Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
orchidee said:
I\'m not against abstract paintings, though I don\'t like too many dark colours. That abstract of yours may sell for about £5 million! Ohh, wishful thinking - or no?!
A fine write and pic Michael.
September 14th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
I\'m not against abstract paintings, though I don\'t like too many dark colours. That abstract of yours may sell for about £5 million! Ohh, wishful thinking - or no?!
A fine write and pic Michael.
September 14th, 2017 01:55
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
Frank Prem said:
Not for me, Michael. I need a picture to be a picture, I\'m afraid.
Good luck to all abstracters, though. There\'s a place - just not my place.
September 14th, 2017 01:41
Frank Prem said:
Not for me, Michael. I need a picture to be a picture, I\'m afraid.
Good luck to all abstracters, though. There\'s a place - just not my place.
September 14th, 2017 01:41
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
FredPeyer said:
Michael, an incredible poem and a beautiful painting. Being married to a Chinese woman, the first thing I saw in your painting was abstract chinese character brush painting.The next thought was to be open to whatever comes our way.
And finally, your last stanza is right on! I find it unfortunate that children\'s minds are being limited by us adults. WE should be more like children!
September 14th, 2017 01:02
FredPeyer said:
Michael, an incredible poem and a beautiful painting. Being married to a Chinese woman, the first thing I saw in your painting was abstract chinese character brush painting.The next thought was to be open to whatever comes our way.
And finally, your last stanza is right on! I find it unfortunate that children\'s minds are being limited by us adults. WE should be more like children!
September 14th, 2017 01:02
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
Goldfinch60 said:
It took me a long time to come to understand abstract art, what I found was I need to LOOK at a painting not just see it. It is the same with music to appreciate it properly you need to LISTEN to it and not just hear it.
As you know Michael I have appreciated your abstract works that you have put on this site and this one is no different.
I can always find something within the abstract that calls to me or makes me think.
Good write and that last stanza is so true, children do not have stains in their minds.
September 14th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
It took me a long time to come to understand abstract art, what I found was I need to LOOK at a painting not just see it. It is the same with music to appreciate it properly you need to LISTEN to it and not just hear it.
As you know Michael I have appreciated your abstract works that you have put on this site and this one is no different.
I can always find something within the abstract that calls to me or makes me think.
Good write and that last stanza is so true, children do not have stains in their minds.
September 14th, 2017 00:53
A COUPLE OF EDONES
malubotelho said:
Hey Michael, I\'m happy to be back here and read your poetry again. Nice form. I\'m studying a bit but forms still too complicated for me. Answer for your question\' I have very lite sleep and have mostly little dreams that I can remember instantly. Some dreams can affect my next day with happiness, excitement or sadness. Negativity.
September 13th, 2017 22:36
malubotelho said:
Hey Michael, I\'m happy to be back here and read your poetry again. Nice form. I\'m studying a bit but forms still too complicated for me. Answer for your question\' I have very lite sleep and have mostly little dreams that I can remember instantly. Some dreams can affect my next day with happiness, excitement or sadness. Negativity.
September 13th, 2017 22:36
A COUPLE OF EDONES
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult. Too challenging for me, I have enough trouble with meter and rhymes. On the second Edone (my favorite) I believe un-remembered dreams soon become
De-ja vu. Your artwork is, as always, outstanding. - Phil
September 13th, 2017 14:27
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult. Too challenging for me, I have enough trouble with meter and rhymes. On the second Edone (my favorite) I believe un-remembered dreams soon become
De-ja vu. Your artwork is, as always, outstanding. - Phil
September 13th, 2017 14:27
A COUPLE OF EDONES
WL Schuett said:
Again amazing , nice line drawing Michael
September 13th, 2017 08:56
WL Schuett said:
Again amazing , nice line drawing Michael
September 13th, 2017 08:56
A COUPLE OF EDONES
orchidee said:
Cooee, did you swoon at my \'comment edone\'? I did - swooned at my own brilliance! Oh vanity - I must eat humble pie now! heehee.
September 13th, 2017 08:28
orchidee said:
Cooee, did you swoon at my \'comment edone\'? I did - swooned at my own brilliance! Oh vanity - I must eat humble pie now! heehee.
September 13th, 2017 08:28
A COUPLE OF EDONES
myself and me said:
I know Edone better now. I thought it should start with one letter word, in this case, there is not much to start with. Start with two-letter word, open it up to more possibilities. Enjoy both.
September 13th, 2017 08:01
myself and me said:
I know Edone better now. I thought it should start with one letter word, in this case, there is not much to start with. Start with two-letter word, open it up to more possibilities. Enjoy both.
September 13th, 2017 08:01
A COUPLE OF EDONES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ Allegations and Dreams ~ the former best ignored ~ the latter best remembered ~ because \"once in a while along the way ~ they can come true ! Yours BRIAN. Please check the new S & B Collaboration on \"Seasons of Love\" ~ Thanks S & B
September 13th, 2017 02:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ Allegations and Dreams ~ the former best ignored ~ the latter best remembered ~ because \"once in a while along the way ~ they can come true ! Yours BRIAN. Please check the new S & B Collaboration on \"Seasons of Love\" ~ Thanks S & B
September 13th, 2017 02:55
A COUPLE OF EDONES
Mugsdaddy said:
These are both excellent but have you ever considered doing one in reverse form? Just a suggestion.
Mugsdaddy
September 13th, 2017 02:06
Mugsdaddy said:
These are both excellent but have you ever considered doing one in reverse form? Just a suggestion.
Mugsdaddy
September 13th, 2017 02:06
A COUPLE OF EDONES
orchidee said:
I be one that gives praise because noticing poeticism excellence - right here! Note this edone? 1,2,3, letters, up to 10 (excellence). Mind you, I not be speaking proper in making this comment!
September 13th, 2017 01:54
orchidee said:
I be one that gives praise because noticing poeticism excellence - right here! Note this edone? 1,2,3, letters, up to 10 (excellence). Mind you, I not be speaking proper in making this comment!
September 13th, 2017 01:54
A COUPLE OF EDONES
Goldfinch60 said:
Two very clever Edones Michael. I too like the second one. Dreams are there to inspire us, if we ever reach our dreams for what do we then aspire.
September 13th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Two very clever Edones Michael. I too like the second one. Dreams are there to inspire us, if we ever reach our dreams for what do we then aspire.
September 13th, 2017 01:24
A COUPLE OF EDONES
rrodriguez said:
Interesting form for pithy reflections. They evoke reflection and pause. Nicely done!
September 13th, 2017 01:16
rrodriguez said:
Interesting form for pithy reflections. They evoke reflection and pause. Nicely done!
September 13th, 2017 01:16
A COUPLE OF EDONES
Frank Prem said:
No 1 is stronger for me, Michael. Enjoyed reading them both.
September 13th, 2017 01:12
Frank Prem said:
No 1 is stronger for me, Michael. Enjoyed reading them both.
September 13th, 2017 01:12
A COUPLE OF EDONES
FredPeyer said:
Like both of them. I also sleep very heavily, nothing can wake me. You could probably steal my wife from right beside me! But I usually do remember the last dream, or at least part of it, right after waking up. But not for very long.
September 13th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Like both of them. I also sleep very heavily, nothing can wake me. You could probably steal my wife from right beside me! But I usually do remember the last dream, or at least part of it, right after waking up. But not for very long.
September 13th, 2017 00:59
A COUPLE OF EDONES
Louis Gibbs said:
Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
September 13th, 2017 00:08
Louis Gibbs said:
Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
September 13th, 2017 00:08
THREE FROM FUSIONS
rrodriguez said:
Michael, this was fun to read and very cute. I liked the one about the poor beetle. Thanks buddy!
September 12th, 2017 15:55
rrodriguez said:
Michael, this was fun to read and very cute. I liked the one about the poor beetle. Thanks buddy!
September 12th, 2017 15:55
THREE FROM FUSIONS
myself and me said:
All the three are fresh to me. Love them, fun to read.
September 12th, 2017 10:52
myself and me said:
All the three are fresh to me. Love them, fun to read.
September 12th, 2017 10:52
THREE FROM FUSIONS
Louis Gibbs said:
All three worked for me! Fun stuff, Michael.
September 12th, 2017 08:06
Louis Gibbs said:
All three worked for me! Fun stuff, Michael.
September 12th, 2017 08:06
THREE FROM FUSIONS
dusk arising said:
Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that beetle one is my fav here.
September 12th, 2017 03:13
dusk arising said:
Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that beetle one is my fav here.
September 12th, 2017 03:13
THREE FROM FUSIONS
orchidee said:
A fine write M. It\'s shimilar for me, if I\'ve had sheveral sherries! What, this time of day Orchi?!
September 12th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write M. It\'s shimilar for me, if I\'ve had sheveral sherries! What, this time of day Orchi?!
September 12th, 2017 01:45
THREE FROM FUSIONS
Frank Prem said:
Great fun Michael. Enjoyed reading them.
September 12th, 2017 01:44
Frank Prem said:
Great fun Michael. Enjoyed reading them.
September 12th, 2017 01:44
THREE FROM FUSIONS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
September 12th, 2017 00:39
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
September 12th, 2017 00:39
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
myself and me said:
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field, the bright color makes it stand out.
\"and though conceding to despair
she probed herself anew.\"
I sense the courage and strength in it.
A great piece. Love the simple line paint. Who ever got it have a good taste.
September 11th, 2017 18:30
myself and me said:
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field, the bright color makes it stand out.
\"and though conceding to despair
she probed herself anew.\"
I sense the courage and strength in it.
A great piece. Love the simple line paint. Who ever got it have a good taste.
September 11th, 2017 18:30
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are, compelling the reader to share her plight. Good write, Michael!
September 11th, 2017 10:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are, compelling the reader to share her plight. Good write, Michael!
September 11th, 2017 10:28
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful write! I really loved the first stanza! Great read!
September 11th, 2017 10:03
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful write! I really loved the first stanza! Great read!
September 11th, 2017 10:03
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