Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FRESHLY COOKED
FredPeyer said:
Michael, a poem close to my heart too. The form is perfect, but the subject matter, bon appetit!
Know exactly how it tastes since my Chinese wife cooks the same way!
August 23rd, 2017 00:23
FredPeyer said:
Michael, a poem close to my heart too. The form is perfect, but the subject matter, bon appetit!
Know exactly how it tastes since my Chinese wife cooks the same way!
August 23rd, 2017 00:23
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myself and me said:
I guess, after yesterday\'s \"journey\", you must get tired, otherwise, how come you made mistake on each line?
The paint is a win.
August 22nd, 2017 20:05
myself and me said:
I guess, after yesterday\'s \"journey\", you must get tired, otherwise, how come you made mistake on each line?
The paint is a win.
August 22nd, 2017 20:05
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WriteBeLight said:
Wow. So great Michael. Poem and pix too!
August 22nd, 2017 13:39
WriteBeLight said:
Wow. So great Michael. Poem and pix too!
August 22nd, 2017 13:39
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malubotelho said:
I liked this very much. Had to go back and read again. It is like those charade reads one find on those test magazines. Only you Michael to write this.
August 22nd, 2017 13:21
malubotelho said:
I liked this very much. Had to go back and read again. It is like those charade reads one find on those test magazines. Only you Michael to write this.
August 22nd, 2017 13:21
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burning-embers said:
What have you started??? this such fun. i like it very much indeed
August 22nd, 2017 12:11
burning-embers said:
What have you started??? this such fun. i like it very much indeed
August 22nd, 2017 12:11
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orchidee said:
Ooh, don\'t strike about the whole poem! lol. Cos I comes along to everyone\'s poems and strikes out anything remotely \'hot\'. It saves me many swoons! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 07:59
orchidee said:
Ooh, don\'t strike about the whole poem! lol. Cos I comes along to everyone\'s poems and strikes out anything remotely \'hot\'. It saves me many swoons! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 07:59
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Proverbs a Goldfield but also a Minefield ! Remind me of the Spaniards in Bilbao stuck in a revolving door !
\"Too many Basques in one Exit !\"
Yours are all very droll but English humour always confuses Americans ! Love DENDRITES my fave in Nature is Dendritic Elemental Copper from ZIMBABWE ! ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 04:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Proverbs a Goldfield but also a Minefield ! Remind me of the Spaniards in Bilbao stuck in a revolving door !
\"Too many Basques in one Exit !\"
Yours are all very droll but English humour always confuses Americans ! Love DENDRITES my fave in Nature is Dendritic Elemental Copper from ZIMBABWE ! ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 04:30
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FredPeyer said:
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many times, only I stroke out the whole thing!
Does the painting have anything to do with the Rorschach test?
August 22nd, 2017 04:00
FredPeyer said:
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many times, only I stroke out the whole thing!
Does the painting have anything to do with the Rorschach test?
August 22nd, 2017 04:00
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sue.evans said:
Love playing with words and language - you can get lost in the practice as I feel you did when writing this.
August 22nd, 2017 03:02
sue.evans said:
Love playing with words and language - you can get lost in the practice as I feel you did when writing this.
August 22nd, 2017 03:02
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Frank Prem said:
As long as the heart of the poem is still beating M. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 02:52
Frank Prem said:
As long as the heart of the poem is still beating M. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 02:52
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I knew there must be some use for the Strike-out function. I couldn\'t understand it. We can\'t do professional reports, etc, with loads of bits crossed out!
August 22nd, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I knew there must be some use for the Strike-out function. I couldn\'t understand it. We can\'t do professional reports, etc, with loads of bits crossed out!
August 22nd, 2017 01:52
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Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, you do realise that in the USA if you have two many strike outs you become out.
August 22nd, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, you do realise that in the USA if you have two many strike outs you become out.
August 22nd, 2017 01:28
JOURNEY\'S END
FredPeyer said:
Michael you are such an accomplished writer AND painter! Would not be surprised if you also play and write music, act, and dance!
August 21st, 2017 15:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael you are such an accomplished writer AND painter! Would not be surprised if you also play and write music, act, and dance!
August 21st, 2017 15:59
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myself and me said:
Hi, M.E., You are the No.1 again. No matter what kind of Journey he had, he knew, at the end of it, there is a sweet home waiting for him.
Isn\'t this is the journey we are all dreaming for.
Wonderful journey with a heart-warming end.
August 21st, 2017 15:22
myself and me said:
Hi, M.E., You are the No.1 again. No matter what kind of Journey he had, he knew, at the end of it, there is a sweet home waiting for him.
Isn\'t this is the journey we are all dreaming for.
Wonderful journey with a heart-warming end.
August 21st, 2017 15:22
ALONE
FredPeyer said:
That abstract and that poem are one of a kind. Print it onto the picture and you would have an incredible poster!
August 21st, 2017 15:13
FredPeyer said:
That abstract and that poem are one of a kind. Print it onto the picture and you would have an incredible poster!
August 21st, 2017 15:13
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burning-embers said:
LOved my journey through your words here sir. Excellent writing.
August 21st, 2017 11:25
burning-embers said:
LOved my journey through your words here sir. Excellent writing.
August 21st, 2017 11:25
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malubotelho said:
Beautiful images painted here with your words. So much inspiration coming from your heart. So lovely words you used that one get captured by your writing.
August 21st, 2017 09:09
malubotelho said:
Beautiful images painted here with your words. So much inspiration coming from your heart. So lovely words you used that one get captured by your writing.
August 21st, 2017 09:09
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we get too many HYSTERICAL Poems on MPS nice to get a HISTORICAL one ! Blank Verse ~ Perfect Meter~ delicious to read and recite ! Loved the abstract ~ I discern the Cottage and the Horse ! Yours BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 08:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we get too many HYSTERICAL Poems on MPS nice to get a HISTORICAL one ! Blank Verse ~ Perfect Meter~ delicious to read and recite ! Loved the abstract ~ I discern the Cottage and the Horse ! Yours BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 08:29
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Louis Gibbs said:
An intriguing picture you paint for us this morning, or two pictures I should say. I thoroughly enjoyed both, Michael!
August 21st, 2017 06:55
Louis Gibbs said:
An intriguing picture you paint for us this morning, or two pictures I should say. I thoroughly enjoyed both, Michael!
August 21st, 2017 06:55
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Fay Slimm. said:
Enjoyed both the tale of welcome homecoming and an abstract full of the same clever mystery.
August 21st, 2017 05:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Enjoyed both the tale of welcome homecoming and an abstract full of the same clever mystery.
August 21st, 2017 05:06
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Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write Michael, I was going across those cobbles.
Yet another good abstract.
August 21st, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write Michael, I was going across those cobbles.
Yet another good abstract.
August 21st, 2017 01:28
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. He\'s ending his journey as the (UK) day is starting! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 01:24
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. He\'s ending his journey as the (UK) day is starting! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 01:24
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Frank Prem said:
That\'s a very wild eyed accompanying picture that suits the gallop well, Michael.
August 21st, 2017 00:56
Frank Prem said:
That\'s a very wild eyed accompanying picture that suits the gallop well, Michael.
August 21st, 2017 00:56
ALONE
myself and me said:
Blue paint for the reclusions river, blue poem for the lonely soul.
What a blue piece, sink my heart.
August 20th, 2017 22:45
myself and me said:
Blue paint for the reclusions river, blue poem for the lonely soul.
What a blue piece, sink my heart.
August 20th, 2017 22:45
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There... is beauty in sadness Michael.
\\there it is.
August 20th, 2017 12:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There... is beauty in sadness Michael.
\\there it is.
August 20th, 2017 12:50
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malubotelho said:
Sad but soft as this Sunday. I love your blue abstract. My favorite color.
August 20th, 2017 12:38
malubotelho said:
Sad but soft as this Sunday. I love your blue abstract. My favorite color.
August 20th, 2017 12:38
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Fay Slimm. said:
Even the colour of the abstract evokes pathos and the slow read of your words adds to the feel of deep aloneness - - sad but appealing.
August 20th, 2017 07:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Even the colour of the abstract evokes pathos and the slow read of your words adds to the feel of deep aloneness - - sad but appealing.
August 20th, 2017 07:12
ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnaks MICHAEL ~ Food for thought ! Love the MELANCHOLY nature of the abstract: Blue ~ White ~ Black emphasised by the absence of YELLOW (Joy) and RED (Passion). The poem perfectly complements the ANGST in the Poem ~BRIAN Please check my \'Poem for Sunday\' Thanks B.
August 20th, 2017 03:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnaks MICHAEL ~ Food for thought ! Love the MELANCHOLY nature of the abstract: Blue ~ White ~ Black emphasised by the absence of YELLOW (Joy) and RED (Passion). The poem perfectly complements the ANGST in the Poem ~BRIAN Please check my \'Poem for Sunday\' Thanks B.
August 20th, 2017 03:39
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