Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
Fay Slimm. said:

First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an intimate note of positive vibes. Well done Michael and what a tidy garden you have.

July 13th, 2017 02:33

THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. But, crash! It\'s me swooning and falling over. Ecstasy and writhing? Oohh, should I try them?! I\'m going into that garden there, to cool off. heehee.

July 13th, 2017 01:57

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P.H.Rose said:

Really great piece Michael
And I love that pic of
Your garden

July 13th, 2017 01:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

That last stanza does complete this poem, those pledges will go on forever.

July 13th, 2017 01:10

THROUGH THE NIGHT (3)
FredPeyer said:

Sorry, forgot to mention: I love your garden, mine looks more like a jungle.

July 13th, 2017 01:04

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FredPeyer said:

Michael, in my humble opinion that last stanza made it so much better!


July 13th, 2017 01:04

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burning-embers said:

Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times better for the final verse. Excellent.

July 13th, 2017 00:25

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Augustus said:

Art is a lie that tells the truth. Politics..... nicely done

July 12th, 2017 15:24

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Heather T said:

Instead of a proper comment, let me just leave this with wild applause. 👏

July 12th, 2017 14:44

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
FredPeyer said:

Michael, after reading it I fully understand why you like it yourself. There is no politician in this world who could express something so profound in so few words.
I printed it and it now hangs on my wall next to the computer. Hope you don\'t mind.


July 12th, 2017 10:45

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 12th, 2017 10:18

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the AURORA BOREALLIS ~ very WIMBLEDON ~ mauve & green ! Love the doublet ~ both lines are equally true ~ BRIAN.

July 12th, 2017 09:34

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Louis Gibbs said:

A brilliant couplet, Michael! And love the fist being rammed down our throats by politicians in your painting.

July 12th, 2017 08:48

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
P.H.Rose said:

I absolutely love this Michael
It is just so bloody true
And to explain it with so
Few words is brilliant...

July 12th, 2017 07:37

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
Goldfinch60 said:

I could have written that with my cynical view of politicians.

I could not have painted that fabulous abstract though.

July 12th, 2017 02:50

THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

July 12th, 2017 01:40

A FEW SINGLE LINERS
onepauly said:

nice watercolor

July 11th, 2017 16:37

A FEW SINGLE LINERS
malubotelho said:

I felt like looking at a paint of a woman hanging the clothes on those clothing lines and a man standing on a door watching her. I could feel the swing of colorful clothes and gaze of his eyes. Beautiful way of writing and the painting is amazing 😉 Thanks

July 11th, 2017 12:56

A FEW SINGLE LINERS
Tony36 said:

Love them all, great write

July 11th, 2017 12:13

A FEW SINGLE LINERS
Louis Gibbs said:

I like these one-liners, and Love the abstract! It really touches me, Michael ... a real beauty! Thanks for sharing.

July 11th, 2017 08:46

A FEW SINGLE LINERS
P.H.Rose said:

Michael mine too
Love them all but the
Last one is brilliant

July 11th, 2017 07:15

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kevin browne said:

one liners all the way like a boss.

July 11th, 2017 04:50

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FredPeyer said:

Michael I used to be an art publisher in a former lifetime, involved primarily in original graphics and publishing reproductions of original paintings. I love your abstract, it would look great in my living room.
Also love your one-liners, all of them! But my favorite one is the first one. Sometimes we do have to dig deep to find these hidden virtues. Thank you for publishing them!

July 11th, 2017 02:55

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. I may swoon over that washing one-liner! heehee.

July 11th, 2017 02:02

A FEW SINGLE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:

Gorgeously attractive abstract Michael and the one liners are a change I shall have to attempt soon.

July 11th, 2017 01:34

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Goldfinch60 said:

One liners can be very good and can also be enigmatic.

Your abstract is another fine painting Michael. There is something about your abstracts that totally intrigue me.

July 11th, 2017 00:48

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING \" GUESS WHO POSTED FIRST TODAY ~ WITH DEJA VU 2 !\" Loved the Painting ~ did I send you a photo ~ It\'s ME & ANGELA at the MARDI GRAS BALL in FEBRUARY ! Thanks for the OL\'s they contain more wisdom than many epic poems ! My fave (very sensuous visually !) \"She hung out the Washing and the Man in the doorway watched .............!\" Please check DEJA VU 2 ~ Thanks B.

July 11th, 2017 00:43

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Nicholas Browning said:

The positive side to one liners is that they\'re vague; They leave many things to imagination. The downside, in my humble opinion, is that sometimes they come off a little too vague. Nothing wrong with that, it shows the style of the author thoroughly. Well done in this aspect. Happy writing, friend!

July 11th, 2017 00:25

Couplet (1)
Louis Gibbs said:

A fun posting, Michael, thanks for sharing.

July 10th, 2017 12:46

Couplet (1)
Augustus said:

Enjoyed.can I put in an order from world foods,?Augustus - corn meal mush.

July 10th, 2017 09:31



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