Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE LIFE AHEAD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the HOSS ! Yes indeed \"All of life\'s a stage and we ~ Men & Women ~ merely players ! As Youths we rush on stage uninhibited ~ as we get older we wait apprehensive in the wings ~ forgetting our lines ! Yours BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 08:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the HOSS ! Yes indeed \"All of life\'s a stage and we ~ Men & Women ~ merely players ! As Youths we rush on stage uninhibited ~ as we get older we wait apprehensive in the wings ~ forgetting our lines ! Yours BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 08:42
THE LIFE AHEAD
Renzi said:
Wonderful. In a life were nothing is certain, anything is possible ❤
July 24th, 2017 03:34
Renzi said:
Wonderful. In a life were nothing is certain, anything is possible ❤
July 24th, 2017 03:34
THE LIFE AHEAD
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain raising can bring great things to our lives. Good write
July 24th, 2017 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That curtain raising can bring great things to our lives. Good write
July 24th, 2017 03:24
THE LIFE AHEAD
FredPeyer said:
The sketch is outstanding, and the poem is great! But sometimes I do think that my life is more of a circus, rather than a theater.
July 24th, 2017 03:05
FredPeyer said:
The sketch is outstanding, and the poem is great! But sometimes I do think that my life is more of a circus, rather than a theater.
July 24th, 2017 03:05
THE LIFE AHEAD
Fay Slimm. said:
Youth they say is often wasted on the young - this verse indicates that in its second stanza methinks - fine words again Michael and oh that wonderful sketch. - - great shape.
July 24th, 2017 01:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Youth they say is often wasted on the young - this verse indicates that in its second stanza methinks - fine words again Michael and oh that wonderful sketch. - - great shape.
July 24th, 2017 01:49
THE LIFE AHEAD
kevin browne said:
and of course they do with the huge variation in style. we all need that stage to stand on so thanks for reminding us where we should be.
July 24th, 2017 00:07
kevin browne said:
and of course they do with the huge variation in style. we all need that stage to stand on so thanks for reminding us where we should be.
July 24th, 2017 00:07
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very beautiful indeed, both the picture and the poem, they\'re wonderful
July 23rd, 2017 12:06
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very beautiful indeed, both the picture and the poem, they\'re wonderful
July 23rd, 2017 12:06
AGE IS IN THE MIND
malubotelho said:
We can only see someone\'s age if we can see they heart. Each moment we have a different face. Beautiful poem and painting Michael.
July 21st, 2017 08:34
malubotelho said:
We can only see someone\'s age if we can see they heart. Each moment we have a different face. Beautiful poem and painting Michael.
July 21st, 2017 08:34
AGE IS IN THE MIND
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A demon trapped in the web of illusion\' ... what I see in your art piece. The three-line description on age is precise and right on! Thank you for sharing your gifts, Michael.
July 21st, 2017 07:58
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A demon trapped in the web of illusion\' ... what I see in your art piece. The three-line description on age is precise and right on! Thank you for sharing your gifts, Michael.
July 21st, 2017 07:58
AGE IS IN THE MIND
Fay Slimm. said:
How wise is this - thanks for the reminder Michael - - and for the colourful exciting abstract too.
July 21st, 2017 01:49
Fay Slimm. said:
How wise is this - thanks for the reminder Michael - - and for the colourful exciting abstract too.
July 21st, 2017 01:49
AGE IS IN THE MIND
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true. In my mind I am still in my thirties, half the age I really am.
Love the abstract - once more.
July 21st, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true. In my mind I am still in my thirties, half the age I really am.
Love the abstract - once more.
July 21st, 2017 01:42
AGE IS IN THE MIND
orchidee said:
A finw write and pic M. Yes, we\'re very old. We was there in person in 1066! lol.
July 21st, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
A finw write and pic M. Yes, we\'re very old. We was there in person in 1066! lol.
July 21st, 2017 01:34
AGE IS IN THE MIND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ \"Though the outward Man perish ~ the inner Man is renewed day by day ~ We are transformed by the daily renewal of our minds through Peace & Poetry\" Thanks for sharing. Love the scary abstract ~ Change & Decay in all around I see ! Life expectationwise I\'m only one third through my life ~ but my laugh lines are showing ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ both on TIME ! Thanks BRIAN.
July 21st, 2017 01:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ \"Though the outward Man perish ~ the inner Man is renewed day by day ~ We are transformed by the daily renewal of our minds through Peace & Poetry\" Thanks for sharing. Love the scary abstract ~ Change & Decay in all around I see ! Life expectationwise I\'m only one third through my life ~ but my laugh lines are showing ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ both on TIME ! Thanks BRIAN.
July 21st, 2017 01:31
AGE IS IN THE MIND
FredPeyer said:
And why does your beautiful painting remind me of a flamenco?
July 21st, 2017 01:27
FredPeyer said:
And why does your beautiful painting remind me of a flamenco?
July 21st, 2017 01:27
AGE IS IN THE MIND
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if you could see my face you would know why your poem is already up on my wall! Very true and beautifully said.
July 21st, 2017 01:27
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if you could see my face you would know why your poem is already up on my wall! Very true and beautifully said.
July 21st, 2017 01:27
HE NEVER DINED
malubotelho said:
Was he a monk? What about some meatballs? Cute and profound read.
July 20th, 2017 12:31
malubotelho said:
Was he a monk? What about some meatballs? Cute and profound read.
July 20th, 2017 12:31
HE NEVER DINED
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A decimated earth post-apocalypse\', is what the painting speaks to me. A decimated man, devoid of love, is what the poem describes to me. Both so well done! Thanks for sharing them with us, Michael.
July 20th, 2017 08:08
Louis Gibbs said:
\'A decimated earth post-apocalypse\', is what the painting speaks to me. A decimated man, devoid of love, is what the poem describes to me. Both so well done! Thanks for sharing them with us, Michael.
July 20th, 2017 08:08
HE NEVER DINED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ The abstract smacked of No Man\'s Land in WW1 ? The poem is a TERCET indeed with a nice metered flow. If \"music be the food of love\" CUPID should liaise with Weight Watchers ! Notes have less calories than oats ~ or is that a double-entendre ? BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 04:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ The abstract smacked of No Man\'s Land in WW1 ? The poem is a TERCET indeed with a nice metered flow. If \"music be the food of love\" CUPID should liaise with Weight Watchers ! Notes have less calories than oats ~ or is that a double-entendre ? BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 04:01
HE NEVER DINED
FredPeyer said:
He never had my wife cook for him, that\'s why. I rest my case! :-)
Seriously, I love your poem.
July 20th, 2017 03:59
FredPeyer said:
He never had my wife cook for him, that\'s why. I rest my case! :-)
Seriously, I love your poem.
July 20th, 2017 03:59
HE NEVER DINED
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Was the food of love pork pies? Was it in Shakey\'s time too?! (Shakespeare).
July 20th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Was the food of love pork pies? Was it in Shakey\'s time too?! (Shakespeare).
July 20th, 2017 01:49
HE NEVER DINED
kevin browne said:
it\'s nice a smooth around here. tip top for the tercet.
July 20th, 2017 00:36
kevin browne said:
it\'s nice a smooth around here. tip top for the tercet.
July 20th, 2017 00:36
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
malubotelho said:
Another beauty for today. Thanks for sharing. Like Renzi said. We appreciate you sharing your art with us.
July 19th, 2017 21:33
malubotelho said:
Another beauty for today. Thanks for sharing. Like Renzi said. We appreciate you sharing your art with us.
July 19th, 2017 21:33
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Who hath smelt woodsmoke at twilight ~ Who hath heard the birchlog burning ~ Who is quick to read the noises of the night ? Let him follow with the others ~ Where the Young Men\'s feet are turning ~ To the camps of known desire and proved delight\" Your poem evoked days in the 80\'s & 90\'s when we could still chop down trees and cook over open fires ~ now forbidden on our Scout Camp Sites. Your painting was a reminder of looking down on the camps from a 30ft observation tower (To scout fro the Cherokee !) awesome DEJA VU ! In the 21st C its all primus stoves and gas fired BBQ\'s and every tree is numbered and has a preservation order ~ SHAME Baden Powell is like a chicken on a spit in his grave. Apple burns well with a sweet smell ~ ash burns well wet or dry ~ take care with pine it spits at you ~ oak burn forever etc useless knowledge in a hi-tech age ! Perfect PICTURE ~ Perfect POEM ~ what are you on ? Thanks BRIAN
July 19th, 2017 13:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Who hath smelt woodsmoke at twilight ~ Who hath heard the birchlog burning ~ Who is quick to read the noises of the night ? Let him follow with the others ~ Where the Young Men\'s feet are turning ~ To the camps of known desire and proved delight\" Your poem evoked days in the 80\'s & 90\'s when we could still chop down trees and cook over open fires ~ now forbidden on our Scout Camp Sites. Your painting was a reminder of looking down on the camps from a 30ft observation tower (To scout fro the Cherokee !) awesome DEJA VU ! In the 21st C its all primus stoves and gas fired BBQ\'s and every tree is numbered and has a preservation order ~ SHAME Baden Powell is like a chicken on a spit in his grave. Apple burns well with a sweet smell ~ ash burns well wet or dry ~ take care with pine it spits at you ~ oak burn forever etc useless knowledge in a hi-tech age ! Perfect PICTURE ~ Perfect POEM ~ what are you on ? Thanks BRIAN
July 19th, 2017 13:50
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
FredPeyer said:
Michael,
after reading your poem I wished I could write.
after seeing your painting I wished I could paint.
July 19th, 2017 12:01
FredPeyer said:
Michael,
after reading your poem I wished I could write.
after seeing your painting I wished I could paint.
July 19th, 2017 12:01
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
Renzi said:
Michael you\'re a fine artist and poet and i don\'t know if you know it but i\'m really glad you show it 💓
July 19th, 2017 08:02
Renzi said:
Michael you\'re a fine artist and poet and i don\'t know if you know it but i\'m really glad you show it 💓
July 19th, 2017 08:02
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem, to me, a beautifully portrayed look back at the simpler time of our ancestors. Your watercolor, stimulating. Thank you for starting my day with beauty, Michael!
July 19th, 2017 07:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem, to me, a beautifully portrayed look back at the simpler time of our ancestors. Your watercolor, stimulating. Thank you for starting my day with beauty, Michael!
July 19th, 2017 07:49
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
Frank Prem said:
This works quite well Michael. Good job.
July 19th, 2017 03:05
Frank Prem said:
This works quite well Michael. Good job.
July 19th, 2017 03:05
IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last stanza is so meaningful.
Another glorious abstract Michael.
July 19th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last stanza is so meaningful.
Another glorious abstract Michael.
July 19th, 2017 01:40
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