Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICKS 46, 47, and 48
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic Michael. There\'s a church in our town, dating from 12th Century - old exterior, modern interior. Cries of \'gasp, shock, horror\', from some who expected to find it \'old\' inside too!
January 21st, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic Michael. There\'s a church in our town, dating from 12th Century - old exterior, modern interior. Cries of \'gasp, shock, horror\', from some who expected to find it \'old\' inside too!
January 21st, 2018 03:01
LIMERICKS 46, 47, and 48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Michael, especially the second one.
We had the pews in our Church removed back in 2003, again after much discussion but it seems to work for us and it is a so much flexible space.
January 21st, 2018 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Michael, especially the second one.
We had the pews in our Church removed back in 2003, again after much discussion but it seems to work for us and it is a so much flexible space.
January 21st, 2018 02:49
LIMERICKS 46, 47, and 48
FredPeyer said:
Hillarious, Michael! Love them! All three are so good, I can\'t make up my mind about which one I like the most. In the end it is between one and two, with two edging one by a very very narrow margin!
You are a master! And that church painting ain\'t bad either!
January 21st, 2018 02:14
FredPeyer said:
Hillarious, Michael! Love them! All three are so good, I can\'t make up my mind about which one I like the most. In the end it is between one and two, with two edging one by a very very narrow margin!
You are a master! And that church painting ain\'t bad either!
January 21st, 2018 02:14
THREE LITTLE COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the visual ~ exactly how our local wood looked after the snow ~ BLEAK ! BRIAN ~ The couplets tell some home truths ! 1. Michael is able to cope without Charity Shops 2. Ladies are better able to cope wit Pain than Men (very true !) 3. In the UK ~ Summer is always the Season of JOY ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for your daily dose !
January 20th, 2018 19:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the visual ~ exactly how our local wood looked after the snow ~ BLEAK ! BRIAN ~ The couplets tell some home truths ! 1. Michael is able to cope without Charity Shops 2. Ladies are better able to cope wit Pain than Men (very true !) 3. In the UK ~ Summer is always the Season of JOY ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for your daily dose !
January 20th, 2018 19:41
THREE LITTLE COUPLETS
FredPeyer said:
You really are multi-tasking, Michael! You write poems, paint, listen to music and watch TV, all at the same time!!! Kudos!
Oh, btw, love the painting and really, really do like the shorties!
January 20th, 2018 18:21
FredPeyer said:
You really are multi-tasking, Michael! You write poems, paint, listen to music and watch TV, all at the same time!!! Kudos!
Oh, btw, love the painting and really, really do like the shorties!
January 20th, 2018 18:21
LUMBER
FineB said:
Thanks Michael.
A superb write.
Trees a symbol of infinite natural beauty destroyed by man.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:50
FineB said:
Thanks Michael.
A superb write.
Trees a symbol of infinite natural beauty destroyed by man.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:50
THREE LITTLE COUPLETS
Lorna said:
Especially love the last stanza! Very good!
January 20th, 2018 04:52
Lorna said:
Especially love the last stanza! Very good!
January 20th, 2018 04:52
THREE LITTLE COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Three meaningful couplets Michael.
I can see things in the artwork, it will need a great deal of concentration but there is much to see in it.
January 20th, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Three meaningful couplets Michael.
I can see things in the artwork, it will need a great deal of concentration but there is much to see in it.
January 20th, 2018 01:51
LUMBER
lasergraph said:
The words, \"Tear down paradise and put up a parking lot\" come to mind. Great words and great art, I always enjoy seeing as well as reading. Keep \'em coming.
January 19th, 2018 15:28
lasergraph said:
The words, \"Tear down paradise and put up a parking lot\" come to mind. Great words and great art, I always enjoy seeing as well as reading. Keep \'em coming.
January 19th, 2018 15:28
LUMBER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Go chop an oak ~ an elm a pine
But save old Slippery ~ rhere that\'s mine
It\'s the only tree my wife can\'t climb
WOODMAN spare that tree for ME !
Thanks for caring MIKE ~ Deforestation not only spoils the vienluw ~ it destroy the PLANET ~ Only 10% of the UK is forested ~ In the USA it is 50% but don\'t tell TRUMP ~ he\'ll chop it down and build timber houses ! Yours BRIAN ~ A very apposite PAINTING
January 19th, 2018 12:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Go chop an oak ~ an elm a pine
But save old Slippery ~ rhere that\'s mine
It\'s the only tree my wife can\'t climb
WOODMAN spare that tree for ME !
Thanks for caring MIKE ~ Deforestation not only spoils the vienluw ~ it destroy the PLANET ~ Only 10% of the UK is forested ~ In the USA it is 50% but don\'t tell TRUMP ~ he\'ll chop it down and build timber houses ! Yours BRIAN ~ A very apposite PAINTING
January 19th, 2018 12:46
LUMBER
Louis Gibbs said:
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees are a renewable resource, unlike oil and coal. Good write, Michael!
January 19th, 2018 09:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees are a renewable resource, unlike oil and coal. Good write, Michael!
January 19th, 2018 09:41
LUMBER
orchidee said:
Plus the old mystery - If a tree fell in a wood, and no one was there, would the tree make a noise as it fell? Hhmmm.
January 19th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
Plus the old mystery - If a tree fell in a wood, and no one was there, would the tree make a noise as it fell? Hhmmm.
January 19th, 2018 02:43
LUMBER
orchidee said:
A good write and true unfortunately. Trees there for many years - then gone in a moment.
Meanwhile - lumber - or lumbered with me singing?! lol.
January 19th, 2018 02:42
orchidee said:
A good write and true unfortunately. Trees there for many years - then gone in a moment.
Meanwhile - lumber - or lumbered with me singing?! lol.
January 19th, 2018 02:42
LUMBER
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t know how you do it day after day!
January 19th, 2018 02:18
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t know how you do it day after day!
January 19th, 2018 02:18
LUMBER
Goldfinch60 said:
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world.
Beautiful artwork.
January 19th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world.
Beautiful artwork.
January 19th, 2018 02:05
CAUSATION
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but hey, it\'s true!) I would love to give my enemy (if I had one) an enema, just to see him suffer!
January 18th, 2018 16:57
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but hey, it\'s true!) I would love to give my enemy (if I had one) an enema, just to see him suffer!
January 18th, 2018 16:57
CAUSATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ CAUSE & EFFECT ~ Love the abstract \"Snowy Village !\" Cause \"Snowfall\" effect \"Winter Wonderland\" As far(t) as the Poem is concerned is was ever thus ! BRIAN
January 18th, 2018 12:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ CAUSE & EFFECT ~ Love the abstract \"Snowy Village !\" Cause \"Snowfall\" effect \"Winter Wonderland\" As far(t) as the Poem is concerned is was ever thus ! BRIAN
January 18th, 2018 12:38
CAUSATION
lasergraph said:
Enemy and enema are both a pain in the a$$. I always love your short but to the point writes and the art as well.
January 18th, 2018 12:30
lasergraph said:
Enemy and enema are both a pain in the a$$. I always love your short but to the point writes and the art as well.
January 18th, 2018 12:30
CAUSATION
orchidee said:
That enema can seem like an enemy. Then it links to gas and discharge! heehee. In fact I can see now how the whole poem is linked!
January 18th, 2018 09:01
orchidee said:
That enema can seem like an enemy. Then it links to gas and discharge! heehee. In fact I can see now how the whole poem is linked!
January 18th, 2018 09:01
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this hark back and look forward with love as its irrepressible subject. First class write.
January 18th, 2018 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this hark back and look forward with love as its irrepressible subject. First class write.
January 18th, 2018 04:58
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought diction. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Michael.
January 17th, 2018 23:59
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought diction. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Michael.
January 17th, 2018 23:59
LOVE\'S CYCLE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices, incredible flow, and so much meaning and truth. That formula one car has been replaced by a bicycle, but hey, we are still getting around! :-)
January 17th, 2018 11:26
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices, incredible flow, and so much meaning and truth. That formula one car has been replaced by a bicycle, but hey, we are still getting around! :-)
January 17th, 2018 11:26
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Louis Gibbs said:
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph into a mellow memory, indeed. Well expressed, Michael!
January 17th, 2018 09:22
Louis Gibbs said:
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph into a mellow memory, indeed. Well expressed, Michael!
January 17th, 2018 09:22
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21
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