Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DROWNED IN SORROW
Fay Slimm. said:
Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
August 4th, 2017 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
August 4th, 2017 02:15
DROWNED IN SORROW
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm *gets out my dictionary now*!
August 4th, 2017 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm *gets out my dictionary now*!
August 4th, 2017 02:06
DROWNED IN SORROW
FredPeyer said:
Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the last two lines!
August 4th, 2017 00:42
FredPeyer said:
Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the last two lines!
August 4th, 2017 00:42
THE SMILING DIED
Thewildfire said:
Such a meaningful set of words...It is a great write and I would love to read more of your poems.
August 3rd, 2017 18:20
Thewildfire said:
Such a meaningful set of words...It is a great write and I would love to read more of your poems.
August 3rd, 2017 18:20
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FredPeyer said:
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power and meaning beautifully expressed in \'simple\' words!
August 3rd, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power and meaning beautifully expressed in \'simple\' words!
August 3rd, 2017 11:44
THE SMILING DIED
Louis Gibbs said:
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of life to all it seems. Thanks for this fine expression, Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 06:54
Louis Gibbs said:
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of life to all it seems. Thanks for this fine expression, Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 06:54
THE SMILING DIED
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 04:24
THE SMILING DIED
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. The picture is super and both the words and the drawing complement each other.
August 3rd, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. The picture is super and both the words and the drawing complement each other.
August 3rd, 2017 01:59
3 ONE LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the driftwood fish ! Loved the one liners ! 1. Since i became INCONTINENT I only go to Europe for my Holidays and I DIDN\'T vote BREXIT ! 2. The same was true of WONG & WITE 3. My Mantra is \"Better to dream in VAIN than never to dream at all\" Yours BRIAN.
August 2nd, 2017 14:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the driftwood fish ! Loved the one liners ! 1. Since i became INCONTINENT I only go to Europe for my Holidays and I DIDN\'T vote BREXIT ! 2. The same was true of WONG & WITE 3. My Mantra is \"Better to dream in VAIN than never to dream at all\" Yours BRIAN.
August 2nd, 2017 14:29
3 ONE LINERS
malubotelho said:
Bright up three lines. Like them all. I believe we are vain dreamers that get in shock when awakened.
August 2nd, 2017 11:30
malubotelho said:
Bright up three lines. Like them all. I believe we are vain dreamers that get in shock when awakened.
August 2nd, 2017 11:30
3 ONE LINERS
Louis Gibbs said:
If Dawn and Eve ever do meet up, we all are in a lot of trouble! Cute offerings, Michael.
August 2nd, 2017 07:30
Louis Gibbs said:
If Dawn and Eve ever do meet up, we all are in a lot of trouble! Cute offerings, Michael.
August 2nd, 2017 07:30
3 ONE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
Love to bits number 2 which raised a big smile on reading. That third one-liner is thought-provoking too. Great write Michael.
August 2nd, 2017 06:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Love to bits number 2 which raised a big smile on reading. That third one-liner is thought-provoking too. Great write Michael.
August 2nd, 2017 06:35
3 ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
No.2: Morning and Evening were never meant to meet?
Like all three, but no.1 is the favorite.
August 2nd, 2017 01:13
FredPeyer said:
No.2: Morning and Evening were never meant to meet?
Like all three, but no.1 is the favorite.
August 2nd, 2017 01:13
THREE SENRYUS
Louis Gibbs said:
You dedicated students of the fine art of poetry leave me feeling a little inadequate, and admiring your knowledge of our craft. Once I understood these to be three, I could appreciate the beauty of them. Kudos, Michael!
August 1st, 2017 08:11
Louis Gibbs said:
You dedicated students of the fine art of poetry leave me feeling a little inadequate, and admiring your knowledge of our craft. Once I understood these to be three, I could appreciate the beauty of them. Kudos, Michael!
August 1st, 2017 08:11
WORDS WRITTEN
burning-embers said:
One line, less is more! wow. excellent. I think we\'ve all been doing the stray sheets as poets. Thank heaven for word processing, i now have a hard drive full of scraps.
August 1st, 2017 06:47
burning-embers said:
One line, less is more! wow. excellent. I think we\'ve all been doing the stray sheets as poets. Thank heaven for word processing, i now have a hard drive full of scraps.
August 1st, 2017 06:47
THREE SENRYUS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL and what you say in comment is TRUE. The JAPANESE HAIKU is a very sacred Art Form as is the SENRYU & TANKA.
English HAIKU ~ SENRYU ~ TANKAS are indeed LIBERATED (Age of Aquarius) but I like to adhere to the 17 syllable rule and line pattern (575 for H & S) and 31 ~ 57577 pattern for T\'s ! Linked or serial H S & T\'s) are quite common but (as you say) each should stand alone. Thanks for sharing ~ Perfect Senryu ~ Perfect topic (the ANGST of love !) and each one complete in itself and yet a perfect trilogy. This SITE is becoming more CLASSICAL each day ! Please check \"A DAID ARMYDILLY\" (Written and sung by COLBUSAF) ~ It has won my Roadkill Award for Poem of the Day ! Love MPS (despite one glitch) it gets better every day ~ Yours BRIAN
August 1st, 2017 06:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL and what you say in comment is TRUE. The JAPANESE HAIKU is a very sacred Art Form as is the SENRYU & TANKA.
English HAIKU ~ SENRYU ~ TANKAS are indeed LIBERATED (Age of Aquarius) but I like to adhere to the 17 syllable rule and line pattern (575 for H & S) and 31 ~ 57577 pattern for T\'s ! Linked or serial H S & T\'s) are quite common but (as you say) each should stand alone. Thanks for sharing ~ Perfect Senryu ~ Perfect topic (the ANGST of love !) and each one complete in itself and yet a perfect trilogy. This SITE is becoming more CLASSICAL each day ! Please check \"A DAID ARMYDILLY\" (Written and sung by COLBUSAF) ~ It has won my Roadkill Award for Poem of the Day ! Love MPS (despite one glitch) it gets better every day ~ Yours BRIAN
August 1st, 2017 06:15
THREE SENRYUS
P.H.Rose said:
I have no idea what a senryus
Is Michael, I just love the poem
It\'s content and my imagination
Being used when reading
August 1st, 2017 03:22
P.H.Rose said:
I have no idea what a senryus
Is Michael, I just love the poem
It\'s content and my imagination
Being used when reading
August 1st, 2017 03:22
THREE SENRYUS
Fay Slimm. said:
These three beguiling Sens. make me want more Michael - good work.
August 1st, 2017 02:01
Fay Slimm. said:
These three beguiling Sens. make me want more Michael - good work.
August 1st, 2017 02:01
THREE SENRYUS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, your writing astonishes me. These three senryus are great. And since a senryu is supposed to contain some humor or satire, I am still debating which way you went.
August 1st, 2017 01:57
FredPeyer said:
Michael, your writing astonishes me. These three senryus are great. And since a senryu is supposed to contain some humor or satire, I am still debating which way you went.
August 1st, 2017 01:57
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