk arising said:
Clever lady and clever you but may we yet see the maiden of number 3 yesterday arise onto our screens delightfully propelled toward her destiny with your eloquence sir?
February 19th, 2018 01:38
dusk arising said:
Clever lady and clever you but may we yet see the maiden of number 3 yesterday arise onto our screens delightfully propelled toward her destiny with your eloquence sir?
February 19th, 2018 01:38
THE PATH
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, I only hope she finds the right path.
February 19th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, I only hope she finds the right path.
February 19th, 2018 01:37
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
FredPeyer said:
The shorter they are the harder they are to write. But you mastered the genre!
February 18th, 2018 23:03
FredPeyer said:
The shorter they are the harder they are to write. But you mastered the genre!
February 18th, 2018 23:03
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
dusk arising said:
oh my.... some of these are writing stories in my mind
you must surely be a very busy man to throw away such wonderful lines rather than include them into some of your wonderful works
I\'m particularly impressed with 3, 4 and 5
February 18th, 2018 21:45
dusk arising said:
oh my.... some of these are writing stories in my mind
you must surely be a very busy man to throw away such wonderful lines rather than include them into some of your wonderful works
I\'m particularly impressed with 3, 4 and 5
February 18th, 2018 21:45
KISS ME HARDY
FredPeyer said:
Judging from this shorty, maybe you should write a whole history book! It would definitely get more kids to love history!
February 18th, 2018 13:41
FredPeyer said:
Judging from this shorty, maybe you should write a whole history book! It would definitely get more kids to love history!
February 18th, 2018 13:41
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I enjoyed the read and
visual very much!
The third one is my
favorite! Thatās the one
that truly speaks to me!
A great abstract painting
to accentuate your writing!
Thank you for the
share!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 10:29
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I enjoyed the read and
visual very much!
The third one is my
favorite! Thatās the one
that truly speaks to me!
A great abstract painting
to accentuate your writing!
Thank you for the
share!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 10:29
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the abstract of the FLAMENCO DANCER ~ Love Andalusia ! One liners are always pithy ~ My fave is the last one ~ Strangers on darkened Streets are never Friends ~ I have found this to be TRUE. I am too fit to be mugged but some have tried and some have (almost) died ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion ~ B !
February 18th, 2018 04:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the abstract of the FLAMENCO DANCER ~ Love Andalusia ! One liners are always pithy ~ My fave is the last one ~ Strangers on darkened Streets are never Friends ~ I have found this to be TRUE. I am too fit to be mugged but some have tried and some have (almost) died ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion ~ B !
February 18th, 2018 04:25
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
orchidee said:
A fine write for me to read on my 21st (?) birthday today Michael!
February 18th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write for me to read on my 21st (?) birthday today Michael!
February 18th, 2018 03:06
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
Goldfinch60 said:
Another one of your wonderful abstracts. Thank you.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Another one of your wonderful abstracts. Thank you.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some good ones there Michael. I like them all.
The first one could be reversed by changing \'in\' to \'on\'.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some good ones there Michael. I like them all.
The first one could be reversed by changing \'in\' to \'on\'.
February 18th, 2018 03:01
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