Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
BINDING VOWS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
April 8th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
April 8th, 2017 01:23
IS TODAY TODAY ?
MendedFences27 said:
Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will be better and yesterday was worse. Very cleverly put. - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:01
MendedFences27 said:
Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will be better and yesterday was worse. Very cleverly put. - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:01
IS TODAY TODAY ?
rrodriguez said:
I\'m think about today what I thought yesterday, but tomorrow is still ahead of me, so let me worry about today rather than tomorrow. Interesting writing that keeps of thinking about today, yesterday, and tomorrow.
April 7th, 2017 11:08
rrodriguez said:
I\'m think about today what I thought yesterday, but tomorrow is still ahead of me, so let me worry about today rather than tomorrow. Interesting writing that keeps of thinking about today, yesterday, and tomorrow.
April 7th, 2017 11:08
AUTUMN SUN
WriteBeLight said:
The words you chose here are so great Michael. And, they paint the perfect picture, as well as your work here.
April 7th, 2017 06:34
WriteBeLight said:
The words you chose here are so great Michael. And, they paint the perfect picture, as well as your work here.
April 7th, 2017 06:34
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Michael Edwards said:
Is next week the week after this week or the week before the week in two weeks time?
April 7th, 2017 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
Is next week the week after this week or the week before the week in two weeks time?
April 7th, 2017 06:13
IS TODAY TODAY ?
willyweed said:
wait till next week....oh boy! good fun Michael and the drawing is killer! ww
April 7th, 2017 06:10
willyweed said:
wait till next week....oh boy! good fun Michael and the drawing is killer! ww
April 7th, 2017 06:10
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Jooles said:
Haha love this....confused though.....going for a cup of tea 😅
April 7th, 2017 04:19
Jooles said:
Haha love this....confused though.....going for a cup of tea 😅
April 7th, 2017 04:19
IS TODAY TODAY ?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL TODAY or not TODAY ? That really is the question ! BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B Thanks for the line drawing of my Ancestral Home !
April 7th, 2017 03:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL TODAY or not TODAY ? That really is the question ! BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B Thanks for the line drawing of my Ancestral Home !
April 7th, 2017 03:46
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Garry said:
Brilliant poem. A light hearted view on issues around who and when we are.
I was thinking about this yesterday and will re-read your poem again tomorrow. 🤔
April 7th, 2017 02:48
Garry said:
Brilliant poem. A light hearted view on issues around who and when we are.
I was thinking about this yesterday and will re-read your poem again tomorrow. 🤔
April 7th, 2017 02:48
IS TODAY TODAY ?
orchidee said:
Good write. Also - does tomorrow never come? Because when it gets here, it\'s today!
April 7th, 2017 01:59
orchidee said:
Good write. Also - does tomorrow never come? Because when it gets here, it\'s today!
April 7th, 2017 01:59
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Goldfinch60 said:
As I often say today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday. Good write.
April 7th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
As I often say today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday. Good write.
April 7th, 2017 01:30
IS TODAY TODAY ?
LukeMorrison said:
Really like this idea :) I think you could write more on the same subject and really ponder the question you pose
April 7th, 2017 00:26
LukeMorrison said:
Really like this idea :) I think you could write more on the same subject and really ponder the question you pose
April 7th, 2017 00:26
AUTUMN SUN
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh scent of autumn, and a cool \"quivering water\'s edge,\" bring the painting\'s suggestion of fall to the reader\'s eye. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 16:05
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh scent of autumn, and a cool \"quivering water\'s edge,\" bring the painting\'s suggestion of fall to the reader\'s eye. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 16:05
AUTUMN SUN
Tony36 said:
Great write. I write in different forms all the time. It is good to try new stuff
April 6th, 2017 08:54
Tony36 said:
Great write. I write in different forms all the time. It is good to try new stuff
April 6th, 2017 08:54
AUTUMN SUN
willyweed said:
love this style Michael and the long shadows picture, sweet Rx3
April 6th, 2017 06:47
willyweed said:
love this style Michael and the long shadows picture, sweet Rx3
April 6th, 2017 06:47
AUTUMN SUN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love triolets. In classical poetry the THREE R\'s are always important Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition as in Villanelles etc. I don\'t mind you jumping two Seasons it is \"poetic licence\" and all four Seasons are mus~ical. Love the shadows in the painting ! BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 05:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love triolets. In classical poetry the THREE R\'s are always important Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition as in Villanelles etc. I don\'t mind you jumping two Seasons it is \"poetic licence\" and all four Seasons are mus~ical. Love the shadows in the painting ! BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 05:42
AUTUMN SUN
orchidee said:
A fine write and picture M. I\'ve been inspired to write some song-poems from certain pictures. I shall probably have some inspiration again sometime! I\'m sure you\'re not wishing the year away with this for Autumn! lol.
April 6th, 2017 03:32
orchidee said:
A fine write and picture M. I\'ve been inspired to write some song-poems from certain pictures. I shall probably have some inspiration again sometime! I\'m sure you\'re not wishing the year away with this for Autumn! lol.
April 6th, 2017 03:32
AUTUMN SUN
Fay Slimm. said:
The triolet form fits so well with the picture of mellow autumn - another gem to view and to read - thank you Michael.
April 6th, 2017 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The triolet form fits so well with the picture of mellow autumn - another gem to view and to read - thank you Michael.
April 6th, 2017 02:22
AUTUMN SUN
Garry said:
Very beautiful. Feels nice to read. Appropriate for April?
April 6th, 2017 02:15
Garry said:
Very beautiful. Feels nice to read. Appropriate for April?
April 6th, 2017 02:15
AUTUMN SUN
Frank Prem said:
Interesting rhyme patterns, is it a particular form?
April 6th, 2017 02:02
Frank Prem said:
Interesting rhyme patterns, is it a particular form?
April 6th, 2017 02:02
IMMERSED IN TIME
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry them with us throughout life, but it seems they choose when to pop up. I think your abstract looks like one of those ghosts trapped in a poisonous environment, yet it is still a beautiful thing. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:24
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry them with us throughout life, but it seems they choose when to pop up. I think your abstract looks like one of those ghosts trapped in a poisonous environment, yet it is still a beautiful thing. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:24
IMMERSED IN TIME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ for caring & sharing. Love the abstract ~ it has what i call inner glow like many of the images from the Hubble Telescope. As both GF and Willy have noted the painting does draw one into the centre and creates a desire to explore. This (for me) is true of all the Hubble images ~ OK. Now to the poem ! That too is enigmatic and poses many questions and mysteries ~ a true enigma ~ about everything and nothing simultaneously ~ exploring the memories complex corridors ~ awesome ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ for caring & sharing. Love the abstract ~ it has what i call inner glow like many of the images from the Hubble Telescope. As both GF and Willy have noted the painting does draw one into the centre and creates a desire to explore. This (for me) is true of all the Hubble images ~ OK. Now to the poem ! That too is enigmatic and poses many questions and mysteries ~ a true enigma ~ about everything and nothing simultaneously ~ exploring the memories complex corridors ~ awesome ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:32
IMMERSED IN TIME
willyweed said:
the poem is deep and your painting is examining me? I love this work Michael , I\'m sinking in. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:45
willyweed said:
the poem is deep and your painting is examining me? I love this work Michael , I\'m sinking in. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:45
IMMERSED IN TIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good though provoking write.
Similarly the picture is drawing me into it. Into where? Watch this space.
April 5th, 2017 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good though provoking write.
Similarly the picture is drawing me into it. Into where? Watch this space.
April 5th, 2017 01:47
DOOR
MendedFences27 said:
Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door represents hope, or the future. Great piece of art, both. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:06
MendedFences27 said:
Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door represents hope, or the future. Great piece of art, both. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:06
DOOR
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood takes me.
April 4th, 2017 15:44
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood takes me.
April 4th, 2017 15:44
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