Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a small brook, and a secluded concert for just one, the singer. Very descriptive write lot\'s of great phrasing, \"springtime\'s stretching growth, a snug and sheltered spot, echoes deep in cavities,\" Just a wonderful poem. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:24
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a small brook, and a secluded concert for just one, the singer. Very descriptive write lot\'s of great phrasing, \"springtime\'s stretching growth, a snug and sheltered spot, echoes deep in cavities,\" Just a wonderful poem. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:24
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willyweed said:
I agree about the abstract art this one says to me don\'t go chasing waterfalls? and the poem take me home country road., but then again I\'m a nut case? ww
April 20th, 2017 08:09
willyweed said:
I agree about the abstract art this one says to me don\'t go chasing waterfalls? and the poem take me home country road., but then again I\'m a nut case? ww
April 20th, 2017 08:09
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again MICHAEL for another very attractive P & P ! I love abstract poetry and especially if the TITLE is just \"68\" or another number (much better than UNTITLED !). To relate to the poem I see the abstract as the Young Lady meditating at the fluid Crossroads of Life and trusting her next direction will choose itself ! I love her sense of abandonment to life suggested in the poem ~ meditating before moving on ~ beautiful ! Thanks for my morning enigma from you pen & pallet ~ Yours BRIAN
April 20th, 2017 03:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again MICHAEL for another very attractive P & P ! I love abstract poetry and especially if the TITLE is just \"68\" or another number (much better than UNTITLED !). To relate to the poem I see the abstract as the Young Lady meditating at the fluid Crossroads of Life and trusting her next direction will choose itself ! I love her sense of abandonment to life suggested in the poem ~ meditating before moving on ~ beautiful ! Thanks for my morning enigma from you pen & pallet ~ Yours BRIAN
April 20th, 2017 03:16
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Goldfinch60 said:
Super write with great imagery.
Another abstract into which I am drawn. Our daughters an artist and in our talks about art she and I talk about the meaning of abstract art and I find I really examine it and nearly always get drawn into it.
April 20th, 2017 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write with great imagery.
Another abstract into which I am drawn. Our daughters an artist and in our talks about art she and I talk about the meaning of abstract art and I find I really examine it and nearly always get drawn into it.
April 20th, 2017 01:36
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MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish not to be seen. Colorfully expressed.,uniquely formed, with accompanying painting. Just lovely. - Phil A.
April 19th, 2017 21:16
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish not to be seen. Colorfully expressed.,uniquely formed, with accompanying painting. Just lovely. - Phil A.
April 19th, 2017 21:16
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WriteBeLight said:
Certainly not an invisible poem Michael. And, I think I see you hiding in that painting :) Very beautiful.
April 19th, 2017 05:27
WriteBeLight said:
Certainly not an invisible poem Michael. And, I think I see you hiding in that painting :) Very beautiful.
April 19th, 2017 05:27
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Fay Slimm. said:
The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets from all who would pry - great watercolour too Michael.
April 19th, 2017 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets from all who would pry - great watercolour too Michael.
April 19th, 2017 03:49
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING MICHAEL ~ I see we are in PYRAMIDAL MODE this morning ! In a 1234 etc poem one goes for words rather than syllables. Had you reversed them it would still have made sense and you end up with a DIAMOND as I did (deliberately) yesterday. Shape poems are linguistic fun rather than erudite ~ BUT ~ I like the message \"Don\'t get involved ~ Be an Ostrich\". Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2017 02:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING MICHAEL ~ I see we are in PYRAMIDAL MODE this morning ! In a 1234 etc poem one goes for words rather than syllables. Had you reversed them it would still have made sense and you end up with a DIAMOND as I did (deliberately) yesterday. Shape poems are linguistic fun rather than erudite ~ BUT ~ I like the message \"Don\'t get involved ~ Be an Ostrich\". Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2017 02:25
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Goldfinch60 said:
So many people wear blinkers these days. Good write.
\"There\'e none so blind as those who don\'t want to see\"
Like the painting.
April 19th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people wear blinkers these days. Good write.
\"There\'e none so blind as those who don\'t want to see\"
Like the painting.
April 19th, 2017 01:08
TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
MendedFences27 said:
I think we\'ve all had those moments
of unintended frost, but the way you\'ve crafted the thawing period is masterful, and what a great last line. Maybe the day of warm Sun rays brought about the melt. Well constructed and well written, I truly enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2017 22:14
MendedFences27 said:
I think we\'ve all had those moments
of unintended frost, but the way you\'ve crafted the thawing period is masterful, and what a great last line. Maybe the day of warm Sun rays brought about the melt. Well constructed and well written, I truly enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2017 22:14
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willyweed said:
you paint a lovely picture with your words and paint Michael! love it! ww
April 18th, 2017 10:21
willyweed said:
you paint a lovely picture with your words and paint Michael! love it! ww
April 18th, 2017 10:21
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Tony36 said:
Awesome write and awesome picture
April 18th, 2017 07:49
Tony36 said:
Awesome write and awesome picture
April 18th, 2017 07:49
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL another well balanced PICTURE AN\' POEM. As the Good Book says \"Never let the SUN set until your wrath his been dissipated ~ AMEN\" Your BRIAN
April 18th, 2017 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL another well balanced PICTURE AN\' POEM. As the Good Book says \"Never let the SUN set until your wrath his been dissipated ~ AMEN\" Your BRIAN
April 18th, 2017 03:58
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Fay Slimm. said:
Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception Michael - a read which ends in an \"all is well\" again - relationships often go through a spell of misunderstanding. I love the passion of colour in your picture.
April 18th, 2017 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception Michael - a read which ends in an \"all is well\" again - relationships often go through a spell of misunderstanding. I love the passion of colour in your picture.
April 18th, 2017 03:14
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
The painting seems to be similar in theme to one you put on recently but the colours of this one are more vibrant but is still draws me into the subject. I do like your abstract paintings.
April 18th, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
The painting seems to be similar in theme to one you put on recently but the colours of this one are more vibrant but is still draws me into the subject. I do like your abstract paintings.
April 18th, 2017 01:39
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
MendedFences27 said:
Some call it the roar of the sea, here it\'s the music, and I\'ve heard it referred to as a whisper on a calm day. The ocean draws all men to it\'s shores, lures them with music, and its majesty. What a terrific poem on this subject. It lured you in and played you a song. Great art as well. - Phil A.
April 17th, 2017 19:46
MendedFences27 said:
Some call it the roar of the sea, here it\'s the music, and I\'ve heard it referred to as a whisper on a calm day. The ocean draws all men to it\'s shores, lures them with music, and its majesty. What a terrific poem on this subject. It lured you in and played you a song. Great art as well. - Phil A.
April 17th, 2017 19:46
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
willyweed said:
a spot on nature piece in perfect harmony . beautiful Michael!
April 17th, 2017 08:59
willyweed said:
a spot on nature piece in perfect harmony . beautiful Michael!
April 17th, 2017 08:59
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Micheal... It may be imaginary? but I think I can hear it and I believe I have been there... Job done ... Nice write
April 17th, 2017 07:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Micheal... It may be imaginary? but I think I can hear it and I believe I have been there... Job done ... Nice write
April 17th, 2017 07:54
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an excellent poem ameliorated by an alluring painting ! Most of my life I have lived near the Sea ~ and still do (10 miles !). Coton in the Elms Derbyshire (70 MILES) is the furthest point from the Coast in the UK ~ which is why we are all THALASSOPHILES ! In the USA ~ (DAKOTA) ~ One can be over 1500 miles from the Ocean ! Yours BRIAN
April 17th, 2017 07:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an excellent poem ameliorated by an alluring painting ! Most of my life I have lived near the Sea ~ and still do (10 miles !). Coton in the Elms Derbyshire (70 MILES) is the furthest point from the Coast in the UK ~ which is why we are all THALASSOPHILES ! In the USA ~ (DAKOTA) ~ One can be over 1500 miles from the Ocean ! Yours BRIAN
April 17th, 2017 07:45
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the watery-blue look of the beautiful painting of course.
April 17th, 2017 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the watery-blue look of the beautiful painting of course.
April 17th, 2017 06:43
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WriteBeLight said:
Such a lovely poem Michael and beautiful painting. You have caught the power and serenity of the sea so very well.
April 17th, 2017 06:31
WriteBeLight said:
Such a lovely poem Michael and beautiful painting. You have caught the power and serenity of the sea so very well.
April 17th, 2017 06:31
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Garry said:
Great write.vivid images. Particularly the last two lines.
April 17th, 2017 03:25
Garry said:
Great write.vivid images. Particularly the last two lines.
April 17th, 2017 03:25
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the symphony of the sea can be wonderful.
Like the artwork.
April 17th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the symphony of the sea can be wonderful.
Like the artwork.
April 17th, 2017 00:57
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