Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Again... a poem from Michael lifts my day and returns me back to Symmetry
Such wonderful flow from an artist may I say
January 30th, 2018 09:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Again... a poem from Michael lifts my day and returns me back to Symmetry
Such wonderful flow from an artist may I say
January 30th, 2018 09:43
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
dusk arising said:
For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today shown us that you are indeed a great poet.
Re reading this piece i could \'feel\' the peaceful joy of awaking to the welcome of a new bright morning in harmony with our natural surround.
Truly a pleasure to read. Into my favs.
January 30th, 2018 06:55
dusk arising said:
For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today shown us that you are indeed a great poet.
Re reading this piece i could \'feel\' the peaceful joy of awaking to the welcome of a new bright morning in harmony with our natural surround.
Truly a pleasure to read. Into my favs.
January 30th, 2018 06:55
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a morning repast of Poem & Painting ! Love the tree silhouettes reminds me of when I was in he Cubs & Scouts ~ Tree recognition in all SEASONS ! Loved the wording of the poem ! You will enjoy my CATS today ! Yours BRIAN
January 30th, 2018 05:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a morning repast of Poem & Painting ! Love the tree silhouettes reminds me of when I was in he Cubs & Scouts ~ Tree recognition in all SEASONS ! Loved the wording of the poem ! You will enjoy my CATS today ! Yours BRIAN
January 30th, 2018 05:55
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful imagery in both drawings a words once more Michael.
January 30th, 2018 03:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful imagery in both drawings a words once more Michael.
January 30th, 2018 03:08
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, your word choices are just incredible! Does it all just come to you, or do you use help like the net or books? Don\'t give away your secrets, just wanted to tell you that you are an incredible writer!
January 30th, 2018 03:04
FredPeyer said:
Michael, your word choices are just incredible! Does it all just come to you, or do you use help like the net or books? Don\'t give away your secrets, just wanted to tell you that you are an incredible writer!
January 30th, 2018 03:04
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
orchidee said:
A descriptive write, and a lesson about trees too in your pic M.
January 30th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
A descriptive write, and a lesson about trees too in your pic M.
January 30th, 2018 02:43
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very droll MICHAEL ~ Gorgonzola for me and Chianti ! Yours BRIAN
January 29th, 2018 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very droll MICHAEL ~ Gorgonzola for me and Chianti ! Yours BRIAN
January 29th, 2018 16:53
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
Aislinn Wilson said:
Rhyming \"diocese\" with \"cheese\" is bold to say the least. I love your style, as always.
January 29th, 2018 14:08
Aislinn Wilson said:
Rhyming \"diocese\" with \"cheese\" is bold to say the least. I love your style, as always.
January 29th, 2018 14:08
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
orchidee said:
Ahh, you started me off singing now! A hymn with similar title: \'Let all the world in every corner sing\'. A square world then?!
January 29th, 2018 09:46
orchidee said:
Ahh, you started me off singing now! A hymn with similar title: \'Let all the world in every corner sing\'. A square world then?!
January 29th, 2018 09:46
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
dusk arising said:
One of the phrases i use is \'he/she\'s not exactly the sharpest tool in the box\' which conveys a similar meaning.
\'If he were a ghost he\'d be too mean to give you a fright\'
They probably call a collander a strainer stateside whereas here its simply the release of flatulence whilst constipated.
Please don\'t draw mental pictures.
Love your pic, two birds with their wings out of sync (a rare sight... how do they do that, u never see them taking lessons).
January 29th, 2018 09:24
dusk arising said:
One of the phrases i use is \'he/she\'s not exactly the sharpest tool in the box\' which conveys a similar meaning.
\'If he were a ghost he\'d be too mean to give you a fright\'
They probably call a collander a strainer stateside whereas here its simply the release of flatulence whilst constipated.
Please don\'t draw mental pictures.
Love your pic, two birds with their wings out of sync (a rare sight... how do they do that, u never see them taking lessons).
January 29th, 2018 09:24
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
Caring dove said:
your ending caught me off surprise a little but i enjoyed reading this ! too many muffins is not good for anybody , very unhealthy ,
January 29th, 2018 07:16
Caring dove said:
your ending caught me off surprise a little but i enjoyed reading this ! too many muffins is not good for anybody , very unhealthy ,
January 29th, 2018 07:16
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
Caring dove said:
lol.. bread and cheese is nice .. i think crusty frenchbread , cheese with added pickle and tomatoes.. nice read :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:13
Caring dove said:
lol.. bread and cheese is nice .. i think crusty frenchbread , cheese with added pickle and tomatoes.. nice read :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:13
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
FredPeyer said:
Too much \'Anglo-Saxon\' for me! Ok, I know what a trunk is, and I do wear trousers instead of pants, but when it comes to sandwiches, crumbs, biscuits, or colanders or calenders, whatever, I get lost!
But your poem does sound nice, even if I don\'t understand it! :-)
January 29th, 2018 04:40
FredPeyer said:
Too much \'Anglo-Saxon\' for me! Ok, I know what a trunk is, and I do wear trousers instead of pants, but when it comes to sandwiches, crumbs, biscuits, or colanders or calenders, whatever, I get lost!
But your poem does sound nice, even if I don\'t understand it! :-)
January 29th, 2018 04:40
IF ALL THE WORLD...(1)
orchidee said:
Some of those picnics are short of a sandwich I reckon! The only solution is as you say: get more bread and cheese in! heehee.
January 29th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
Some of those picnics are short of a sandwich I reckon! The only solution is as you say: get more bread and cheese in! heehee.
January 29th, 2018 02:43
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
FredPeyer said:
I can see that gathering storm night, feel it in my bones. Great writing, and love the two last lines!
January 28th, 2018 23:03
FredPeyer said:
I can see that gathering storm night, feel it in my bones. Great writing, and love the two last lines!
January 28th, 2018 23:03
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
I knows \'castellations\' too - bits of churches. Sometimes it\'s where it\'s painted to look like castle walls. It\'s not an actual castle wall though!
January 28th, 2018 11:07
orchidee said:
I knows \'castellations\' too - bits of churches. Sometimes it\'s where it\'s painted to look like castle walls. It\'s not an actual castle wall though!
January 28th, 2018 11:07
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
One night like these...its fantastic!
January 28th, 2018 11:06
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
One night like these...its fantastic!
January 28th, 2018 11:06
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes something just comes in a coruscating flash of inspiration - how about granite peaks?
January 28th, 2018 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes something just comes in a coruscating flash of inspiration - how about granite peaks?
January 28th, 2018 10:19
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Accidental Poet said:
Michael, I too am in awe of this great write. I love the whole poem, but the first two lines really got my attention. Excellent write my fellow poet.
January 28th, 2018 08:10
Accidental Poet said:
Michael, I too am in awe of this great write. I love the whole poem, but the first two lines really got my attention. Excellent write my fellow poet.
January 28th, 2018 08:10
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the repetition of words at times in poetry Michael - - this imagery -laden powerful piece makes excellent reading to my mind.
January 28th, 2018 06:56
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the repetition of words at times in poetry Michael - - this imagery -laden powerful piece makes excellent reading to my mind.
January 28th, 2018 06:56
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
dusk arising said:
Look, just push the hills out of view and place a block of flats there where the lightning thrills.... just kidding.... great piece sir!
January 28th, 2018 05:56
dusk arising said:
Look, just push the hills out of view and place a block of flats there where the lightning thrills.... just kidding.... great piece sir!
January 28th, 2018 05:56
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
You will see my repetition of some words in my poems. Is that why I make them quite log often, so people won\'t spot repetitions?! I\'ve not got past coruscating! lol.
January 28th, 2018 05:24
orchidee said:
You will see my repetition of some words in my poems. Is that why I make them quite log often, so people won\'t spot repetitions?! I\'ve not got past coruscating! lol.
January 28th, 2018 05:24
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
Ahh, so the mountains may not be misty.
You can get away with a syllable less in some words, e.g. heav-ens\', or as \'heavens\'.
\'Go\' - single syllable starting with g, but of no use whatsoever here! lol.
How about \'grey\'? But then \'Grey granite\' what?
January 28th, 2018 05:22
orchidee said:
Ahh, so the mountains may not be misty.
You can get away with a syllable less in some words, e.g. heav-ens\', or as \'heavens\'.
\'Go\' - single syllable starting with g, but of no use whatsoever here! lol.
How about \'grey\'? But then \'Grey granite\' what?
January 28th, 2018 05:22
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
Make them granite mountains instead of granite hills then? Or misty mountains and granite hills?
I don\'t know much about them hills and mountains. How is their geography, climate, etc? lol.
January 28th, 2018 03:16
orchidee said:
Make them granite mountains instead of granite hills then? Or misty mountains and granite hills?
I don\'t know much about them hills and mountains. How is their geography, climate, etc? lol.
January 28th, 2018 03:16
ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Oooh I know. I fuss over rhyming \'be\' with \'see\' maybe too often! I may simply opt for \'we\' instead. I wangle it in somehow.
Even if I say it back-to-front poetically, e.g.
\'You there day good a have\'.
January 28th, 2018 03:14
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Oooh I know. I fuss over rhyming \'be\' with \'see\' maybe too often! I may simply opt for \'we\' instead. I wangle it in somehow.
Even if I say it back-to-front poetically, e.g.
\'You there day good a have\'.
January 28th, 2018 03:14
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