Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THREE FROM FUSIONS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
September 12th, 2017 00:39
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
September 12th, 2017 00:39
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
myself and me said:
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field, the bright color makes it stand out.
\"and though conceding to despair
she probed herself anew.\"
I sense the courage and strength in it.
A great piece. Love the simple line paint. Who ever got it have a good taste.
September 11th, 2017 18:30
myself and me said:
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field, the bright color makes it stand out.
\"and though conceding to despair
she probed herself anew.\"
I sense the courage and strength in it.
A great piece. Love the simple line paint. Who ever got it have a good taste.
September 11th, 2017 18:30
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are, compelling the reader to share her plight. Good write, Michael!
September 11th, 2017 10:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are, compelling the reader to share her plight. Good write, Michael!
September 11th, 2017 10:28
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful write! I really loved the first stanza! Great read!
September 11th, 2017 10:03
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful write! I really loved the first stanza! Great read!
September 11th, 2017 10:03
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poetry I really loved this , congrats on the drawing
September 11th, 2017 07:59
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poetry I really loved this , congrats on the drawing
September 11th, 2017 07:59
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I absolutely love that first stanza! Great poem.
September 11th, 2017 03:17
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I absolutely love that first stanza! Great poem.
September 11th, 2017 03:17
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In my experience MICHAEL ~ No Sin is too great or too grevious ~ for GOD to forgive AND forget. However we do have to still bear the consequences. If that is a BABY ~ They (there has to a DAD somewhere !) have to face the consequences and the decisions. Thousands WANT to adopt ~ so ABORTION should NEVER be one of them ! Thanks for sharing ~ i apolise for \"HIHORSING\" again ~ BRIAN
September 11th, 2017 02:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In my experience MICHAEL ~ No Sin is too great or too grevious ~ for GOD to forgive AND forget. However we do have to still bear the consequences. If that is a BABY ~ They (there has to a DAD somewhere !) have to face the consequences and the decisions. Thousands WANT to adopt ~ so ABORTION should NEVER be one of them ! Thanks for sharing ~ i apolise for \"HIHORSING\" again ~ BRIAN
September 11th, 2017 02:23
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
dusk arising said:
Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
September 11th, 2017 01:38
dusk arising said:
Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
September 11th, 2017 01:38
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Did it take you 1 hr 11 mins into the day to write it?!
September 11th, 2017 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Did it take you 1 hr 11 mins into the day to write it?!
September 11th, 2017 01:37
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, her release is out there for her and she will soon find it.
September 11th, 2017 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, her release is out there for her and she will soon find it.
September 11th, 2017 01:33
LIMERICK No 44
Jooles said:
Haven\'t been on for a while and I come back to this....God your poems make me smile....said it before...I\'ll say it again....you make me think of Spike Milligan
September 10th, 2017 17:27
Jooles said:
Haven\'t been on for a while and I come back to this....God your poems make me smile....said it before...I\'ll say it again....you make me think of Spike Milligan
September 10th, 2017 17:27
LIMERICK No 44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My JEWISH friend OBADIAH
Borrowed 500 quid
From his friend JEREMIAH
When poor JERRY died
Everyone cried For the Debt
People were scoffin\'
But OBAD had the neck
Wrote a 500 pound cheque
And then threw it down
On the COFFIN !
Hope you like my LIM ~ thanks for yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My JEWISH friend OBADIAH
Borrowed 500 quid
From his friend JEREMIAH
When poor JERRY died
Everyone cried For the Debt
People were scoffin\'
But OBAD had the neck
Wrote a 500 pound cheque
And then threw it down
On the COFFIN !
Hope you like my LIM ~ thanks for yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 16:18
LIMERICK No 44
myself and me said:
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46
myself and me said:
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46
LIMERICK No 44
dusk arising said:
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his coffin
So beware who u tell
when your feeling unwell
Cos you might be the last one laughin
ha ha ha love a bit of fun.
September 10th, 2017 07:20
dusk arising said:
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his coffin
So beware who u tell
when your feeling unwell
Cos you might be the last one laughin
ha ha ha love a bit of fun.
September 10th, 2017 07:20
LIMERICK No 44
Goldfinch60 said:
Presumably your ghost wrote this fun write Michael.
September 10th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Presumably your ghost wrote this fun write Michael.
September 10th, 2017 01:29
LIMERICK No 44
orchidee said:
A fine write an pic M. A similar thing happened to me. Someone said: Try holding your breath for 24 hours, to save some air for a whole day. I tried it - now I\'m dead. Erm, strange that, can\'t understand it! lol
September 10th, 2017 01:18
orchidee said:
A fine write an pic M. A similar thing happened to me. Someone said: Try holding your breath for 24 hours, to save some air for a whole day. I tried it - now I\'m dead. Erm, strange that, can\'t understand it! lol
September 10th, 2017 01:18
A THOUSAND WRECKS
myself and me said:
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04
myself and me said:
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, the firm is very good.
September 9th, 2017 11:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, the firm is very good.
September 9th, 2017 11:16
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well done, Michael!
September 9th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well done, Michael!
September 9th, 2017 08:33
A THOUSAND WRECKS
WL Schuett said:
Very interesting and what to me would be a very difficult poem to write , well done Michael
September 9th, 2017 06:47
WL Schuett said:
Very interesting and what to me would be a very difficult poem to write , well done Michael
September 9th, 2017 06:47
A THOUSAND WRECKS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL we all have Free Will and Poetic Licence is one expression of it ! I am a Classic Poetic Form FREAK ~ BUT ~ I feel too rigid a joining of Form & Function restricts the MUSE ! I get accused of calling ALL FOURTEEN LINE poems SONNETS ! But I an almost Middle Aged (34 !) so i don\'t really care any more ! Like SANTITA & others I am a FREE SPIRIT on MPS ! Love the Meter & Message of Your Poem ~ I always live as close to the Coast as I can ~ my blood is 3.5% NaCl ! Love the Abstract \"The Ghost of the Coast\" AMEN ~ BRIAN Please check \"Some Enchanted Evening\" My Sentimental (not Environmental) SIDE ~ Thanks B.
September 9th, 2017 03:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL we all have Free Will and Poetic Licence is one expression of it ! I am a Classic Poetic Form FREAK ~ BUT ~ I feel too rigid a joining of Form & Function restricts the MUSE ! I get accused of calling ALL FOURTEEN LINE poems SONNETS ! But I an almost Middle Aged (34 !) so i don\'t really care any more ! Like SANTITA & others I am a FREE SPIRIT on MPS ! Love the Meter & Message of Your Poem ~ I always live as close to the Coast as I can ~ my blood is 3.5% NaCl ! Love the Abstract \"The Ghost of the Coast\" AMEN ~ BRIAN Please check \"Some Enchanted Evening\" My Sentimental (not Environmental) SIDE ~ Thanks B.
September 9th, 2017 03:08
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new to me and so well composed - a delightful read Michael.
September 9th, 2017 02:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new to me and so well composed - a delightful read Michael.
September 9th, 2017 02:02
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
myself and me said:
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
September 8th, 2017 19:41
myself and me said:
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
September 8th, 2017 19:41
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
September 8th, 2017 06:46
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
September 8th, 2017 06:46
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
September 8th, 2017 04:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
September 8th, 2017 04:13
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