Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
Alone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MIKE ~ Perfect Poem \'n Pic
Very sad situation for the LADY ! If I\'m at a Dance
were there are WALLFLOWERS ~ I always invite
then to Dance and then often another Man will !
I adore HELLEBORE
SENRYU ~ I like too !
One of the first things I teach my Pensioner\'s
Poetry Class is the essential difference between
A HAIKU and a SENRYU ! Yours is a SENRYU !
Please check my BOAT RACE ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 26th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MIKE ~ Perfect Poem \'n Pic
Very sad situation for the LADY ! If I\'m at a Dance
were there are WALLFLOWERS ~ I always invite
then to Dance and then often another Man will !
I adore HELLEBORE
SENRYU ~ I like too !
One of the first things I teach my Pensioner\'s
Poetry Class is the essential difference between
A HAIKU and a SENRYU ! Yours is a SENRYU !
Please check my BOAT RACE ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 26th, 2018 06:02
Alone
Lorna said:
Perfect poem and of course your artist\'s eye caught the flower just like a painting!
March 26th, 2018 05:39
Lorna said:
Perfect poem and of course your artist\'s eye caught the flower just like a painting!
March 26th, 2018 05:39
Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Super senryu
Connecting us with nature
With your hellebore
March 26th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super senryu
Connecting us with nature
With your hellebore
March 26th, 2018 01:16
GENEALOGY
Resa71 said:
Thank you for brightening my morning!
I needed a smile and a laugh today!
Resa.
March 25th, 2018 13:10
Resa71 said:
Thank you for brightening my morning!
I needed a smile and a laugh today!
Resa.
March 25th, 2018 13:10
GENEALOGY
Lorna said:
Ha ha Michael....... short poem for such a prolific family............
March 25th, 2018 05:15
Lorna said:
Ha ha Michael....... short poem for such a prolific family............
March 25th, 2018 05:15
GENEALOGY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
First of all, I love the painting!
Secondly...
Thank you for the laugh!
It was great!
As I commented to Hood and Gold, this is a great Sunday morning! Reading each write and the comments was enjoyable, engaging, and entertaining!
Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 03:51
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
First of all, I love the painting!
Secondly...
Thank you for the laugh!
It was great!
As I commented to Hood and Gold, this is a great Sunday morning! Reading each write and the comments was enjoyable, engaging, and entertaining!
Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 03:51
GENEALOGY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ADAM & EVE ~ Thank GOD
It wasn\'t ADAM & STEVE
Their Genealogy would have been small
In essence ~ NOTHING at all !
Thanks for sharing MIKE very droll
Yours BRIAN ~ Love the SPRING
MEADOW abstract ~ awesome !
March 25th, 2018 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ADAM & EVE ~ Thank GOD
It wasn\'t ADAM & STEVE
Their Genealogy would have been small
In essence ~ NOTHING at all !
Thanks for sharing MIKE very droll
Yours BRIAN ~ Love the SPRING
MEADOW abstract ~ awesome !
March 25th, 2018 03:30
GENEALOGY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm yes. Only one branch on it at the time - those two themselves?
Oh I won\'t get started on \'me, myself, and I\'. is that one person or three people? The family tree would be an awful jumble then!
March 25th, 2018 02:13
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm yes. Only one branch on it at the time - those two themselves?
Oh I won\'t get started on \'me, myself, and I\'. is that one person or three people? The family tree would be an awful jumble then!
March 25th, 2018 02:13
FLAKES FALL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As snow flakes fall
Children bawl
Mother hit the wall
Old Folk fall
Teenagers have a BALL
As snow flakes fall !
Love the snowy abstract
and the Poetic Form
and the POEM
Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
March 24th, 2018 18:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As snow flakes fall
Children bawl
Mother hit the wall
Old Folk fall
Teenagers have a BALL
As snow flakes fall !
Love the snowy abstract
and the Poetic Form
and the POEM
Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
March 24th, 2018 18:35
FLAKES FALL
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A masterpiece by the
Master! Out of this world...
actually up in the sky...
I love the cool blue
celestial colors of your
painting! Magnifico Maestro!
The Rondelet...magnifique!!
~Laura~
March 24th, 2018 07:59
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A masterpiece by the
Master! Out of this world...
actually up in the sky...
I love the cool blue
celestial colors of your
painting! Magnifico Maestro!
The Rondelet...magnifique!!
~Laura~
March 24th, 2018 07:59
FLAKES FALL
Lorna said:
Just right Michael and your beautiful blue sky (what I see?) defies the snow.........
March 24th, 2018 04:41
Lorna said:
Just right Michael and your beautiful blue sky (what I see?) defies the snow.........
March 24th, 2018 04:41
FLAKES FALL
orchidee said:
A fine write there M. I tend to stay with \'simpler\' stuff, with me syllables and metres!
March 24th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
A fine write there M. I tend to stay with \'simpler\' stuff, with me syllables and metres!
March 24th, 2018 02:44
FLAKES FALL
orchidee said:
I agree with you and Gold M. We saw literally a few flakes in Jan and Feb.
I wish we could say \'What is snow?\' cos of it being conspicuous by its absence.
March 24th, 2018 02:30
orchidee said:
I agree with you and Gold M. We saw literally a few flakes in Jan and Feb.
I wish we could say \'What is snow?\' cos of it being conspicuous by its absence.
March 24th, 2018 02:30
FLAKES FALL
Goldfinch60 said:
May they only be seen where they should be, in photographs or on cards.
Good write Michael.
March 24th, 2018 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May they only be seen where they should be, in photographs or on cards.
Good write Michael.
March 24th, 2018 01:24
MARCH WHEN.....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MICHAEL ~ I give you permission to post an ACROSTIC ~ but please warn me next time so I can wear my shades ! I\'m not mad you wrote one ~ just mad it was so good Love the painting of the Lake District ~ Wastwater ? ! Yours BRIAN
March 23rd, 2018 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MICHAEL ~ I give you permission to post an ACROSTIC ~ but please warn me next time so I can wear my shades ! I\'m not mad you wrote one ~ just mad it was so good Love the painting of the Lake District ~ Wastwater ? ! Yours BRIAN
March 23rd, 2018 16:37
MARCH WHEN.....
Christina8 said:
Wonderful acrostic and breathtaking abstract!
March 23rd, 2018 14:47
Christina8 said:
Wonderful acrostic and breathtaking abstract!
March 23rd, 2018 14:47
MARCH WHEN.....
FineB said:
What a beautiful poem Michael.
A delightful tribute to March.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 14:19
FineB said:
What a beautiful poem Michael.
A delightful tribute to March.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 14:19
MARCH WHEN.....
Lorna said:
Love the poem Michael - \"reach out between snowstorms\" would have been more accurate this year (here at least)...... the painting took my breath away! How nice to have a handy man like you around the house just creating more and more beauty! You\'re a useful fellow indeed!
March 23rd, 2018 07:11
Lorna said:
Love the poem Michael - \"reach out between snowstorms\" would have been more accurate this year (here at least)...... the painting took my breath away! How nice to have a handy man like you around the house just creating more and more beauty! You\'re a useful fellow indeed!
March 23rd, 2018 07:11
MARCH WHEN.....
Goldfinch60 said:
I too can understand why you have those two paintings in your living room, they are both superb.
By the way the poem is good as well.
March 23rd, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I too can understand why you have those two paintings in your living room, they are both superb.
By the way the poem is good as well.
March 23rd, 2018 01:47
MARCH WHEN.....
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, Michael!
I can just imagine the two
paintings hanging side
by side in your living room...
stunningly beautiful!
The contrast between
the two is EXCEPTIONAL!
I love the form and message of your acrostic poem! You are a master of your craft! Fantastic work!
Definitely “better late than never”!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 01:38
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, Michael!
I can just imagine the two
paintings hanging side
by side in your living room...
stunningly beautiful!
The contrast between
the two is EXCEPTIONAL!
I love the form and message of your acrostic poem! You are a master of your craft! Fantastic work!
Definitely “better late than never”!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 01:38
BETWEEN THE ROSES
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Your painting is beautiful!
I love the vibrant colors!
...and she is
“A rose among the thorns...”
Hope he treads lightly!
Your write did make me
smile!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 01:11
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Your painting is beautiful!
I love the vibrant colors!
...and she is
“A rose among the thorns...”
Hope he treads lightly!
Your write did make me
smile!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 01:11
BETWEEN THE ROSES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the picture \"Sunrise over Frinton on Sea ~ Essex !\" You poem pricks (sorry ticks) my humour box ! BRIAN Love your Header Background !
March 22nd, 2018 05:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the picture \"Sunrise over Frinton on Sea ~ Essex !\" You poem pricks (sorry ticks) my humour box ! BRIAN Love your Header Background !
March 22nd, 2018 05:04
BETWEEN THE ROSES
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure greets the eye with the colourful painting and the smile which remains after reading your rhyme - - great stuff Michael.
March 22nd, 2018 03:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure greets the eye with the colourful painting and the smile which remains after reading your rhyme - - great stuff Michael.
March 22nd, 2018 03:57
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