Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FIVE THIRTY PM
swingline said:
Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .
June 5th, 2017 00:58
swingline said:
Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .
June 5th, 2017 00:58
FIVE THIRTY PM
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24
LIMERICK 33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA
Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !
June 4th, 2017 04:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA
Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !
June 4th, 2017 04:21
LIMERICK 33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.
June 4th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.
June 4th, 2017 02:06
AS YET UNWRITTEN
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
AS YET UNWRITTEN
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
AS YET UNWRITTEN
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
AS YET UNWRITTEN
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..
June 3rd, 2017 03:05
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..
June 3rd, 2017 03:05
AS YET UNWRITTEN
swingline said:
I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .
June 3rd, 2017 02:24
swingline said:
I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .
June 3rd, 2017 02:24
AS YET UNWRITTEN
MaddieJ said:
As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!
June 3rd, 2017 01:20
MaddieJ said:
As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!
June 3rd, 2017 01:20
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Augustus said:
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.
June 2nd, 2017 06:37
Augustus said:
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.
June 2nd, 2017 06:37
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR THOSE OF US STILL WORKING ~ Cartoons and ambiguities make FRIDAY more bearable ! I was researching the \"Wisdom of Kentucky\" and came across this sign outside a Church !
BEST SAUSAGE SUPPER
IN ST LOUIS
COME AND EAT
PASTOR THOMAS RESSLER
I knew they all intermarried but I didn\'t
realise they still pracised CANABALISM !
Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
June 2nd, 2017 03:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR THOSE OF US STILL WORKING ~ Cartoons and ambiguities make FRIDAY more bearable ! I was researching the \"Wisdom of Kentucky\" and came across this sign outside a Church !
BEST SAUSAGE SUPPER
IN ST LOUIS
COME AND EAT
PASTOR THOMAS RESSLER
I knew they all intermarried but I didn\'t
realise they still pracised CANABALISM !
Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
June 2nd, 2017 03:57
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Goldfinch60 said:
The English language is a minefield of inconsistency when not written, correctly.
June 2nd, 2017 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
The English language is a minefield of inconsistency when not written, correctly.
June 2nd, 2017 02:03
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
orchidee said:
Oh lol. And who are Bill Stickers and Bill Posters? They are going to be prosecuted when they get caught!
June 2nd, 2017 01:46
orchidee said:
Oh lol. And who are Bill Stickers and Bill Posters? They are going to be prosecuted when they get caught!
June 2nd, 2017 01:46
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
swingline said:
While visiting a white racist antigay bar in America the English tourists saw a sign that said \"No Fags Allowed\" and immediately left their cigarettes on the bus .
June 2nd, 2017 00:35
swingline said:
While visiting a white racist antigay bar in America the English tourists saw a sign that said \"No Fags Allowed\" and immediately left their cigarettes on the bus .
June 2nd, 2017 00:35
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Michael Edwards said:
Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be visiting him.
June 2nd, 2017 00:09
Michael Edwards said:
Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be visiting him.
June 2nd, 2017 00:09
LIMERICK 32
Louis Gibbs said:
Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.
June 1st, 2017 08:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.
June 1st, 2017 08:48
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