Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE PATH
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. The path to nowhere but does nowhere exist?
Great painting, I really like this.
April 1st, 2017 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. The path to nowhere but does nowhere exist?
Great painting, I really like this.
April 1st, 2017 01:19
THE PATH
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - this has to be one of your best pieces of descriptive poetry Michael - a delight to read over again this picture of a path\'s journey to seaward demise. A perfect match to the striking watercolour too.
April 1st, 2017 01:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - this has to be one of your best pieces of descriptive poetry Michael - a delight to read over again this picture of a path\'s journey to seaward demise. A perfect match to the striking watercolour too.
April 1st, 2017 01:02
WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
ron parrish aka wordman said:
going to be a book soon,liked it
March 31st, 2017 21:19
ron parrish aka wordman said:
going to be a book soon,liked it
March 31st, 2017 21:19
THE BARMY BARD
MendedFences27 said:
Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his writings. I think some people are actors. Well, time for my exit. Oh, there\'s no cat in that painting it\'s an overhead, fisheye len\'s view of a couple of ice dancers.
March 31st, 2017 19:50
MendedFences27 said:
Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his writings. I think some people are actors. Well, time for my exit. Oh, there\'s no cat in that painting it\'s an overhead, fisheye len\'s view of a couple of ice dancers.
March 31st, 2017 19:50
THE BARMY BARD
willyweed said:
Dafts I call it. I see the cat too, looks like someone hit him with a shovel?
March 31st, 2017 15:05
willyweed said:
Dafts I call it. I see the cat too, looks like someone hit him with a shovel?
March 31st, 2017 15:05
DAWN WAITS
WriteBeLight said:
Well, nice ending. Great picture, as always Michael.
March 31st, 2017 12:15
WriteBeLight said:
Well, nice ending. Great picture, as always Michael.
March 31st, 2017 12:15
THE BARMY BARD
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Brian - as for friends etc :
The corn stands erect in tiers,
like friends and Romans and countrymen;
perhaps it’ll lend me its ears.
March 31st, 2017 10:44
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Brian - as for friends etc :
The corn stands erect in tiers,
like friends and Romans and countrymen;
perhaps it’ll lend me its ears.
March 31st, 2017 10:44
THE BARMY BARD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ SHAKESPEARE like KEATS is a complete MYTH invented by Teachers of English in the 20th C to torture their pupils ~ I did Julius Caesar (another Myth invented by Hstorians) for GCSE ! Friends Romans Countrymen ~ lend me your ears ................ ! What\'s all that about ? Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN The Bard of Birkenhead ! Even you abstract ~ Patriotic Pandas in a melee ~ makes more sense !
March 31st, 2017 09:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ SHAKESPEARE like KEATS is a complete MYTH invented by Teachers of English in the 20th C to torture their pupils ~ I did Julius Caesar (another Myth invented by Hstorians) for GCSE ! Friends Romans Countrymen ~ lend me your ears ................ ! What\'s all that about ? Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN The Bard of Birkenhead ! Even you abstract ~ Patriotic Pandas in a melee ~ makes more sense !
March 31st, 2017 09:47
THE BARMY BARD
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see a cats face in that abstract. Again I would like to see the original, there is certainly something about it that talks to me.
March 31st, 2017 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see a cats face in that abstract. Again I would like to see the original, there is certainly something about it that talks to me.
March 31st, 2017 02:19
THE BARMY BARD
Goldfinch60 said:
Bill Waggadagga was drummed into me at school back in the distant path so I never liked him. I went to see Macbeth recently and it only reinforced my feelings of dislike. Did he write all those plays anyway?
March 31st, 2017 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Bill Waggadagga was drummed into me at school back in the distant path so I never liked him. I went to see Macbeth recently and it only reinforced my feelings of dislike. Did he write all those plays anyway?
March 31st, 2017 02:18
DAWN WAITS
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Phil - now to post something a bit different.
March 30th, 2017 23:38
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Phil - now to post something a bit different.
March 30th, 2017 23:38
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Phil - they\'re sharing breakfast as we speak. So glad I got drawn into this - it was a bit of fun as well as ending up with a half decent piece of poetry in a form I\'d not come across before.
March 30th, 2017 23:37
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Phil - they\'re sharing breakfast as we speak. So glad I got drawn into this - it was a bit of fun as well as ending up with a half decent piece of poetry in a form I\'d not come across before.
March 30th, 2017 23:37
DAWN WAITS
MendedFences27 said:
Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.
March 30th, 2017 21:57
MendedFences27 said:
Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.
March 30th, 2017 21:57
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
MendedFences27 said:
So my favorite couple in the house with the creaking stairs, which they took longer to climb than I do my stairs, had found the right key after all, and now share some physical bliss, but only until morning, when it will take them another week to go back down, unless they slide on the banister. A great joy shared by us all, thank you Michael. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2017 17:53
MendedFences27 said:
So my favorite couple in the house with the creaking stairs, which they took longer to climb than I do my stairs, had found the right key after all, and now share some physical bliss, but only until morning, when it will take them another week to go back down, unless they slide on the banister. A great joy shared by us all, thank you Michael. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2017 17:53
DAWN WAITS
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Brian - yes it\'s my lane although I live behind the cottages to the left. Must agree about the last line - I often have one in mind even before I start scribing.
March 30th, 2017 09:58
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Brian - yes it\'s my lane although I live behind the cottages to the left. Must agree about the last line - I often have one in mind even before I start scribing.
March 30th, 2017 09:58
DAWN WAITS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so \"English Country Lane !\"
March 30th, 2017 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so \"English Country Lane !\"
March 30th, 2017 08:19
DAWN WAITS
Fay Slimm. said:
Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.
March 30th, 2017 05:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.
March 30th, 2017 05:49
DAWN WAITS
Michael Edwards said:
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.
March 30th, 2017 03:19
Michael Edwards said:
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.
March 30th, 2017 03:19
DAWN WAITS
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful ending.
Good art as well. Does the car have its wheels on the path?
March 30th, 2017 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful ending.
Good art as well. Does the car have its wheels on the path?
March 30th, 2017 02:20
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Cool ending ! No Love story completes ~ until they couple between the sheets ! Strange but true ~ that we all end up there in the end ~ PARADISE ! Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2017 17:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Cool ending ! No Love story completes ~ until they couple between the sheets ! Strange but true ~ that we all end up there in the end ~ PARADISE ! Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2017 17:16
THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Michael Edwards said:
I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter stuff to balance the books is always welcome - look forward to seeing your future postings Garry.
March 29th, 2017 13:07
Michael Edwards said:
I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter stuff to balance the books is always welcome - look forward to seeing your future postings Garry.
March 29th, 2017 13:07
THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Garry said:
I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However i have tried to balance the books with a few recent efforts. Which are bit lighter and a couple more to come over the next few weeks. Mixed in with the darker stuff of course. Hope they cheer you up as much as this cheered me.
March 29th, 2017 12:56
Garry said:
I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However i have tried to balance the books with a few recent efforts. Which are bit lighter and a couple more to come over the next few weeks. Mixed in with the darker stuff of course. Hope they cheer you up as much as this cheered me.
March 29th, 2017 12:56
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Tony36 said:
Awesome conclusion to an awesome write
March 29th, 2017 10:09
Tony36 said:
Awesome conclusion to an awesome write
March 29th, 2017 10:09
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
willyweed said:
Brilliant piece of work in its entirety! Bravo Poet!
March 29th, 2017 06:57
willyweed said:
Brilliant piece of work in its entirety! Bravo Poet!
March 29th, 2017 06:57
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