Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE EMPTY BEACH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I know why the beach was empty. They were all holidaying at the airport, as we said yesterday! It was so good they didn\'t want to get on the plane after all.
April 20th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I know why the beach was empty. They were all holidaying at the airport, as we said yesterday! It was so good they didn\'t want to get on the plane after all.
April 20th, 2018 01:33
THE EMPTY BEACH
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotion laden write Michael. I have seen that beach.
April 20th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotion laden write Michael. I have seen that beach.
April 20th, 2018 00:46
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
AS ONE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
SUNDAY
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
EARLY MORNING
Christina8 said:
Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!
April 19th, 2018 14:17
Christina8 said:
Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!
April 19th, 2018 14:17
EARLY MORNING
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Iām catching up on my reads! Iām going backwards...as life goes sometimes!
A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! Iāve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!
So youāre going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and donāt forget those tickets!š
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 13:39
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Iām catching up on my reads! Iām going backwards...as life goes sometimes!
A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! Iāve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!
So youāre going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and donāt forget those tickets!š
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 13:39
EARLY MORNING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2018 11:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2018 11:01
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!
April 19th, 2018 09:15
orchidee said:
The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!
April 19th, 2018 09:15
EARLY MORNING
Lorna said:
Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!
April 19th, 2018 06:06
Lorna said:
Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!
April 19th, 2018 06:06
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.
April 19th, 2018 03:13
orchidee said:
Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.
April 19th, 2018 03:13
EARLY MORNING
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for that coming trip.
April 19th, 2018 02:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for that coming trip.
April 19th, 2018 02:11
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
Where ya going? Bognor by plane?! They say Margate\'s the No.1 dirge spot now. Apologies to folk living in either place. A fine write and pic Michael.
April 19th, 2018 01:42
orchidee said:
Where ya going? Bognor by plane?! They say Margate\'s the No.1 dirge spot now. Apologies to folk living in either place. A fine write and pic Michael.
April 19th, 2018 01:42
SUNDAY
Christina8 said:
Very nice rhyming poem, enjoyed it very much. Love Sundays! Also loved the picture of your Anemone. Hopefully soon enough I shall see flowers!
April 18th, 2018 20:33
Christina8 said:
Very nice rhyming poem, enjoyed it very much. Love Sundays! Also loved the picture of your Anemone. Hopefully soon enough I shall see flowers!
April 18th, 2018 20:33
SUNDAY
Lorna said:
I disagree! I think you caught the whole of the day....... it all runs beautifully and picks up all the pieces of life on a Sunday........ (although here there are no fathers out doing their own gardens - that\'s why they have to work until 10 pm so they can pay the gardeners - fathers were always doing their own gardening when I was young - oh well their loss)............ I love the picture of the diddly plunkit.......
April 18th, 2018 05:04
Lorna said:
I disagree! I think you caught the whole of the day....... it all runs beautifully and picks up all the pieces of life on a Sunday........ (although here there are no fathers out doing their own gardens - that\'s why they have to work until 10 pm so they can pay the gardeners - fathers were always doing their own gardening when I was young - oh well their loss)............ I love the picture of the diddly plunkit.......
April 18th, 2018 05:04
SUNDAY
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes Sunday is many a place. Love the picture of your gorgeous Anemone Pulsatilla .
April 18th, 2018 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes Sunday is many a place. Love the picture of your gorgeous Anemone Pulsatilla .
April 18th, 2018 03:28
SUNDAY
Goldfinch60 said:
A good write about Sundays Michael. They were always special but not quite the same nowadays.
April 18th, 2018 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
A good write about Sundays Michael. They were always special but not quite the same nowadays.
April 18th, 2018 01:31
SUNDAY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic still M. Is this a quinze-wotsit or whatever? Any more brilliantly inspired troisaine thingys?!
April 18th, 2018 01:28
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic still M. Is this a quinze-wotsit or whatever? Any more brilliantly inspired troisaine thingys?!
April 18th, 2018 01:28
AS ONE
Christina8 said:
Great job on this especially with the rhyme! And as always, love the picture of the flowers!
April 17th, 2018 17:15
Christina8 said:
Great job on this especially with the rhyme! And as always, love the picture of the flowers!
April 17th, 2018 17:15
AS ONE
Lorna said:
Love the simplicity - the whole cycle of beauty, love and marriage wrapped up in a few lines....... are your flowers a form of aster?
April 17th, 2018 06:15
Lorna said:
Love the simplicity - the whole cycle of beauty, love and marriage wrapped up in a few lines....... are your flowers a form of aster?
April 17th, 2018 06:15
AS ONE
Nicholas Browning said:
One of these days I\'m going to conjure up a new type of free verse ballad. When I stop being lazy! Enough about me. This is simply wonderful sir. It gets better every time.
April 17th, 2018 04:29
Nicholas Browning said:
One of these days I\'m going to conjure up a new type of free verse ballad. When I stop being lazy! Enough about me. This is simply wonderful sir. It gets better every time.
April 17th, 2018 04:29
AS ONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
April 17th, 2018 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
April 17th, 2018 03:06
AS ONE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
April 17th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
April 17th, 2018 01:45
AS ONE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
April 17th, 2018 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
April 17th, 2018 01:05
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
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