Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IS TODAY TODAY ?
LukeMorrison said:
Really like this idea :) I think you could write more on the same subject and really ponder the question you pose
April 7th, 2017 00:26
LukeMorrison said:
Really like this idea :) I think you could write more on the same subject and really ponder the question you pose
April 7th, 2017 00:26
AUTUMN SUN
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh scent of autumn, and a cool \"quivering water\'s edge,\" bring the painting\'s suggestion of fall to the reader\'s eye. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 16:05
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh scent of autumn, and a cool \"quivering water\'s edge,\" bring the painting\'s suggestion of fall to the reader\'s eye. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 16:05
AUTUMN SUN
Tony36 said:
Great write. I write in different forms all the time. It is good to try new stuff
April 6th, 2017 08:54
Tony36 said:
Great write. I write in different forms all the time. It is good to try new stuff
April 6th, 2017 08:54
AUTUMN SUN
willyweed said:
love this style Michael and the long shadows picture, sweet Rx3
April 6th, 2017 06:47
willyweed said:
love this style Michael and the long shadows picture, sweet Rx3
April 6th, 2017 06:47
AUTUMN SUN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love triolets. In classical poetry the THREE R\'s are always important Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition as in Villanelles etc. I don\'t mind you jumping two Seasons it is \"poetic licence\" and all four Seasons are mus~ical. Love the shadows in the painting ! BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 05:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love triolets. In classical poetry the THREE R\'s are always important Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition as in Villanelles etc. I don\'t mind you jumping two Seasons it is \"poetic licence\" and all four Seasons are mus~ical. Love the shadows in the painting ! BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 05:42
AUTUMN SUN
orchidee said:
A fine write and picture M. I\'ve been inspired to write some song-poems from certain pictures. I shall probably have some inspiration again sometime! I\'m sure you\'re not wishing the year away with this for Autumn! lol.
April 6th, 2017 03:32
orchidee said:
A fine write and picture M. I\'ve been inspired to write some song-poems from certain pictures. I shall probably have some inspiration again sometime! I\'m sure you\'re not wishing the year away with this for Autumn! lol.
April 6th, 2017 03:32
AUTUMN SUN
Fay Slimm. said:
The triolet form fits so well with the picture of mellow autumn - another gem to view and to read - thank you Michael.
April 6th, 2017 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The triolet form fits so well with the picture of mellow autumn - another gem to view and to read - thank you Michael.
April 6th, 2017 02:22
AUTUMN SUN
Garry said:
Very beautiful. Feels nice to read. Appropriate for April?
April 6th, 2017 02:15
Garry said:
Very beautiful. Feels nice to read. Appropriate for April?
April 6th, 2017 02:15
AUTUMN SUN
Frank Prem said:
Interesting rhyme patterns, is it a particular form?
April 6th, 2017 02:02
Frank Prem said:
Interesting rhyme patterns, is it a particular form?
April 6th, 2017 02:02
IMMERSED IN TIME
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry them with us throughout life, but it seems they choose when to pop up. I think your abstract looks like one of those ghosts trapped in a poisonous environment, yet it is still a beautiful thing. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:24
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry them with us throughout life, but it seems they choose when to pop up. I think your abstract looks like one of those ghosts trapped in a poisonous environment, yet it is still a beautiful thing. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:24
IMMERSED IN TIME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ for caring & sharing. Love the abstract ~ it has what i call inner glow like many of the images from the Hubble Telescope. As both GF and Willy have noted the painting does draw one into the centre and creates a desire to explore. This (for me) is true of all the Hubble images ~ OK. Now to the poem ! That too is enigmatic and poses many questions and mysteries ~ a true enigma ~ about everything and nothing simultaneously ~ exploring the memories complex corridors ~ awesome ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ for caring & sharing. Love the abstract ~ it has what i call inner glow like many of the images from the Hubble Telescope. As both GF and Willy have noted the painting does draw one into the centre and creates a desire to explore. This (for me) is true of all the Hubble images ~ OK. Now to the poem ! That too is enigmatic and poses many questions and mysteries ~ a true enigma ~ about everything and nothing simultaneously ~ exploring the memories complex corridors ~ awesome ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:32
IMMERSED IN TIME
willyweed said:
the poem is deep and your painting is examining me? I love this work Michael , I\'m sinking in. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:45
willyweed said:
the poem is deep and your painting is examining me? I love this work Michael , I\'m sinking in. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:45
IMMERSED IN TIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good though provoking write.
Similarly the picture is drawing me into it. Into where? Watch this space.
April 5th, 2017 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good though provoking write.
Similarly the picture is drawing me into it. Into where? Watch this space.
April 5th, 2017 01:47
DOOR
MendedFences27 said:
Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door represents hope, or the future. Great piece of art, both. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:06
MendedFences27 said:
Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door represents hope, or the future. Great piece of art, both. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:06
DOOR
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood takes me.
April 4th, 2017 15:44
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood takes me.
April 4th, 2017 15:44
DOOR
P.H.Rose said:
I generally push
Doors so hard
I take them off
Their hinges....
Is the painting
Venice ???
Short but very sweet..
April 4th, 2017 13:22
P.H.Rose said:
I generally push
Doors so hard
I take them off
Their hinges....
Is the painting
Venice ???
Short but very sweet..
April 4th, 2017 13:22
DOOR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the poem (style and subject) and the painting. Doors are always enigmatic and two sided ~ and always a great subject for an Odd Ode ~ Thanks BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 08:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the poem (style and subject) and the painting. Doors are always enigmatic and two sided ~ and always a great subject for an Odd Ode ~ Thanks BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 08:11
DOOR
Garry said:
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think there are lots of poems that would be improved by being culled slightly.
This paints vivid image in just a few words. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 05:59
Garry said:
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think there are lots of poems that would be improved by being culled slightly.
This paints vivid image in just a few words. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 05:59
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
MendedFences27 said:
Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t know about, or one you created. It\'s very clever and probably hard to write. I did enjoy it though. - Phil A.
April 3rd, 2017 20:29
MendedFences27 said:
Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t know about, or one you created. It\'s very clever and probably hard to write. I did enjoy it though. - Phil A.
April 3rd, 2017 20:29
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
rrodriguez said:
Wine nor beer for me, but for the poem, serve me another one! Great write...!
April 3rd, 2017 19:43
rrodriguez said:
Wine nor beer for me, but for the poem, serve me another one! Great write...!
April 3rd, 2017 19:43
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
P.H.Rose said:
Good poem Michael
But alas I am not
A grape drinker
Run and beer...
But not in the same
Glass !!!!!
April 3rd, 2017 08:05
P.H.Rose said:
Good poem Michael
But alas I am not
A grape drinker
Run and beer...
But not in the same
Glass !!!!!
April 3rd, 2017 08:05
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