Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE DESTITUTE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about line 3 in the first stanza, but would add line 4 to it as well. Hope you are enjoying your coffee after all that hard work and deep thinking!
August 16th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about line 3 in the first stanza, but would add line 4 to it as well. Hope you are enjoying your coffee after all that hard work and deep thinking!
August 16th, 2017 00:59
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
myself and me said:
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45
myself and me said:
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45
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WriteBeLight said:
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
August 15th, 2017 13:34
WriteBeLight said:
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
August 15th, 2017 13:34
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malubotelho said:
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
August 15th, 2017 10:56
malubotelho said:
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
August 15th, 2017 10:56
AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL
WL Schuett said:
This Micheal is very cool ,the first poem of yours that I\'ve read and I found it very well done nicely melded I will take some time and read more
August 15th, 2017 09:14
WL Schuett said:
This Micheal is very cool ,the first poem of yours that I\'ve read and I found it very well done nicely melded I will take some time and read more
August 15th, 2017 09:14
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lasergraph said:
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
August 15th, 2017 07:52
lasergraph said:
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
August 15th, 2017 07:52
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
August 15th, 2017 03:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
August 15th, 2017 03:03
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Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
August 15th, 2017 02:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
August 15th, 2017 02:12
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FredPeyer said:
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it\'s me and your poem tonight!
August 15th, 2017 01:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it\'s me and your poem tonight!
August 15th, 2017 01:59
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45
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Goldfinch60 said:
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
August 15th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
August 15th, 2017 00:50
SUMMER IDYL
burning-embers said:
Certainly charms my mind. Peaceful contentment.
August 14th, 2017 18:20
burning-embers said:
Certainly charms my mind. Peaceful contentment.
August 14th, 2017 18:20
SUMMER IDYL
Alf W said:
How beautifully written is your poem. It paints a lovely picture with the details you supply and got me into the scene as I read... well done.
August 14th, 2017 11:08
Alf W said:
How beautifully written is your poem. It paints a lovely picture with the details you supply and got me into the scene as I read... well done.
August 14th, 2017 11:08
SUMMER IDYL
orchidee said:
A fine eloquent write, \'13 minutes into the UK day\' poet! heehee.
August 14th, 2017 09:01
orchidee said:
A fine eloquent write, \'13 minutes into the UK day\' poet! heehee.
August 14th, 2017 09:01
SUMMER IDYL
Louis Gibbs said:
A pleasurable, relaxing read In a tumultuous time, Michael. Thanks for sharing!
August 14th, 2017 06:32
Louis Gibbs said:
A pleasurable, relaxing read In a tumultuous time, Michael. Thanks for sharing!
August 14th, 2017 06:32
SUMMER IDYL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You poem high I rank
Make me want to mount my Bicycle
And ride along the River Bank
Ladies are always lovely !
Thanks for sharing ~ Please add another POEM
To my latest Fusion on CARS ~ Thanks ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2017 05:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You poem high I rank
Make me want to mount my Bicycle
And ride along the River Bank
Ladies are always lovely !
Thanks for sharing ~ Please add another POEM
To my latest Fusion on CARS ~ Thanks ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2017 05:21
SUMMER IDYL
FredPeyer said:
\'She lazed there long by balustrades\' to be gazed upon in utter wonder.
And that is how I gaze upon your poems!
August 14th, 2017 02:48
FredPeyer said:
\'She lazed there long by balustrades\' to be gazed upon in utter wonder.
And that is how I gaze upon your poems!
August 14th, 2017 02:48
CLOSE OF DAY
myself and me said:
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01
myself and me said:
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01
CLOSE OF DAY
malubotelho said:
Thanks for the lesson about writing it. I have a lot to learn and am up to it. Beautiful writing.
August 13th, 2017 19:49
malubotelho said:
Thanks for the lesson about writing it. I have a lot to learn and am up to it. Beautiful writing.
August 13th, 2017 19:49
CLOSE OF DAY
Jooles said:
Brilliant and another lesson on poems learned. ..love it 😊
August 13th, 2017 13:20
Jooles said:
Brilliant and another lesson on poems learned. ..love it 😊
August 13th, 2017 13:20
CLOSE OF DAY
rrodriguez said:
Excellent image... I do like the smell of burning wood in the mountains of Puerto Rico. Loved it. Let me take a whack at it.
August 13th, 2017 11:18
rrodriguez said:
Excellent image... I do like the smell of burning wood in the mountains of Puerto Rico. Loved it. Let me take a whack at it.
August 13th, 2017 11:18
CLOSE OF DAY
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Mike, I AM impressed. Short, yet sweet and directly to the point! I like that. It doesn\'t have to be this long, drawn out type of poem. I like your style, sense of awareness and, nicely done!!!
August 13th, 2017 04:55
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Mike, I AM impressed. Short, yet sweet and directly to the point! I like that. It doesn\'t have to be this long, drawn out type of poem. I like your style, sense of awareness and, nicely done!!!
August 13th, 2017 04:55
CLOSE OF DAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Have you smelt wood smoke at twilight
Who hath heard the birch log burning
Who is quick to read the noises of the night ?
Let him follow with the ohers
Where the Young Mens feet are turning
To the Camps of known desire
And proved delight !
More Arizona ~ than rural Leicestershire Thanks for sharing
Great SEPTOLETIC structure ~ Love classical forms !
Yours BRIAN
August 13th, 2017 04:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Have you smelt wood smoke at twilight
Who hath heard the birch log burning
Who is quick to read the noises of the night ?
Let him follow with the ohers
Where the Young Mens feet are turning
To the Camps of known desire
And proved delight !
More Arizona ~ than rural Leicestershire Thanks for sharing
Great SEPTOLETIC structure ~ Love classical forms !
Yours BRIAN
August 13th, 2017 04:14
CLOSE OF DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13
CLOSE OF DAY
orchidee said:
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at the START of the day!
August 13th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at the START of the day!
August 13th, 2017 01:45
CLOSE OF DAY
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget, that 0.00 time is 7pm Saturday here in Hawaii.
Great septolet! Love how you wrote about the smoke in the air!
August 13th, 2017 00:44
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget, that 0.00 time is 7pm Saturday here in Hawaii.
Great septolet! Love how you wrote about the smoke in the air!
August 13th, 2017 00:44
LANTURNE 2
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
August 12th, 2017 17:35
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
August 12th, 2017 17:35
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