Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ An elegant PICTURE & POEM to welcome a new DAY ~ AMEN Please check my ANGEL POEM ~ Yours BRIAN
August 9th, 2017 03:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ An elegant PICTURE & POEM to welcome a new DAY ~ AMEN Please check my ANGEL POEM ~ Yours BRIAN
August 9th, 2017 03:39
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, 14 minutes into the poet-s day on here! (whatever time that is in the UK).
August 9th, 2017 02:13
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, 14 minutes into the poet-s day on here! (whatever time that is in the UK).
August 9th, 2017 02:13
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle flow of this read engenders a quiet peace. Fine work Michael.
August 9th, 2017 02:00
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle flow of this read engenders a quiet peace. Fine work Michael.
August 9th, 2017 02:00
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael, a pleasure to read at 6:30 in the morning.
August 9th, 2017 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael, a pleasure to read at 6:30 in the morning.
August 9th, 2017 00:29
Dreamers
WriteBeLight said:
Briefly beautiful and very bucolic picture Michael.
August 8th, 2017 15:48
WriteBeLight said:
Briefly beautiful and very bucolic picture Michael.
August 8th, 2017 15:48
Dreamers
malubotelho said:
Lovely three lines. Nothing better than a pier over the ocean to look at the stars. Hand in hand with love.
August 8th, 2017 08:48
malubotelho said:
Lovely three lines. Nothing better than a pier over the ocean to look at the stars. Hand in hand with love.
August 8th, 2017 08:48
Dreamers
Louis Gibbs said:
The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I couldn\'t stop looking at it. Not only the detail, but the perspective you employed. Love it, Michael!
August 8th, 2017 08:08
Louis Gibbs said:
The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I couldn\'t stop looking at it. Not only the detail, but the perspective you employed. Love it, Michael!
August 8th, 2017 08:08
Dreamers
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone for all your kind words - so much appreciated
August 8th, 2017 05:13
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone for all your kind words - so much appreciated
August 8th, 2017 05:13
Dreamers
Fay Slimm. said:
So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork too.
August 8th, 2017 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork too.
August 8th, 2017 04:16
Dreamers
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Painting ~ Superb Senryu ~ delighted my Morning ! Mine is also a Love Poem today ~ Yours BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 03:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Painting ~ Superb Senryu ~ delighted my Morning ! Mine is also a Love Poem today ~ Yours BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 03:52
Dreamers
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
Dreamers
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
malubotelho said:
The best for me is the second. Not cê writing Michael. And your painting is superb.
August 7th, 2017 14:05
malubotelho said:
The best for me is the second. Not cê writing Michael. And your painting is superb.
August 7th, 2017 14:05
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it! You made me take a break for too long. But that was an enjoyable moment, thank you
August 7th, 2017 07:43
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it! You made me take a break for too long. But that was an enjoyable moment, thank you
August 7th, 2017 07:43
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, like the middle one a lot, but something about the last one really intrigues me. I\'d have to say it is my favorite of the three. Kudos, Michael! Love the painting too.
August 7th, 2017 05:15
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, like the middle one a lot, but something about the last one really intrigues me. I\'d have to say it is my favorite of the three. Kudos, Michael! Love the painting too.
August 7th, 2017 05:15
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing trio of couplets here Michael - can relate to the middle one as youth is so fleeting. Lovely watercolour too.
August 7th, 2017 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing trio of couplets here Michael - can relate to the middle one as youth is so fleeting. Lovely watercolour too.
August 7th, 2017 02:45
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ LOVE CYMING RHOUPLETS ~ FOR ME THE ULTIMATE ~ Frugal Poetic Form ~ One Liners (nomally) are non~rhyming. To make COUPLET ONE into Rhyming Couplet (you did not say they rhymed !) I would suggest revision to:
In LIFE he never knew her name
In DEATH she Marble Cast became !
Now polished and with outstretched hand
She acts as an Umbrella Stand
(This couplet is optional ~ of course !)
Yours BRIAN the FUSSY !
August 7th, 2017 02:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ LOVE CYMING RHOUPLETS ~ FOR ME THE ULTIMATE ~ Frugal Poetic Form ~ One Liners (nomally) are non~rhyming. To make COUPLET ONE into Rhyming Couplet (you did not say they rhymed !) I would suggest revision to:
In LIFE he never knew her name
In DEATH she Marble Cast became !
Now polished and with outstretched hand
She acts as an Umbrella Stand
(This couplet is optional ~ of course !)
Yours BRIAN the FUSSY !
August 7th, 2017 02:12
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. Yep, first UK poet of the day again!
August 7th, 2017 01:37
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. Yep, first UK poet of the day again!
August 7th, 2017 01:37
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are good. Like the first one best.
August 7th, 2017 01:31
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are good. Like the first one best.
August 7th, 2017 01:31
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
Heather T said:
Well done, Michael. Sad three couplets! The middle is my favorite. But surely even if youth is gone, there\'s still room for new hopes and dreams!
August 7th, 2017 00:22
Heather T said:
Well done, Michael. Sad three couplets! The middle is my favorite. But surely even if youth is gone, there\'s still room for new hopes and dreams!
August 7th, 2017 00:22
LIMERICK No40
FredPeyer said:
I just love limericks, one of these days I guess I will have to try my hands on one of these. Love your writing!
August 6th, 2017 14:39
FredPeyer said:
I just love limericks, one of these days I guess I will have to try my hands on one of these. Love your writing!
August 6th, 2017 14:39
LIMERICK No40
Louis Gibbs said:
An interesting observation of myself ... the picture is quite disturbing to me? Creates strong inner anxiety. But then we all knew I was a little strange. Have you seen such a reaction to some of your work before, Michael? Curious. Love the cute limerick!
August 6th, 2017 07:44
Louis Gibbs said:
An interesting observation of myself ... the picture is quite disturbing to me? Creates strong inner anxiety. But then we all knew I was a little strange. Have you seen such a reaction to some of your work before, Michael? Curious. Love the cute limerick!
August 6th, 2017 07:44
LIMERICK No40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL out on a limb again
Polished and with outstreched hand
The Man from Tashkent
With his back slightly bent
Now acts as an Umbrella Stand
Love the picture of an exploding Bag of Cement ~
Falling off the back of a Lorry ~ in LIVERPOOL !
Your BRIAN
August 6th, 2017 02:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL out on a limb again
Polished and with outstreched hand
The Man from Tashkent
With his back slightly bent
Now acts as an Umbrella Stand
Love the picture of an exploding Bag of Cement ~
Falling off the back of a Lorry ~ in LIVERPOOL !
Your BRIAN
August 6th, 2017 02:19
LIMERICK No40
Goldfinch60 said:
Great limerick.
As for the painting I would have thought of nothing less than it creating its own way as the brush put the paint on the \'canvas\'. Abstract painting like many poems have a life of their own and the ideas do change of their own free will as the words or paint flow.
I can see another poem coming about this topic.
August 6th, 2017 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Great limerick.
As for the painting I would have thought of nothing less than it creating its own way as the brush put the paint on the \'canvas\'. Abstract painting like many poems have a life of their own and the ideas do change of their own free will as the words or paint flow.
I can see another poem coming about this topic.
August 6th, 2017 02:11
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