Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ That should ha\'e been a Giraffe Sculpture nae a fush ! You should see the Girl from next flat to me ~ she has a score of 63 ! 63 from 100 then ? No that\'s her score just out of TEN ! BRIAN Please check my Pyramidal Poem ~ Ta B.
April 22nd, 2017 08:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ That should ha\'e been a Giraffe Sculpture nae a fush ! You should see the Girl from next flat to me ~ she has a score of 63 ! 63 from 100 then ? No that\'s her score just out of TEN ! BRIAN Please check my Pyramidal Poem ~ Ta B.
April 22nd, 2017 08:48
THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
rrodriguez said:
This poem is poignant in its intrinsic message. Nice!
April 22nd, 2017 08:25
rrodriguez said:
This poem is poignant in its intrinsic message. Nice!
April 22nd, 2017 08:25
THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
willyweed said:
I hope they are long enough to reach her arse as well? nice fish! good one Michael!
April 22nd, 2017 08:19
willyweed said:
I hope they are long enough to reach her arse as well? nice fish! good one Michael!
April 22nd, 2017 08:19
THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, gave me my first smile of the day.
April 22nd, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, gave me my first smile of the day.
April 22nd, 2017 00:53
ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect \"Diamond shaped Reverse Poem ~ also a very intriguing content ! And the water colour is a perfect compliment to FADED ELEGANCE sitting ALONE ! Yours BRIAN
April 21st, 2017 11:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect \"Diamond shaped Reverse Poem ~ also a very intriguing content ! And the water colour is a perfect compliment to FADED ELEGANCE sitting ALONE ! Yours BRIAN
April 21st, 2017 11:14
ECHOES
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a small brook, and a secluded concert for just one, the singer. Very descriptive write lot\'s of great phrasing, \"springtime\'s stretching growth, a snug and sheltered spot, echoes deep in cavities,\" Just a wonderful poem. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:24
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a small brook, and a secluded concert for just one, the singer. Very descriptive write lot\'s of great phrasing, \"springtime\'s stretching growth, a snug and sheltered spot, echoes deep in cavities,\" Just a wonderful poem. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:24
ECHOES
willyweed said:
I agree about the abstract art this one says to me don\'t go chasing waterfalls? and the poem take me home country road., but then again I\'m a nut case? ww
April 20th, 2017 08:09
willyweed said:
I agree about the abstract art this one says to me don\'t go chasing waterfalls? and the poem take me home country road., but then again I\'m a nut case? ww
April 20th, 2017 08:09
ECHOES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again MICHAEL for another very attractive P & P ! I love abstract poetry and especially if the TITLE is just \"68\" or another number (much better than UNTITLED !). To relate to the poem I see the abstract as the Young Lady meditating at the fluid Crossroads of Life and trusting her next direction will choose itself ! I love her sense of abandonment to life suggested in the poem ~ meditating before moving on ~ beautiful ! Thanks for my morning enigma from you pen & pallet ~ Yours BRIAN
April 20th, 2017 03:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again MICHAEL for another very attractive P & P ! I love abstract poetry and especially if the TITLE is just \"68\" or another number (much better than UNTITLED !). To relate to the poem I see the abstract as the Young Lady meditating at the fluid Crossroads of Life and trusting her next direction will choose itself ! I love her sense of abandonment to life suggested in the poem ~ meditating before moving on ~ beautiful ! Thanks for my morning enigma from you pen & pallet ~ Yours BRIAN
April 20th, 2017 03:16
ECHOES
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write with great imagery.
Another abstract into which I am drawn. Our daughters an artist and in our talks about art she and I talk about the meaning of abstract art and I find I really examine it and nearly always get drawn into it.
April 20th, 2017 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write with great imagery.
Another abstract into which I am drawn. Our daughters an artist and in our talks about art she and I talk about the meaning of abstract art and I find I really examine it and nearly always get drawn into it.
April 20th, 2017 01:36
STOP
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish not to be seen. Colorfully expressed.,uniquely formed, with accompanying painting. Just lovely. - Phil A.
April 19th, 2017 21:16
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish not to be seen. Colorfully expressed.,uniquely formed, with accompanying painting. Just lovely. - Phil A.
April 19th, 2017 21:16
STOP
WriteBeLight said:
Certainly not an invisible poem Michael. And, I think I see you hiding in that painting :) Very beautiful.
April 19th, 2017 05:27
WriteBeLight said:
Certainly not an invisible poem Michael. And, I think I see you hiding in that painting :) Very beautiful.
April 19th, 2017 05:27
STOP
Fay Slimm. said:
The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets from all who would pry - great watercolour too Michael.
April 19th, 2017 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets from all who would pry - great watercolour too Michael.
April 19th, 2017 03:49
STOP
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING MICHAEL ~ I see we are in PYRAMIDAL MODE this morning ! In a 1234 etc poem one goes for words rather than syllables. Had you reversed them it would still have made sense and you end up with a DIAMOND as I did (deliberately) yesterday. Shape poems are linguistic fun rather than erudite ~ BUT ~ I like the message \"Don\'t get involved ~ Be an Ostrich\". Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2017 02:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING MICHAEL ~ I see we are in PYRAMIDAL MODE this morning ! In a 1234 etc poem one goes for words rather than syllables. Had you reversed them it would still have made sense and you end up with a DIAMOND as I did (deliberately) yesterday. Shape poems are linguistic fun rather than erudite ~ BUT ~ I like the message \"Don\'t get involved ~ Be an Ostrich\". Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2017 02:25
STOP
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people wear blinkers these days. Good write.
\"There\'e none so blind as those who don\'t want to see\"
Like the painting.
April 19th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people wear blinkers these days. Good write.
\"There\'e none so blind as those who don\'t want to see\"
Like the painting.
April 19th, 2017 01:08
TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
MendedFences27 said:
I think we\'ve all had those moments
of unintended frost, but the way you\'ve crafted the thawing period is masterful, and what a great last line. Maybe the day of warm Sun rays brought about the melt. Well constructed and well written, I truly enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2017 22:14
MendedFences27 said:
I think we\'ve all had those moments
of unintended frost, but the way you\'ve crafted the thawing period is masterful, and what a great last line. Maybe the day of warm Sun rays brought about the melt. Well constructed and well written, I truly enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2017 22:14
TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
willyweed said:
you paint a lovely picture with your words and paint Michael! love it! ww
April 18th, 2017 10:21
willyweed said:
you paint a lovely picture with your words and paint Michael! love it! ww
April 18th, 2017 10:21
TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
Tony36 said:
Awesome write and awesome picture
April 18th, 2017 07:49
Tony36 said:
Awesome write and awesome picture
April 18th, 2017 07:49
TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL another well balanced PICTURE AN\' POEM. As the Good Book says \"Never let the SUN set until your wrath his been dissipated ~ AMEN\" Your BRIAN
April 18th, 2017 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL another well balanced PICTURE AN\' POEM. As the Good Book says \"Never let the SUN set until your wrath his been dissipated ~ AMEN\" Your BRIAN
April 18th, 2017 03:58
TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception Michael - a read which ends in an \"all is well\" again - relationships often go through a spell of misunderstanding. I love the passion of colour in your picture.
April 18th, 2017 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception Michael - a read which ends in an \"all is well\" again - relationships often go through a spell of misunderstanding. I love the passion of colour in your picture.
April 18th, 2017 03:14
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