Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
BLONKIT NIBBLUS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUBBLIN TIKNOLB
Pastrami ~ stuck in throat~he
Sick over edgeof the boatee
Then he fell in ~ head over chin
And they progged him back in
With a grapplehook hooked in his goatee
Thanks for another GOBBLEDEGOOK ~ BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUBBLIN TIKNOLB
Pastrami ~ stuck in throat~he
Sick over edgeof the boatee
Then he fell in ~ head over chin
And they progged him back in
With a grapplehook hooked in his goatee
Thanks for another GOBBLEDEGOOK ~ BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 08:03
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Augustus said:
\"Rhymic grace she rose in soft half tones\" This is incredibly beautiful and takes my breath away to savor in its entirety.
May 24th, 2017 11:49
Augustus said:
\"Rhymic grace she rose in soft half tones\" This is incredibly beautiful and takes my breath away to savor in its entirety.
May 24th, 2017 11:49
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
swingline said:
Phanstasmorigal is the vison I see . The vapours specter rendering a purpose that somewhat is alluding to me . I had flashbacks of North Africa in the painting of yours , someplace along the ocean , near a beach , maybe in Tripoli .
May 24th, 2017 07:33
swingline said:
Phanstasmorigal is the vison I see . The vapours specter rendering a purpose that somewhat is alluding to me . I had flashbacks of North Africa in the painting of yours , someplace along the ocean , near a beach , maybe in Tripoli .
May 24th, 2017 07:33
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Fay Slimm. said:
A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A haunt of a read Michael and thanks to for the peep at your clean, clear and beautiful watercolour of ruins which once were her residence.
May 24th, 2017 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A haunt of a read Michael and thanks to for the peep at your clean, clear and beautiful watercolour of ruins which once were her residence.
May 24th, 2017 04:54
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Goldfinch60 said:
A beautiful write Michael.
I like the watercolour as well.
May 24th, 2017 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
A beautiful write Michael.
I like the watercolour as well.
May 24th, 2017 01:21
LIMMERICK 29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SAID a Boy to his Teacher one day
Wright has written tonight wrong I say
The Teacher replied
Staring horrified
Right ~ Wright ~ write tonight right
Right ~ right away ! TOUCHE !
Please check my poem today ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 23rd, 2017 08:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SAID a Boy to his Teacher one day
Wright has written tonight wrong I say
The Teacher replied
Staring horrified
Right ~ Wright ~ write tonight right
Right ~ right away ! TOUCHE !
Please check my poem today ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 23rd, 2017 08:36
LIMMERICK 29
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his tunic. Good limerick too.
May 23rd, 2017 02:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his tunic. Good limerick too.
May 23rd, 2017 02:49
LIMMERICK 29
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh, wasn\'t there some trouble about Donald Duck not wearing trousers? And Porky Pig in those cartoons too?! But then again, you ever seen animals wearing clothes, apart from some winter coats for dogs, etc?
May 23rd, 2017 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh, wasn\'t there some trouble about Donald Duck not wearing trousers? And Porky Pig in those cartoons too?! But then again, you ever seen animals wearing clothes, apart from some winter coats for dogs, etc?
May 23rd, 2017 01:53
THE CLOAK I WEAR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ For the perspective in both the Poem and the Painting. We all wear cloaks (very Harry Potter !) To protect and enhance our Outer Persona (Edwardian Men often sported a cloak) but also to cloak our Inner Weaknesses ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
May 22nd, 2017 03:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ For the perspective in both the Poem and the Painting. We all wear cloaks (very Harry Potter !) To protect and enhance our Outer Persona (Edwardian Men often sported a cloak) but also to cloak our Inner Weaknesses ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
May 22nd, 2017 03:49
THE CLOAK I WEAR
swingline said:
Does the cloak of uncertainly protect the without from the within ? Or the within from the without are there any doubts ?
May 22nd, 2017 03:20
swingline said:
Does the cloak of uncertainly protect the without from the within ? Or the within from the without are there any doubts ?
May 22nd, 2017 03:20
THE CLOAK I WEAR
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this - both picture and verse are so absorbingly good
May 22nd, 2017 01:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this - both picture and verse are so absorbingly good
May 22nd, 2017 01:55
THE CLOAK I WEAR
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic. I might have incerti-wotsit too! *gets out dictionary* heehee.
May 22nd, 2017 01:32
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic. I might have incerti-wotsit too! *gets out dictionary* heehee.
May 22nd, 2017 01:32
LIMERICK 29
Augustus said:
Cleverly written to describe perfectly that certain character.
May 21st, 2017 12:12
Augustus said:
Cleverly written to describe perfectly that certain character.
May 21st, 2017 12:12
LIMERICK 29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
An MPS Poet called MIKE
Cycled to work on his BIKE
He caused quite a fuss
When he got on the bus
And harangued them \"BE GREEN\" with his MIKE
Thanks Michael for another amusing LIMMY ~ keep them coming ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.
May 21st, 2017 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
An MPS Poet called MIKE
Cycled to work on his BIKE
He caused quite a fuss
When he got on the bus
And harangued them \"BE GREEN\" with his MIKE
Thanks Michael for another amusing LIMMY ~ keep them coming ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.
May 21st, 2017 03:58
LIMERICK 29
orchidee said:
How jolly top-hole this is - the poem and the pic! Oh I say, \'tally-ho, and all that rubbish\'! lol.
May 21st, 2017 01:29
orchidee said:
How jolly top-hole this is - the poem and the pic! Oh I say, \'tally-ho, and all that rubbish\'! lol.
May 21st, 2017 01:29
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