Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
CLOSE OF DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13
CLOSE OF DAY
orchidee said:
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at the START of the day!
August 13th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at the START of the day!
August 13th, 2017 01:45
CLOSE OF DAY
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget, that 0.00 time is 7pm Saturday here in Hawaii.
Great septolet! Love how you wrote about the smoke in the air!
August 13th, 2017 00:44
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget, that 0.00 time is 7pm Saturday here in Hawaii.
Great septolet! Love how you wrote about the smoke in the air!
August 13th, 2017 00:44
LANTURNE 2
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
August 12th, 2017 17:35
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
August 12th, 2017 17:35
LANTURNE 2
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this brings back lots of memories! And this time the lantern shape looks great!
August 12th, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this brings back lots of memories! And this time the lantern shape looks great!
August 12th, 2017 11:31
LANTURNE 2
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10
LANTURNE 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ Oh YES I remember it well ! The smell if the HAY and the scent of HAY~LEY the Farmer\'s Nubile Daughter !
She was only the Farmers Daughter
Doin\' what she didn\'t oughter
In the Hay @ half past three
Doin\' what comes naturally !
Love the Cotswolds Pen \'n Ink
Yours BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 02:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ Oh YES I remember it well ! The smell if the HAY and the scent of HAY~LEY the Farmer\'s Nubile Daughter !
She was only the Farmers Daughter
Doin\' what she didn\'t oughter
In the Hay @ half past three
Doin\' what comes naturally !
Love the Cotswolds Pen \'n Ink
Yours BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 02:05
A LANTURNE
malubotelho said:
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
August 11th, 2017 17:07
malubotelho said:
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
August 11th, 2017 17:07
A LANTURNE
FredPeyer said:
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
August 11th, 2017 11:49
FredPeyer said:
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
August 11th, 2017 11:49
A LANTURNE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:11
A LANTURNE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that\'s late! lol.
August 11th, 2017 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that\'s late! lol.
August 11th, 2017 01:59
A LANTURNE
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:36
EMERGING
WriteBeLight said:
Brings up a lot of images of a beautiful time. Thanks Michael.
August 10th, 2017 12:10
WriteBeLight said:
Brings up a lot of images of a beautiful time. Thanks Michael.
August 10th, 2017 12:10
EMERGING
malubotelho said:
Another lovely written scene that left a trace on my heart. So beautiful. Do you have a painting with the couple coming out from the trees? I would love to see it.
August 10th, 2017 09:42
malubotelho said:
Another lovely written scene that left a trace on my heart. So beautiful. Do you have a painting with the couple coming out from the trees? I would love to see it.
August 10th, 2017 09:42
EMERGING
orchidee said:
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02
EMERGING
Frank Prem said:
Lovely little piece and a fine sketch, Michael. Enjoyed.
August 10th, 2017 02:27
Frank Prem said:
Lovely little piece and a fine sketch, Michael. Enjoyed.
August 10th, 2017 02:27
EMERGING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21
EMERGING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Bon Giorno MICHAEL ~ Grazie for a full Tanka (57577) !
Q. Where do you find MANGOES ?
A. Where WOMANGOES !
I invite you for breakfast ~ a bowl of Ministrone
Crusty bread and a glass of Chianti Classico
Tu Amico Poetico ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2017 01:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Bon Giorno MICHAEL ~ Grazie for a full Tanka (57577) !
Q. Where do you find MANGOES ?
A. Where WOMANGOES !
I invite you for breakfast ~ a bowl of Ministrone
Crusty bread and a glass of Chianti Classico
Tu Amico Poetico ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2017 01:27
EMERGING
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s difficult to gauge just how good a poem like this is. With a syllable barrier, it\'s hard to put yourself into the mind of the author. It makes the audience wonder why the author chose the words that he/she used. I like Japanese poetry styles, and this is nice. Good one.
August 10th, 2017 01:23
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s difficult to gauge just how good a poem like this is. With a syllable barrier, it\'s hard to put yourself into the mind of the author. It makes the audience wonder why the author chose the words that he/she used. I like Japanese poetry styles, and this is nice. Good one.
August 10th, 2017 01:23
Dreamers
Nicholas Browning said:
The amount of comments on this is impressive. I must admit, it\'s simple, yet delicate. Stunning.
August 10th, 2017 01:20
Nicholas Browning said:
The amount of comments on this is impressive. I must admit, it\'s simple, yet delicate. Stunning.
August 10th, 2017 01:20
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
myself and me said:
The soft voice flying with the wind through the leaves. Beautiful paint. lovely poem.
August 9th, 2017 20:57
myself and me said:
The soft voice flying with the wind through the leaves. Beautiful paint. lovely poem.
August 9th, 2017 20:57
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