Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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Fay Slimm. said:

The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets from all who would pry - great watercolour too Michael.

April 19th, 2017 03:49

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING MICHAEL ~ I see we are in PYRAMIDAL MODE this morning ! In a 1234 etc poem one goes for words rather than syllables. Had you reversed them it would still have made sense and you end up with a DIAMOND as I did (deliberately) yesterday. Shape poems are linguistic fun rather than erudite ~ BUT ~ I like the message \"Don\'t get involved ~ Be an Ostrich\". Yours BRIAN

April 19th, 2017 02:25

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orchidee said:

Good write and painting.

April 19th, 2017 01:49

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Goldfinch60 said:

So many people wear blinkers these days. Good write.
\"There\'e none so blind as those who don\'t want to see\"

Like the painting.

April 19th, 2017 01:08

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
MendedFences27 said:

I think we\'ve all had those moments
of unintended frost, but the way you\'ve crafted the thawing period is masterful, and what a great last line. Maybe the day of warm Sun rays brought about the melt. Well constructed and well written, I truly enjoyed this one. - Phil A.

April 18th, 2017 22:14

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
willyweed said:

you paint a lovely picture with your words and paint Michael! love it! ww

April 18th, 2017 10:21

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
Tony36 said:

Awesome write and awesome picture

April 18th, 2017 07:49

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL another well balanced PICTURE AN\' POEM. As the Good Book says \"Never let the SUN set until your wrath his been dissipated ~ AMEN\" Your BRIAN

April 18th, 2017 03:58

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
Fay Slimm. said:

Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception Michael - a read which ends in an \"all is well\" again - relationships often go through a spell of misunderstanding. I love the passion of colour in your picture.

April 18th, 2017 03:14

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
Garry said:

Well done.

April 18th, 2017 02:27

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
orchidee said:

A fine pic and write.

April 18th, 2017 01:40

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

The painting seems to be similar in theme to one you put on recently but the colours of this one are more vibrant but is still draws me into the subject. I do like your abstract paintings.

April 18th, 2017 01:39

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
MendedFences27 said:

Some call it the roar of the sea, here it\'s the music, and I\'ve heard it referred to as a whisper on a calm day. The ocean draws all men to it\'s shores, lures them with music, and its majesty. What a terrific poem on this subject. It lured you in and played you a song. Great art as well. - Phil A.

April 17th, 2017 19:46

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
willyweed said:

a spot on nature piece in perfect harmony . beautiful Michael!

April 17th, 2017 08:59

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Beautiful Micheal... It may be imaginary? but I think I can hear it and I believe I have been there... Job done ... Nice write

April 17th, 2017 07:54

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for an excellent poem ameliorated by an alluring painting ! Most of my life I have lived near the Sea ~ and still do (10 miles !). Coton in the Elms Derbyshire (70 MILES) is the furthest point from the Coast in the UK ~ which is why we are all THALASSOPHILES ! In the USA ~ (DAKOTA) ~ One can be over 1500 miles from the Ocean ! Yours BRIAN

April 17th, 2017 07:45

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 17th, 2017 07:41

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the watery-blue look of the beautiful painting of course.

April 17th, 2017 06:43

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
WriteBeLight said:

Such a lovely poem Michael and beautiful painting. You have caught the power and serenity of the sea so very well.

April 17th, 2017 06:31

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Garry said:

Great write.vivid images. Particularly the last two lines.

April 17th, 2017 03:25

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
orchidee said:

A fine write and picture.

April 17th, 2017 03:02

THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, the symphony of the sea can be wonderful.

Like the artwork.

April 17th, 2017 00:57

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with great imagery.

April 16th, 2017 00:06

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

SPRING MICHAEL ~ Is the FIRST SEASON and always will be # that uis why it is so so important. Someone took a photograph everyday of a Garden during SPRING (92 DAYS) He was amazed how much the pictures changed each day ~ no other Season is like this ~ change but no decay ~ just new life. Spring is the most Spiritual Month which is why the Christian Church chose SPRING to celebrate EASTER as a movable feast. The Council of Nicea (325 BC) decreed that EASTER DAY (Ressurection) should be on a SUNDAY and the CRUCIFIXION on the preceeding FRIDAY ~ GOOD FRIDAY ! So Spring is very sacred ! DISCUSS ~ BRIAN

April 15th, 2017 14:09

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

MERCI MICHAEL ~I love all 3D art especially that which seeks to mirror nature ! The best one in my opinion is any model of the DNA double helix. Rosalind Franklin (who did the X-ray crystallographic on DNA) said ~ when she saw Crick & Watson\'s structure (molecular model) \"It is too too beautiful ~ not to be correct !\" Beauty is in the eye of the beholder ! We made a model from LEGO which had the advantage that the two anti-parallel helical chains were easily separated for replication and also the formation of messenger RNA which is the blueprint to synthesise PROTEIN. There is more Art in Science than this World dreams of ! DISCUSS ~ BRIAN

April 15th, 2017 13:30

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P.H.Rose said:

Very good Michael
Just really good...

April 15th, 2017 09:42

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WriteBeLight said:

True poetry Michael. Cute sculpture!

April 15th, 2017 08:53

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Fay Slimm. said:

Thanks for this poetic look at the season\'s push toward more colourful outside - a look too at at inside bit of talented palette. Love the sculptured fish Michael.

April 15th, 2017 07:52

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orchidee said:

A fine descriptive write.

April 15th, 2017 06:32

COMICAL COUPLETS
MendedFences27 said:

Humor and sculpting, Wow! Funny stuff that, the jokes not the sculptures. And you made it into a poem as well. Well, I enjoyed a laugh and for that I am grateful. Nice work. - Phil A.

April 14th, 2017 20:59



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