Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN
February 12th, 2018 03:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN
February 12th, 2018 03:42
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Laura🌻 said:
Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!
Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:32
Laura🌻 said:
Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!
Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:32
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dusk arising said:
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.
February 12th, 2018 03:22
dusk arising said:
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.
February 12th, 2018 03:22
NOW FARP THE SHOTS
Laura🌻 said:
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:20
Laura🌻 said:
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:20
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orchidee said:
Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!
February 12th, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!
February 12th, 2018 02:40
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Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very powerful write Michael, I have read it several times and I find it so meaningful every time I have read it.
February 12th, 2018 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very powerful write Michael, I have read it several times and I find it so meaningful every time I have read it.
February 12th, 2018 02:28
WHO I AM
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Outstanding.....this is called the liberty of Mind!
February 11th, 2018 09:32
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Outstanding.....this is called the liberty of Mind!
February 11th, 2018 09:32
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dusk arising said:
i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over the mable.
Such writing deserves a motherment gealth warming.
February 11th, 2018 08:24
dusk arising said:
i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over the mable.
Such writing deserves a motherment gealth warming.
February 11th, 2018 08:24
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orchidee said:
Have to stamp out \'farping\' on the \'Nothing-ever-too-exciting-must-ever-happen\' Committee! lol.
February 11th, 2018 05:13
orchidee said:
Have to stamp out \'farping\' on the \'Nothing-ever-too-exciting-must-ever-happen\' Committee! lol.
February 11th, 2018 05:13
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a Sunday Morning smile ! SPOONERISMS have always been feature of English Humour & Verse ! Our ENGLISH TEACHER was telling us of a CAT that fell from the window of the tenth story of a Tower Block. Was it hurt one innocent third former enquired ? Oh NO ~ Mister Spinks replied (much to the amusement of the rest of the class) \"He just POPPED on his DRAWERS and ran off\" I often use SPOONERISMS in general speech ! Yours BRIAN
February 11th, 2018 05:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a Sunday Morning smile ! SPOONERISMS have always been feature of English Humour & Verse ! Our ENGLISH TEACHER was telling us of a CAT that fell from the window of the tenth story of a Tower Block. Was it hurt one innocent third former enquired ? Oh NO ~ Mister Spinks replied (much to the amusement of the rest of the class) \"He just POPPED on his DRAWERS and ran off\" I often use SPOONERISMS in general speech ! Yours BRIAN
February 11th, 2018 05:05
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Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t do thinking any more - it\'s dangerous.
Sorted this write out by just saying it and the correct words just seem to come to mind. Mever write Clichael.
February 11th, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t do thinking any more - it\'s dangerous.
Sorted this write out by just saying it and the correct words just seem to come to mind. Mever write Clichael.
February 11th, 2018 01:51
WHO I AM
FredPeyer said:
While I love the way you write, Michael, I have to say that I never got lost so I never had to go look for myself and therefore never found myself either!
(Special note: English is my 4th language, so please overlook any mistakes!)
February 10th, 2018 20:07
FredPeyer said:
While I love the way you write, Michael, I have to say that I never got lost so I never had to go look for myself and therefore never found myself either!
(Special note: English is my 4th language, so please overlook any mistakes!)
February 10th, 2018 20:07
WHO I AM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BACK ~ Uncle Mike ~ pleased you found yourself ! Have missed your ODD ODES and your helpful comments on mine ! I love wood grain ~ I have my Grandparents \"old\" ERCOL table and chairs in my flat ~ from the 1950\'s ~ they improve with age ! I love \"grain sculpting\" and a FISH like that would have a price tag of £100 @ Snape Maltings ~ Yours BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 09:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BACK ~ Uncle Mike ~ pleased you found yourself ! Have missed your ODD ODES and your helpful comments on mine ! I love wood grain ~ I have my Grandparents \"old\" ERCOL table and chairs in my flat ~ from the 1950\'s ~ they improve with age ! I love \"grain sculpting\" and a FISH like that would have a price tag of £100 @ Snape Maltings ~ Yours BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 09:52
WHO I AM
Fay Slimm. said:
Finding oneself is seen as freedom indeed in this modern world Michael - -wonder where everyone goes before that momentous discovery eh ? - - - good to see you posting again my friend and I love that sculpture with such well chosen old wooden rings around the fishy eyes.
February 10th, 2018 05:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Finding oneself is seen as freedom indeed in this modern world Michael - -wonder where everyone goes before that momentous discovery eh ? - - - good to see you posting again my friend and I love that sculpture with such well chosen old wooden rings around the fishy eyes.
February 10th, 2018 05:06
WHO I AM
Goldfinch60 said:
Like I too dislike bad English like. So especially like those sentences like that start with so like. So like I get annoyed like, so where is good language like.
Where\' do those apostr\'phes go like. So do the\'y go where\' ever you want like.
Pritty soon speling wil go th saim whey!
February 10th, 2018 04:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Like I too dislike bad English like. So especially like those sentences like that start with so like. So like I get annoyed like, so where is good language like.
Where\' do those apostr\'phes go like. So do the\'y go where\' ever you want like.
Pritty soon speling wil go th saim whey!
February 10th, 2018 04:17
WHO I AM
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Where was you hiding, to be able to find yourself? How did you know it was you when you found yourself?!
We must know the answers to these important questions! lol.
February 10th, 2018 02:39
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Where was you hiding, to be able to find yourself? How did you know it was you when you found yourself?!
We must know the answers to these important questions! lol.
February 10th, 2018 02:39
WHO I AM
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is wonderful, may you always be that way.
February 10th, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is wonderful, may you always be that way.
February 10th, 2018 01:32
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
FredPeyer said:
Your shorties are so good, Michael, you don\'t have to apologize for posting them twice. Post the as many times as you like, they are always a pleasure to read!
February 3rd, 2018 13:12
FredPeyer said:
Your shorties are so good, Michael, you don\'t have to apologize for posting them twice. Post the as many times as you like, they are always a pleasure to read!
February 3rd, 2018 13:12
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
orchidee said:
I seem to get longer! Not on purpose, but I dunno when to stop sometimes! lol. Well, I came across some old hymns. One had 33 verses. I\'m gonna sing them all. heehee.
February 3rd, 2018 08:59
orchidee said:
I seem to get longer! Not on purpose, but I dunno when to stop sometimes! lol. Well, I came across some old hymns. One had 33 verses. I\'m gonna sing them all. heehee.
February 3rd, 2018 08:59
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
dusk arising said:
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i guess we all have jottings of ideas which we hadnt developed, im thinking of a few ideas which i jotted down whilst working on another piece. I\'m inspired.
February 3rd, 2018 05:49
dusk arising said:
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i guess we all have jottings of ideas which we hadnt developed, im thinking of a few ideas which i jotted down whilst working on another piece. I\'m inspired.
February 3rd, 2018 05:49
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Jooles said:
I love cabbage , sprouts and gravy...id have a feast 🤣
February 2nd, 2018 19:47
Jooles said:
I love cabbage , sprouts and gravy...id have a feast 🤣
February 2nd, 2018 19:47
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
dusk arising said:
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like these
Your long necked bird is a farce
For he could kiss his own a.....
And generally do as he pleased
alternative last line:-
But i\'d advise him not to sniff the breeze
February 2nd, 2018 18:15
dusk arising said:
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like these
Your long necked bird is a farce
For he could kiss his own a.....
And generally do as he pleased
alternative last line:-
But i\'d advise him not to sniff the breeze
February 2nd, 2018 18:15
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure nonsense\', this is humor 1st class and the result of a great fertile mind!!!
February 2nd, 2018 14:26
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure nonsense\', this is humor 1st class and the result of a great fertile mind!!!
February 2nd, 2018 14:26
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor bird\'s neck has grown to get away from the wind\'s double- odour !!! A great nonsense rhyme Michael along with the clever sketch.
February 2nd, 2018 07:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor bird\'s neck has grown to get away from the wind\'s double- odour !!! A great nonsense rhyme Michael along with the clever sketch.
February 2nd, 2018 07:49
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