Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
AND NO ONE SITS AT TABLES
kevin browne said:
like this a lot. great write dude,
July 25th, 2017 02:08
kevin browne said:
like this a lot. great write dude,
July 25th, 2017 02:08
HAROLDS LAMENT
FredPeyer said:
Well, in prison they tell you never to pick up your soap.
July 25th, 2017 01:49
FredPeyer said:
Well, in prison they tell you never to pick up your soap.
July 25th, 2017 01:49
HAROLDS LAMENT
orchidee said:
Also - well, I\'ve heard of eyes in the back of ya head, but not an eye at the rear..........swoon! I would not have heard of that, in me sheltered life. lol.
July 25th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Also - well, I\'ve heard of eyes in the back of ya head, but not an eye at the rear..........swoon! I would not have heard of that, in me sheltered life. lol.
July 25th, 2017 01:44
HAROLDS LAMENT
orchidee said:
Yes, swoon! Erm, maybe the story has more than one fabled version? Did I tell Harold to look up, or did someone else tell him to look down, as his shoe lace was undone?! heehee.
July 25th, 2017 01:42
orchidee said:
Yes, swoon! Erm, maybe the story has more than one fabled version? Did I tell Harold to look up, or did someone else tell him to look down, as his shoe lace was undone?! heehee.
July 25th, 2017 01:42
HAROLDS LAMENT
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you once Orchi sees that last word he will swoon!
I did tell Orchi not to point up and say to Harold, what is that up there!
July 25th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you once Orchi sees that last word he will swoon!
I did tell Orchi not to point up and say to Harold, what is that up there!
July 25th, 2017 00:56
THE LIFE AHEAD
sue.evans said:
All life is a drama whether unfolding quietly or announcing to the world with whistles and bells. Your poem captures the theatre of life!
July 24th, 2017 19:15
sue.evans said:
All life is a drama whether unfolding quietly or announcing to the world with whistles and bells. Your poem captures the theatre of life!
July 24th, 2017 19:15
THE LIFE AHEAD
malubotelho said:
Awesome thoughtful short writing. Made me think. If I could make my younger son to reflect about it.
July 24th, 2017 15:26
malubotelho said:
Awesome thoughtful short writing. Made me think. If I could make my younger son to reflect about it.
July 24th, 2017 15:26
THE LIFE AHEAD
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is but a stage and we are the actors ... a theme about which I have written too, probably not as well, and embrace completely. I love this one, Michael! A concise beauty.
July 24th, 2017 09:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is but a stage and we are the actors ... a theme about which I have written too, probably not as well, and embrace completely. I love this one, Michael! A concise beauty.
July 24th, 2017 09:34
THE LIFE AHEAD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the HOSS ! Yes indeed \"All of life\'s a stage and we ~ Men & Women ~ merely players ! As Youths we rush on stage uninhibited ~ as we get older we wait apprehensive in the wings ~ forgetting our lines ! Yours BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 08:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the HOSS ! Yes indeed \"All of life\'s a stage and we ~ Men & Women ~ merely players ! As Youths we rush on stage uninhibited ~ as we get older we wait apprehensive in the wings ~ forgetting our lines ! Yours BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 08:42
THE LIFE AHEAD
Renzi said:
Wonderful. In a life were nothing is certain, anything is possible ❤
July 24th, 2017 03:34
Renzi said:
Wonderful. In a life were nothing is certain, anything is possible ❤
July 24th, 2017 03:34
THE LIFE AHEAD
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain raising can bring great things to our lives. Good write
July 24th, 2017 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain raising can bring great things to our lives. Good write
July 24th, 2017 03:24
THE LIFE AHEAD
FredPeyer said:
The sketch is outstanding, and the poem is great! But sometimes I do think that my life is more of a circus, rather than a theater.
July 24th, 2017 03:05
FredPeyer said:
The sketch is outstanding, and the poem is great! But sometimes I do think that my life is more of a circus, rather than a theater.
July 24th, 2017 03:05
THE LIFE AHEAD
Fay Slimm. said:
Youth they say is often wasted on the young - this verse indicates that in its second stanza methinks - fine words again Michael and oh that wonderful sketch. - - great shape.
July 24th, 2017 01:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Youth they say is often wasted on the young - this verse indicates that in its second stanza methinks - fine words again Michael and oh that wonderful sketch. - - great shape.
July 24th, 2017 01:49
THE LIFE AHEAD
kevin browne said:
and of course they do with the huge variation in style. we all need that stage to stand on so thanks for reminding us where we should be.
July 24th, 2017 00:07
kevin browne said:
and of course they do with the huge variation in style. we all need that stage to stand on so thanks for reminding us where we should be.
July 24th, 2017 00:07
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very beautiful indeed, both the picture and the poem, they\'re wonderful
July 23rd, 2017 12:06
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very beautiful indeed, both the picture and the poem, they\'re wonderful
July 23rd, 2017 12:06
AGE IS IN THE MIND
malubotelho said:
We can only see someone\'s age if we can see they heart. Each moment we have a different face. Beautiful poem and painting Michael.
July 21st, 2017 08:34
malubotelho said:
We can only see someone\'s age if we can see they heart. Each moment we have a different face. Beautiful poem and painting Michael.
July 21st, 2017 08:34
AGE IS IN THE MIND
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A demon trapped in the web of illusion\' ... what I see in your art piece. The three-line description on age is precise and right on! Thank you for sharing your gifts, Michael.
July 21st, 2017 07:58
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A demon trapped in the web of illusion\' ... what I see in your art piece. The three-line description on age is precise and right on! Thank you for sharing your gifts, Michael.
July 21st, 2017 07:58
AGE IS IN THE MIND
Fay Slimm. said:
How wise is this - thanks for the reminder Michael - - and for the colourful exciting abstract too.
July 21st, 2017 01:49
Fay Slimm. said:
How wise is this - thanks for the reminder Michael - - and for the colourful exciting abstract too.
July 21st, 2017 01:49
AGE IS IN THE MIND
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true. In my mind I am still in my thirties, half the age I really am.
Love the abstract - once more.
July 21st, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true. In my mind I am still in my thirties, half the age I really am.
Love the abstract - once more.
July 21st, 2017 01:42
AGE IS IN THE MIND
orchidee said:
A finw write and pic M. Yes, we\'re very old. We was there in person in 1066! lol.
July 21st, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
A finw write and pic M. Yes, we\'re very old. We was there in person in 1066! lol.
July 21st, 2017 01:34
AGE IS IN THE MIND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ \"Though the outward Man perish ~ the inner Man is renewed day by day ~ We are transformed by the daily renewal of our minds through Peace & Poetry\" Thanks for sharing. Love the scary abstract ~ Change & Decay in all around I see ! Life expectationwise I\'m only one third through my life ~ but my laugh lines are showing ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ both on TIME ! Thanks BRIAN.
July 21st, 2017 01:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ \"Though the outward Man perish ~ the inner Man is renewed day by day ~ We are transformed by the daily renewal of our minds through Peace & Poetry\" Thanks for sharing. Love the scary abstract ~ Change & Decay in all around I see ! Life expectationwise I\'m only one third through my life ~ but my laugh lines are showing ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ both on TIME ! Thanks BRIAN.
July 21st, 2017 01:31
AGE IS IN THE MIND
FredPeyer said:
And why does your beautiful painting remind me of a flamenco?
July 21st, 2017 01:27
FredPeyer said:
And why does your beautiful painting remind me of a flamenco?
July 21st, 2017 01:27
AGE IS IN THE MIND
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if you could see my face you would know why your poem is already up on my wall! Very true and beautifully said.
July 21st, 2017 01:27
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if you could see my face you would know why your poem is already up on my wall! Very true and beautifully said.
July 21st, 2017 01:27
HE NEVER DINED
malubotelho said:
Was he a monk? What about some meatballs? Cute and profound read.
July 20th, 2017 12:31
malubotelho said:
Was he a monk? What about some meatballs? Cute and profound read.
July 20th, 2017 12:31
HE NEVER DINED
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A decimated earth post-apocalypse\', is what the painting speaks to me. A decimated man, devoid of love, is what the poem describes to me. Both so well done! Thanks for sharing them with us, Michael.
July 20th, 2017 08:08
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A decimated earth post-apocalypse\', is what the painting speaks to me. A decimated man, devoid of love, is what the poem describes to me. Both so well done! Thanks for sharing them with us, Michael.
July 20th, 2017 08:08
HE NEVER DINED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ The abstract smacked of No Man\'s Land in WW1 ? The poem is a TERCET indeed with a nice metered flow. If \"music be the food of love\" CUPID should liaise with Weight Watchers ! Notes have less calories than oats ~ or is that a double-entendre ? BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 04:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ The abstract smacked of No Man\'s Land in WW1 ? The poem is a TERCET indeed with a nice metered flow. If \"music be the food of love\" CUPID should liaise with Weight Watchers ! Notes have less calories than oats ~ or is that a double-entendre ? BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 04:01
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