Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK 28
swingline said:
I looked at the picture
I read every word
Then scratched my head
Then said ,\"If it has wings
feathers
flies
It must be a bird
May 19th, 2017 07:08
swingline said:
I looked at the picture
I read every word
Then scratched my head
Then said ,\"If it has wings
feathers
flies
It must be a bird
May 19th, 2017 07:08
LIMERICK 28
orchidee said:
Ohh, you\'ve refined that limerick so it don\'t rhyme. Will it be too much for me if I \'translate\' it! I might swoon in me sheltered life! heehee. Good write and pic.
May 19th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Ohh, you\'ve refined that limerick so it don\'t rhyme. Will it be too much for me if I \'translate\' it! I might swoon in me sheltered life! heehee. Good write and pic.
May 19th, 2017 01:51
SCOTLANDS INDEPENDENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Robert Burns ~ To a Mouse
Still thou art blest ~ compared wi\' me
The present only toucheth thee:
But OCH ! I bakward cat my e\'e
On prospects drear !
An\' forward ~ tho\' I canna see
I guess an\' FEAR !
These are my sentiments on another Scotish Independence Referendum. I was raised in the NW od England and we were very conscious that the UK consisted of FOUR EQUAL PARTS ! Scotland ~ N Ireland ~ Wales and in the deep and murky South ~ England. If Scotland seceded we would gain NOTHING and ovenight we would lose Haggis ~ Bagpipes ~ Scottish Dancing ~ Single Malt Whiskey ~ The Kilt and Scottish Salmon and Arbroath Smokies etc etc ! . Its not a WALL we need ~ it\'s a straight Jacket for NICOLA ! Yours BRIAN \"Preserve the Union\"
May 18th, 2017 08:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Robert Burns ~ To a Mouse
Still thou art blest ~ compared wi\' me
The present only toucheth thee:
But OCH ! I bakward cat my e\'e
On prospects drear !
An\' forward ~ tho\' I canna see
I guess an\' FEAR !
These are my sentiments on another Scotish Independence Referendum. I was raised in the NW od England and we were very conscious that the UK consisted of FOUR EQUAL PARTS ! Scotland ~ N Ireland ~ Wales and in the deep and murky South ~ England. If Scotland seceded we would gain NOTHING and ovenight we would lose Haggis ~ Bagpipes ~ Scottish Dancing ~ Single Malt Whiskey ~ The Kilt and Scottish Salmon and Arbroath Smokies etc etc ! . Its not a WALL we need ~ it\'s a straight Jacket for NICOLA ! Yours BRIAN \"Preserve the Union\"
May 18th, 2017 08:20
SCOTLANDS INDEPENDENCE
WriteBeLight said:
It is man\'s and woman\'s desire to be free to have real independence. I love my country and wish all people could have the freedom of thought and the life they choose. Great thought-provoking poem Michael.
May 18th, 2017 05:24
WriteBeLight said:
It is man\'s and woman\'s desire to be free to have real independence. I love my country and wish all people could have the freedom of thought and the life they choose. Great thought-provoking poem Michael.
May 18th, 2017 05:24
SCOTLANDS INDEPENDENCE
swingline said:
Mountains , fields , trees and clouds . As I stare at the painting I realize I been there many times before . Build the wall , maybe you can get Mexico to pay for it . Maybe it will keep that Scotch whiskey from being smuggled south . Maybe a rock band can make a conceptual C D based upon \"The Wall.\"
May 18th, 2017 04:04
swingline said:
Mountains , fields , trees and clouds . As I stare at the painting I realize I been there many times before . Build the wall , maybe you can get Mexico to pay for it . Maybe it will keep that Scotch whiskey from being smuggled south . Maybe a rock band can make a conceptual C D based upon \"The Wall.\"
May 18th, 2017 04:04
SCOTLANDS INDEPENDENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
If that is so I think that I would rather be the Northern side of that wall than the Southern, totally unexpected from a person born in Kent!
May 18th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
If that is so I think that I would rather be the Northern side of that wall than the Southern, totally unexpected from a person born in Kent!
May 18th, 2017 01:34
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WriteBeLight said:
Like the heart\'s unconscious calling line Michael.
May 17th, 2017 11:58
WriteBeLight said:
Like the heart\'s unconscious calling line Michael.
May 17th, 2017 11:58
THROUGH THE NIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MICHAEL ~ Hope burns bright ~ as well it might ~ not just in\'t Day ~ but \"All through the Night !\" Love the PUB ~ mine is a pint of \"HEN\" ~ AMEN ! Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 17th, 2017 08:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MICHAEL ~ Hope burns bright ~ as well it might ~ not just in\'t Day ~ but \"All through the Night !\" Love the PUB ~ mine is a pint of \"HEN\" ~ AMEN ! Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 17th, 2017 08:38
THROUGH THE NIGHT
swingline said:
A pub ? Stately is an understatement . In medieval London there were seven pubs for every church . Prostitutes wore cloaks with yellow hoods , and ale was called stout because it packed a walloping punch . (not really , just sounds like it should )
May 17th, 2017 07:21
swingline said:
A pub ? Stately is an understatement . In medieval London there were seven pubs for every church . Prostitutes wore cloaks with yellow hoods , and ale was called stout because it packed a walloping punch . (not really , just sounds like it should )
May 17th, 2017 07:21
THROUGH THE NIGHT
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this Michael
I love short poems
That contain a volume
May 17th, 2017 02:35
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this Michael
I love short poems
That contain a volume
May 17th, 2017 02:35
THROUGH THE NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Is that another pub? If so as I have said before mines a pint of real ale.
May 17th, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Is that another pub? If so as I have said before mines a pint of real ale.
May 17th, 2017 01:28
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the abstract which complements the POEM ..................... Which (in its own way) is equally abstract ! Please check my ODE for the day ~ BRIAN
May 16th, 2017 09:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the abstract which complements the POEM ..................... Which (in its own way) is equally abstract ! Please check my ODE for the day ~ BRIAN
May 16th, 2017 09:50
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swingline said:
The painting reminds me of flying through clouds or a soul on journey to a higher place . Your beautiful poem goes well with the painting . Some reason the song Eleanor Rigby popped into my .
\"All the lonely people
Where do they come from
All the lonely people
Where do they all belong\"
May 16th, 2017 05:23
swingline said:
The painting reminds me of flying through clouds or a soul on journey to a higher place . Your beautiful poem goes well with the painting . Some reason the song Eleanor Rigby popped into my .
\"All the lonely people
Where do they come from
All the lonely people
Where do they all belong\"
May 16th, 2017 05:23
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Fay Slimm. said:
A lyrical ballad that outlines the lonely life led of many a heart left without love - a dreamy read Michael with engaging imagery.
May 16th, 2017 00:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A lyrical ballad that outlines the lonely life led of many a heart left without love - a dreamy read Michael with engaging imagery.
May 16th, 2017 00:58
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Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael.
I like the abstract, I feel that I could look at that for a very long time. What is its actual size?
May 16th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael.
I like the abstract, I feel that I could look at that for a very long time. What is its actual size?
May 16th, 2017 00:56
LIMERICK 27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There was a Young Girl from Rangoon
Sunbathed au natural ~ until noon
When the Sun got too hot
She covered each special spot
With a Knife & a Fork & a Spoon
An ALLIGATOR ~ ate her !
TIT for TAT ~ BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 08:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There was a Young Girl from Rangoon
Sunbathed au natural ~ until noon
When the Sun got too hot
She covered each special spot
With a Knife & a Fork & a Spoon
An ALLIGATOR ~ ate her !
TIT for TAT ~ BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 08:58
Great Forces
swingline said:
Your painting looks like a dream . Or a conversation with God . Great forces are universal and not centered in our solar system but extend ten to the infinite , times eternity .
May 14th, 2017 12:47
swingline said:
Your painting looks like a dream . Or a conversation with God . Great forces are universal and not centered in our solar system but extend ten to the infinite , times eternity .
May 14th, 2017 12:47
Great Forces
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love all your poems and love the visual. As I read your Poem the picture morphed into a \"soft art\" version of the BIG BANG form whence all forces in the Universe emanate ! So much we don\'t fully comprehend ~ like GRAVITY ~ but we sure experience it ~especially the first time we fell off a HORSE when it spooked at a tripple ! Please check my MONOLITTURA SONNET ! BRIAN
May 14th, 2017 03:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love all your poems and love the visual. As I read your Poem the picture morphed into a \"soft art\" version of the BIG BANG form whence all forces in the Universe emanate ! So much we don\'t fully comprehend ~ like GRAVITY ~ but we sure experience it ~especially the first time we fell off a HORSE when it spooked at a tripple ! Please check my MONOLITTURA SONNET ! BRIAN
May 14th, 2017 03:48
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