Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
AS YET UNWRITTEN
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
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thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
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P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..
June 3rd, 2017 03:05
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..
June 3rd, 2017 03:05
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swingline said:
I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .
June 3rd, 2017 02:24
swingline said:
I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .
June 3rd, 2017 02:24
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MaddieJ said:
As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!
June 3rd, 2017 01:20
MaddieJ said:
As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!
June 3rd, 2017 01:20
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Augustus said:
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.
June 2nd, 2017 06:37
Augustus said:
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.
June 2nd, 2017 06:37
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR THOSE OF US STILL WORKING ~ Cartoons and ambiguities make FRIDAY more bearable ! I was researching the \"Wisdom of Kentucky\" and came across this sign outside a Church !
BEST SAUSAGE SUPPER
IN ST LOUIS
COME AND EAT
PASTOR THOMAS RESSLER
I knew they all intermarried but I didn\'t
realise they still pracised CANABALISM !
Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
June 2nd, 2017 03:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR THOSE OF US STILL WORKING ~ Cartoons and ambiguities make FRIDAY more bearable ! I was researching the \"Wisdom of Kentucky\" and came across this sign outside a Church !
BEST SAUSAGE SUPPER
IN ST LOUIS
COME AND EAT
PASTOR THOMAS RESSLER
I knew they all intermarried but I didn\'t
realise they still pracised CANABALISM !
Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
June 2nd, 2017 03:57
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Goldfinch60 said:
The English language is a minefield of inconsistency when not written, correctly.
June 2nd, 2017 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
The English language is a minefield of inconsistency when not written, correctly.
June 2nd, 2017 02:03
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
orchidee said:
Oh lol. And who are Bill Stickers and Bill Posters? They are going to be prosecuted when they get caught!
June 2nd, 2017 01:46
orchidee said:
Oh lol. And who are Bill Stickers and Bill Posters? They are going to be prosecuted when they get caught!
June 2nd, 2017 01:46
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
swingline said:
While visiting a white racist antigay bar in America the English tourists saw a sign that said \"No Fags Allowed\" and immediately left their cigarettes on the bus .
June 2nd, 2017 00:35
swingline said:
While visiting a white racist antigay bar in America the English tourists saw a sign that said \"No Fags Allowed\" and immediately left their cigarettes on the bus .
June 2nd, 2017 00:35
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Michael Edwards said:
Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be visiting him.
June 2nd, 2017 00:09
Michael Edwards said:
Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be visiting him.
June 2nd, 2017 00:09
LIMERICK 32
Louis Gibbs said:
Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.
June 1st, 2017 08:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.
June 1st, 2017 08:48
LIMERICK 32
Augustus said:
Sniffer mouse-- giggle.
Small screen-- bucking the trend for larger and larger ( with less useful content)
June 1st, 2017 08:05
Augustus said:
Sniffer mouse-- giggle.
Small screen-- bucking the trend for larger and larger ( with less useful content)
June 1st, 2017 08:05
LIMERICK 32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It\'s a problem for Men
Veggie Growers and Hatters
They find in the end
That size ~ really Matters
Things look less obscene
On a smaller screen !
Thanks for caring ~ love the cartoon ! BRIAN
Please check my BEE POEM ~ Thanks BEE.
June 1st, 2017 05:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It\'s a problem for Men
Veggie Growers and Hatters
They find in the end
That size ~ really Matters
Things look less obscene
On a smaller screen !
Thanks for caring ~ love the cartoon ! BRIAN
Please check my BEE POEM ~ Thanks BEE.
June 1st, 2017 05:06
LIMERICK 32
Fay Slimm. said:
Where do you get these limericks from Michael - so full of fun.
June 1st, 2017 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Where do you get these limericks from Michael - so full of fun.
June 1st, 2017 04:18
LIMERICK 32
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha Michael
Another cracker
And the drawing
Would be perfect
For my Ellie lapage
Poem/story
June 1st, 2017 03:37
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha Michael
Another cracker
And the drawing
Would be perfect
For my Ellie lapage
Poem/story
June 1st, 2017 03:37
MEN IN SHORTS
Augustus said:
I agree. But a 300 pound woman in spandex is what gets to me
May 31st, 2017 11:52
Augustus said:
I agree. But a 300 pound woman in spandex is what gets to me
May 31st, 2017 11:52
MEN IN SHORTS
Louis Gibbs said:
Aside from all the frivolity above, which I enjoyed thoroughly, Let me say that your poem is impressive ... very well done, Michael! We can use all the humor we can get.
May 31st, 2017 09:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Aside from all the frivolity above, which I enjoyed thoroughly, Let me say that your poem is impressive ... very well done, Michael! We can use all the humor we can get.
May 31st, 2017 09:30
MEN IN SHORTS
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha love this Michael
But... I\'m pushing 60 in
Three years and to be
Honest have legs like
An 18 year old.....
Apparently them and
My bum are my best bits..
When people say it to me
I\'m not sure if it\'s a compliment
Or not.... anyway, good poem sir..
May 31st, 2017 05:45
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha love this Michael
But... I\'m pushing 60 in
Three years and to be
Honest have legs like
An 18 year old.....
Apparently them and
My bum are my best bits..
When people say it to me
I\'m not sure if it\'s a compliment
Or not.... anyway, good poem sir..
May 31st, 2017 05:45
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