Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THREE LITTLE COUPLETS
Lorna said:
Especially love the last stanza! Very good!
January 20th, 2018 04:52
Lorna said:
Especially love the last stanza! Very good!
January 20th, 2018 04:52
THREE LITTLE COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Three meaningful couplets Michael.
I can see things in the artwork, it will need a great deal of concentration but there is much to see in it.
January 20th, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Three meaningful couplets Michael.
I can see things in the artwork, it will need a great deal of concentration but there is much to see in it.
January 20th, 2018 01:51
LUMBER
lasergraph said:
The words, \"Tear down paradise and put up a parking lot\" come to mind. Great words and great art, I always enjoy seeing as well as reading. Keep \'em coming.
January 19th, 2018 15:28
lasergraph said:
The words, \"Tear down paradise and put up a parking lot\" come to mind. Great words and great art, I always enjoy seeing as well as reading. Keep \'em coming.
January 19th, 2018 15:28
LUMBER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Go chop an oak ~ an elm a pine
But save old Slippery ~ rhere that\'s mine
It\'s the only tree my wife can\'t climb
WOODMAN spare that tree for ME !
Thanks for caring MIKE ~ Deforestation not only spoils the vienluw ~ it destroy the PLANET ~ Only 10% of the UK is forested ~ In the USA it is 50% but don\'t tell TRUMP ~ he\'ll chop it down and build timber houses ! Yours BRIAN ~ A very apposite PAINTING
January 19th, 2018 12:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Go chop an oak ~ an elm a pine
But save old Slippery ~ rhere that\'s mine
It\'s the only tree my wife can\'t climb
WOODMAN spare that tree for ME !
Thanks for caring MIKE ~ Deforestation not only spoils the vienluw ~ it destroy the PLANET ~ Only 10% of the UK is forested ~ In the USA it is 50% but don\'t tell TRUMP ~ he\'ll chop it down and build timber houses ! Yours BRIAN ~ A very apposite PAINTING
January 19th, 2018 12:46
LUMBER
Louis Gibbs said:
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees are a renewable resource, unlike oil and coal. Good write, Michael!
January 19th, 2018 09:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees are a renewable resource, unlike oil and coal. Good write, Michael!
January 19th, 2018 09:41
LUMBER
orchidee said:
Plus the old mystery - If a tree fell in a wood, and no one was there, would the tree make a noise as it fell? Hhmmm.
January 19th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
Plus the old mystery - If a tree fell in a wood, and no one was there, would the tree make a noise as it fell? Hhmmm.
January 19th, 2018 02:43
LUMBER
orchidee said:
A good write and true unfortunately. Trees there for many years - then gone in a moment.
Meanwhile - lumber - or lumbered with me singing?! lol.
January 19th, 2018 02:42
orchidee said:
A good write and true unfortunately. Trees there for many years - then gone in a moment.
Meanwhile - lumber - or lumbered with me singing?! lol.
January 19th, 2018 02:42
LUMBER
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t know how you do it day after day!
January 19th, 2018 02:18
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t know how you do it day after day!
January 19th, 2018 02:18
LUMBER
Goldfinch60 said:
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world.
Beautiful artwork.
January 19th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world.
Beautiful artwork.
January 19th, 2018 02:05
CAUSATION
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but hey, it\'s true!) I would love to give my enemy (if I had one) an enema, just to see him suffer!
January 18th, 2018 16:57
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but hey, it\'s true!) I would love to give my enemy (if I had one) an enema, just to see him suffer!
January 18th, 2018 16:57
CAUSATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ CAUSE & EFFECT ~ Love the abstract \"Snowy Village !\" Cause \"Snowfall\" effect \"Winter Wonderland\" As far(t) as the Poem is concerned is was ever thus ! BRIAN
January 18th, 2018 12:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ CAUSE & EFFECT ~ Love the abstract \"Snowy Village !\" Cause \"Snowfall\" effect \"Winter Wonderland\" As far(t) as the Poem is concerned is was ever thus ! BRIAN
January 18th, 2018 12:38
CAUSATION
lasergraph said:
Enemy and enema are both a pain in the a$$. I always love your short but to the point writes and the art as well.
January 18th, 2018 12:30
lasergraph said:
Enemy and enema are both a pain in the a$$. I always love your short but to the point writes and the art as well.
January 18th, 2018 12:30
CAUSATION
orchidee said:
That enema can seem like an enemy. Then it links to gas and discharge! heehee. In fact I can see now how the whole poem is linked!
January 18th, 2018 09:01
orchidee said:
That enema can seem like an enemy. Then it links to gas and discharge! heehee. In fact I can see now how the whole poem is linked!
January 18th, 2018 09:01
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this hark back and look forward with love as its irrepressible subject. First class write.
January 18th, 2018 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this hark back and look forward with love as its irrepressible subject. First class write.
January 18th, 2018 04:58
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought diction. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Michael.
January 17th, 2018 23:59
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought diction. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Michael.
January 17th, 2018 23:59
LOVE\'S CYCLE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices, incredible flow, and so much meaning and truth. That formula one car has been replaced by a bicycle, but hey, we are still getting around! :-)
January 17th, 2018 11:26
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices, incredible flow, and so much meaning and truth. That formula one car has been replaced by a bicycle, but hey, we are still getting around! :-)
January 17th, 2018 11:26
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Louis Gibbs said:
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph into a mellow memory, indeed. Well expressed, Michael!
January 17th, 2018 09:22
Louis Gibbs said:
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph into a mellow memory, indeed. Well expressed, Michael!
January 17th, 2018 09:22
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21
LOVE\'S CYCLE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for Dawn stimulation ! Love the visual ~ the never ending Circle of Love and the ripples of the Ups & Downs of Love ! Your ODE exemplifies the VISUAL ! Love (in my experience) is CYCLIC and what goes round ~ comes round ! I have FALLEN (I guess that is the correct verb ?) IN & OUT for Love regularly for half my life (17 years) and the ECSTASY (and AGONY) has been worth it ~ Let there be LOVE ! Yours BRIAN
January 17th, 2018 04:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for Dawn stimulation ! Love the visual ~ the never ending Circle of Love and the ripples of the Ups & Downs of Love ! Your ODE exemplifies the VISUAL ! Love (in my experience) is CYCLIC and what goes round ~ comes round ! I have FALLEN (I guess that is the correct verb ?) IN & OUT for Love regularly for half my life (17 years) and the ECSTASY (and AGONY) has been worth it ~ Let there be LOVE ! Yours BRIAN
January 17th, 2018 04:15
LOVE\'S CYCLE
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Ooh lucidity. Will that make me swoon?! lol.
January 17th, 2018 02:41
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Ooh lucidity. Will that make me swoon?! lol.
January 17th, 2018 02:41
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
lasergraph said:
I liked them all. Political correctness has too big a choke hold on us all.
January 16th, 2018 16:38
lasergraph said:
I liked them all. Political correctness has too big a choke hold on us all.
January 16th, 2018 16:38
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
Louis Gibbs said:
All four are beauties, Michael! Well thought out.
January 16th, 2018 10:13
Louis Gibbs said:
All four are beauties, Michael! Well thought out.
January 16th, 2018 10:13
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