Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



DINING ETIQUETTE
Michael Edwards said:

My wife and I love dining out in PROPER restaurants but it is so depressing to see the lack of etiquette displayed by others and a failure by the restaurants to train their staff and observe simple rules.

Diners who have no dress sense- do people have no pride any more
waiters standing over you while you are still reading the menu
Table placements incorrectly laid
talking while actually eating
using just the fork
holding wine glasses by the bulb and not the stem
waiters who are not familiar with the wines on offer (if there is no sommelier)
diners who do not put the cutlery together on the plate when finished
diners who place the fork facing upwards on the plate when they have finished
waiters who start clearing away dirty plates before everyone\'s finished
waiters who are too familiar with diners
waiters who serve plated food (Service a la Russe) over the left shoulder
waiters who remove dirty plates over the right shoulder
waiters who don\'t recognise a diners need for a finger bowl and have to be asked
waiters who don\'t know how far to fill a wine glass

Must be plenty of others but the minds gone blank for the moment.





May 6th, 2017 00:12

PLANS FOR TONIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the cartoon Michael and as for the old currency -- -pleeeeeeeeease lets have it back. Those gone names were so romantic.

May 5th, 2017 04:52

PLANS FOR TONIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ Love the cartoon ! To bed to bed says sleepy had ~ Tarry a while says slow ~ Put on the pan says greedy Dan ~ Lets sup before we go ~ TOUCHE ~ BRIAN Please check my ROSE COLOURED POEM ~ Thanks B.

May 5th, 2017 02:47

PLANS FOR TONIGHT
orchidee said:

Those new pound coins look a bit like the old thruppennies! A fine fun write. lol.

May 5th, 2017 02:16

PLANS FOR TONIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

I can remember buying sweets using farthings with the jenny wren on them.

May 5th, 2017 01:13

PLANS FOR TONIGHT
Michael Edwards said:

A few words to explain this little ditty for anyone not familiar with old English currency before it converted to metric back in 1971.

In the old currency there were 4 farthings to the penny, 12 pennies (or pence) to the shilling and 20 shillings to the pound.
Tuppence three farthings was two and three quarter pennies (pennies were sometimes referred to as pence in the plural ) and ha\'penny was a shortened version of a half penny.

Now you know why we converted.

With acknowledgements to my favourite author, Thomas Hardy, whose mention of
cider and radishes and their mid 19th century costings inspired this little verse


May 5th, 2017 00:17

THE CHAPEL
Lizzy Renee said:

Amazing poem

May 4th, 2017 08:19

THE CHAPEL
MendedFences27 said:

My understanding of how villages got built, was that the church was the first to be built (or was it the Pub? - one of those two) then the homes and school or factory. It seems the churches outlasted all of the others in most cases. Were they better-built or less used? A beautiful picture of a lonely church in the countryside. Liked this one. - Phil A.

May 4th, 2017 08:02

THE GATHERING
MendedFences27 said:

I do not think that this is one day in the life of a woman, but rather her entire life unfolded, from youth to the final hour. The writing is subtle enough that it sounds like one day , yet truly deep enough to be a lifetime, from \"a lass,\" to an \"evening lingered,\" to the \"darkest hour.\" A beautiful piece about a lovely woman. Inspiring. - Phil A.

May 4th, 2017 07:54

THE CHAPEL
WriteBeLight said:

Great homage to the Chapel Michael.

May 4th, 2017 05:30

THE CHAPEL
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks all - actually the sketch was done in Latvia but I guess it could be anywhere.

May 4th, 2017 05:02

THE CHAPEL
Fay Slimm. said:

The words describe hidden sacred places so well Michael and the drawing sets off the verse. Great read.

May 4th, 2017 04:52

THE CHAPEL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ! \"God does not dwell in Buildings forged by Man\'s labour\" ~ BUT ~ when the Believers enter the Chapel ~ Then it becomes the House of God. In St Petersburg (Russia) Churches ~ once used to store vegetables ~ now resound to the Glory of God ~ AMEN Your poem opened a theological box ! Please check my poem and choose a number 1 to 10 ~ BRIAN

May 4th, 2017 04:28

THE CHAPEL
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic. I came across a disused chapel. It looked a bit creepy, then I found out it used to be a mortuary! Eek!

May 4th, 2017 02:26

THE CHAPEL
Goldfinch60 said:

a place of worship does not need to be elegant, it needs to be prayerful. Good write.

May 4th, 2017 01:23

THE GATHERING
WriteBeLight said:

I like the died like water in the sand.

May 3rd, 2017 15:51

THE GATHERING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ I found this poem (and the LD) emotive as well. The poem paints a very plaintive picture ! My poem today is about CHLOROPHYLL ~ one of God\'s really awesome ideas ~ ENJOY ~ BRIAN

May 3rd, 2017 11:35

THE GATHERING
orchidee said:

Good write and pic.

May 3rd, 2017 01:36

THE GATHERING
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write. Liked this a great deal.

May 3rd, 2017 01:31

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
MendedFences27 said:

Three humorous sketches and one of Veere. Well done, Michael. I like #3, but I\'ve never been to Redditch. Is there a red ditch there? - Phil A.

May 2nd, 2017 15:18

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
WriteBeLight said:

Very funny Michael!

May 2nd, 2017 12:08

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
orchidee said:

Ooohh, they\'re probably real people, if we look far enough! heehee. Good writes and pic.

May 2nd, 2017 08:52

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha ha - - a really good set of limericks to start my day\'s read - - I am no good at all writing humour though I appreciate reading it - and these are great fun.

May 2nd, 2017 07:45

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
Tony36 said:

Awesome writes

May 2nd, 2017 06:55

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks All for your comments.

May 2nd, 2017 05:52

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

There was a Young Poet called Michael # Who went everywhere on his cycle # It kept him slim # And healthy and trim # When it rained ~ it his spirits did rickle ! Thanks Michael for another fine trio and pen drawing of where all these LIMMERICKERS live ~ BRIAN

May 2nd, 2017 04:19

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
Frank Prem said:

Fine limmering Michael.

May 2nd, 2017 02:29

LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24>
Goldfinch60 said:

I am surprised that you used the swear word \"Redditch\" in your fun limericks. I went there once - never again. (Mind you I do have a friend who lives there)

May 2nd, 2017 02:06

FADED
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks all for your kind words.

May 1st, 2017 09:48

FADED
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 1st, 2017 06:47



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