Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No 41
myself and me said:
Ha, ha, I used to have a specs in red frame. Reading this, just save me from my long day. Love the color in the paint.
August 17th, 2017 20:27
myself and me said:
Ha, ha, I used to have a specs in red frame. Reading this, just save me from my long day. Love the color in the paint.
August 17th, 2017 20:27
LIMERICK No 41
Louis Gibbs said:
Your art drew me in ... I love it!
Cute limerick too! Thanks for sharing, Michael.
August 17th, 2017 07:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Your art drew me in ... I love it!
Cute limerick too! Thanks for sharing, Michael.
August 17th, 2017 07:39
LIMERICK No 41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Your abstracts are mind blowing ! I looked at this one in a mirror and i could clearly discern a deconstructed HERR KOBLENZ ~ His specs ~ red framed ~ his head and all ! I liked the LIM as well !
If the frame of your Specs is red
Then never wear them in bed
Because when you arise
To your spouses surprise
You will have ~ big red rings
round your eyes !
Keep us all amused ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 05:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Your abstracts are mind blowing ! I looked at this one in a mirror and i could clearly discern a deconstructed HERR KOBLENZ ~ His specs ~ red framed ~ his head and all ! I liked the LIM as well !
If the frame of your Specs is red
Then never wear them in bed
Because when you arise
To your spouses surprise
You will have ~ big red rings
round your eyes !
Keep us all amused ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 05:48
LIMERICK No 41
burning-embers said:
He couldnt decide the best browsers, so he kept two or three in his trousers,
but at time for bed, he watched videos instead, with voluptuous girls in big blouses.....
spur of the moment fun m8
August 17th, 2017 03:54
burning-embers said:
He couldnt decide the best browsers, so he kept two or three in his trousers,
but at time for bed, he watched videos instead, with voluptuous girls in big blouses.....
spur of the moment fun m8
August 17th, 2017 03:54
LIMERICK No 41
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael. As a Swiss I am so happy Koblenz is in Germany and not Switzerland! So the joke is not on us. The Swiss don\'t wear em on top of their heads, they hide it in the cheese! (That is what the big holes in Emmentaler are for!)
Seriously, I love your limericks!
August 17th, 2017 03:24
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael. As a Swiss I am so happy Koblenz is in Germany and not Switzerland! So the joke is not on us. The Swiss don\'t wear em on top of their heads, they hide it in the cheese! (That is what the big holes in Emmentaler are for!)
Seriously, I love your limericks!
August 17th, 2017 03:24
LIMERICK No 41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 17th, 2017 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 17th, 2017 01:50
THE DESTITUTE
myself and me said:
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours better. By the way, are you post your work by watching the clock?
August 16th, 2017 18:52
myself and me said:
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours better. By the way, are you post your work by watching the clock?
August 16th, 2017 18:52
THE DESTITUTE
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33
Louis Gibbs said:
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33
THE DESTITUTE
orchidee said:
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine, write, and, pic, M. No need to overdo commas, Orchi! lol. Cooeee, first UK poet of today.
August 16th, 2017 02:01
orchidee said:
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine, write, and, pic, M. No need to overdo commas, Orchi! lol. Cooeee, first UK poet of today.
August 16th, 2017 02:01
THE DESTITUTE
Nicholas Browning said:
The most pleasant thing about this is probably the lack of commas. It sets the pace for a reader individually. Nice.
August 16th, 2017 01:12
Nicholas Browning said:
The most pleasant thing about this is probably the lack of commas. It sets the pace for a reader individually. Nice.
August 16th, 2017 01:12
THE DESTITUTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10
THE DESTITUTE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about line 3 in the first stanza, but would add line 4 to it as well. Hope you are enjoying your coffee after all that hard work and deep thinking!
August 16th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you are good! I really like this one. Agree with Santita about line 3 in the first stanza, but would add line 4 to it as well. Hope you are enjoying your coffee after all that hard work and deep thinking!
August 16th, 2017 00:59
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
myself and me said:
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45
myself and me said:
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
WriteBeLight said:
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
August 15th, 2017 13:34
WriteBeLight said:
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
August 15th, 2017 13:34
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
malubotelho said:
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
August 15th, 2017 10:56
malubotelho said:
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
August 15th, 2017 10:56
AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL
WL Schuett said:
This Micheal is very cool ,the first poem of yours that I\'ve read and I found it very well done nicely melded I will take some time and read more
August 15th, 2017 09:14
WL Schuett said:
This Micheal is very cool ,the first poem of yours that I\'ve read and I found it very well done nicely melded I will take some time and read more
August 15th, 2017 09:14
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
lasergraph said:
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
August 15th, 2017 07:52
lasergraph said:
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
August 15th, 2017 07:52
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
August 15th, 2017 03:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
August 15th, 2017 03:03
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
August 15th, 2017 02:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
August 15th, 2017 02:12
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it\'s me and your poem tonight!
August 15th, 2017 01:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it\'s me and your poem tonight!
August 15th, 2017 01:59
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45
ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
August 15th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
August 15th, 2017 00:50
SUMMER IDYL
burning-embers said:
Certainly charms my mind. Peaceful contentment.
August 14th, 2017 18:20
burning-embers said:
Certainly charms my mind. Peaceful contentment.
August 14th, 2017 18:20
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