Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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Garry said:
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think there are lots of poems that would be improved by being culled slightly.
This paints vivid image in just a few words. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 05:59
Garry said:
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think there are lots of poems that would be improved by being culled slightly.
This paints vivid image in just a few words. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 05:59
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
MendedFences27 said:
Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t know about, or one you created. It\'s very clever and probably hard to write. I did enjoy it though. - Phil A.
April 3rd, 2017 20:29
MendedFences27 said:
Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t know about, or one you created. It\'s very clever and probably hard to write. I did enjoy it though. - Phil A.
April 3rd, 2017 20:29
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
rrodriguez said:
Wine nor beer for me, but for the poem, serve me another one! Great write...!
April 3rd, 2017 19:43
rrodriguez said:
Wine nor beer for me, but for the poem, serve me another one! Great write...!
April 3rd, 2017 19:43
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
P.H.Rose said:
Good poem Michael
But alas I am not
A grape drinker
Run and beer...
But not in the same
Glass !!!!!
April 3rd, 2017 08:05
P.H.Rose said:
Good poem Michael
But alas I am not
A grape drinker
Run and beer...
But not in the same
Glass !!!!!
April 3rd, 2017 08:05
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wine which maketh GLAD ~ The heart of Man ~ Beer I fear makes Man morose ~ and MAD ! Thanks for sharing your bottle ~ love reverse poems ~ please check mine today ~ Thanks BRIAN. Interesting that you posted a GRAVEYARD with a wine poem. If you search the gravestones you will find an epitaph which reads: SIR WILLIAM OVERTIPPLE Here lies a Knight ~ Fell out of bed while drinking RED ~ Should have stuck to WHITE ! BRIAN
April 3rd, 2017 03:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wine which maketh GLAD ~ The heart of Man ~ Beer I fear makes Man morose ~ and MAD ! Thanks for sharing your bottle ~ love reverse poems ~ please check mine today ~ Thanks BRIAN. Interesting that you posted a GRAVEYARD with a wine poem. If you search the gravestones you will find an epitaph which reads: SIR WILLIAM OVERTIPPLE Here lies a Knight ~ Fell out of bed while drinking RED ~ Should have stuck to WHITE ! BRIAN
April 3rd, 2017 03:27
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
Garry said:
Very neat and well crafted. A good pint of real ale served without too much head and about room temperature. Can\'t beat it.
April 3rd, 2017 02:58
Garry said:
Very neat and well crafted. A good pint of real ale served without too much head and about room temperature. Can\'t beat it.
April 3rd, 2017 02:58
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a Rioja - Cheers!
Good watercolour as well.
April 3rd, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a Rioja - Cheers!
Good watercolour as well.
April 3rd, 2017 01:42
A SUNDAY SMILE
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers PH - this is the top of the High Road in Market Harborough. Just had a big row because BT removed a telephone box situated where the dark shadows are in this painting. After a great furore they have agreed to replace it. Oh the trials and tribulations of local politics.
April 2nd, 2017 11:21
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers PH - this is the top of the High Road in Market Harborough. Just had a big row because BT removed a telephone box situated where the dark shadows are in this painting. After a great furore they have agreed to replace it. Oh the trials and tribulations of local politics.
April 2nd, 2017 11:21
A SUNDAY SMILE
P.H.Rose said:
So very good Michael
Well done....
Me and my lovely
Wife have just been
To the pier in my
Town for a walk
Around the marina
Your painting looks like
Exactly where we parked
April 2nd, 2017 10:13
P.H.Rose said:
So very good Michael
Well done....
Me and my lovely
Wife have just been
To the pier in my
Town for a walk
Around the marina
Your painting looks like
Exactly where we parked
April 2nd, 2017 10:13
A SUNDAY SMILE
willyweed said:
I just call this \" I like it\" and the painting too!
April 2nd, 2017 08:37
willyweed said:
I just call this \" I like it\" and the painting too!
April 2nd, 2017 08:37
A SUNDAY SMILE
Michael Edwards said:
Committed? I think I omitted is the word - apologies we all get it wrong from time to time - aw heck off to do some gardening. Cheers Brian.
April 2nd, 2017 05:10
Michael Edwards said:
Committed? I think I omitted is the word - apologies we all get it wrong from time to time - aw heck off to do some gardening. Cheers Brian.
April 2nd, 2017 05:10
A SUNDAY SMILE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Two more HAIKU with gentle humour accompanied by a an equally gentle painting ! Thanks for caring and sharing. For JAPANESE HAIKU and SENRYU there are rules as strict as the EU ~ but we English have more laissez faire and subject is as important as style. So we aim for 5-7-5 but don\'t always achieve it ~ we are renowned globally for our humour and we like our ditties to rhyme so my HAIKU (and SENRYU) often break three GOLDEN RULES and I am careful never to visit JAPAN ! In your comment I think you committed the word NOT after the forth word. Like the infamous \"Sinners Bible\" which states the Seventh Commandment as THOU SHALT COMMIT ADULTERY ~ It sold out in a day ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 03:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Two more HAIKU with gentle humour accompanied by a an equally gentle painting ! Thanks for caring and sharing. For JAPANESE HAIKU and SENRYU there are rules as strict as the EU ~ but we English have more laissez faire and subject is as important as style. So we aim for 5-7-5 but don\'t always achieve it ~ we are renowned globally for our humour and we like our ditties to rhyme so my HAIKU (and SENRYU) often break three GOLDEN RULES and I am careful never to visit JAPAN ! In your comment I think you committed the word NOT after the forth word. Like the infamous \"Sinners Bible\" which states the Seventh Commandment as THOU SHALT COMMIT ADULTERY ~ It sold out in a day ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 03:45
A SUNDAY SMILE
orchidee said:
Good write and great pic. If we were fussy, we could insist Haikus MUST be 5.7.5. But it don\'t matter if they are not always exact - unless we\'re counting! lol.
April 2nd, 2017 03:12
orchidee said:
Good write and great pic. If we were fussy, we could insist Haikus MUST be 5.7.5. But it don\'t matter if they are not always exact - unless we\'re counting! lol.
April 2nd, 2017 03:12
A SUNDAY SMILE
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent with brush and water always amazes and this piece today just took my breath with its lines of reality - a wonderful treat to see your portfolio my friend - - and yes the haikus raised a smile with their terse wit. Perfectly done again Michael.
April 2nd, 2017 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent with brush and water always amazes and this piece today just took my breath with its lines of reality - a wonderful treat to see your portfolio my friend - - and yes the haikus raised a smile with their terse wit. Perfectly done again Michael.
April 2nd, 2017 03:01
A SUNDAY SMILE
Michael Edwards said:
Okay so haikus are supposed to be funny but why not. There are only \'rules\' in poetry - no laws. If rules were meant to be broken why write them in the first place? Plus a watercolour of my town. Went into town yesterday - the sun was out and the centre is a riot of colour with large tubs of flowers everywhere - regularly voted in the top 10 best towns to live in the UK - I feel honoured to live here. (Well actually I live in a village just outside the town so I get the best of both worlds.)
April 2nd, 2017 00:33
Michael Edwards said:
Okay so haikus are supposed to be funny but why not. There are only \'rules\' in poetry - no laws. If rules were meant to be broken why write them in the first place? Plus a watercolour of my town. Went into town yesterday - the sun was out and the centre is a riot of colour with large tubs of flowers everywhere - regularly voted in the top 10 best towns to live in the UK - I feel honoured to live here. (Well actually I live in a village just outside the town so I get the best of both worlds.)
April 2nd, 2017 00:33
THE PATH
MendedFences27 said:
This one is truly impressive. Not only for the pathways trail winding toward the sea, but your descriptions of it and the final \"demise,\" are brilliant. A great poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
P.S. - Is that a French clown looking down from the clouds?
April 1st, 2017 18:59
MendedFences27 said:
This one is truly impressive. Not only for the pathways trail winding toward the sea, but your descriptions of it and the final \"demise,\" are brilliant. A great poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
P.S. - Is that a French clown looking down from the clouds?
April 1st, 2017 18:59
THE PATH
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. The path to nowhere but does nowhere exist?
Great painting, I really like this.
April 1st, 2017 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. The path to nowhere but does nowhere exist?
Great painting, I really like this.
April 1st, 2017 01:19
THE PATH
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - this has to be one of your best pieces of descriptive poetry Michael - a delight to read over again this picture of a path\'s journey to seaward demise. A perfect match to the striking watercolour too.
April 1st, 2017 01:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - this has to be one of your best pieces of descriptive poetry Michael - a delight to read over again this picture of a path\'s journey to seaward demise. A perfect match to the striking watercolour too.
April 1st, 2017 01:02
WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
ron parrish aka wordman said:
going to be a book soon,liked it
March 31st, 2017 21:19
ron parrish aka wordman said:
going to be a book soon,liked it
March 31st, 2017 21:19
THE BARMY BARD
MendedFences27 said:
Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his writings. I think some people are actors. Well, time for my exit. Oh, there\'s no cat in that painting it\'s an overhead, fisheye len\'s view of a couple of ice dancers.
March 31st, 2017 19:50
MendedFences27 said:
Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his writings. I think some people are actors. Well, time for my exit. Oh, there\'s no cat in that painting it\'s an overhead, fisheye len\'s view of a couple of ice dancers.
March 31st, 2017 19:50
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