Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A FEW BITS AND PIECES
kevin browne said:
oh dear, how did he manage to miss his funeral feast. can\'t imagine how. I love it.
July 27th, 2017 06:12
kevin browne said:
oh dear, how did he manage to miss his funeral feast. can\'t imagine how. I love it.
July 27th, 2017 06:12
A FEW BITS AND PIECES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the cartoon I am a sucker for \"PLAY on WORDS\" as in the first limerick ! For a mere £15 the LOO in my Flat is twinned with one in LETHOSO ! Love the final POEM in my experience the food @ Funerals often surpasses that at WEDDINGS ! Please check my poem today on SOIL POLLUTION ~ I\'m back in SAGE & SAINT MODE ~ BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 05:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the cartoon I am a sucker for \"PLAY on WORDS\" as in the first limerick ! For a mere £15 the LOO in my Flat is twinned with one in LETHOSO ! Love the final POEM in my experience the food @ Funerals often surpasses that at WEDDINGS ! Please check my poem today on SOIL POLLUTION ~ I\'m back in SAGE & SAINT MODE ~ BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 05:26
A FEW BITS AND PIECES
FredPeyer said:
Well, I don\'t know Michael, it is 11:30 pm here on Wednesday, have no clue what time it is at your place, but know it is tomorrow. And by the way, I don\'t want a funeral feast, I want a party to celebrate my life. And you will be invited, something like twenty years from now!
July 27th, 2017 04:39
FredPeyer said:
Well, I don\'t know Michael, it is 11:30 pm here on Wednesday, have no clue what time it is at your place, but know it is tomorrow. And by the way, I don\'t want a funeral feast, I want a party to celebrate my life. And you will be invited, something like twenty years from now!
July 27th, 2017 04:39
A FEW BITS AND PIECES
burning-embers said:
Great, you put a morning smile on UK faces.
July 27th, 2017 02:08
burning-embers said:
Great, you put a morning smile on UK faces.
July 27th, 2017 02:08
HAROLDS LAMENT
Heather T said:
I just discovered this treasure...I think the comments giggled me as much as the poem and cartoon!
July 26th, 2017 15:12
Heather T said:
I just discovered this treasure...I think the comments giggled me as much as the poem and cartoon!
July 26th, 2017 15:12
ANOTHER DAY
Michael Edwards said:
Been out and fell asleep on return so apologies for not responding to you all individually - just a big thanks for all your kind words - means a lot and so encouraging.
July 26th, 2017 10:51
Michael Edwards said:
Been out and fell asleep on return so apologies for not responding to you all individually - just a big thanks for all your kind words - means a lot and so encouraging.
July 26th, 2017 10:51
ANOTHER DAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I love this too ! It has great rhythm I found myself half singing and half chanting it as i cooked my beans on toast (fine dining !) Love the line drawing ~ have copied to colour ! Please check my FABRICS POEM ~ you will love the visual ! Yours BRIAN
July 26th, 2017 04:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I love this too ! It has great rhythm I found myself half singing and half chanting it as i cooked my beans on toast (fine dining !) Love the line drawing ~ have copied to colour ! Please check my FABRICS POEM ~ you will love the visual ! Yours BRIAN
July 26th, 2017 04:16
ANOTHER DAY
FredPeyer said:
I can smell the air, the toast, the coffee aroma and picture myself sitting there in that kitchen.
Great, great poem, love it.
July 26th, 2017 04:08
FredPeyer said:
I can smell the air, the toast, the coffee aroma and picture myself sitting there in that kitchen.
Great, great poem, love it.
July 26th, 2017 04:08
ANOTHER DAY
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such business in these linguistic lines Michael yet with a story that grabs readers\' minds - - the final stanza has sadness of time in its abandonment methinks. in this beguiling read of \"another day.\"
July 26th, 2017 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such business in these linguistic lines Michael yet with a story that grabs readers\' minds - - the final stanza has sadness of time in its abandonment methinks. in this beguiling read of \"another day.\"
July 26th, 2017 03:30
ANOTHER DAY
orchidee said:
A fine write. Never knew so much could happen on just one day!
July 26th, 2017 01:26
orchidee said:
A fine write. Never knew so much could happen on just one day!
July 26th, 2017 01:26
HAROLDS LAMENT
malubotelho said:
I was exactly thinking about all the different feelings I experiment while at MPS. It goes far from what I used to feel before signed myself to this site. I never knew such swoosh community could exist. Thanks for the laugh Michael
July 25th, 2017 11:41
malubotelho said:
I was exactly thinking about all the different feelings I experiment while at MPS. It goes far from what I used to feel before signed myself to this site. I never knew such swoosh community could exist. Thanks for the laugh Michael
July 25th, 2017 11:41
HAROLDS LAMENT
orchidee said:
Well, let\'s all stay out of prison then, or don\'t drop soap if we\'re ever In there. Too much info to say more! ooh.
July 25th, 2017 11:06
orchidee said:
Well, let\'s all stay out of prison then, or don\'t drop soap if we\'re ever In there. Too much info to say more! ooh.
July 25th, 2017 11:06
HAROLDS LAMENT
Jooles said:
Omg love this. ....very Spike Milligan feel about it
July 25th, 2017 08:35
Jooles said:
Omg love this. ....very Spike Milligan feel about it
July 25th, 2017 08:35
HAROLDS LAMENT
Louis Gibbs said:
A good laugh you\'ve provided me this morning, Michael. I love it! You are indeed creative. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 08:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A good laugh you\'ve provided me this morning, Michael. I love it! You are indeed creative. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 08:28
HAROLDS LAMENT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Your Pics an\' Poems are so so DROLL !
It does not offend ~ BUTT
It reminds me not to BEND
Especially in the shower
When I\'m banged up in the TOWER
YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check JAPAN
you will like my GEiSHA GIRLS
and my FUSION on Dream Holidays.
July 25th, 2017 03:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Your Pics an\' Poems are so so DROLL !
It does not offend ~ BUTT
It reminds me not to BEND
Especially in the shower
When I\'m banged up in the TOWER
YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check JAPAN
you will like my GEiSHA GIRLS
and my FUSION on Dream Holidays.
July 25th, 2017 03:49
AND NO ONE SITS AT TABLES
kevin browne said:
like this a lot. great write dude,
July 25th, 2017 02:08
kevin browne said:
like this a lot. great write dude,
July 25th, 2017 02:08
HAROLDS LAMENT
FredPeyer said:
Well, in prison they tell you never to pick up your soap.
July 25th, 2017 01:49
FredPeyer said:
Well, in prison they tell you never to pick up your soap.
July 25th, 2017 01:49
HAROLDS LAMENT
orchidee said:
Also - well, I\'ve heard of eyes in the back of ya head, but not an eye at the rear..........swoon! I would not have heard of that, in me sheltered life. lol.
July 25th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Also - well, I\'ve heard of eyes in the back of ya head, but not an eye at the rear..........swoon! I would not have heard of that, in me sheltered life. lol.
July 25th, 2017 01:44
HAROLDS LAMENT
orchidee said:
Yes, swoon! Erm, maybe the story has more than one fabled version? Did I tell Harold to look up, or did someone else tell him to look down, as his shoe lace was undone?! heehee.
July 25th, 2017 01:42
orchidee said:
Yes, swoon! Erm, maybe the story has more than one fabled version? Did I tell Harold to look up, or did someone else tell him to look down, as his shoe lace was undone?! heehee.
July 25th, 2017 01:42
HAROLDS LAMENT
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you once Orchi sees that last word he will swoon!
I did tell Orchi not to point up and say to Harold, what is that up there!
July 25th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you once Orchi sees that last word he will swoon!
I did tell Orchi not to point up and say to Harold, what is that up there!
July 25th, 2017 00:56
THE LIFE AHEAD
sue.evans said:
All life is a drama whether unfolding quietly or announcing to the world with whistles and bells. Your poem captures the theatre of life!
July 24th, 2017 19:15
sue.evans said:
All life is a drama whether unfolding quietly or announcing to the world with whistles and bells. Your poem captures the theatre of life!
July 24th, 2017 19:15
THE LIFE AHEAD
malubotelho said:
Awesome thoughtful short writing. Made me think. If I could make my younger son to reflect about it.
July 24th, 2017 15:26
malubotelho said:
Awesome thoughtful short writing. Made me think. If I could make my younger son to reflect about it.
July 24th, 2017 15:26
THE LIFE AHEAD
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is but a stage and we are the actors ... a theme about which I have written too, probably not as well, and embrace completely. I love this one, Michael! A concise beauty.
July 24th, 2017 09:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is but a stage and we are the actors ... a theme about which I have written too, probably not as well, and embrace completely. I love this one, Michael! A concise beauty.
July 24th, 2017 09:34
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