Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No40
burning-embers said:
To beat that first post of Edwards
Fred set off early bedwards
but although his rhyme
was somewhat sublime
two minutes too late is what Fred was.
ha ha ha dontcha just love a limerick.
August 6th, 2017 01:42
burning-embers said:
To beat that first post of Edwards
Fred set off early bedwards
but although his rhyme
was somewhat sublime
two minutes too late is what Fred was.
ha ha ha dontcha just love a limerick.
August 6th, 2017 01:42
LIMERICK No40
orchidee said:
Oops, pressed the button twice - I said, I pressed.... I best not delete it, or it seems to delete your reply comments as well.
August 6th, 2017 01:38
orchidee said:
Oops, pressed the button twice - I said, I pressed.... I best not delete it, or it seems to delete your reply comments as well.
August 6th, 2017 01:38
LIMERICK No40
orchidee said:
Ohh heeheee M. Cooeee, first UK poet-poster of the day! I won\'t attempt to be the first UK person here each day.
August 6th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
Ohh heeheee M. Cooeee, first UK poet-poster of the day! I won\'t attempt to be the first UK person here each day.
August 6th, 2017 01:34
LIMERICK No40
orchidee said:
Ohh heeheee M. Cooeee, first UK poet-poster of the day! I won\'t attempt to be the first UK person here each day.
August 6th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
Ohh heeheee M. Cooeee, first UK poet-poster of the day! I won\'t attempt to be the first UK person here each day.
August 6th, 2017 01:34
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gone but not forgotten ! loved the Poem and the complementary Picture. I like QUATRAINS and a KIRIELLE way to present them ! Also like Rhyming Couplets so I like your choice of rhyme pattern aabB ccbB ddbB eebB ! You have made each line 4 the same hence B ~ it can vary. For instance you could vary word four (RESTFUL) in each line etc. Thanks for daring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2017 09:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gone but not forgotten ! loved the Poem and the complementary Picture. I like QUATRAINS and a KIRIELLE way to present them ! Also like Rhyming Couplets so I like your choice of rhyme pattern aabB ccbB ddbB eebB ! You have made each line 4 the same hence B ~ it can vary. For instance you could vary word four (RESTFUL) in each line etc. Thanks for daring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2017 09:26
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
malubotelho said:
I have a weeping heart after reading this. So beautiful. So romantic. When is he coming back? I hope before she wakes up
August 5th, 2017 08:30
malubotelho said:
I have a weeping heart after reading this. So beautiful. So romantic. When is he coming back? I hope before she wakes up
August 5th, 2017 08:30
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
Louis Gibbs said:
A beauty, this one, Michael! The repeating last line is very effective, and the closing phrase ties it up with a punch.
August 5th, 2017 08:19
Louis Gibbs said:
A beauty, this one, Michael! The repeating last line is very effective, and the closing phrase ties it up with a punch.
August 5th, 2017 08:19
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
FredPeyer said:
Michael this is a beautiful poem, you succeeded admirably. And the watercolor \'ain\'t bad either\'!
And btw, the \'he\'d taken flight\' fits perfectly as far as I am concerned.
August 5th, 2017 02:54
FredPeyer said:
Michael this is a beautiful poem, you succeeded admirably. And the watercolor \'ain\'t bad either\'!
And btw, the \'he\'d taken flight\' fits perfectly as far as I am concerned.
August 5th, 2017 02:54
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
orchidee said:
Cooeee M - first UK poet of the day - or nearly every day?!
August 5th, 2017 01:57
orchidee said:
Cooeee M - first UK poet of the day - or nearly every day?!
August 5th, 2017 01:57
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. I\'m sure that sometime a pic of yours may inspire me to write a poem.
August 5th, 2017 01:56
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. I\'m sure that sometime a pic of yours may inspire me to write a poem.
August 5th, 2017 01:56
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you succeeded. Good write and a good painting.
August 5th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you succeeded. Good write and a good painting.
August 5th, 2017 00:55
DROWNED IN SORROW
rrodriguez said:
Abstract indeed with a message of intrigue. Super!
August 4th, 2017 14:30
rrodriguez said:
Abstract indeed with a message of intrigue. Super!
August 4th, 2017 14:30
DROWNED IN SORROW
Alf W said:
Beautiful flow and emitting deep thoughts and feelings... thank you.
August 4th, 2017 09:38
Alf W said:
Beautiful flow and emitting deep thoughts and feelings... thank you.
August 4th, 2017 09:38
DROWNED IN SORROW
ShannonXx said:
This was wonderful to read, really enjoyed it
August 4th, 2017 09:35
ShannonXx said:
This was wonderful to read, really enjoyed it
August 4th, 2017 09:35
DROWNED IN SORROW
WriteBeLight said:
Two whoop, whoops, Michael! Very deep, no pun intended! Perfect painting for the feeling of this!
August 4th, 2017 08:31
WriteBeLight said:
Two whoop, whoops, Michael! Very deep, no pun intended! Perfect painting for the feeling of this!
August 4th, 2017 08:31
DROWNED IN SORROW
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael plus another good abstract.
August 4th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael plus another good abstract.
August 4th, 2017 08:02
DROWNED IN SORROW
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVE THE PICTURE OF TOM DALEY UNDERWATER ~ after his Gold Medal Dive ! Drowned in JOY ! Love the Poem it has a touch of Glass ! Sets the tone for us lesser Wordsmiths ~ thanks for raising the board ~ Your BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 03:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVE THE PICTURE OF TOM DALEY UNDERWATER ~ after his Gold Medal Dive ! Drowned in JOY ! Love the Poem it has a touch of Glass ! Sets the tone for us lesser Wordsmiths ~ thanks for raising the board ~ Your BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 03:23
DROWNED IN SORROW
Fay Slimm. said:
Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
August 4th, 2017 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
August 4th, 2017 02:15
DROWNED IN SORROW
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm *gets out my dictionary now*!
August 4th, 2017 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm *gets out my dictionary now*!
August 4th, 2017 02:06
DROWNED IN SORROW
FredPeyer said:
Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the last two lines!
August 4th, 2017 00:42
FredPeyer said:
Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the last two lines!
August 4th, 2017 00:42
THE SMILING DIED
Thewildfire said:
Such a meaningful set of words...It is a great write and I would love to read more of your poems.
August 3rd, 2017 18:20
Thewildfire said:
Such a meaningful set of words...It is a great write and I would love to read more of your poems.
August 3rd, 2017 18:20
THE SMILING DIED
FredPeyer said:
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power and meaning beautifully expressed in \'simple\' words!
August 3rd, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power and meaning beautifully expressed in \'simple\' words!
August 3rd, 2017 11:44
THE SMILING DIED
Louis Gibbs said:
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of life to all it seems. Thanks for this fine expression, Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 06:54
Louis Gibbs said:
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of life to all it seems. Thanks for this fine expression, Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 06:54
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