Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
BENEATH A WANING MOON
Frank Prem said:
My word, M, what a challenge. Reads nicely to my ear, so I\'m thinking you\'ve managed it well.
August 19th, 2017 00:06
Frank Prem said:
My word, M, what a challenge. Reads nicely to my ear, so I\'m thinking you\'ve managed it well.
August 19th, 2017 00:06
A MERRY LUNCH
myself and me said:
It\'s too late for today. I shall have such kind of lunch tomorrow.
I love this group of paint. This one and the one from yesterday.
August 18th, 2017 18:52
myself and me said:
It\'s too late for today. I shall have such kind of lunch tomorrow.
I love this group of paint. This one and the one from yesterday.
August 18th, 2017 18:52
A MERRY LUNCH
sue.evans said:
Enjoyed this - the rhythm of the poem reflects the jovial scene you have created.
August 18th, 2017 17:15
sue.evans said:
Enjoyed this - the rhythm of the poem reflects the jovial scene you have created.
August 18th, 2017 17:15
A MERRY LUNCH
orchidee said:
You had that lunch by now?! Ccooeeee M. lol. (put that sherry down, Orchi, dashing in here with mad comments!) lol.
August 18th, 2017 11:32
orchidee said:
You had that lunch by now?! Ccooeeee M. lol. (put that sherry down, Orchi, dashing in here with mad comments!) lol.
August 18th, 2017 11:32
A MERRY LUNCH
Louis Gibbs said:
And a merry lunch it was! Certainly beats a burger at McDonalds. Enjoyed being there for it, Michael, made possible by this fine poem!
August 18th, 2017 10:14
Louis Gibbs said:
And a merry lunch it was! Certainly beats a burger at McDonalds. Enjoyed being there for it, Michael, made possible by this fine poem!
August 18th, 2017 10:14
LIMERICK No 41
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks m&m - mine have quite electric blue arms and the front is grey - and I wear them on my nose !!
August 18th, 2017 08:25
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks m&m - mine have quite electric blue arms and the front is grey - and I wear them on my nose !!
August 18th, 2017 08:25
A MERRY LUNCH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Come Landlord fill the flowing bowl .................... ! Love the picture of ETON MESS ! The nature and behaviour of the Party reminded me of Old Etonians ! Tnanks BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 07:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Come Landlord fill the flowing bowl .................... ! Love the picture of ETON MESS ! The nature and behaviour of the Party reminded me of Old Etonians ! Tnanks BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 07:35
A MERRY LUNCH
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - after reading the lighthearted flow of this fun-ballad how I wish I had been a fly on the wall in that Ol\' Green Horse Inn.
August 18th, 2017 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - after reading the lighthearted flow of this fun-ballad how I wish I had been a fly on the wall in that Ol\' Green Horse Inn.
August 18th, 2017 05:12
A MERRY LUNCH
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic, at one minute into the UK day!
August 18th, 2017 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic, at one minute into the UK day!
August 18th, 2017 01:57
A MERRY LUNCH
Goldfinch60 said:
And a good time was had by all, including those who read these words.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 18th, 2017 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
And a good time was had by all, including those who read these words.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 18th, 2017 01:04
A MERRY LUNCH
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I like this poem. Reminds me so much of the get-togethers we had in Switzerland.
And, as my dad so aptly used to say:
You gave me food, you gave me drink, if you want to give me something more, bring money!
(That was when he was feeling no pain anymore!)
August 18th, 2017 00:48
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I like this poem. Reminds me so much of the get-togethers we had in Switzerland.
And, as my dad so aptly used to say:
You gave me food, you gave me drink, if you want to give me something more, bring money!
(That was when he was feeling no pain anymore!)
August 18th, 2017 00:48
A MERRY LUNCH
Nicholas Browning said:
Unique little tale of some merry men having some fun. Nice. Rhyme scheme is old fashioned, but it fits. Bravo.
August 18th, 2017 00:13
Nicholas Browning said:
Unique little tale of some merry men having some fun. Nice. Rhyme scheme is old fashioned, but it fits. Bravo.
August 18th, 2017 00:13
LIMERICK No 41
myself and me said:
Ha, ha, I used to have a specs in red frame. Reading this, just save me from my long day. Love the color in the paint.
August 17th, 2017 20:27
myself and me said:
Ha, ha, I used to have a specs in red frame. Reading this, just save me from my long day. Love the color in the paint.
August 17th, 2017 20:27
LIMERICK No 41
Louis Gibbs said:
Your art drew me in ... I love it!
Cute limerick too! Thanks for sharing, Michael.
August 17th, 2017 07:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Your art drew me in ... I love it!
Cute limerick too! Thanks for sharing, Michael.
August 17th, 2017 07:39
LIMERICK No 41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Your abstracts are mind blowing ! I looked at this one in a mirror and i could clearly discern a deconstructed HERR KOBLENZ ~ His specs ~ red framed ~ his head and all ! I liked the LIM as well !
If the frame of your Specs is red
Then never wear them in bed
Because when you arise
To your spouses surprise
You will have ~ big red rings
round your eyes !
Keep us all amused ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 05:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Your abstracts are mind blowing ! I looked at this one in a mirror and i could clearly discern a deconstructed HERR KOBLENZ ~ His specs ~ red framed ~ his head and all ! I liked the LIM as well !
If the frame of your Specs is red
Then never wear them in bed
Because when you arise
To your spouses surprise
You will have ~ big red rings
round your eyes !
Keep us all amused ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 05:48
LIMERICK No 41
burning-embers said:
He couldnt decide the best browsers, so he kept two or three in his trousers,
but at time for bed, he watched videos instead, with voluptuous girls in big blouses.....
spur of the moment fun m8
August 17th, 2017 03:54
burning-embers said:
He couldnt decide the best browsers, so he kept two or three in his trousers,
but at time for bed, he watched videos instead, with voluptuous girls in big blouses.....
spur of the moment fun m8
August 17th, 2017 03:54
LIMERICK No 41
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael. As a Swiss I am so happy Koblenz is in Germany and not Switzerland! So the joke is not on us. The Swiss don\'t wear em on top of their heads, they hide it in the cheese! (That is what the big holes in Emmentaler are for!)
Seriously, I love your limericks!
August 17th, 2017 03:24
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael. As a Swiss I am so happy Koblenz is in Germany and not Switzerland! So the joke is not on us. The Swiss don\'t wear em on top of their heads, they hide it in the cheese! (That is what the big holes in Emmentaler are for!)
Seriously, I love your limericks!
August 17th, 2017 03:24
LIMERICK No 41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 17th, 2017 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 17th, 2017 01:50
THE DESTITUTE
myself and me said:
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours better. By the way, are you post your work by watching the clock?
August 16th, 2017 18:52
myself and me said:
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours better. By the way, are you post your work by watching the clock?
August 16th, 2017 18:52
THE DESTITUTE
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33
THE DESTITUTE
orchidee said:
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine, write, and, pic, M. No need to overdo commas, Orchi! lol. Cooeee, first UK poet of today.
August 16th, 2017 02:01
orchidee said:
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine, write, and, pic, M. No need to overdo commas, Orchi! lol. Cooeee, first UK poet of today.
August 16th, 2017 02:01
THE DESTITUTE
Nicholas Browning said:
The most pleasant thing about this is probably the lack of commas. It sets the pace for a reader individually. Nice.
August 16th, 2017 01:12
Nicholas Browning said:
The most pleasant thing about this is probably the lack of commas. It sets the pace for a reader individually. Nice.
August 16th, 2017 01:12
THE DESTITUTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10
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