Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
COMICAL COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Knock, knock\"
\"Who\'s there?\"
\"Knock\"
\"Knock who?\"
\"Knock,knock\"
April 14th, 2017 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Knock, knock\"
\"Who\'s there?\"
\"Knock\"
\"Knock who?\"
\"Knock,knock\"
April 14th, 2017 01:37
LEICESTER STATION
MendedFences27 said:
Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound clock, really? Wow! Is this the original station or has it been expanded over time? Loved the poem. - Phil A.
April 13th, 2017 19:46
MendedFences27 said:
Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound clock, really? Wow! Is this the original station or has it been expanded over time? Loved the poem. - Phil A.
April 13th, 2017 19:46
LEICESTER STATION
P.H.Rose said:
Absolutely love this
Michael.... my kind
Of poem.....
April 13th, 2017 17:58
P.H.Rose said:
Absolutely love this
Michael.... my kind
Of poem.....
April 13th, 2017 17:58
LEICESTER STATION
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the hustle and bustle in the writing Michael. Great again on both accounts!
April 13th, 2017 06:28
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the hustle and bustle in the writing Michael. Great again on both accounts!
April 13th, 2017 06:28
LEICESTER STATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well done today MICHAEL ~ I consider that the Painting & the Poem should always be symbiotic and you really do deserve a star today ! I did some research at Leicester University a fine City and still a fine Footy Team ! Love the poem and your use of half-rhyme ~ a lost art ~ especially when combined with disciplined meter ! Please check my RISPETTO ~ BRIAN
April 13th, 2017 05:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well done today MICHAEL ~ I consider that the Painting & the Poem should always be symbiotic and you really do deserve a star today ! I did some research at Leicester University a fine City and still a fine Footy Team ! Love the poem and your use of half-rhyme ~ a lost art ~ especially when combined with disciplined meter ! Please check my RISPETTO ~ BRIAN
April 13th, 2017 05:17
LEICESTER STATION
Fay Slimm. said:
Leicester has reason to be proud of both picture an poem dear Michael - - an excellent duo.
April 13th, 2017 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Leicester has reason to be proud of both picture an poem dear Michael - - an excellent duo.
April 13th, 2017 03:36
LEICESTER STATION
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and picture. I seem ot often combine words and tunes, though I can\'t write music!
April 13th, 2017 01:43
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and picture. I seem ot often combine words and tunes, though I can\'t write music!
April 13th, 2017 01:43
LEICESTER STATION
Goldfinch60 said:
This painting is so very good and the poem complements it superbly. Thank you Michael for sharing them both with us.
April 13th, 2017 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
This painting is so very good and the poem complements it superbly. Thank you Michael for sharing them both with us.
April 13th, 2017 01:17
LEICESTER STATION
Frank Prem said:
What a fine picture Michael. Forgive me for not paying sufficient attention previously - I hadn\'t realised you were illustrating as well as writing.
These are a fine double act. I like them much.
April 13th, 2017 00:51
Frank Prem said:
What a fine picture Michael. Forgive me for not paying sufficient attention previously - I hadn\'t realised you were illustrating as well as writing.
These are a fine double act. I like them much.
April 13th, 2017 00:51
THE UNKNOWN MAN
MendedFences27 said:
Rumor has it that this is a terrific poem for one who can barely scribble. Seriously, and it is a serious piece, also truthful and exposing a common blight. Why do people persist in rumor-mongering? My American dictionary describes \"leant\" as a British word, but my spell check has never advanced beyond the sixth grade. A great poem and some very entangled scribbling. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:26
MendedFences27 said:
Rumor has it that this is a terrific poem for one who can barely scribble. Seriously, and it is a serious piece, also truthful and exposing a common blight. Why do people persist in rumor-mongering? My American dictionary describes \"leant\" as a British word, but my spell check has never advanced beyond the sixth grade. A great poem and some very entangled scribbling. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:26
THE UNKNOWN MAN
willyweed said:
great scribble and poem Michael, meet me at the fence I\'ve a whopper!
April 12th, 2017 07:51
willyweed said:
great scribble and poem Michael, meet me at the fence I\'ve a whopper!
April 12th, 2017 07:51
THE UNKNOWN MAN
WriteBeLight said:
I can just see this. It is true that the more one is a mystery, the more people want to gossip. Great job Michael with both postings.
April 12th, 2017 06:13
WriteBeLight said:
I can just see this. It is true that the more one is a mystery, the more people want to gossip. Great job Michael with both postings.
April 12th, 2017 06:13
THE UNKNOWN MAN
Garry said:
Very good. Especially, as you said, the final lines.
April 12th, 2017 03:31
Garry said:
Very good. Especially, as you said, the final lines.
April 12th, 2017 03:31
THE UNKNOWN MAN
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen a picture of what gossip can do to a sensitive nature in this poignant reminder dear Michael - a perceptive write and compelling read.
April 12th, 2017 02:58
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen a picture of what gossip can do to a sensitive nature in this poignant reminder dear Michael - a perceptive write and compelling read.
April 12th, 2017 02:58
THE UNKNOWN MAN
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Very clever scribble, like that.
April 12th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Very clever scribble, like that.
April 12th, 2017 01:45
THREE SMILES
MendedFences27 said:
Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about disposal of trash, why not prevent its generation? There you go, and don\'t get me started on roundabouts, we call them rotaries. You take your life in your hands getting around one. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2017 15:51
MendedFences27 said:
Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about disposal of trash, why not prevent its generation? There you go, and don\'t get me started on roundabouts, we call them rotaries. You take your life in your hands getting around one. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2017 15:51
THREE SMILES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the smiles to balance some of the very sad poems we get on MPS ! Love the painting and the mini~roundabouts (like a dinner plate in the road) also cause me to smile. If I\'m feeling frivolous I sometimes I drive right over them ! Yours BRIAN
April 11th, 2017 07:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the smiles to balance some of the very sad poems we get on MPS ! Love the painting and the mini~roundabouts (like a dinner plate in the road) also cause me to smile. If I\'m feeling frivolous I sometimes I drive right over them ! Yours BRIAN
April 11th, 2017 07:57
THREE SMILES
lovelydarkanddeep said:
I loved the last one! Nice write Michael. love, Izzy
April 11th, 2017 07:15
lovelydarkanddeep said:
I loved the last one! Nice write Michael. love, Izzy
April 11th, 2017 07:15
THREE SMILES
willyweed said:
Good work Michael all very relevant and the painting is just great they are starting to use those round a bouts here I hate them.
April 11th, 2017 07:04
willyweed said:
Good work Michael all very relevant and the painting is just great they are starting to use those round a bouts here I hate them.
April 11th, 2017 07:04
THREE SMILES
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..
April 11th, 2017 05:26
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..
April 11th, 2017 05:26
THREE SMILES
Fay Slimm. said:
Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there
April 11th, 2017 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there
April 11th, 2017 04:37
THREE SMILES
Garry said:
Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.
April 11th, 2017 03:15
Garry said:
Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.
April 11th, 2017 03:15
THREE SMILES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.
The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.
April 11th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.
The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.
April 11th, 2017 01:24
MY PLACE
MendedFences27 said:
How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:38
MendedFences27 said:
How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:38
MY PLACE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.
April 10th, 2017 15:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.
April 10th, 2017 15:36
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