Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WHO I AM
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Where was you hiding, to be able to find yourself? How did you know it was you when you found yourself?!
We must know the answers to these important questions! lol.
February 10th, 2018 02:39
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Where was you hiding, to be able to find yourself? How did you know it was you when you found yourself?!
We must know the answers to these important questions! lol.
February 10th, 2018 02:39
WHO I AM
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is wonderful, may you always be that way.
February 10th, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is wonderful, may you always be that way.
February 10th, 2018 01:32
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
FredPeyer said:
Your shorties are so good, Michael, you don\'t have to apologize for posting them twice. Post the as many times as you like, they are always a pleasure to read!
February 3rd, 2018 13:12
FredPeyer said:
Your shorties are so good, Michael, you don\'t have to apologize for posting them twice. Post the as many times as you like, they are always a pleasure to read!
February 3rd, 2018 13:12
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
orchidee said:
I seem to get longer! Not on purpose, but I dunno when to stop sometimes! lol. Well, I came across some old hymns. One had 33 verses. I\'m gonna sing them all. heehee.
February 3rd, 2018 08:59
orchidee said:
I seem to get longer! Not on purpose, but I dunno when to stop sometimes! lol. Well, I came across some old hymns. One had 33 verses. I\'m gonna sing them all. heehee.
February 3rd, 2018 08:59
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
dusk arising said:
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i guess we all have jottings of ideas which we hadnt developed, im thinking of a few ideas which i jotted down whilst working on another piece. I\'m inspired.
February 3rd, 2018 05:49
dusk arising said:
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i guess we all have jottings of ideas which we hadnt developed, im thinking of a few ideas which i jotted down whilst working on another piece. I\'m inspired.
February 3rd, 2018 05:49
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Jooles said:
I love cabbage , sprouts and gravy...id have a feast 🤣
February 2nd, 2018 19:47
Jooles said:
I love cabbage , sprouts and gravy...id have a feast 🤣
February 2nd, 2018 19:47
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
dusk arising said:
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like these
Your long necked bird is a farce
For he could kiss his own a.....
And generally do as he pleased
alternative last line:-
But i\'d advise him not to sniff the breeze
February 2nd, 2018 18:15
dusk arising said:
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like these
Your long necked bird is a farce
For he could kiss his own a.....
And generally do as he pleased
alternative last line:-
But i\'d advise him not to sniff the breeze
February 2nd, 2018 18:15
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure nonsense\', this is humor 1st class and the result of a great fertile mind!!!
February 2nd, 2018 14:26
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure nonsense\', this is humor 1st class and the result of a great fertile mind!!!
February 2nd, 2018 14:26
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor bird\'s neck has grown to get away from the wind\'s double- odour !!! A great nonsense rhyme Michael along with the clever sketch.
February 2nd, 2018 07:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor bird\'s neck has grown to get away from the wind\'s double- odour !!! A great nonsense rhyme Michael along with the clever sketch.
February 2nd, 2018 07:49
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write M. A bit of a windy world - cabbage and sprouts.
February 2nd, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write M. A bit of a windy world - cabbage and sprouts.
February 2nd, 2018 02:37
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Where is the roast beef and potatoes? as hopefully the gravy is onion gravy.
Good fun write Michael.
February 2nd, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Where is the roast beef and potatoes? as hopefully the gravy is onion gravy.
Good fun write Michael.
February 2nd, 2018 02:07
RESERVED WITHIN
FredPeyer said:
While very well written, what I like most about both the drawing and the poem is that you left it wide open for the reader to put his/her own story and thoughts right into it.
February 1st, 2018 13:07
FredPeyer said:
While very well written, what I like most about both the drawing and the poem is that you left it wide open for the reader to put his/her own story and thoughts right into it.
February 1st, 2018 13:07
RESERVED WITHIN
Fay Slimm. said:
A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing what counts with a maiden - - great duo the pic and the poem Michael.
February 1st, 2018 09:26
Fay Slimm. said:
A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing what counts with a maiden - - great duo the pic and the poem Michael.
February 1st, 2018 09:26
RESERVED WITHIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an elegant symbiosis of Poem \'n Pic ! An apt depiction in Line & Lament ~ Parting is such sweet sorrow ! Yours BRIAN
February 1st, 2018 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an elegant symbiosis of Poem \'n Pic ! An apt depiction in Line & Lament ~ Parting is such sweet sorrow ! Yours BRIAN
February 1st, 2018 05:07
RESERVED WITHIN
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Could a song from me break through her armour? Or would it cause her to put another layer of armour on? More ear-plugs anyway! heehee.
February 1st, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Could a song from me break through her armour? Or would it cause her to put another layer of armour on? More ear-plugs anyway! heehee.
February 1st, 2018 02:43
RESERVED WITHIN
Goldfinch60 said:
The armour of sorrow surrounds her. Very good emotive write Micael.
February 1st, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
The armour of sorrow surrounds her. Very good emotive write Micael.
February 1st, 2018 02:12
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you mastered the form perfectly! And to top it off, all five quinzanes make sense!
But why are there only three geese to go with five quinzanes? :-)
January 31st, 2018 12:31
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you mastered the form perfectly! And to top it off, all five quinzanes make sense!
But why are there only three geese to go with five quinzanes? :-)
January 31st, 2018 12:31
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
Fay Slimm. said:
Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps between statements and questions.
January 31st, 2018 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps between statements and questions.
January 31st, 2018 04:49
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
FineB said:
Thanks Michael a superb write.
Poignant and beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:19
FineB said:
Thanks Michael a superb write.
Poignant and beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:19
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
orchidee said:
Good quin-wotsits Michael. Second one - Erm, yes, the lights are on in the house, but is anyone home? Could apply to house, or to the \'house\' of people themselves! lol
January 31st, 2018 02:47
orchidee said:
Good quin-wotsits Michael. Second one - Erm, yes, the lights are on in the house, but is anyone home? Could apply to house, or to the \'house\' of people themselves! lol
January 31st, 2018 02:47
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and profound questions Michael.
January 31st, 2018 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and profound questions Michael.
January 31st, 2018 02:44
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and I like how you captured the trees
January 30th, 2018 13:56
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and I like how you captured the trees
January 30th, 2018 13:56
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery which classical writers knew possessed power -- great stuff your recent postings my friend.
January 30th, 2018 12:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery which classical writers knew possessed power -- great stuff your recent postings my friend.
January 30th, 2018 12:40
THE FILM I VIEWED LAST NIGHT
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes!
I love it when poets who can see beauty in puddle sometimes tell us how it is...
Bet you didn\'t put that on canvass?
January 30th, 2018 09:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes!
I love it when poets who can see beauty in puddle sometimes tell us how it is...
Bet you didn\'t put that on canvass?
January 30th, 2018 09:54
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