Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A FEW COUPLETS
Louis Gibbs said:
Classic couplets, Michael! Well done. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 07:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Classic couplets, Michael! Well done. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 07:19
A FEW COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent wisdom-filled couplets and great sculpture Michael - you have many talents my friend.
July 14th, 2017 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent wisdom-filled couplets and great sculpture Michael - you have many talents my friend.
July 14th, 2017 04:52
A FEW COUPLETS
FredPeyer said:
Michael I love these couplets. Too bad that hardly any of today\'s youth even know what bellows mean or do. And the milk cart you can forget completely.
The last one is the one that intrigues me the most.
July 14th, 2017 03:23
FredPeyer said:
Michael I love these couplets. Too bad that hardly any of today\'s youth even know what bellows mean or do. And the milk cart you can forget completely.
The last one is the one that intrigues me the most.
July 14th, 2017 03:23
A FEW COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Morning Michael | don\'t fret about your Pole Position | I have been Cock of the Walk for a day. Form rhyming couplets do stand alone !
When all is said and done
The war of words is WON !
Thanks for the MODEL (photo ?) it is OUR Adult Education College in Trumpton. You will like my HOT AIR BALLOON Painting & Poem today - please check - BRIAN
July 14th, 2017 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Morning Michael | don\'t fret about your Pole Position | I have been Cock of the Walk for a day. Form rhyming couplets do stand alone !
When all is said and done
The war of words is WON !
Thanks for the MODEL (photo ?) it is OUR Adult Education College in Trumpton. You will like my HOT AIR BALLOON Painting & Poem today - please check - BRIAN
July 14th, 2017 03:06
A FEW COUPLETS
burning-embers said:
These are really good. Thought provoking. Did you reveal them \'as is\' because you\'ve had them a while and couldn\'t find a use for them (Sorry i\'m a cheeky buggah) or are you just red hot at thinking these sizzlers up. When i get a little pearl like these i want to encapsulate it in a bigger piece you see.
July 14th, 2017 02:52
burning-embers said:
These are really good. Thought provoking. Did you reveal them \'as is\' because you\'ve had them a while and couldn\'t find a use for them (Sorry i\'m a cheeky buggah) or are you just red hot at thinking these sizzlers up. When i get a little pearl like these i want to encapsulate it in a bigger piece you see.
July 14th, 2017 02:52
A FEW COUPLETS
kevin browne said:
that\'s so sweet Michael Edwards. well done on putting these wonderful words together.
July 14th, 2017 00:47
kevin browne said:
that\'s so sweet Michael Edwards. well done on putting these wonderful words together.
July 14th, 2017 00:47
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
Heather T said:
This spun on to a gorgeous resolution. I adore images of candles shedding their shifting light. I hope your garden is as lovely after 300 traipsers traipsed.
July 13th, 2017 17:25
Heather T said:
This spun on to a gorgeous resolution. I adore images of candles shedding their shifting light. I hope your garden is as lovely after 300 traipsers traipsed.
July 13th, 2017 17:25
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL | For posting a poem in a classic form RONDELET AbAabbA It is the repetition of the title - Through the night - as lines 1 3 7 that emphasises and reinforces the subject. At my age I could sustain the Love & Passion - \"All through the Night\" it calls for high libido and compatibility ! Thank for sharing - BRIAN I love walled gardens |- very intimate ! B
July 13th, 2017 14:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL | For posting a poem in a classic form RONDELET AbAabbA It is the repetition of the title - Through the night - as lines 1 3 7 that emphasises and reinforces the subject. At my age I could sustain the Love & Passion - \"All through the Night\" it calls for high libido and compatibility ! Thank for sharing - BRIAN I love walled gardens |- very intimate ! B
July 13th, 2017 14:16
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an intimate note of positive vibes. Well done Michael and what a tidy garden you have.
July 13th, 2017 02:33
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an intimate note of positive vibes. Well done Michael and what a tidy garden you have.
July 13th, 2017 02:33
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But, crash! It\'s me swooning and falling over. Ecstasy and writhing? Oohh, should I try them?! I\'m going into that garden there, to cool off. heehee.
July 13th, 2017 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But, crash! It\'s me swooning and falling over. Ecstasy and writhing? Oohh, should I try them?! I\'m going into that garden there, to cool off. heehee.
July 13th, 2017 01:57
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
P.H.Rose said:
Really great piece Michael
And I love that pic of
Your garden
July 13th, 2017 01:51
P.H.Rose said:
Really great piece Michael
And I love that pic of
Your garden
July 13th, 2017 01:51
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Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on forever.
July 13th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on forever.
July 13th, 2017 01:10
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
FredPeyer said:
Sorry, forgot to mention: I love your garden, mine looks more like a jungle.
July 13th, 2017 01:04
FredPeyer said:
Sorry, forgot to mention: I love your garden, mine looks more like a jungle.
July 13th, 2017 01:04
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FredPeyer said:
Michael, in my humble opinion that last stanza made it so much better!
July 13th, 2017 01:04
FredPeyer said:
Michael, in my humble opinion that last stanza made it so much better!
July 13th, 2017 01:04
THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
burning-embers said:
Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times better for the final verse. Excellent.
July 13th, 2017 00:25
burning-embers said:
Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times better for the final verse. Excellent.
July 13th, 2017 00:25
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Augustus said:
Art is a lie that tells the truth. Politics..... nicely done
July 12th, 2017 15:24
Augustus said:
Art is a lie that tells the truth. Politics..... nicely done
July 12th, 2017 15:24
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Heather T said:
Instead of a proper comment, let me just leave this with wild applause. 👏
July 12th, 2017 14:44
Heather T said:
Instead of a proper comment, let me just leave this with wild applause. 👏
July 12th, 2017 14:44
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, after reading it I fully understand why you like it yourself. There is no politician in this world who could express something so profound in so few words.
I printed it and it now hangs on my wall next to the computer. Hope you don\'t mind.
July 12th, 2017 10:45
FredPeyer said:
Michael, after reading it I fully understand why you like it yourself. There is no politician in this world who could express something so profound in so few words.
I printed it and it now hangs on my wall next to the computer. Hope you don\'t mind.
July 12th, 2017 10:45
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the AURORA BOREALLIS ~ very WIMBLEDON ~ mauve & green ! Love the doublet ~ both lines are equally true ~ BRIAN.
July 12th, 2017 09:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the AURORA BOREALLIS ~ very WIMBLEDON ~ mauve & green ! Love the doublet ~ both lines are equally true ~ BRIAN.
July 12th, 2017 09:34
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Louis Gibbs said:
A brilliant couplet, Michael! And love the fist being rammed down our throats by politicians in your painting.
July 12th, 2017 08:48
Louis Gibbs said:
A brilliant couplet, Michael! And love the fist being rammed down our throats by politicians in your painting.
July 12th, 2017 08:48
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
P.H.Rose said:
I absolutely love this Michael
It is just so bloody true
And to explain it with so
Few words is brilliant...
July 12th, 2017 07:37
P.H.Rose said:
I absolutely love this Michael
It is just so bloody true
And to explain it with so
Few words is brilliant...
July 12th, 2017 07:37
THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Goldfinch60 said:
I could have written that with my cynical view of politicians.
I could not have painted that fabulous abstract though.
July 12th, 2017 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I could have written that with my cynical view of politicians.
I could not have painted that fabulous abstract though.
July 12th, 2017 02:50
A FEW SINGLE LINERS
malubotelho said:
I felt like looking at a paint of a woman hanging the clothes on those clothing lines and a man standing on a door watching her. I could feel the swing of colorful clothes and gaze of his eyes. Beautiful way of writing and the painting is amazing 😉 Thanks
July 11th, 2017 12:56
malubotelho said:
I felt like looking at a paint of a woman hanging the clothes on those clothing lines and a man standing on a door watching her. I could feel the swing of colorful clothes and gaze of his eyes. Beautiful way of writing and the painting is amazing 😉 Thanks
July 11th, 2017 12:56
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