Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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myself and me said:
His picture is gone, but the picture of sadness is so vivid in this poem.
The paint looks so nice.
Both are done well.
September 16th, 2017 17:10
myself and me said:
His picture is gone, but the picture of sadness is so vivid in this poem.
The paint looks so nice.
Both are done well.
September 16th, 2017 17:10
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malubotelho said:
Sad. Left kind of a hole on my stomach. I guess I\'m very sensitive these days. Beautifuly written though.
September 16th, 2017 17:07
malubotelho said:
Sad. Left kind of a hole on my stomach. I guess I\'m very sensitive these days. Beautifuly written though.
September 16th, 2017 17:07
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rrodriguez said:
This poem is finely written... its message comes through clearly.. thanks for sharing Michael.
September 16th, 2017 16:42
rrodriguez said:
This poem is finely written... its message comes through clearly.. thanks for sharing Michael.
September 16th, 2017 16:42
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MendedFences27 said:
A picture gone, someone is missed. a faded wall enhances the contrast. Night shades the episode in gloom, even Morning cannot remove the loneliness, and rain beats a pathetic tune. Such sorrow. Well done, loved the stanza flow. Felt the pain.
As for the picture, He chose his colors well, mostly colors of nature, blue (sky), brown (earth), green (vegetation), with a dab of sunshine mixed in on what appears to me as a stone bench. - Phil A.
September 16th, 2017 11:52
MendedFences27 said:
A picture gone, someone is missed. a faded wall enhances the contrast. Night shades the episode in gloom, even Morning cannot remove the loneliness, and rain beats a pathetic tune. Such sorrow. Well done, loved the stanza flow. Felt the pain.
As for the picture, He chose his colors well, mostly colors of nature, blue (sky), brown (earth), green (vegetation), with a dab of sunshine mixed in on what appears to me as a stone bench. - Phil A.
September 16th, 2017 11:52
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WL Schuett said:
Big fan of this Michael I like the free flow verse , well done
September 16th, 2017 08:35
WL Schuett said:
Big fan of this Michael I like the free flow verse , well done
September 16th, 2017 08:35
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FredPeyer said:
Michael, I really like the first stanza the best. It tells a whole story of a love gone wrong in three short lines!
Btw, did you use two glass panes to do the painting? I tried it once a long time ago as a test, but it looked nothing like yours. Mine was pretty bad, while yours is beautiful.
September 16th, 2017 04:17
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I really like the first stanza the best. It tells a whole story of a love gone wrong in three short lines!
Btw, did you use two glass panes to do the painting? I tried it once a long time ago as a test, but it looked nothing like yours. Mine was pretty bad, while yours is beautiful.
September 16th, 2017 04:17
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orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Sometimes I wonder about my \'mix & match\' type hymn-poems, choosing out a Bible verse or two for each stanza. Yet they seem to be grouped in themes, e.g .1-5; 6-11; etc, so hopefully not disjointed in my poems.
September 16th, 2017 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Sometimes I wonder about my \'mix & match\' type hymn-poems, choosing out a Bible verse or two for each stanza. Yet they seem to be grouped in themes, e.g .1-5; 6-11; etc, so hopefully not disjointed in my poems.
September 16th, 2017 01:54
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and yes each stanza can stand by itself.
Intrigued by the artwork. Just looked it up on google it looks great to do.
September 16th, 2017 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and yes each stanza can stand by itself.
Intrigued by the artwork. Just looked it up on google it looks great to do.
September 16th, 2017 01:03
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dusk arising said:
A sad tale of loss and sorrow. Beautifully painted picture of words beneath a visual wonderland for my mind. Great stuff!!
September 16th, 2017 00:09
dusk arising said:
A sad tale of loss and sorrow. Beautifully painted picture of words beneath a visual wonderland for my mind. Great stuff!!
September 16th, 2017 00:09
WELL FED AM I
malubotelho said:
Purple and yellow are not my favorite colors but you made them work really good here. The other complement the piece adding more interest and creating some boundary to it. I went beck to look for a naked woman but found some parts on it that could be interpreted as a naked woman. I myself see a woman dressed on a long flying dress and she is falling. As for the poem I find them too difficult for me because it is almost more math than poetry. I like the poetic side of poetry. I like drama or romance. You\'ve been quite dramatic with those forms anyway. Thanks Michael. You are always a master for me.
September 15th, 2017 21:04
malubotelho said:
Purple and yellow are not my favorite colors but you made them work really good here. The other complement the piece adding more interest and creating some boundary to it. I went beck to look for a naked woman but found some parts on it that could be interpreted as a naked woman. I myself see a woman dressed on a long flying dress and she is falling. As for the poem I find them too difficult for me because it is almost more math than poetry. I like the poetic side of poetry. I like drama or romance. You\'ve been quite dramatic with those forms anyway. Thanks Michael. You are always a master for me.
September 15th, 2017 21:04
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the Painting I see at least SIX MOONSTERS LURKING THEREIN ~ SCARY interestingly YOU & I have posted a MIRROR POEM today ! GMTA ! Yours BRIAN
September 15th, 2017 17:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the Painting I see at least SIX MOONSTERS LURKING THEREIN ~ SCARY interestingly YOU & I have posted a MIRROR POEM today ! GMTA ! Yours BRIAN
September 15th, 2017 17:04
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dusk arising said:
Now this is just damned clever sir and a lovely image above.
September 15th, 2017 16:05
dusk arising said:
Now this is just damned clever sir and a lovely image above.
September 15th, 2017 16:05
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MendedFences27 said:
The poem first - What a tortuous exercise this must have been, but you got there, and with a heavy message as well. To that point, perhaps (and this is merely a suggestion) it would have more bite with a word such as \"inexcusable\", or \"fundamental.\"l
As to the art, please save the purple background, and the naked woman within it. To me the yellowish portion appears to be a tattered garment she is removing.
Or is it trying to say something about hunger? - Phil A.
September 15th, 2017 15:10
MendedFences27 said:
The poem first - What a tortuous exercise this must have been, but you got there, and with a heavy message as well. To that point, perhaps (and this is merely a suggestion) it would have more bite with a word such as \"inexcusable\", or \"fundamental.\"l
As to the art, please save the purple background, and the naked woman within it. To me the yellowish portion appears to be a tattered garment she is removing.
Or is it trying to say something about hunger? - Phil A.
September 15th, 2017 15:10
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Louis Gibbs said:
Of the two experiments, the painting is my favorite, Michael. I find it strangely captivating ... but we all know I\'m a little strange myself. Keep the experiments coming!
September 15th, 2017 10:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Of the two experiments, the painting is my favorite, Michael. I find it strangely captivating ... but we all know I\'m a little strange myself. Keep the experiments coming!
September 15th, 2017 10:11
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WL Schuett said:
Good works both , opposite colors are always so vibrant , interesting using glue I do some of my colors on my guitar work mixing acrylic with an epoxy that allows the swirls to stand up without getting muddy
September 15th, 2017 09:35
WL Schuett said:
Good works both , opposite colors are always so vibrant , interesting using glue I do some of my colors on my guitar work mixing acrylic with an epoxy that allows the swirls to stand up without getting muddy
September 15th, 2017 09:35
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myself and me said:
Absolutely love the color on the paint.
You finished such a hard piece.
Love both.
September 15th, 2017 07:37
myself and me said:
Absolutely love the color on the paint.
You finished such a hard piece.
Love both.
September 15th, 2017 07:37
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Christina8 said:
Love the abstract and the double mirrored edone. Touching poem.
September 15th, 2017 07:14
Christina8 said:
Love the abstract and the double mirrored edone. Touching poem.
September 15th, 2017 07:14
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FredPeyer said:
Don\'t want to rain on your parade, Michael, but as far as the painting is concerned, I think I have seen better from you. It is interesting though!
The poem however is just great!
September 15th, 2017 03:24
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t want to rain on your parade, Michael, but as far as the painting is concerned, I think I have seen better from you. It is interesting though!
The poem however is just great!
September 15th, 2017 03:24
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orchidee said:
I would be hours doing this - probably! A fine write and pic Michael.
September 15th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
I would be hours doing this - probably! A fine write and pic Michael.
September 15th, 2017 01:49
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Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write and I love the abstract Michael.
September 15th, 2017 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write and I love the abstract Michael.
September 15th, 2017 01:21
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Frank Prem said:
The painting colours (notwithstanding what I said yesterday) I find quite attractive - clean, in a way.
The poem is clever. I think there may be one line break too many between the middle joiner and the mirror section.
September 15th, 2017 01:03
Frank Prem said:
The painting colours (notwithstanding what I said yesterday) I find quite attractive - clean, in a way.
The poem is clever. I think there may be one line break too many between the middle joiner and the mirror section.
September 15th, 2017 01:03
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
MendedFences27 said:
Fresh ideas come in new forms, when all the older forms have been used up. It happens in every art form, language, paint, music, sculpting...all. Your poem expresses how some cannot cope with the change, while children and their vastly open minds accept everything at face value. No preconceived ideas of acceptability.
Your artwork, said to me, a light of hope over a blue environment. Sadness being swept away by enlightenment or, perhaps love.
I saw no alphabetical characters or strange dogs. The colors hit me first and remained. I learn from you every day. - Phil
September 14th, 2017 19:13
MendedFences27 said:
Fresh ideas come in new forms, when all the older forms have been used up. It happens in every art form, language, paint, music, sculpting...all. Your poem expresses how some cannot cope with the change, while children and their vastly open minds accept everything at face value. No preconceived ideas of acceptability.
Your artwork, said to me, a light of hope over a blue environment. Sadness being swept away by enlightenment or, perhaps love.
I saw no alphabetical characters or strange dogs. The colors hit me first and remained. I learn from you every day. - Phil
September 14th, 2017 19:13
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
malubotelho said:
I like art very much and I love to make art in various form. I like abstracts and can stay for a long period of time just reading its infinite message. I\'m learning a lot with my three years old granddaughter. She has so much concentration that if she watchs a cartun movie once it is finished she knows the names of all caracters in an easy way. Plus she immediately begin to use what she learned with the movie. She has her little mind really there, in one piece. Amazing. Your painting to me is like the spectrum of someone running. It has a lot of moviment.
September 14th, 2017 16:53
malubotelho said:
I like art very much and I love to make art in various form. I like abstracts and can stay for a long period of time just reading its infinite message. I\'m learning a lot with my three years old granddaughter. She has so much concentration that if she watchs a cartun movie once it is finished she knows the names of all caracters in an easy way. Plus she immediately begin to use what she learned with the movie. She has her little mind really there, in one piece. Amazing. Your painting to me is like the spectrum of someone running. It has a lot of moviment.
September 14th, 2017 16:53
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
myself and me said:
How come when you pour, it is an art, while I pour, it is a big mess. Do you really need to understand an abstract art? I like this one for its color and the way the color appear on the background.
Congratulations. M.E.
September 14th, 2017 11:50
myself and me said:
How come when you pour, it is an art, while I pour, it is a big mess. Do you really need to understand an abstract art? I like this one for its color and the way the color appear on the background.
Congratulations. M.E.
September 14th, 2017 11:50
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST
WL Schuett said:
Love this Michael I have an artist friend who writes an occasional poem but he only writes art poems , poem about color or one about creativity and the like ... I like the abstract thinking and abstract art it creates
September 14th, 2017 07:45
WL Schuett said:
Love this Michael I have an artist friend who writes an occasional poem but he only writes art poems , poem about color or one about creativity and the like ... I like the abstract thinking and abstract art it creates
September 14th, 2017 07:45
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