Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Frank Prem said:
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
September 8th, 2017 01:47
Frank Prem said:
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
September 8th, 2017 01:47
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
orchidee said:
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
September 8th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
September 8th, 2017 01:41
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
dusk arising said:
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38
dusk arising said:
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
September 8th, 2017 00:58
FredPeyer said:
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
September 8th, 2017 00:58
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Fay Slimm. said:
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An engaging piece of work Michael.
September 7th, 2017 13:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An engaging piece of work Michael.
September 7th, 2017 13:24
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WL Schuett said:
Well done Micheal conjures up a vivid picture...and a lovely line drawing
September 7th, 2017 09:20
WL Schuett said:
Well done Micheal conjures up a vivid picture...and a lovely line drawing
September 7th, 2017 09:20
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orchidee said:
Ohhh the melodrama of it all! *Gets out pen and paper for a mad burst of inspiration*.
September 7th, 2017 08:03
orchidee said:
Ohhh the melodrama of it all! *Gets out pen and paper for a mad burst of inspiration*.
September 7th, 2017 08:03
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you MICHAEL for another perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC. The TRINET and the SILHOUETTE ! I can empathise with the sentiments in each verse. Word count is good and the shape ~ each one an Angel of the North ! Yours BRIAN
Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks S & B.
September 7th, 2017 08:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you MICHAEL for another perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC. The TRINET and the SILHOUETTE ! I can empathise with the sentiments in each verse. Word count is good and the shape ~ each one an Angel of the North ! Yours BRIAN
Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks S & B.
September 7th, 2017 08:02
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myself and me said:
\"Still night, all quiet, slow walk, together in harmony hand in hand\"
What a peaceful, romantic night.
Love the line drawing. White line on dark background, fit the poem perfect.
September 7th, 2017 07:59
myself and me said:
\"Still night, all quiet, slow walk, together in harmony hand in hand\"
What a peaceful, romantic night.
Love the line drawing. White line on dark background, fit the poem perfect.
September 7th, 2017 07:59
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dusk arising said:
And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense created here. Compelling read. I was mindful not to slip on that wet wooden pier.
September 7th, 2017 03:51
dusk arising said:
And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense created here. Compelling read. I was mindful not to slip on that wet wooden pier.
September 7th, 2017 03:51
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You must spend more time then I do in preparation, to polish up poems. I tend to be more free-flow. Not that I get some mad frenzy of the muse and write it all instantly. Gosh, that\'s melodramatic!
September 7th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You must spend more time then I do in preparation, to polish up poems. I tend to be more free-flow. Not that I get some mad frenzy of the muse and write it all instantly. Gosh, that\'s melodramatic!
September 7th, 2017 01:55
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Goldfinch60 said:
Another good write in a form I had not seen before Michael.
September 7th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good write in a form I had not seen before Michael.
September 7th, 2017 00:47
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Mugsdaddy said:
Very deliberate picture drawn in the minds eye. Very nearly perfect.
September 7th, 2017 00:42
Mugsdaddy said:
Very deliberate picture drawn in the minds eye. Very nearly perfect.
September 7th, 2017 00:42
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FredPeyer said:
And the master shows us again how it\'s done! Beautiful drawing too!
And I confirm: This is good!
September 7th, 2017 00:15
FredPeyer said:
And the master shows us again how it\'s done! Beautiful drawing too!
And I confirm: This is good!
September 7th, 2017 00:15
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
myself and me said:
What are the birds doing? Are they counting syllables or are they trying to discuss about the poems?
Is this another invention?
Love the poems.
September 6th, 2017 17:52
myself and me said:
What are the birds doing? Are they counting syllables or are they trying to discuss about the poems?
Is this another invention?
Love the poems.
September 6th, 2017 17:52
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Mugsdaddy said:
I find this style of writing challenging. You like Santita make it look easy I\'ve made one attempt perhaps I\'ll take another shot. Excellent work nicely tied together.
M
September 6th, 2017 10:18
Mugsdaddy said:
I find this style of writing challenging. You like Santita make it look easy I\'ve made one attempt perhaps I\'ll take another shot. Excellent work nicely tied together.
M
September 6th, 2017 10:18
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
WL Schuett said:
What a challenge to write like this good work Michael
September 6th, 2017 07:57
WL Schuett said:
What a challenge to write like this good work Michael
September 6th, 2017 07:57
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Fay Slimm. said:
Just love the middle three liner here Michael - so so true is this short statement
September 6th, 2017 05:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Just love the middle three liner here Michael - so so true is this short statement
September 6th, 2017 05:03
LIMERICK No 42
dusk arising said:
ha ha ha
i\'ve a trick with farts thats new
i save \'em for the check-out queue
for they\'re quiet, no medley
silent but deadly
and my glare blames them on you!
nice one sir!
September 6th, 2017 04:19
dusk arising said:
ha ha ha
i\'ve a trick with farts thats new
i save \'em for the check-out queue
for they\'re quiet, no medley
silent but deadly
and my glare blames them on you!
nice one sir!
September 6th, 2017 04:19
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love No. 2 ~ love anything in GENES
She was BRAZILIAN
She wiggled and her big end
Justified the JEANS !
Pleas check my 822 ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 6th, 2017 02:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love No. 2 ~ love anything in GENES
She was BRAZILIAN
She wiggled and her big end
Justified the JEANS !
Pleas check my 822 ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 6th, 2017 02:24
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic M. I may do 2 or 3 at once, then have a backlog waiting to post them. Other days none at all. I don\'t plan how many per day. Just depends how things go.
September 6th, 2017 02:02
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic M. I may do 2 or 3 at once, then have a backlog waiting to post them. Other days none at all. I don\'t plan how many per day. Just depends how things go.
September 6th, 2017 02:02
FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones Michael, especially the second one.
September 6th, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones Michael, especially the second one.
September 6th, 2017 01:25
LIMERICK No 42
myself and me said:
Ha, ha, ha.
Not only it rose high level, but went far far away. I shall close all the opens now.
The draw is so creative.
By the way, finish the edone.
September 5th, 2017 14:45
myself and me said:
Ha, ha, ha.
Not only it rose high level, but went far far away. I shall close all the opens now.
The draw is so creative.
By the way, finish the edone.
September 5th, 2017 14:45
LIMERICK No 42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL
You\'ve mastered the art
Of the \"in a crowd\" FART
Thanks for sharing and thanks
for G & T on the FUSION ~ Please
check B & S Collaboration ~ COLORS
Some of my Best Friends are OSTRICHES !
Your as ever BRIAN
September 5th, 2017 04:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL
You\'ve mastered the art
Of the \"in a crowd\" FART
Thanks for sharing and thanks
for G & T on the FUSION ~ Please
check B & S Collaboration ~ COLORS
Some of my Best Friends are OSTRICHES !
Your as ever BRIAN
September 5th, 2017 04:28
LIMERICK No 42
FredPeyer said:
Yeah, Michael, hot air tends to go up!
Love your limericks, they make my day (or night as in this case).
And congratulations, you were first again!
September 5th, 2017 02:48
FredPeyer said:
Yeah, Michael, hot air tends to go up!
Love your limericks, they make my day (or night as in this case).
And congratulations, you were first again!
September 5th, 2017 02:48
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