Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THROUGH THE NIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

MICHAEL ~ Hope burns bright ~ as well it might ~ not just in\'t Day ~ but \"All through the Night !\" Love the PUB ~ mine is a pint of \"HEN\" ~ AMEN ! Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN

May 17th, 2017 08:38

THROUGH THE NIGHT
swingline said:

A pub ? Stately is an understatement . In medieval London there were seven pubs for every church . Prostitutes wore cloaks with yellow hoods , and ale was called stout because it packed a walloping punch . (not really , just sounds like it should )

May 17th, 2017 07:21

THROUGH THE NIGHT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

May 17th, 2017 03:26

THROUGH THE NIGHT
P.H.Rose said:

Really like this Michael
I love short poems
That contain a volume

May 17th, 2017 02:35

THROUGH THE NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

Is that another pub? If so as I have said before mines a pint of real ale.

May 17th, 2017 01:28

THROUGH THE NIGHT
Garry said:

Very good

May 17th, 2017 00:59

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the abstract which complements the POEM ..................... Which (in its own way) is equally abstract ! Please check my ODE for the day ~ BRIAN

May 16th, 2017 09:50

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swingline said:

The painting reminds me of flying through clouds or a soul on journey to a higher place . Your beautiful poem goes well with the painting . Some reason the song Eleanor Rigby popped into my .
\"All the lonely people
Where do they come from
All the lonely people
Where do they all belong\"

May 16th, 2017 05:23

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

May 16th, 2017 01:36

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Fay Slimm. said:

A lyrical ballad that outlines the lonely life led of many a heart left without love - a dreamy read Michael with engaging imagery.

May 16th, 2017 00:58

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Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael.

I like the abstract, I feel that I could look at that for a very long time. What is its actual size?

May 16th, 2017 00:56

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WriteBeLight said:

Very cute Michael.

May 15th, 2017 13:32

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swingline said:

Hmm , they called him Mellow Yellow .

May 15th, 2017 09:02

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

There was a Young Girl from Rangoon
Sunbathed au natural ~ until noon
When the Sun got too hot
She covered each special spot
With a Knife & a Fork & a Spoon

An ALLIGATOR ~ ate her !

TIT for TAT ~ BRIAN



May 15th, 2017 08:58

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P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha... bang on sir
Bang on....

May 15th, 2017 07:58

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kevin browne said:

booming with brilliance!

May 15th, 2017 04:02

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orchidee said:

A b-b-bootiful write M!

May 15th, 2017 01:23

Great Forces
P.H.Rose said:

This is very good Michael

May 14th, 2017 17:56

Great Forces
swingline said:

Your painting looks like a dream . Or a conversation with God . Great forces are universal and not centered in our solar system but extend ten to the infinite , times eternity .

May 14th, 2017 12:47

Great Forces
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love all your poems and love the visual. As I read your Poem the picture morphed into a \"soft art\" version of the BIG BANG form whence all forces in the Universe emanate ! So much we don\'t fully comprehend ~ like GRAVITY ~ but we sure experience it ~especially the first time we fell off a HORSE when it spooked at a tripple ! Please check my MONOLITTURA SONNET ! BRIAN

May 14th, 2017 03:48

Great Forces
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

May 14th, 2017 01:53

Great Forces
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Love the painting. How is the open weekend going?

May 14th, 2017 01:43

LIMERICK 26
swingline said:

Maybe he could become a sailor
Aboard a south Pacific whaler
If they ever got stuck in the Doldrums
If the winds had no whinnie or became humdrum
Then he\'d swallow all and release his call
And the boat would scurvy away


May 13th, 2017 13:28

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orchidee said:

Was the man very old - millions of years old, like me and Goldie are?! (it\'s nutty! lol).

May 13th, 2017 12:08

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

My friend IVOR the ORGAN is Welsh
Seine Frau ist auf Deutschland und Schmeltz
But when they get a whiff
Of the old Bara Brith
Zey BELLSCH und zey BELLSCH und zee BELLSCH

Thanks Michael ~ enjoyed it ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.

May 13th, 2017 07:21

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WriteBeLight said:

I beg his pardon :) Great one.

May 13th, 2017 05:54

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Fay Slimm. said:

I got the wind of that limerick Michael right from the very first line. - ha ha -

May 13th, 2017 04:58

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orchidee said:

A \'windy\' good write!

May 13th, 2017 01:23

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Goldfinch60 said:

Fun write.

May 13th, 2017 00:44

PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED
Lizzy Renee said:

nice poem :)

May 12th, 2017 14:07



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