Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LANTURNE 2
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this brings back lots of memories! And this time the lantern shape looks great!
August 12th, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this brings back lots of memories! And this time the lantern shape looks great!
August 12th, 2017 11:31
LANTURNE 2
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10
LANTURNE 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ Oh YES I remember it well ! The smell if the HAY and the scent of HAY~LEY the Farmer\'s Nubile Daughter !
She was only the Farmers Daughter
Doin\' what she didn\'t oughter
In the Hay @ half past three
Doin\' what comes naturally !
Love the Cotswolds Pen \'n Ink
Yours BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 02:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ Oh YES I remember it well ! The smell if the HAY and the scent of HAY~LEY the Farmer\'s Nubile Daughter !
She was only the Farmers Daughter
Doin\' what she didn\'t oughter
In the Hay @ half past three
Doin\' what comes naturally !
Love the Cotswolds Pen \'n Ink
Yours BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 02:05
A LANTURNE
malubotelho said:
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
August 11th, 2017 17:07
malubotelho said:
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
August 11th, 2017 17:07
A LANTURNE
FredPeyer said:
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
August 11th, 2017 11:49
FredPeyer said:
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
August 11th, 2017 11:49
A LANTURNE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:11
A LANTURNE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that\'s late! lol.
August 11th, 2017 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that\'s late! lol.
August 11th, 2017 01:59
A LANTURNE
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:36
EMERGING
WriteBeLight said:
Brings up a lot of images of a beautiful time. Thanks Michael.
August 10th, 2017 12:10
WriteBeLight said:
Brings up a lot of images of a beautiful time. Thanks Michael.
August 10th, 2017 12:10
EMERGING
malubotelho said:
Another lovely written scene that left a trace on my heart. So beautiful. Do you have a painting with the couple coming out from the trees? I would love to see it.
August 10th, 2017 09:42
malubotelho said:
Another lovely written scene that left a trace on my heart. So beautiful. Do you have a painting with the couple coming out from the trees? I would love to see it.
August 10th, 2017 09:42
EMERGING
orchidee said:
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02
EMERGING
Frank Prem said:
Lovely little piece and a fine sketch, Michael. Enjoyed.
August 10th, 2017 02:27
Frank Prem said:
Lovely little piece and a fine sketch, Michael. Enjoyed.
August 10th, 2017 02:27
EMERGING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21
EMERGING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Bon Giorno MICHAEL ~ Grazie for a full Tanka (57577) !
Q. Where do you find MANGOES ?
A. Where WOMANGOES !
I invite you for breakfast ~ a bowl of Ministrone
Crusty bread and a glass of Chianti Classico
Tu Amico Poetico ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2017 01:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Bon Giorno MICHAEL ~ Grazie for a full Tanka (57577) !
Q. Where do you find MANGOES ?
A. Where WOMANGOES !
I invite you for breakfast ~ a bowl of Ministrone
Crusty bread and a glass of Chianti Classico
Tu Amico Poetico ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2017 01:27
EMERGING
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s difficult to gauge just how good a poem like this is. With a syllable barrier, it\'s hard to put yourself into the mind of the author. It makes the audience wonder why the author chose the words that he/she used. I like Japanese poetry styles, and this is nice. Good one.
August 10th, 2017 01:23
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s difficult to gauge just how good a poem like this is. With a syllable barrier, it\'s hard to put yourself into the mind of the author. It makes the audience wonder why the author chose the words that he/she used. I like Japanese poetry styles, and this is nice. Good one.
August 10th, 2017 01:23
Dreamers
Nicholas Browning said:
The amount of comments on this is impressive. I must admit, it\'s simple, yet delicate. Stunning.
August 10th, 2017 01:20
Nicholas Browning said:
The amount of comments on this is impressive. I must admit, it\'s simple, yet delicate. Stunning.
August 10th, 2017 01:20
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
myself and me said:
The soft voice flying with the wind through the leaves. Beautiful paint. lovely poem.
August 9th, 2017 20:57
myself and me said:
The soft voice flying with the wind through the leaves. Beautiful paint. lovely poem.
August 9th, 2017 20:57
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
orchidee said:
Why did I return to this? Just to say my voice did not fall soft. It shattered the peace with a loud \'ccooeeeeee\'! That\'s ruined any chance of quiet now! lol.
August 9th, 2017 09:17
orchidee said:
Why did I return to this? Just to say my voice did not fall soft. It shattered the peace with a loud \'ccooeeeeee\'! That\'s ruined any chance of quiet now! lol.
August 9th, 2017 09:17
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
WriteBeLight said:
The sun will set on this beautiful poem and painting only to rise up again and shine on them once more.
August 9th, 2017 07:56
WriteBeLight said:
The sun will set on this beautiful poem and painting only to rise up again and shine on them once more.
August 9th, 2017 07:56
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
malubotelho said:
Awesome reading for my little soul just walking up this new day. Divine, to say nothing else.
August 9th, 2017 06:53
malubotelho said:
Awesome reading for my little soul just walking up this new day. Divine, to say nothing else.
August 9th, 2017 06:53
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
Louis Gibbs said:
Your words compete with the watercolor for the loveliest picture you have created, Michael. Both, beauties! Thanks for sharing this morning.
August 9th, 2017 04:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Your words compete with the watercolor for the loveliest picture you have created, Michael. Both, beauties! Thanks for sharing this morning.
August 9th, 2017 04:41
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