Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A BIT MORE MIRTH
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write with many truths in it.

Good picture, where is it?

April 29th, 2017 00:52

DESPAIR
MendedFences27 said:

Whatever she said, it was powerful, or maybe it was just, \"No.\" Another man crushed by the power of the feminine voice. And the world turns. Great words, Michael. - Phil A.

April 28th, 2017 21:57

DESPAIR
Tony36 said:

Great write, love the pict

April 28th, 2017 10:37

DESPAIR
Lizzy Renee said:

Love the poem. :)

April 28th, 2017 09:07

DESPAIR
Fay Slimm. said:

A powerful few lines here Michael - - the message is couched in some mystery but makes a compelling read. Lovely watercolour too.

April 28th, 2017 07:32

DESPAIR
WriteBeLight said:

Could be about a whole population, Michael, hit by tragedy. Thought provoking.

April 28th, 2017 05:25

DESPAIR
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful write Michael.

Good water colour.

April 28th, 2017 01:59

DESPAIR
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

April 28th, 2017 01:48

NOSTALGIA
MendedFences27 said:

Ah, yes, the memories of our youth. Can they ever be seen again? or have our eyes changed too much? The love of Nature exudes from this poem. Some great phrasing, as is your usual. Really liked this one. -
Phil A.

April 27th, 2017 20:40

NOSTALGIA
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

April 27th, 2017 10:19

NOSTALGIA
WriteBeLight said:

Really nice poetry Michael and adorable art.

April 27th, 2017 06:17

NOSTALGIA
orchidee said:

Great write. Hope you only had that \'gentle rain\' and not a snow-storm, this time of year! Lovely pic too.

April 27th, 2017 01:58

NOSTALGIA
Goldfinch60 said:

Those sounds of nature I too wish to see again. Nature is glorious. Good write.

April 27th, 2017 01:41

NOSTALGIA
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow amazing poem and u employed impressive diction that\'s very poetic. The phrasing so are great as well. Kudos for such a fabulous freeverse.

U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I

April 27th, 2017 00:26

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Oh giggling. Clever witty Limerick. Fun to read from u again. Thumbs up.👍
Will u too my latest?

April 25th, 2017 13:18

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic.

April 22nd, 2017 10:23

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ That should ha\'e been a Giraffe Sculpture nae a fush ! You should see the Girl from next flat to me ~ she has a score of 63 ! 63 from 100 then ? No that\'s her score just out of TEN ! BRIAN Please check my Pyramidal Poem ~ Ta B.

April 22nd, 2017 08:48

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
rrodriguez said:

This poem is poignant in its intrinsic message. Nice!

April 22nd, 2017 08:25

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
willyweed said:

I hope they are long enough to reach her arse as well? nice fish! good one Michael!

April 22nd, 2017 08:19

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
WriteBeLight said:

Has a nice step to it :) Nice fish.

April 22nd, 2017 06:34

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Garry said:

A good reworking of an old joke well done.

April 22nd, 2017 03:13

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, gave me my first smile of the day.

April 22nd, 2017 00:53

ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect \"Diamond shaped Reverse Poem ~ also a very intriguing content ! And the water colour is a perfect compliment to FADED ELEGANCE sitting ALONE ! Yours BRIAN

April 21st, 2017 11:14

ALONE
willyweed said:

nicely done Michael

April 21st, 2017 06:48

ALONE
WriteBeLight said:

Haunting write Michael, but a comforting painting.

April 21st, 2017 06:04

ALONE
orchidee said:

Yes, well-thought out poem and nice pic!

April 21st, 2017 03:37

ALONE
Garry said:

Very cleved and works very well.

April 21st, 2017 02:23

ALONE
Hopey_xx said:

A very nice picture and poem!

April 21st, 2017 01:36

ALONE
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, it works very well.

April 21st, 2017 00:31

ECHOES
MendedFences27 said:

A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a small brook, and a secluded concert for just one, the singer. Very descriptive write lot\'s of great phrasing, \"springtime\'s stretching growth, a snug and sheltered spot, echoes deep in cavities,\" Just a wonderful poem. - Phil A.

April 20th, 2017 20:24



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