Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M. Ohh, I dunno if it\'s an aphor-wotsit or what it is. I wouldn\'t know in me haze of sherry-drinking! heehee.
August 26th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M. Ohh, I dunno if it\'s an aphor-wotsit or what it is. I wouldn\'t know in me haze of sherry-drinking! heehee.
August 26th, 2017 01:51
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Goldfinch60 said:
These are very good one liners Michael. I especially like 3 and 6.
I like the painting as well.
August 26th, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
These are very good one liners Michael. I especially like 3 and 6.
I like the painting as well.
August 26th, 2017 00:54
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Adam Shirley said:
So beautiful it touched me, thank you for this. Well done Michael
August 26th, 2017 00:27
Adam Shirley said:
So beautiful it touched me, thank you for this. Well done Michael
August 26th, 2017 00:27
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
These one liners and aphorisms are brilliant! Love it! Do not know which is my fav. Great painting!
August 26th, 2017 00:11
Christina8 said:
These one liners and aphorisms are brilliant! Love it! Do not know which is my fav. Great painting!
August 26th, 2017 00:11
PAST DREAMS
myself and me said:
What a coincidence. \"Short\" for Friday.
Far beyond perfect.
August 25th, 2017 11:36
myself and me said:
What a coincidence. \"Short\" for Friday.
Far beyond perfect.
August 25th, 2017 11:36
PAST DREAMS
malubotelho said:
Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.
August 25th, 2017 10:29
malubotelho said:
Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.
August 25th, 2017 10:29
PAST DREAMS
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.
August 25th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.
August 25th, 2017 01:52
PAST DREAMS
FredPeyer said:
The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)
August 25th, 2017 01:44
FredPeyer said:
The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)
August 25th, 2017 01:44
THE LETTER
myself and me said:
Hi, Early bird,
What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 14:32
myself and me said:
Hi, Early bird,
What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 14:32
THE LETTER
dusk arising said:
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.
August 24th, 2017 11:07
dusk arising said:
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.
August 24th, 2017 11:07
THE LETTER
malubotelho said:
Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍
August 24th, 2017 08:40
malubotelho said:
Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍
August 24th, 2017 08:40
THE LETTER
Louis Gibbs said:
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!
August 24th, 2017 08:07
Louis Gibbs said:
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!
August 24th, 2017 08:07
THE LETTER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 04:39
THE LETTER
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.
August 24th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.
August 24th, 2017 01:34
THE LETTER
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautifully touching write Michael.
Great picture.
August 24th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautifully touching write Michael.
Great picture.
August 24th, 2017 00:59
THE LETTER
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.
August 24th, 2017 00:26
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.
August 24th, 2017 00:26
FRESHLY COOKED
WL Schuett said:
Cool didn\'t know there were so many kinds of poems each day I seem to learn about a different form anyway I enjoyed it and the art !
August 23rd, 2017 13:32
WL Schuett said:
Cool didn\'t know there were so many kinds of poems each day I seem to learn about a different form anyway I enjoyed it and the art !
August 23rd, 2017 13:32
FRESHLY COOKED
myself and me said:
Hey, lucky soul. Freshly cooked lamb Asian way. Will try this recipe someday.
Did you paint the art with the sauce. Looks so spicy.
A true joy for eye and stomach.
August 23rd, 2017 10:42
myself and me said:
Hey, lucky soul. Freshly cooked lamb Asian way. Will try this recipe someday.
Did you paint the art with the sauce. Looks so spicy.
A true joy for eye and stomach.
August 23rd, 2017 10:42
JOURNEY\'S END
WL Schuett said:
Fine piece of writing enjoyed it very much ,
Painting is superb
August 23rd, 2017 09:23
WL Schuett said:
Fine piece of writing enjoyed it very much ,
Painting is superb
August 23rd, 2017 09:23
FRESHLY COOKED
malubotelho said:
Delicious form and food. It is really like a pot of goodness. Luckily I\'m not hungry now. Just had breakfast. Awesome poem Michael.
August 23rd, 2017 08:47
malubotelho said:
Delicious form and food. It is really like a pot of goodness. Luckily I\'m not hungry now. Just had breakfast. Awesome poem Michael.
August 23rd, 2017 08:47
FRESHLY COOKED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I admire the art both visually and in the form...
Bravo again
August 23rd, 2017 04:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I admire the art both visually and in the form...
Bravo again
August 23rd, 2017 04:08
FRESHLY COOKED
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Whether it\'s oriander or coriander, or whatever hot spice it is, I can\'t have it. Aww! I see the \'c\'. lol.
August 23rd, 2017 01:46
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Whether it\'s oriander or coriander, or whatever hot spice it is, I can\'t have it. Aww! I see the \'c\'. lol.
August 23rd, 2017 01:46
FRESHLY COOKED
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Like your wife I cook asian (and all) food from raw ingredients, I cooked an Andycurry last night and all the spices I ground from the seeds.
August 23rd, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Like your wife I cook asian (and all) food from raw ingredients, I cooked an Andycurry last night and all the spices I ground from the seeds.
August 23rd, 2017 01:30
FRESHLY COOKED
dusk arising said:
Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
August 23rd, 2017 00:35
dusk arising said:
Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
August 23rd, 2017 00:35
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