Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NEW RESOLVE
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Michael.
\'her doubts fell into naked space\'
Great choice of words.
December 7th, 2017 19:56
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Michael.
\'her doubts fell into naked space\'
Great choice of words.
December 7th, 2017 19:56
NEW RESOLVE
MendedFences27 said:
Well, he finally won her heart, and putting all the troubles of the past behind them, they set off \"hand in hand\" to face the future together. That\'s what I saw in this presentation of periphrastic poetry. In other words, I liked your poem . Terrific artwork too. - Phil A.
December 7th, 2017 16:54
MendedFences27 said:
Well, he finally won her heart, and putting all the troubles of the past behind them, they set off \"hand in hand\" to face the future together. That\'s what I saw in this presentation of periphrastic poetry. In other words, I liked your poem . Terrific artwork too. - Phil A.
December 7th, 2017 16:54
NEW RESOLVE
Fay Slimm. said:
A splendidly presented tale of misfortune and how hand in hand two lovers can scorn its ways - - great clarity in the artwork too. Many thanks MIchael for sharing your talent each day .
December 7th, 2017 13:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A splendidly presented tale of misfortune and how hand in hand two lovers can scorn its ways - - great clarity in the artwork too. Many thanks MIchael for sharing your talent each day .
December 7th, 2017 13:34
NEW RESOLVE
myself and me said:
It seems all the hotels have booked for the season, the couple still wondering around in the town. Try to think of what kind of misfortunes path did they through.
December 7th, 2017 11:45
myself and me said:
It seems all the hotels have booked for the season, the couple still wondering around in the town. Try to think of what kind of misfortunes path did they through.
December 7th, 2017 11:45
NEW RESOLVE
Louis Gibbs said:
A watercolor of uncommon beauty ... a poem of uncommon verbiage. Enjoyed them both, Michael!
December 7th, 2017 08:32
Louis Gibbs said:
A watercolor of uncommon beauty ... a poem of uncommon verbiage. Enjoyed them both, Michael!
December 7th, 2017 08:32
NEW RESOLVE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I\'ve resolved to get the dictionary out with this lot!
December 7th, 2017 02:51
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I\'ve resolved to get the dictionary out with this lot!
December 7th, 2017 02:51
NEW RESOLVE
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Andy - it\'s the Square in Market Harborough - always painting the town as pictures of it prove so popular.
December 7th, 2017 01:22
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Andy - it\'s the Square in Market Harborough - always painting the town as pictures of it prove so popular.
December 7th, 2017 01:22
NEW RESOLVE
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, such power within it. Going forward despite past past misfortunes is the way I read it.
This is the way life should be look ahead to the positive.
Good artwork as well - which town is this one.
December 7th, 2017 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, such power within it. Going forward despite past past misfortunes is the way I read it.
This is the way life should be look ahead to the positive.
Good artwork as well - which town is this one.
December 7th, 2017 01:18
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
myself and me said:
See the couple in this paint again.
Ha, Ha, Ha, I love the poem, so funny.
December 6th, 2017 17:33
myself and me said:
See the couple in this paint again.
Ha, Ha, Ha, I love the poem, so funny.
December 6th, 2017 17:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
FredPeyer said:
Well done (again) Michael! If I had to choose one of the three, it would probably be number two!
December 6th, 2017 12:50
FredPeyer said:
Well done (again) Michael! If I had to choose one of the three, it would probably be number two!
December 6th, 2017 12:50
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I\'m back from GERMANY after 4 years in STALAG LUFT 3 ~ We built a plane to escape but with 54 passengers we didn\'t get lift off ! The Komandant gave us all Gluwein und Bratwurst for trying ! Love you odes ~ Nursery Rhymes are always good fodder for a parody ! Love your painting ~ My poem is about \'OUSES today ~ please check ~ Thanks BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 10:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I\'m back from GERMANY after 4 years in STALAG LUFT 3 ~ We built a plane to escape but with 54 passengers we didn\'t get lift off ! The Komandant gave us all Gluwein und Bratwurst for trying ! Love you odes ~ Nursery Rhymes are always good fodder for a parody ! Love your painting ~ My poem is about \'OUSES today ~ please check ~ Thanks BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 10:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Louis Gibbs said:
Number two, hands down! An adult nursery rhyme ... love it, Michael!
December 6th, 2017 08:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Number two, hands down! An adult nursery rhyme ... love it, Michael!
December 6th, 2017 08:58
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Super super. ...superb!!
December 6th, 2017 07:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Super super. ...superb!!
December 6th, 2017 07:24
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Fay Slimm. said:
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on the original nursery rhymes - I love your sense of humour - - and another adorable picture to add to the pleasure of visiting your page.
December 6th, 2017 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on the original nursery rhymes - I love your sense of humour - - and another adorable picture to add to the pleasure of visiting your page.
December 6th, 2017 05:37
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set me into giggle-fits - you are so clever at writing the slightly sensuous - - brilliantly presented watercolour too. Saved these little naughties to read again.
December 6th, 2017 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set me into giggle-fits - you are so clever at writing the slightly sensuous - - brilliantly presented watercolour too. Saved these little naughties to read again.
December 6th, 2017 05:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Accidental Poet said:
Now that sailor needs a shower. Nice Michael.
December 6th, 2017 04:56
Accidental Poet said:
Now that sailor needs a shower. Nice Michael.
December 6th, 2017 04:56
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
myself and me said:
Beautiful paint. Can not help laughing while read the poem.
December 5th, 2017 18:13
myself and me said:
Beautiful paint. Can not help laughing while read the poem.
December 5th, 2017 18:13
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I loved these Adversary Rhymes.
Naughty and ever so funny.
Beautiful watercolour.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 15:33
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I loved these Adversary Rhymes.
Naughty and ever so funny.
Beautiful watercolour.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 15:33
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
FredPeyer said:
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound very \'British\' (sausages in a pie? For real?, pub, and the never-ending rain!) Hey, I am not knocking it, just observing! :-)
December 5th, 2017 03:39
FredPeyer said:
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound very \'British\' (sausages in a pie? For real?, pub, and the never-ending rain!) Hey, I am not knocking it, just observing! :-)
December 5th, 2017 03:39
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
orchidee said:
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this when I was young - and up to about age 18. lol.
December 5th, 2017 02:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this when I was young - and up to about age 18. lol.
December 5th, 2017 02:55
GUILT
myself and me said:
lovely paint, could be a nice place to visit. By watching the paint, it could unload the burden of guilty.
December 4th, 2017 18:55
myself and me said:
lovely paint, could be a nice place to visit. By watching the paint, it could unload the burden of guilty.
December 4th, 2017 18:55
GUILT
Louis Gibbs said:
I fully appreciate the beautiful watercolor, Michael. I\'m a bit lost on the poem, however. Fred\'s comments helped a little, but it somehow doesn\'t register with me ... my shortcoming I\'m sure, and I apologize.
I will continue to ponder.
December 4th, 2017 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
I fully appreciate the beautiful watercolor, Michael. I\'m a bit lost on the poem, however. Fred\'s comments helped a little, but it somehow doesn\'t register with me ... my shortcoming I\'m sure, and I apologize.
I will continue to ponder.
December 4th, 2017 10:00
GUILT
Christina8 said:
A very deep write. Very good in so few words! Absolutely beautiful picture of the church scene!
December 4th, 2017 07:48
Christina8 said:
A very deep write. Very good in so few words! Absolutely beautiful picture of the church scene!
December 4th, 2017 07:48
THE CONFORMIST
FredPeyer said:
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience, where we look at ourselves and our lives from a different perspective, free of all constraints, limitations, and conventions.
Great poem, great rhyming too!
December 4th, 2017 04:13
FredPeyer said:
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience, where we look at ourselves and our lives from a different perspective, free of all constraints, limitations, and conventions.
Great poem, great rhyming too!
December 4th, 2017 04:13
GUILT
orchidee said:
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too much!
December 4th, 2017 03:30
orchidee said:
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too much!
December 4th, 2017 03:30
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