Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LIMERICK 25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

There was a young poet called Ted
Who made up Lim\'ricks in \'is \'ed
Some were quite good
Others less clear than mud
Some were better left unread.
Thanks for sharing Michael another good one ! BRIAN


May 11th, 2017 14:52

LIMERICK 25
WriteBeLight said:

Great job Michael. The drawing is very cute. I do not have any gnomes. I do have a gargoyle that protects my home. He has been around for a long time and has made it through many, many winters.

May 11th, 2017 05:27

LIMERICK 25
Goldfinch60 said:

Great fun write and love the cartoon.

May 11th, 2017 01:46

LIMERICK 25
orchidee said:

A fine write. lol.

May 11th, 2017 01:31

LIMERICK 25
swingline said:

I\'m falling out laughing . Lost more than the leath on tha tweeth . He sounds more bark than bite !

May 11th, 2017 00:35

NATURAL THREAT
WriteBeLight said:

Picture works here Michael. The aftermath in a way :)

May 10th, 2017 12:55

NATURAL THREAT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Dunno about that \'xylophagous\' stuff from EC. I might swoon if I knew what it meant! lol.

May 10th, 2017 08:46

NATURAL THREAT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the flow and shape of this form (2 4 6 8 2) it is very appropriate to the subject of the poem ! Love the painting ~ Trees are great \"role models\" and survive awful conditions ~ because they are rooted and grounded in LOVE (Earth) ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my Flower Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B.

May 10th, 2017 05:30

NATURAL THREAT
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and I love the picture.

May 10th, 2017 02:10

BUFFET FODDER
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 9th, 2017 08:20

BUFFET FODDER
WriteBeLight said:

Great message in the poem Michael, but you should have accompanied it with one of your cartoons :) Pizza can be made in a very healthy way, but I agree with swingline. Chefs from all over the world have their own take on it. But, nonetheless, have a slice (small one) with some greens alongside, that is my thought. Although, I rarely eat Pizza, unless I make it at home with tomatoes from the garden. :)

May 9th, 2017 06:26

BUFFET FODDER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ We are both writing on FOOD today and it\'s mot even MARDI GRAS ! I love itallian but it must be the works ! i ANTIPASTI Crusty bread dipped in olive oil & balsamic and five types of olives and proccutio PRIMO Pizza a quatro stagione SECONDO spaghetti a la carbonara DULCI ~ Tiramisu and a bottle or two of CHIANTI or a Glass or two of PERONI e fromaggio ! Viva La Comida Italiana ~ CAIO BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ I hope you are not a 5 7 5 Haiku purist ! Thanks B Adoro la Immagine Bella

May 9th, 2017 05:00

BUFFET FODDER
orchidee said:

Pork pie - oh yes! My obsession in me madder moments! Good write and pic. Porkie pies - morning, noon, and night, please! heehee.

May 9th, 2017 01:48

BUFFET FODDER
Goldfinch60 said:

Pizzas are OK as you rightly say Michael as a snack or lunch but not as a main meal.
Good write and good painting.

May 9th, 2017 01:24

BUFFET FODDER
swingline said:

Beautiful painting ! I used to love pizza . Now I don\'t . They used to use real cheese , great sauce and toppings that pleased . You would think you\'ve hit oil . So much grease , maybe you could get $5 a barrel .
No wonder you can get two large pizzas for $10 a pop . But before you do , just think about it and stop .


May 9th, 2017 00:46

BUFFET FODDER
P.X. Vexxus said:

I love pizza but I also liked the poem!

May 9th, 2017 00:08

CASTAWAY
WriteBeLight said:

Love this Michael, painting and last lines, in particular.

May 8th, 2017 13:33

CASTAWAY
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 8th, 2017 07:01

CASTAWAY
swingline said:

Anything about tropical storms I love . Though if I were castaway that would be the last thing I would want . One nagging question I have . Is there a missing word after \'fresh\' or is it all to be my imagination .

May 8th, 2017 04:58

CASTAWAY
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write with great imagery.

Love the picture.

May 8th, 2017 01:46

CASTAWAY
orchidee said:

A fine write and picture.

May 8th, 2017 01:36

AT THE CONCERT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YOUR ABSTRACT MICHAEL ~ is very Kadinsky ~ very rhythmic and musical ! A live Classical Music Concert is the closest we ever get to \"Heaven on Earth\". Some of my extended Family are Music Teachers and it should be a compulsory subjects up to 16 ~ it is very important to Community adhesion. Scrap TRIDENT and channel the money into Education and the NHS ! BRIAN

May 7th, 2017 10:20

AT THE CONCERT
swingline said:

Abstract ? I see none in either the painting or poem . Words make music in our head\'s and paintings decorate the walls of our hearts . And all the arts are a Symphony .

May 7th, 2017 07:55

AT THE CONCERT
orchidee said:

A fine write and painting.

May 7th, 2017 01:52

AT THE CONCERT
Fay Slimm. said:

Like your paintings the words of this poem make music to those who love beauty - a lovely posting Michael.

May 7th, 2017 01:49

AT THE CONCERT
Goldfinch60 said:

May the music always be there in our lives.

May 7th, 2017 01:19

DINING ETIQUETTE
MendedFences27 said:

All manners have left the table, or so it seems. The best of the best restaurants now allow casual dress ( code for slovenly). Eating at fast food places is like shopping at Walmart, you never know what you will see. Waiters have never learned and are a product of the \"new responsibility.\" Maybe it is better to stay home and avoid the torture that is dining out. - Phil A.

May 6th, 2017 20:41

DINING ETIQUETTE
Mizzy said:

Gosh, I personally only care about the quality of the food lol

May 6th, 2017 17:12

DINING ETIQUETTE
Bibbeck said:

The echo of \"hold your cutlery properly\" and \"sit up straight\" from my parents has stayed with me all these years. It\'s not really just good manners that are disappearing, but simple polite consideration in thoughts and actions, which doesn\'t take a minute of effort.

May 6th, 2017 14:20

DINING ETIQUETTE
swingline said:

Impressive display , I\'m amazed at the attitude . Did Jesus wash his hands before he rubbed the wheat in his hands to eat . Did he not say it is not what goes into the body that defiles but what comes out of the heart .

May 6th, 2017 12:58



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