Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Oh giggling. Clever witty Limerick. Fun to read from u again. Thumbs up.👍
Will u too my latest?

April 25th, 2017 13:18

THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic.

April 22nd, 2017 10:23

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ That should ha\'e been a Giraffe Sculpture nae a fush ! You should see the Girl from next flat to me ~ she has a score of 63 ! 63 from 100 then ? No that\'s her score just out of TEN ! BRIAN Please check my Pyramidal Poem ~ Ta B.

April 22nd, 2017 08:48

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rrodriguez said:

This poem is poignant in its intrinsic message. Nice!

April 22nd, 2017 08:25

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willyweed said:

I hope they are long enough to reach her arse as well? nice fish! good one Michael!

April 22nd, 2017 08:19

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WriteBeLight said:

Has a nice step to it :) Nice fish.

April 22nd, 2017 06:34

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Garry said:

A good reworking of an old joke well done.

April 22nd, 2017 03:13

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, gave me my first smile of the day.

April 22nd, 2017 00:53

ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect \"Diamond shaped Reverse Poem ~ also a very intriguing content ! And the water colour is a perfect compliment to FADED ELEGANCE sitting ALONE ! Yours BRIAN

April 21st, 2017 11:14

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willyweed said:

nicely done Michael

April 21st, 2017 06:48

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WriteBeLight said:

Haunting write Michael, but a comforting painting.

April 21st, 2017 06:04

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orchidee said:

Yes, well-thought out poem and nice pic!

April 21st, 2017 03:37

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Garry said:

Very cleved and works very well.

April 21st, 2017 02:23

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Hopey_xx said:

A very nice picture and poem!

April 21st, 2017 01:36

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, it works very well.

April 21st, 2017 00:31

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MendedFences27 said:

A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a small brook, and a secluded concert for just one, the singer. Very descriptive write lot\'s of great phrasing, \"springtime\'s stretching growth, a snug and sheltered spot, echoes deep in cavities,\" Just a wonderful poem. - Phil A.

April 20th, 2017 20:24

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WriteBeLight said:

Love the swaying swad line :) Lovely poetry!

April 20th, 2017 15:51

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willyweed said:

I agree about the abstract art this one says to me don\'t go chasing waterfalls? and the poem take me home country road., but then again I\'m a nut case? ww

April 20th, 2017 08:09

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks again MICHAEL for another very attractive P & P ! I love abstract poetry and especially if the TITLE is just \"68\" or another number (much better than UNTITLED !). To relate to the poem I see the abstract as the Young Lady meditating at the fluid Crossroads of Life and trusting her next direction will choose itself ! I love her sense of abandonment to life suggested in the poem ~ meditating before moving on ~ beautiful ! Thanks for my morning enigma from you pen & pallet ~ Yours BRIAN

April 20th, 2017 03:16

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Goldfinch60 said:

Super write with great imagery.

Another abstract into which I am drawn. Our daughters an artist and in our talks about art she and I talk about the meaning of abstract art and I find I really examine it and nearly always get drawn into it.


April 20th, 2017 01:36

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MendedFences27 said:

Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish not to be seen. Colorfully expressed.,uniquely formed, with accompanying painting. Just lovely. - Phil A.

April 19th, 2017 21:16

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WriteBeLight said:

Certainly not an invisible poem Michael. And, I think I see you hiding in that painting :) Very beautiful.

April 19th, 2017 05:27

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Fay Slimm. said:

The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets from all who would pry - great watercolour too Michael.

April 19th, 2017 03:49

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING MICHAEL ~ I see we are in PYRAMIDAL MODE this morning ! In a 1234 etc poem one goes for words rather than syllables. Had you reversed them it would still have made sense and you end up with a DIAMOND as I did (deliberately) yesterday. Shape poems are linguistic fun rather than erudite ~ BUT ~ I like the message \"Don\'t get involved ~ Be an Ostrich\". Yours BRIAN

April 19th, 2017 02:25

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orchidee said:

Good write and painting.

April 19th, 2017 01:49

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Goldfinch60 said:

So many people wear blinkers these days. Good write.
\"There\'e none so blind as those who don\'t want to see\"

Like the painting.

April 19th, 2017 01:08

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MendedFences27 said:

I think we\'ve all had those moments
of unintended frost, but the way you\'ve crafted the thawing period is masterful, and what a great last line. Maybe the day of warm Sun rays brought about the melt. Well constructed and well written, I truly enjoyed this one. - Phil A.

April 18th, 2017 22:14

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willyweed said:

you paint a lovely picture with your words and paint Michael! love it! ww

April 18th, 2017 10:21

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Tony36 said:

Awesome write and awesome picture

April 18th, 2017 07:49

TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL another well balanced PICTURE AN\' POEM. As the Good Book says \"Never let the SUN set until your wrath his been dissipated ~ AMEN\" Your BRIAN

April 18th, 2017 03:58



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