Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ME AND MY FAMILY
orchidee said:

I was a dinosaur! What\'s that you say?- you still are! doh! Good write Michael. Well, I for one don\'t believe we evolved from apes.

February 14th, 2018 02:37

ME AND MY FAMILY
Goldfinch60 said:

But if you trace it back to Adam and Eve how did you get back to the records before the Great Flood. Orchi and I were there disguised as baboons.

February 14th, 2018 01:59

ME AND MY FAMILY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Like it!

February 14th, 2018 01:13

LOVE IS >>>
Christina8 said:

Such simple things but when there is such a deep and meaningful love between two people, you are glad to have that person to share all these things with. Great write!

February 13th, 2018 21:11

NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
FredPeyer said:

As many others already mentioned, had to read it several times too, and it really does grow on the reader. The perfect woman...a paragon of womanhood. And you Michael are on the way of becoming a paragon of poethood!

February 13th, 2018 20:33

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dusk arising said:

Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont let me do the washing up - i tell you it gets damn chilly stood by the sink in february just in undies ...pah! real love.

.omg.... you better believe this is tongue in cheek


February 13th, 2018 15:38

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Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Love is lovely ...and your piece is also beautious enough!!

February 13th, 2018 12:18

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YES MIKE ~ In my (limited) experience it always
\"Takes Two to Tango\" When one is in LOVE ~

Sky above is Brighter Blue
Earth beneath is Softer Green
Something gleams in every hue
Loveless Eyes have never seen ......

Thanks for sharing the 24/7 BLESSINGS of LOVE
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Love the boat ~ QUINQUERIME of NINEVEH ?


February 13th, 2018 09:35

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orchidee said:

Or today - Love is...eating a pancake or ten!

February 13th, 2018 07:17

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
Yes, Love should be all of what you’ve described it to be...and more! It would promote peace and less divorces! I like this write very much! Today, I’m washing the linens
and he’s cooking!
~Laura~

February 13th, 2018 05:57

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orchidee said:

Good write Michael. Love is - me scoffing pork pies and downing sherries. A completely selfish love of course. I could never share them with anyone!
Oh OK I will, but it\'s always porkies and sherries on the menu! heehee.

February 13th, 2018 02:33

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Goldfinch60 said:

I am going to wash the linen today!

Being together in all things is so special.

February 13th, 2018 01:56

NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN

February 12th, 2018 03:42

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Laura🌻 said:

Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!

Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!

~Laura~

February 12th, 2018 03:32

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dusk arising said:

Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.

February 12th, 2018 03:22

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Laura🌻 said:

Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!

~Laura~

February 12th, 2018 03:20

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orchidee said:

Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!

February 12th, 2018 02:40

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Goldfinch60 said:

This is a very powerful write Michael, I have read it several times and I find it so meaningful every time I have read it.

February 12th, 2018 02:28

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Christina8 said:

Very clever and cute read!

February 11th, 2018 18:24

WHO I AM
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Outstanding.....this is called the liberty of Mind!

February 11th, 2018 09:32

NOW FARP THE SHOTS
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Well write!

February 11th, 2018 09:29

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dusk arising said:

i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over the mable.
Such writing deserves a motherment gealth warming.

February 11th, 2018 08:24

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orchidee said:

Have to stamp out \'farping\' on the \'Nothing-ever-too-exciting-must-ever-happen\' Committee! lol.

February 11th, 2018 05:13

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for a Sunday Morning smile ! SPOONERISMS have always been feature of English Humour & Verse ! Our ENGLISH TEACHER was telling us of a CAT that fell from the window of the tenth story of a Tower Block. Was it hurt one innocent third former enquired ? Oh NO ~ Mister Spinks replied (much to the amusement of the rest of the class) \"He just POPPED on his DRAWERS and ran off\" I often use SPOONERISMS in general speech ! Yours BRIAN

February 11th, 2018 05:05

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orchidee said:

Farping?! Swoon! A wood grite Michael.

February 11th, 2018 02:59

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Goldfinch60 said:

I don\'t do thinking any more - it\'s dangerous.
Sorted this write out by just saying it and the correct words just seem to come to mind. Mever write Clichael.

February 11th, 2018 01:51

WHO I AM
FredPeyer said:

While I love the way you write, Michael, I have to say that I never got lost so I never had to go look for myself and therefore never found myself either!
(Special note: English is my 4th language, so please overlook any mistakes!)

February 10th, 2018 20:07

WHO I AM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BACK ~ Uncle Mike ~ pleased you found yourself ! Have missed your ODD ODES and your helpful comments on mine ! I love wood grain ~ I have my Grandparents \"old\" ERCOL table and chairs in my flat ~ from the 1950\'s ~ they improve with age ! I love \"grain sculpting\" and a FISH like that would have a price tag of £100 @ Snape Maltings ~ Yours BRIAN

February 10th, 2018 09:52

WHO I AM
Fay Slimm. said:

Finding oneself is seen as freedom indeed in this modern world Michael - -wonder where everyone goes before that momentous discovery eh ? - - - good to see you posting again my friend and I love that sculpture with such well chosen old wooden rings around the fishy eyes.

February 10th, 2018 05:06

WHO I AM
Goldfinch60 said:

Like I too dislike bad English like. So especially like those sentences like that start with so like. So like I get annoyed like, so where is good language like.
Where\' do those apostr\'phes go like. So do the\'y go where\' ever you want like.
Pritty soon speling wil go th saim whey!

February 10th, 2018 04:17



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