Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THREE SMILES
MendedFences27 said:
Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about disposal of trash, why not prevent its generation? There you go, and don\'t get me started on roundabouts, we call them rotaries. You take your life in your hands getting around one. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2017 15:51
MendedFences27 said:
Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about disposal of trash, why not prevent its generation? There you go, and don\'t get me started on roundabouts, we call them rotaries. You take your life in your hands getting around one. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2017 15:51
THREE SMILES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the smiles to balance some of the very sad poems we get on MPS ! Love the painting and the mini~roundabouts (like a dinner plate in the road) also cause me to smile. If I\'m feeling frivolous I sometimes I drive right over them ! Yours BRIAN
April 11th, 2017 07:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the smiles to balance some of the very sad poems we get on MPS ! Love the painting and the mini~roundabouts (like a dinner plate in the road) also cause me to smile. If I\'m feeling frivolous I sometimes I drive right over them ! Yours BRIAN
April 11th, 2017 07:57
THREE SMILES
lovelydarkanddeep said:
I loved the last one! Nice write Michael. love, Izzy
April 11th, 2017 07:15
lovelydarkanddeep said:
I loved the last one! Nice write Michael. love, Izzy
April 11th, 2017 07:15
THREE SMILES
willyweed said:
Good work Michael all very relevant and the painting is just great they are starting to use those round a bouts here I hate them.
April 11th, 2017 07:04
willyweed said:
Good work Michael all very relevant and the painting is just great they are starting to use those round a bouts here I hate them.
April 11th, 2017 07:04
THREE SMILES
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..
April 11th, 2017 05:26
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..
April 11th, 2017 05:26
THREE SMILES
Fay Slimm. said:
Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there
April 11th, 2017 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there
April 11th, 2017 04:37
THREE SMILES
Garry said:
Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.
April 11th, 2017 03:15
Garry said:
Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.
April 11th, 2017 03:15
THREE SMILES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.
The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.
April 11th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.
The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.
April 11th, 2017 01:24
MY PLACE
MendedFences27 said:
How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:38
MendedFences27 said:
How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:38
MY PLACE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.
April 10th, 2017 15:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.
April 10th, 2017 15:36
MY PLACE
WriteBeLight said:
Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!
April 10th, 2017 09:51
WriteBeLight said:
Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!
April 10th, 2017 09:51
MY PLACE
willyweed said:
glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!
April 10th, 2017 07:12
willyweed said:
glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!
April 10th, 2017 07:12
MY PLACE
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.
April 10th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.
April 10th, 2017 00:49
SECLUSION
MendedFences27 said:
A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.
April 9th, 2017 19:10
MendedFences27 said:
A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.
April 9th, 2017 19:10
SECLUSION
willyweed said:
very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww
April 9th, 2017 08:13
willyweed said:
very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww
April 9th, 2017 08:13
SECLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.
April 9th, 2017 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.
April 9th, 2017 01:43
BINDING VOWS
MendedFences27 said:
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:34
MendedFences27 said:
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:34
BINDING VOWS
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
April 8th, 2017 06:40
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
April 8th, 2017 06:40
BINDING VOWS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
April 8th, 2017 05:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
April 8th, 2017 05:37
BINDING VOWS
Garry said:
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
April 8th, 2017 02:35
Garry said:
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
April 8th, 2017 02:35
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