Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE LETTER
myself and me said:
Hi, Early bird,
What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 14:32
myself and me said:
Hi, Early bird,
What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 14:32
THE LETTER
dusk arising said:
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.
August 24th, 2017 11:07
dusk arising said:
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.
August 24th, 2017 11:07
THE LETTER
malubotelho said:
Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍
August 24th, 2017 08:40
malubotelho said:
Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍
August 24th, 2017 08:40
THE LETTER
Louis Gibbs said:
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!
August 24th, 2017 08:07
Louis Gibbs said:
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!
August 24th, 2017 08:07
THE LETTER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 04:39
THE LETTER
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.
August 24th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.
August 24th, 2017 01:34
THE LETTER
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautifully touching write Michael.
Great picture.
August 24th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautifully touching write Michael.
Great picture.
August 24th, 2017 00:59
THE LETTER
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.
August 24th, 2017 00:26
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.
August 24th, 2017 00:26
FRESHLY COOKED
WL Schuett said:
Cool didn\'t know there were so many kinds of poems each day I seem to learn about a different form anyway I enjoyed it and the art !
August 23rd, 2017 13:32
WL Schuett said:
Cool didn\'t know there were so many kinds of poems each day I seem to learn about a different form anyway I enjoyed it and the art !
August 23rd, 2017 13:32
FRESHLY COOKED
myself and me said:
Hey, lucky soul. Freshly cooked lamb Asian way. Will try this recipe someday.
Did you paint the art with the sauce. Looks so spicy.
A true joy for eye and stomach.
August 23rd, 2017 10:42
myself and me said:
Hey, lucky soul. Freshly cooked lamb Asian way. Will try this recipe someday.
Did you paint the art with the sauce. Looks so spicy.
A true joy for eye and stomach.
August 23rd, 2017 10:42
JOURNEY\'S END
WL Schuett said:
Fine piece of writing enjoyed it very much ,
Painting is superb
August 23rd, 2017 09:23
WL Schuett said:
Fine piece of writing enjoyed it very much ,
Painting is superb
August 23rd, 2017 09:23
FRESHLY COOKED
malubotelho said:
Delicious form and food. It is really like a pot of goodness. Luckily I\'m not hungry now. Just had breakfast. Awesome poem Michael.
August 23rd, 2017 08:47
malubotelho said:
Delicious form and food. It is really like a pot of goodness. Luckily I\'m not hungry now. Just had breakfast. Awesome poem Michael.
August 23rd, 2017 08:47
FRESHLY COOKED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I admire the art both visually and in the form...
Bravo again
August 23rd, 2017 04:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I admire the art both visually and in the form...
Bravo again
August 23rd, 2017 04:08
FRESHLY COOKED
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Whether it\'s oriander or coriander, or whatever hot spice it is, I can\'t have it. Aww! I see the \'c\'. lol.
August 23rd, 2017 01:46
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Whether it\'s oriander or coriander, or whatever hot spice it is, I can\'t have it. Aww! I see the \'c\'. lol.
August 23rd, 2017 01:46
FRESHLY COOKED
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Like your wife I cook asian (and all) food from raw ingredients, I cooked an Andycurry last night and all the spices I ground from the seeds.
August 23rd, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Like your wife I cook asian (and all) food from raw ingredients, I cooked an Andycurry last night and all the spices I ground from the seeds.
August 23rd, 2017 01:30
FRESHLY COOKED
dusk arising said:
Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
August 23rd, 2017 00:35
dusk arising said:
Clever yet delicious! This is really good stuff.
August 23rd, 2017 00:35
FRESHLY COOKED
FredPeyer said:
Michael, a poem close to my heart too. The form is perfect, but the subject matter, bon appetit!
Know exactly how it tastes since my Chinese wife cooks the same way!
August 23rd, 2017 00:23
FredPeyer said:
Michael, a poem close to my heart too. The form is perfect, but the subject matter, bon appetit!
Know exactly how it tastes since my Chinese wife cooks the same way!
August 23rd, 2017 00:23
STRIKE OUT COUPLETS
myself and me said:
I guess, after yesterday\'s \"journey\", you must get tired, otherwise, how come you made mistake on each line?
The paint is a win.
August 22nd, 2017 20:05
myself and me said:
I guess, after yesterday\'s \"journey\", you must get tired, otherwise, how come you made mistake on each line?
The paint is a win.
August 22nd, 2017 20:05
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WriteBeLight said:
Wow. So great Michael. Poem and pix too!
August 22nd, 2017 13:39
WriteBeLight said:
Wow. So great Michael. Poem and pix too!
August 22nd, 2017 13:39
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malubotelho said:
I liked this very much. Had to go back and read again. It is like those charade reads one find on those test magazines. Only you Michael to write this.
August 22nd, 2017 13:21
malubotelho said:
I liked this very much. Had to go back and read again. It is like those charade reads one find on those test magazines. Only you Michael to write this.
August 22nd, 2017 13:21
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burning-embers said:
What have you started??? this such fun. i like it very much indeed
August 22nd, 2017 12:11
burning-embers said:
What have you started??? this such fun. i like it very much indeed
August 22nd, 2017 12:11
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orchidee said:
Ooh, don\'t strike about the whole poem! lol. Cos I comes along to everyone\'s poems and strikes out anything remotely \'hot\'. It saves me many swoons! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 07:59
orchidee said:
Ooh, don\'t strike about the whole poem! lol. Cos I comes along to everyone\'s poems and strikes out anything remotely \'hot\'. It saves me many swoons! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 07:59
STRIKE OUT COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Proverbs a Goldfield but also a Minefield ! Remind me of the Spaniards in Bilbao stuck in a revolving door !
\"Too many Basques in one Exit !\"
Yours are all very droll but English humour always confuses Americans ! Love DENDRITES my fave in Nature is Dendritic Elemental Copper from ZIMBABWE ! ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 04:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Proverbs a Goldfield but also a Minefield ! Remind me of the Spaniards in Bilbao stuck in a revolving door !
\"Too many Basques in one Exit !\"
Yours are all very droll but English humour always confuses Americans ! Love DENDRITES my fave in Nature is Dendritic Elemental Copper from ZIMBABWE ! ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 04:30
STRIKE OUT COUPLETS
FredPeyer said:
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many times, only I stroke out the whole thing!
Does the painting have anything to do with the Rorschach test?
August 22nd, 2017 04:00
FredPeyer said:
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many times, only I stroke out the whole thing!
Does the painting have anything to do with the Rorschach test?
August 22nd, 2017 04:00
STRIKE OUT COUPLETS
sue.evans said:
Love playing with words and language - you can get lost in the practice as I feel you did when writing this.
August 22nd, 2017 03:02
sue.evans said:
Love playing with words and language - you can get lost in the practice as I feel you did when writing this.
August 22nd, 2017 03:02
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Frank Prem said:
As long as the heart of the poem is still beating M. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 02:52
Frank Prem said:
As long as the heart of the poem is still beating M. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 02:52
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