Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE DESTITUTE
myself and me said:
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours better. By the way, are you post your work by watching the clock?
August 16th, 2017 18:52
myself and me said:
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours better. By the way, are you post your work by watching the clock?
August 16th, 2017 18:52
THE DESTITUTE
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33
THE DESTITUTE
orchidee said:
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine, write, and, pic, M. No need to overdo commas, Orchi! lol. Cooeee, first UK poet of today.
August 16th, 2017 02:01
orchidee said:
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine, write, and, pic, M. No need to overdo commas, Orchi! lol. Cooeee, first UK poet of today.
August 16th, 2017 02:01
THE DESTITUTE
Nicholas Browning said:
The most pleasant thing about this is probably the lack of commas. It sets the pace for a reader individually. Nice.
August 16th, 2017 01:12
Nicholas Browning said:
The most pleasant thing about this is probably the lack of commas. It sets the pace for a reader individually. Nice.
August 16th, 2017 01:12
THE DESTITUTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10
THE DESTITUTE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about line 3 in the first stanza, but would add line 4 to it as well. Hope you are enjoying your coffee after all that hard work and deep thinking!
August 16th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about line 3 in the first stanza, but would add line 4 to it as well. Hope you are enjoying your coffee after all that hard work and deep thinking!
August 16th, 2017 00:59
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
myself and me said:
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45
myself and me said:
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
WriteBeLight said:
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
August 15th, 2017 13:34
WriteBeLight said:
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
August 15th, 2017 13:34
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
malubotelho said:
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
August 15th, 2017 10:56
malubotelho said:
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
August 15th, 2017 10:56
AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL
WL Schuett said:
This Micheal is very cool ,the first poem of yours that I\'ve read and I found it very well done nicely melded I will take some time and read more
August 15th, 2017 09:14
WL Schuett said:
This Micheal is very cool ,the first poem of yours that I\'ve read and I found it very well done nicely melded I will take some time and read more
August 15th, 2017 09:14
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
lasergraph said:
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
August 15th, 2017 07:52
lasergraph said:
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
August 15th, 2017 07:52
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
August 15th, 2017 03:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
August 15th, 2017 03:03
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
August 15th, 2017 02:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
August 15th, 2017 02:12
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it\'s me and your poem tonight!
August 15th, 2017 01:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it\'s me and your poem tonight!
August 15th, 2017 01:59
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
August 15th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
August 15th, 2017 00:50
SUMMER IDYL
burning-embers said:
Certainly charms my mind. Peaceful contentment.
August 14th, 2017 18:20
burning-embers said:
Certainly charms my mind. Peaceful contentment.
August 14th, 2017 18:20
SUMMER IDYL
Alf W said:
How beautifully written is your poem. It paints a lovely picture with the details you supply and got me into the scene as I read... well done.
August 14th, 2017 11:08
Alf W said:
How beautifully written is your poem. It paints a lovely picture with the details you supply and got me into the scene as I read... well done.
August 14th, 2017 11:08
SUMMER IDYL
orchidee said:
A fine eloquent write, \'13 minutes into the UK day\' poet! heehee.
August 14th, 2017 09:01
orchidee said:
A fine eloquent write, \'13 minutes into the UK day\' poet! heehee.
August 14th, 2017 09:01
SUMMER IDYL
Louis Gibbs said:
A pleasurable, relaxing read In a tumultuous time, Michael. Thanks for sharing!
August 14th, 2017 06:32
Louis Gibbs said:
A pleasurable, relaxing read In a tumultuous time, Michael. Thanks for sharing!
August 14th, 2017 06:32
SUMMER IDYL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You poem high I rank
Make me want to mount my Bicycle
And ride along the River Bank
Ladies are always lovely !
Thanks for sharing ~ Please add another POEM
To my latest Fusion on CARS ~ Thanks ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2017 05:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You poem high I rank
Make me want to mount my Bicycle
And ride along the River Bank
Ladies are always lovely !
Thanks for sharing ~ Please add another POEM
To my latest Fusion on CARS ~ Thanks ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2017 05:21
SUMMER IDYL
FredPeyer said:
\'She lazed there long by balustrades\' to be gazed upon in utter wonder.
And that is how I gaze upon your poems!
August 14th, 2017 02:48
FredPeyer said:
\'She lazed there long by balustrades\' to be gazed upon in utter wonder.
And that is how I gaze upon your poems!
August 14th, 2017 02:48
CLOSE OF DAY
myself and me said:
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01
myself and me said:
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01
CLOSE OF DAY
malubotelho said:
Thanks for the lesson about writing it. I have a lot to learn and am up to it. Beautiful writing.
August 13th, 2017 19:49
malubotelho said:
Thanks for the lesson about writing it. I have a lot to learn and am up to it. Beautiful writing.
August 13th, 2017 19:49
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