Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DESIDERATUM
Louis Gibbs said:
Well tweaked poem, Michael! A classy one I must say, truly a beauty. I\'m a big tweaker myself, but believe it\'s worth it. Your poem confirms that.
June 30th, 2017 08:09
Louis Gibbs said:
Well tweaked poem, Michael! A classy one I must say, truly a beauty. I\'m a big tweaker myself, but believe it\'s worth it. Your poem confirms that.
June 30th, 2017 08:09
DESIDERATUM
Fay Slimm. said:
With its lilting cadence and evocative form this tale of change from dark past to love\'s bright determination has to be one of your best Michael - a charming read.
June 30th, 2017 02:31
Fay Slimm. said:
With its lilting cadence and evocative form this tale of change from dark past to love\'s bright determination has to be one of your best Michael - a charming read.
June 30th, 2017 02:31
DESIDERATUM
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - not 1066 yet?! Ah, good, you were inspired to another poem.
June 30th, 2017 02:04
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M - not 1066 yet?! Ah, good, you were inspired to another poem.
June 30th, 2017 02:04
DESIDERATUM
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Brilliant write....I would love to read more of your work...
June 30th, 2017 01:06
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Brilliant write....I would love to read more of your work...
June 30th, 2017 01:06
DESIDERATUM
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael.
Good painting as well; is that you on the bicycle?
June 30th, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael.
Good painting as well; is that you on the bicycle?
June 30th, 2017 00:54
YOU AND ME
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Michael! Take your time, beauty and quality cannot be rushed!
June 28th, 2017 20:26
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Michael! Take your time, beauty and quality cannot be rushed!
June 28th, 2017 20:26
YOU AND ME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR AN ELEGANT PIC AN\' POEM ! Love is eternal ! BRIAN
June 28th, 2017 05:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR AN ELEGANT PIC AN\' POEM ! Love is eternal ! BRIAN
June 28th, 2017 05:47
YOU AND ME
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Know what you mean. I write nothing some days, but may have some poems in reserve.
I\'ve got a series of 10 shorter poems in reserve too, but some days I honestly can\'t seem to write anything!
An idea - maybe do do a daft ditty about 1066 - you, Goldie and I were all there in person! lol. Goldie blames me. Well, I told Harold to \'look up!\'
June 28th, 2017 05:16
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Know what you mean. I write nothing some days, but may have some poems in reserve.
I\'ve got a series of 10 shorter poems in reserve too, but some days I honestly can\'t seem to write anything!
An idea - maybe do do a daft ditty about 1066 - you, Goldie and I were all there in person! lol. Goldie blames me. Well, I told Harold to \'look up!\'
June 28th, 2017 05:16
LIMERICK No 35
FredPeyer said:
It\'s 8am here and you just made my day! Thank you.
June 27th, 2017 13:06
FredPeyer said:
It\'s 8am here and you just made my day! Thank you.
June 27th, 2017 13:06
LIMERICK No 35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You just beat me by a minute today and CAYLEY 03 beat us both ! Thanks for LIM & CARTOON ~ Englebert will never stop singing ~ He was on LOOSE WOMEN last week ~ not a gray hair in sight ~ he now uses Grecian 7000 ! Yours BRIAN
There was a young Hombre from CUBA
Who trumped all day long on his TUBA
RAUL from Havana
Attacked it with a SPANNER
And now JOSE\'S Tuba is UBER !
June 27th, 2017 01:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You just beat me by a minute today and CAYLEY 03 beat us both ! Thanks for LIM & CARTOON ~ Englebert will never stop singing ~ He was on LOOSE WOMEN last week ~ not a gray hair in sight ~ he now uses Grecian 7000 ! Yours BRIAN
There was a young Hombre from CUBA
Who trumped all day long on his TUBA
RAUL from Havana
Attacked it with a SPANNER
And now JOSE\'S Tuba is UBER !
June 27th, 2017 01:39
LIMERICK No 35
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha... Great start
To my day....
Thank you Michael
June 27th, 2017 01:30
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha... Great start
To my day....
Thank you Michael
June 27th, 2017 01:30
LIMERICK No 35
Goldfinch60 said:
My first two smiles of the day Michael, thank you.
June 27th, 2017 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
My first two smiles of the day Michael, thank you.
June 27th, 2017 01:27
LIBERTY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL a very liberated Abstract which perfectly complements the contents of the Poem ! We hem ourselves in with many constrictions and long for LIBERTY. Your free verse poem is the perfect structure to describe the very sensuous Liberty of your Lady ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check today\'s Cri de Coeur for Mother Britain ~ BRIAN
June 26th, 2017 07:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL a very liberated Abstract which perfectly complements the contents of the Poem ! We hem ourselves in with many constrictions and long for LIBERTY. Your free verse poem is the perfect structure to describe the very sensuous Liberty of your Lady ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check today\'s Cri de Coeur for Mother Britain ~ BRIAN
June 26th, 2017 07:51
LIBERTY
kevin browne said:
what a intoxicating write here. Michael Edwards, you have written a great piece. I love it.
June 26th, 2017 00:24
kevin browne said:
what a intoxicating write here. Michael Edwards, you have written a great piece. I love it.
June 26th, 2017 00:24
THE ARTIST RESPONDS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Micheal for putting the current UK Political Perspective into Visual & Verbal ART a twin exposee used eternally by H.Sapiens ~ when reason and rationality fails to stop the rot. Your ABSTRACT shows an impassible (but not impossible) divide between the UK and Europe which cannot be bridged or tunneled under or navigated again BREXIT means BREXIT ~ God help the Tory little Englanders ~ only the Isle of Man will remin standing on it\'s own three legs. The ABSTRACT (truth is stanger than fiction) also shows an unprecedented Political UK Divide between JC ~ The only true Socialist Labour Leader since Michael Foot who alas was too much of an Intellectual and Aristocrat to do combat with a handbag wielding Grocers Daughter ~ Margaret Roberts ! The Vicar\'s Daughter (TM) is however no match for JC and she is already sinking without trace in Cameron\'s Chasm ! All this was too too abstract to predict but the chasm grows wider and less gulfable (good word) each day. ! And what does your Poem tell us Michael ? That the ferocity of the waves ( depicted in the abstract) will overcome the Tolerant Society which was once called GREAT BRITAIN ~ Will Boris ~ in a TRUMPLIKE Arrogance ~ make Britain Great again ? I don\'t think so ! REACTIONS are being displayed but they are all contraindicationary making the GULF wider and wider and UNITY impossible. I am emigrating back to CUBA which seems to be one of the few Stable Socialist States left on the Planet and I can buy a detached three bedroom house for £10,000 and a pink Cadillac for £500 but for God\'s sake please don\'t tell TRUMP. Thanks for scaring & warning ~ I don\'t think I\'ll bother to have any kids (well not in the UK !) Your friendly interpreter of Visual & Verbal Art (no charge for this abstract critique !) BRIAN
June 25th, 2017 19:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Micheal for putting the current UK Political Perspective into Visual & Verbal ART a twin exposee used eternally by H.Sapiens ~ when reason and rationality fails to stop the rot. Your ABSTRACT shows an impassible (but not impossible) divide between the UK and Europe which cannot be bridged or tunneled under or navigated again BREXIT means BREXIT ~ God help the Tory little Englanders ~ only the Isle of Man will remin standing on it\'s own three legs. The ABSTRACT (truth is stanger than fiction) also shows an unprecedented Political UK Divide between JC ~ The only true Socialist Labour Leader since Michael Foot who alas was too much of an Intellectual and Aristocrat to do combat with a handbag wielding Grocers Daughter ~ Margaret Roberts ! The Vicar\'s Daughter (TM) is however no match for JC and she is already sinking without trace in Cameron\'s Chasm ! All this was too too abstract to predict but the chasm grows wider and less gulfable (good word) each day. ! And what does your Poem tell us Michael ? That the ferocity of the waves ( depicted in the abstract) will overcome the Tolerant Society which was once called GREAT BRITAIN ~ Will Boris ~ in a TRUMPLIKE Arrogance ~ make Britain Great again ? I don\'t think so ! REACTIONS are being displayed but they are all contraindicationary making the GULF wider and wider and UNITY impossible. I am emigrating back to CUBA which seems to be one of the few Stable Socialist States left on the Planet and I can buy a detached three bedroom house for £10,000 and a pink Cadillac for £500 but for God\'s sake please don\'t tell TRUMP. Thanks for scaring & warning ~ I don\'t think I\'ll bother to have any kids (well not in the UK !) Your friendly interpreter of Visual & Verbal Art (no charge for this abstract critique !) BRIAN
June 25th, 2017 19:06
THE ARTIST RESPONDS
Fay Slimm. said:
A true artist reflects the issues around and draws attention by word or brushwork - this is despite those who ignore their perceptions. Well said Michael (I luv that abstract.)
June 25th, 2017 14:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A true artist reflects the issues around and draws attention by word or brushwork - this is despite those who ignore their perceptions. Well said Michael (I luv that abstract.)
June 25th, 2017 14:51
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