Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THREE SMILES
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks PH - I\'ll go to it straight away.

April 11th, 2017 05:52

THREE SMILES
P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..

April 11th, 2017 05:26

THREE SMILES
Fay Slimm. said:

Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there

April 11th, 2017 04:37

THREE SMILES
Garry said:

Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.

April 11th, 2017 03:15

THREE SMILES
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.

The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.

April 11th, 2017 01:24

MY PLACE
MendedFences27 said:

How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.

April 10th, 2017 20:38

MY PLACE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.

April 10th, 2017 15:36

MY PLACE
rrodriguez said:

Nice!

April 10th, 2017 10:57

MY PLACE
WriteBeLight said:

Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!

April 10th, 2017 09:51

MY PLACE
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 10th, 2017 08:28

MY PLACE
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 10th, 2017 07:18

MY PLACE
P.H.Rose said:

Very good sir
Love this....

April 10th, 2017 07:13

MY PLACE
willyweed said:

glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!

April 10th, 2017 07:12

MY PLACE
Garry said:

Very good.
Disturbingly neat studio.

April 10th, 2017 02:56

MY PLACE
Goldfinch60 said:

WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.

April 10th, 2017 00:49

SECLUSION
MendedFences27 said:

A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.

April 9th, 2017 19:10

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willyweed said:

very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww

April 9th, 2017 08:13

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P.H.Rose said:

Beautiful Michael
Both poem and view

April 9th, 2017 02:45

SECLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.

April 9th, 2017 01:43

SECLUSION
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 9th, 2017 01:29

BINDING VOWS
MendedFences27 said:

Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.

April 8th, 2017 21:34

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WriteBeLight said:

Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!

April 8th, 2017 06:40

BINDING VOWS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !

April 8th, 2017 05:37

BINDING VOWS
Garry said:

Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.

April 8th, 2017 02:35

BINDING VOWS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!

April 8th, 2017 01:23

IS TODAY TODAY ?
MendedFences27 said:

Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will be better and yesterday was worse. Very cleverly put. - Phil A.

April 7th, 2017 20:01

IS TODAY TODAY ?
WriteBeLight said:

Love the play on words Michael!

April 7th, 2017 11:32

IS TODAY TODAY ?
rrodriguez said:

I\'m think about today what I thought yesterday, but tomorrow is still ahead of me, so let me worry about today rather than tomorrow. Interesting writing that keeps of thinking about today, yesterday, and tomorrow.

April 7th, 2017 11:08

IS TODAY TODAY ?
Tony36 said:

LOL! Great write

April 7th, 2017 07:05

AUTUMN SUN
WriteBeLight said:

The words you chose here are so great Michael. And, they paint the perfect picture, as well as your work here.

April 7th, 2017 06:34



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