Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LIMERICK No 42
dusk arising said:

ha ha ha

i\'ve a trick with farts thats new
i save \'em for the check-out queue
for they\'re quiet, no medley
silent but deadly
and my glare blames them on you!

nice one sir!

September 6th, 2017 04:19

FIVE SEVEN FIVES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ love No. 2 ~ love anything in GENES

She was BRAZILIAN
She wiggled and her big end
Justified the JEANS !

Pleas check my 822 ~ Thanks BRIAN

September 6th, 2017 02:24

FIVE SEVEN FIVES
orchidee said:

Fine writes and pic M. I may do 2 or 3 at once, then have a backlog waiting to post them. Other days none at all. I don\'t plan how many per day. Just depends how things go.

September 6th, 2017 02:02

FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Goldfinch60 said:

Good ones Michael, especially the second one.

September 6th, 2017 01:25

LIMERICK No 42
sue.evans said:

😂😂 great limerick!

September 5th, 2017 14:48

LIMERICK No 42
myself and me said:

Ha, ha, ha.
Not only it rose high level, but went far far away. I shall close all the opens now.
The draw is so creative.
By the way, finish the edone.

September 5th, 2017 14:45

LIMERICK No 42
WL Schuett said:

Funny and love the cartoon

September 5th, 2017 06:46

LIMERICK No 42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL
You\'ve mastered the art
Of the \"in a crowd\" FART

Thanks for sharing and thanks
for G & T on the FUSION ~ Please
check B & S Collaboration ~ COLORS

Some of my Best Friends are OSTRICHES !
Your as ever BRIAN

September 5th, 2017 04:28

LIMERICK No 42
FredPeyer said:

Yeah, Michael, hot air tends to go up!
Love your limericks, they make my day (or night as in this case).
And congratulations, you were first again!

September 5th, 2017 02:48

LIMERICK No 42
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Michael.

Clever cartoon.

September 5th, 2017 01:35

LIMERICK No 42
orchidee said:

Argh! Pity those still in the lift, not having reached their floor yet! A fine fun write and pic M.

September 5th, 2017 01:33

LIMERICK No 42
Mugsdaddy said:

That my friend is classic and the gift of laughter I gained from it... Truly genuine. Thank you

September 5th, 2017 00:54

LIMERICK No 42
MaddieJ said:

I laughed! This is whimsical and funny! right up my alley! great write!

September 5th, 2017 00:12

ETERNAL LINKS
FredPeyer said:

Michael, not only are you showing us how to count, you are also teaching us how to use the words right and how to cram an awful lot of meaning into a few lines!
Great!

September 4th, 2017 14:06

ETERNAL LINKS
myself and me said:

\"endure eternally\", how wonderful will that be. The poem takes my mind.
Are there two vases or two souls in the paint.


September 4th, 2017 14:04

ETERNAL LINKS
WL Schuett said:

Fun scribble & another fine poem

September 4th, 2017 07:35

ETERNAL LINKS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Doh! I thought it was a Sudoku, or whatever those number puzzles are called. I can\'t do them. They bore me!

September 4th, 2017 01:35

ETERNAL LINKS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love Sedokas better than TANKAS because the give an opportunity for a Double Entendre ! Eternal Love (uncommon these days !) but a great Message from the MUSE ! SANTITA and I have collaborated on another FUSION ~ DRINK ! My opening gambit was MILK (including Lait de Mere !) and SANTITA has reposted with Coffee laced with CAFFIENE ! (I knew she was on something !) What is your fave tipple ? Yours BRIAN Love the painting ~ reminded me of CIDER JARS ~ OK I am registered with AA along wit Steve the Sherry ! B.

Yes you should REGISTER EDONE it produce such a sklnny shape ! B.

September 4th, 2017 01:26

ETERNAL LINKS
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Michael.

I believe that I have seen that brilliant scribble, or one in the same style, on a previous occasion, it is still very good.

September 4th, 2017 01:23

ETERNAL LINKS
Michael Edwards said:

Aw bless and thanks for saving it - I was going to post another edone but changed my mind at the last moment. Glad I did - common theme for the day.

September 4th, 2017 00:08

DAFFODILS
malubotelho said:

Like Fred said, it is fantastic how you guys can write and count at the same time. I can not. I can barely deposit my words there. Beautiful poem and form Michael.

September 3rd, 2017 22:34

DAFFODILS
myself and me said:

Not only it is a beautiful poem, but also hard to write.
Today, I post the real etheree piece. Welcome to stop by.

September 3rd, 2017 09:16

DAFFODILS
WL Schuett said:

This seems really hard to do , way to go good work

September 3rd, 2017 09:15

DAFFODILS
Fay Slimm. said:

Oooh a challenge of a form methinks and you pen it so well Michael - daffodils throughout eh ? Yours must be an \"edone\" of a garden my friend.

September 3rd, 2017 05:10

DAFFODILS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely EDONE (it should really be called ADD~ONE !) and a lovely TOPIC ~ Daffodils ~ National Flower of Wales and a real harbinger of Spring in England too ! love the shape very HOLLYHOCK ! As a Classical Poet I am so pleased that MPS is becoming A UNIVERSITY of VERSE and we are all learning from each other ~ Thanks Professor ~ Yours BRIAN

September 3rd, 2017 03:54

DAFFODILS
FredPeyer said:

You guys are incredible with all these math oriented poems. Never like math that much, even though I now do engineering work. I have no idea how you do it, and how you do it so well!!!! I just cannot seem to think of words and numbers at the same time!
And, oh, Michael, see that Santita beat you this time! You just gotta get up earlier!

September 3rd, 2017 02:40

DAFFODILS
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Michael, I will have to give it a go.

September 3rd, 2017 01:26

DAFFODILS
dusk arising said:

Clever stuff, but it looks like a christmas tree.

September 3rd, 2017 01:22

DAFFODILS
orchidee said:

Then again, starting at 13 would be extremely difficult!

September 3rd, 2017 01:22

DAFFODILS
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Was you 56 minutes into the day, picking a bunch of those daffodils?
Ooh, I might do one. I could use \'incrementally\' if I got up to 13 letters! Long word, but very difficult to fit in to an edone. Have to work out 1 to 12 first! lol.

September 3rd, 2017 01:21



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