Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WORK IN PROGRESS (2)
malubotelho said:
I like both but need to admit that this one is susceptible better. Will wait for the final. Thanks
July 16th, 2017 16:42
malubotelho said:
I like both but need to admit that this one is susceptible better. Will wait for the final. Thanks
July 16th, 2017 16:42
WORK IN PROGRESS (2)
orchidee said:
Ooohh it\'s good enough now, in my view. heehee. I didn\'t mean: \'Oh that\'ll do, any old stuff!\' though.
July 16th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
Ooohh it\'s good enough now, in my view. heehee. I didn\'t mean: \'Oh that\'ll do, any old stuff!\' though.
July 16th, 2017 01:34
WORK IN PROGRESS (2)
Nicholas Browning said:
I can see the areas that were changed clearly. Well done. Looking forward to the final version. I might add, that watching this process is very educational. I thank you profusely for going through the trouble.
July 16th, 2017 00:44
Nicholas Browning said:
I can see the areas that were changed clearly. Well done. Looking forward to the final version. I might add, that watching this process is very educational. I thank you profusely for going through the trouble.
July 16th, 2017 00:44
WORK IN PROGRESS (1)
malubotelho said:
Thanks for sharing your work process. I always wonder how people writes because for me I\'m not a writer yet. I write for fun and don\'t work a lot on it. It comes and I throw it there as it is. I\'m excited to read more of you.
July 15th, 2017 11:32
malubotelho said:
Thanks for sharing your work process. I always wonder how people writes because for me I\'m not a writer yet. I write for fun and don\'t work a lot on it. It comes and I throw it there as it is. I\'m excited to read more of you.
July 15th, 2017 11:32
WORK IN PROGRESS (1)
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael for sharing the way you work and develop your writing. We all can learn a lot from this. I cannot wait to see the finished product and then compare it to this first draft.
July 15th, 2017 03:16
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael for sharing the way you work and develop your writing. We all can learn a lot from this. I cannot wait to see the finished product and then compare it to this first draft.
July 15th, 2017 03:16
WORK IN PROGRESS (1)
orchidee said:
For me, I hardly seem to re-work much of my stuff! Erm, not cos it\'s perfect every time! lol. Or is it?! (Go eat humble pie Orchi, getting too big for your boots. heehee).
But I feel if I re-work them too much, I will end up writing nothing. That\'s just me!
July 15th, 2017 02:13
orchidee said:
For me, I hardly seem to re-work much of my stuff! Erm, not cos it\'s perfect every time! lol. Or is it?! (Go eat humble pie Orchi, getting too big for your boots. heehee).
But I feel if I re-work them too much, I will end up writing nothing. That\'s just me!
July 15th, 2017 02:13
WORK IN PROGRESS (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
To empty the mind when a subject is chosen is vital - the wording here will make an excellent finish - great idea to show work in progress Michael.
July 15th, 2017 01:48
Fay Slimm. said:
To empty the mind when a subject is chosen is vital - the wording here will make an excellent finish - great idea to show work in progress Michael.
July 15th, 2017 01:48
WORK IN PROGRESS (1)
Nicholas Browning said:
I can see how this could be formed into a different poem entirely by changing the fundamentals, such as layout or rhyme scheme. Keeping and recycling old material is something I personally don\'t do. But if it works, it works. Look forward to the next version.
July 15th, 2017 00:37
Nicholas Browning said:
I can see how this could be formed into a different poem entirely by changing the fundamentals, such as layout or rhyme scheme. Keeping and recycling old material is something I personally don\'t do. But if it works, it works. Look forward to the next version.
July 15th, 2017 00:37
A FEW COUPLETS
Heather T said:
Very smart couplets, sir. Usually if I think one up, it\'s on the fly and something silly for the children
July 14th, 2017 21:32
Heather T said:
Very smart couplets, sir. Usually if I think one up, it\'s on the fly and something silly for the children
July 14th, 2017 21:32
A FEW COUPLETS
malubotelho said:
I like the couplets so much. I have more but don\'t publish them here but on Instagram to go with pictures. I\'m not doing much pictures lately. The one with the milk cart took me to a place like from a movie scene about a French bakery and milk man delivering his milk before the city is awake.
July 14th, 2017 11:54
malubotelho said:
I like the couplets so much. I have more but don\'t publish them here but on Instagram to go with pictures. I\'m not doing much pictures lately. The one with the milk cart took me to a place like from a movie scene about a French bakery and milk man delivering his milk before the city is awake.
July 14th, 2017 11:54
A FEW COUPLETS
Louis Gibbs said:
Classic couplets, Michael! Well done. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 07:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Classic couplets, Michael! Well done. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 07:19
A FEW COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent wisdom-filled couplets and great sculpture Michael - you have many talents my friend.
July 14th, 2017 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent wisdom-filled couplets and great sculpture Michael - you have many talents my friend.
July 14th, 2017 04:52
A FEW COUPLETS
FredPeyer said:
Michael I love these couplets. Too bad that hardly any of today\'s youth even know what bellows mean or do. And the milk cart you can forget completely.
The last one is the one that intrigues me the most.
July 14th, 2017 03:23
FredPeyer said:
Michael I love these couplets. Too bad that hardly any of today\'s youth even know what bellows mean or do. And the milk cart you can forget completely.
The last one is the one that intrigues me the most.
July 14th, 2017 03:23
A FEW COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Morning Michael | don\'t fret about your Pole Position | I have been Cock of the Walk for a day. Form rhyming couplets do stand alone !
When all is said and done
The war of words is WON !
Thanks for the MODEL (photo ?) it is OUR Adult Education College in Trumpton. You will like my HOT AIR BALLOON Painting & Poem today - please check - BRIAN
July 14th, 2017 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Morning Michael | don\'t fret about your Pole Position | I have been Cock of the Walk for a day. Form rhyming couplets do stand alone !
When all is said and done
The war of words is WON !
Thanks for the MODEL (photo ?) it is OUR Adult Education College in Trumpton. You will like my HOT AIR BALLOON Painting & Poem today - please check - BRIAN
July 14th, 2017 03:06
A FEW COUPLETS
burning-embers said:
These are really good. Thought provoking. Did you reveal them \'as is\' because you\'ve had them a while and couldn\'t find a use for them (Sorry i\'m a cheeky buggah) or are you just red hot at thinking these sizzlers up. When i get a little pearl like these i want to encapsulate it in a bigger piece you see.
July 14th, 2017 02:52
burning-embers said:
These are really good. Thought provoking. Did you reveal them \'as is\' because you\'ve had them a while and couldn\'t find a use for them (Sorry i\'m a cheeky buggah) or are you just red hot at thinking these sizzlers up. When i get a little pearl like these i want to encapsulate it in a bigger piece you see.
July 14th, 2017 02:52
A FEW COUPLETS
kevin browne said:
that\'s so sweet Michael Edwards. well done on putting these wonderful words together.
July 14th, 2017 00:47
kevin browne said:
that\'s so sweet Michael Edwards. well done on putting these wonderful words together.
July 14th, 2017 00:47
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
Heather T said:
This spun on to a gorgeous resolution. I adore images of candles shedding their shifting light. I hope your garden is as lovely after 300 traipsers traipsed.
July 13th, 2017 17:25
Heather T said:
This spun on to a gorgeous resolution. I adore images of candles shedding their shifting light. I hope your garden is as lovely after 300 traipsers traipsed.
July 13th, 2017 17:25
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL | For posting a poem in a classic form RONDELET AbAabbA It is the repetition of the title - Through the night - as lines 1 3 7 that emphasises and reinforces the subject. At my age I could sustain the Love & Passion - \"All through the Night\" it calls for high libido and compatibility ! Thank for sharing - BRIAN I love walled gardens |- very intimate ! B
July 13th, 2017 14:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL | For posting a poem in a classic form RONDELET AbAabbA It is the repetition of the title - Through the night - as lines 1 3 7 that emphasises and reinforces the subject. At my age I could sustain the Love & Passion - \"All through the Night\" it calls for high libido and compatibility ! Thank for sharing - BRIAN I love walled gardens |- very intimate ! B
July 13th, 2017 14:16
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an intimate note of positive vibes. Well done Michael and what a tidy garden you have.
July 13th, 2017 02:33
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an intimate note of positive vibes. Well done Michael and what a tidy garden you have.
July 13th, 2017 02:33
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But, crash! It\'s me swooning and falling over. Ecstasy and writhing? Oohh, should I try them?! I\'m going into that garden there, to cool off. heehee.
July 13th, 2017 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But, crash! It\'s me swooning and falling over. Ecstasy and writhing? Oohh, should I try them?! I\'m going into that garden there, to cool off. heehee.
July 13th, 2017 01:57
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
P.H.Rose said:
Really great piece Michael
And I love that pic of
Your garden
July 13th, 2017 01:51
P.H.Rose said:
Really great piece Michael
And I love that pic of
Your garden
July 13th, 2017 01:51
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on forever.
July 13th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on forever.
July 13th, 2017 01:10
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
FredPeyer said:
Sorry, forgot to mention: I love your garden, mine looks more like a jungle.
July 13th, 2017 01:04
FredPeyer said:
Sorry, forgot to mention: I love your garden, mine looks more like a jungle.
July 13th, 2017 01:04
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
FredPeyer said:
Michael, in my humble opinion that last stanza made it so much better!
July 13th, 2017 01:04
FredPeyer said:
Michael, in my humble opinion that last stanza made it so much better!
July 13th, 2017 01:04
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
burning-embers said:
Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times better for the final verse. Excellent.
July 13th, 2017 00:25
burning-embers said:
Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times better for the final verse. Excellent.
July 13th, 2017 00:25
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Augustus said:
Art is a lie that tells the truth. Politics..... nicely done
July 12th, 2017 15:24
Augustus said:
Art is a lie that tells the truth. Politics..... nicely done
July 12th, 2017 15:24
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