Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
myself and me said:
\"Their burning fires fused; the gates of hope swung wide.\"
Love all of them, but this is my favorite.
Did you get any sleep at all. So many wonderful thoughts. Hope you did not burn your brain.
August 26th, 2017 18:40
myself and me said:
\"Their burning fires fused; the gates of hope swung wide.\"
Love all of them, but this is my favorite.
Did you get any sleep at all. So many wonderful thoughts. Hope you did not burn your brain.
August 26th, 2017 18:40
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
dusk arising said:
There are some real beauties there sir! Each deserving of its own write without doubt.
August 26th, 2017 13:07
dusk arising said:
There are some real beauties there sir! Each deserving of its own write without doubt.
August 26th, 2017 13:07
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
malubotelho said:
Very touching and I like saxophone with notes on blue, my favorite color. Awesome little ones.
August 26th, 2017 11:20
malubotelho said:
Very touching and I like saxophone with notes on blue, my favorite color. Awesome little ones.
August 26th, 2017 11:20
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
WL Schuett said:
Do you take your one liners and expand them or just leave em as is I have lots of one or two lines written and then they either turn into longer poems or sit doing nothing ... like the painting nice balance and color good work Michael
August 26th, 2017 09:24
WL Schuett said:
Do you take your one liners and expand them or just leave em as is I have lots of one or two lines written and then they either turn into longer poems or sit doing nothing ... like the painting nice balance and color good work Michael
August 26th, 2017 09:24
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
WL Schuett said:
Do you take your one liners and expand them or just leave em as is I have lots of one or two lines written and then they either turn into longer poems or sit doing nothing ... like the painting nice balance and color good work Michael
August 26th, 2017 09:22
WL Schuett said:
Do you take your one liners and expand them or just leave em as is I have lots of one or two lines written and then they either turn into longer poems or sit doing nothing ... like the painting nice balance and color good work Michael
August 26th, 2017 09:22
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic array of excellent one-liners here Michael - - each one a gem.
August 26th, 2017 08:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic array of excellent one-liners here Michael - - each one a gem.
August 26th, 2017 08:48
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Louis Gibbs said:
I loved these one-liners, Michael, as well as the explosive art piece!
August 26th, 2017 07:50
Louis Gibbs said:
I loved these one-liners, Michael, as well as the explosive art piece!
August 26th, 2017 07:50
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
Really like all of them Michael, and I can see why that painting is hanging in your house!
August 26th, 2017 03:40
FredPeyer said:
Really like all of them Michael, and I can see why that painting is hanging in your house!
August 26th, 2017 03:40
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
He met Her AUSGANG ~ She met Him INGANG ~ a Meeting of Fatal Love !
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Nothing like pithy ONE LINERS to kick start a SUNNY SATURDAY ! Love the ABSTRACT you saved for yourself ! \"Raining in my Parade !\" Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 26th, 2017 02:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
He met Her AUSGANG ~ She met Him INGANG ~ a Meeting of Fatal Love !
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Nothing like pithy ONE LINERS to kick start a SUNNY SATURDAY ! Love the ABSTRACT you saved for yourself ! \"Raining in my Parade !\" Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 26th, 2017 02:54
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M. Ohh, I dunno if it\'s an aphor-wotsit or what it is. I wouldn\'t know in me haze of sherry-drinking! heehee.
August 26th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M. Ohh, I dunno if it\'s an aphor-wotsit or what it is. I wouldn\'t know in me haze of sherry-drinking! heehee.
August 26th, 2017 01:51
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Goldfinch60 said:
These are very good one liners Michael. I especially like 3 and 6.
I like the painting as well.
August 26th, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
These are very good one liners Michael. I especially like 3 and 6.
I like the painting as well.
August 26th, 2017 00:54
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Adam Shirley said:
So beautiful it touched me, thank you for this. Well done Michael
August 26th, 2017 00:27
Adam Shirley said:
So beautiful it touched me, thank you for this. Well done Michael
August 26th, 2017 00:27
SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
These one liners and aphorisms are brilliant! Love it! Do not know which is my fav. Great painting!
August 26th, 2017 00:11
Christina8 said:
These one liners and aphorisms are brilliant! Love it! Do not know which is my fav. Great painting!
August 26th, 2017 00:11
PAST DREAMS
myself and me said:
What a coincidence. \"Short\" for Friday.
Far beyond perfect.
August 25th, 2017 11:36
myself and me said:
What a coincidence. \"Short\" for Friday.
Far beyond perfect.
August 25th, 2017 11:36
PAST DREAMS
malubotelho said:
Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.
August 25th, 2017 10:29
malubotelho said:
Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.
August 25th, 2017 10:29
PAST DREAMS
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.
August 25th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.
August 25th, 2017 01:52
PAST DREAMS
FredPeyer said:
The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)
August 25th, 2017 01:44
FredPeyer said:
The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)
August 25th, 2017 01:44
THE LETTER
myself and me said:
Hi, Early bird,
What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 14:32
myself and me said:
Hi, Early bird,
What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 14:32
THE LETTER
dusk arising said:
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.
August 24th, 2017 11:07
dusk arising said:
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.
August 24th, 2017 11:07
THE LETTER
malubotelho said:
Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍
August 24th, 2017 08:40
malubotelho said:
Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍
August 24th, 2017 08:40
THE LETTER
Louis Gibbs said:
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!
August 24th, 2017 08:07
Louis Gibbs said:
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!
August 24th, 2017 08:07
THE LETTER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 04:39
THE LETTER
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.
August 24th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.
August 24th, 2017 01:34
THE LETTER
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautifully touching write Michael.
Great picture.
August 24th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautifully touching write Michael.
Great picture.
August 24th, 2017 00:59
THE LETTER
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.
August 24th, 2017 00:26
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.
August 24th, 2017 00:26
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