Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



OUTSIDE THE BOX
willyweed said:

I find a dog in the picture and wisdom in the words. ww

March 18th, 2018 08:07

LOVE RENEWED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Ah... there is hope yet?
Thank you Michael

March 18th, 2018 06:58

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Lorna said:

Little boxes, little boxes and they\'re all made out of ticky tacky........ remember this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUoXtddNPAM

March 18th, 2018 04:26

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Goldfinch60 said:

I have moments like that, but the problem is if I think outside the box I can never find the box that I left and if I climb in others boxes they don\'t like it.

Like the abstract.

March 18th, 2018 03:51

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:

a box is very trapping , no wander he cannot think straight ! lol.. he needs to find a circle to jump into lol

March 18th, 2018 03:02

OUTSIDE THE BOX
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Now we must know things such as: How big is the box? What is it made of? How long will he be outside the box? How long will he be in it?! And so on - most important questions. lol.

March 18th, 2018 03:01

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:

oh dear, lol ! this is good , i like it ! :-)

poor guy , cant think clearly at all

March 18th, 2018 02:56

SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:

She still alone, or she found some company today? Is it today all day, or......oh I did enough on that the other day!

March 17th, 2018 13:01

SHE WAS ALONE
Lorna said:

ooooo Michael - you\'ve outdone yourself and I dove into your painting of blue......

March 17th, 2018 06:25

SHE WAS ALONE
willyweed said:

Great format and picture Michael.

March 17th, 2018 05:41

SHE WAS ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Seascape ~ I am a Coastal Boy at Heart ! Born on the West Coast and living on the East ! Loved the Structure of the UDIT BHATIA (they taste good too ! The contents of the poem is also elegant but mournful ! Please check my HORSE and my FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN

March 17th, 2018 05:13

SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:

Not that I don\'t repeat myself sometimes in poems, I said, not that I don\'t...... (I wish I would shut up. lol).

March 17th, 2018 03:01

SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Phew, I won\'t even start this form with me hymn-poems! It\'s \'common\' for me to stay with me \'Common Metre\' often. 8.6.8.6. lines that is!
Cheating a bit, cos that fits to thousands of tunes, yet so many of them I don\'t know.

March 17th, 2018 03:01

SHE WAS ALONE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
As Gold stated, an intriguing structure to express a painful situation! Beautiful painting...Maestro Extraordinaire! Bravo!

~Laura~

March 17th, 2018 02:26

LOVE RENEWED
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
This is a beautiful write of the journey of a lifetime...as colorful as your painting! Enjoyed the read!

~Laura~

March 17th, 2018 02:10

SHE WAS ALONE
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a very good write Michael and the structure is intriguing.

March 17th, 2018 01:33

LOVE RENEWED
willyweed said:

wonderful poem Michael, the painting looks like a bouquet of beautiful flowers to me? ww


March 16th, 2018 16:07

LOVE RENEWED
Nicholas Browning said:

Now this one sure is a thriller. It\'s like a roller coaster. It starts off slow, hits you with a slope, and then calms you down with a satisfactory conclusion. Very nice.

March 16th, 2018 09:02

LOVE RENEWED
Lorna said:

Pilgrims on their way to glory, sometimes up to mischief naughty............

March 16th, 2018 03:25

LOVE RENEWED
orchidee said:

An eloquent write and fine pic M. I might swoon if I look up some of them long words to find their full meaning!

March 16th, 2018 02:54

LOVE RENEWED
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael

March 16th, 2018 02:19

LOVE RENEWED
Jamie said:

...and a wonderful painting too. So much to see. It\'s like the cosmos explained through emotions and I can\'t look away!

March 16th, 2018 00:51

THREE TERCETS
rrodriguez said:

Michael your tercets are vintage gems. Well written& expressed.

March 15th, 2018 13:52

THREE TERCETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ Loved all the TERCETS and the VISUAL ! How did you know my windscreen had been shattered by a flow lying BIRD ? Please check my Tribute to Stephen Hawking ~ Yours BRIAN

March 15th, 2018 06:58

THREE TERCETS
Lorna said:

I love that your ideas are always so varied! Three great little vignettes!

March 15th, 2018 06:04

THREE TERCETS
Laura🌻 said:

EXCELLENT tercets, Michael, along with your great artwork! You never fail us. Always at the top of your game!

March 15th, 2018 05:48

THREE TERCETS
willyweed said:

,Michael. 3 for a nickel you can\'t beat the price or the art very clever...ww

March 15th, 2018 05:18

THREE TERCETS
orchidee said:

Fine Tercy-wotsits and pic Michael. Someone playing Monopoly in the second one?! lol.

March 15th, 2018 02:50

THREE TERCETS
Goldfinch60 said:

Three super writes Michael.

Like the artwork as well Mr Pollock.

March 15th, 2018 02:06

THREE TERCETS
kevin browne said:

totally tops, I\'d say. wonderful wording you have used and performed it well. it\'s lush to read, too, keep them coming.

March 15th, 2018 01:07



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