Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Specialness
dusk arising said:
Beautiful.
I\'ve taken a long pause having read your poem because it is stunning.
I have never been so taken with a poem of love as I am today with your creation.
Never short of words am I but today. Today I am.
Yes, of course, into my favourites with top billing.
January 15th, 2021 06:58
dusk arising said:
Beautiful.
I\'ve taken a long pause having read your poem because it is stunning.
I have never been so taken with a poem of love as I am today with your creation.
Never short of words am I but today. Today I am.
Yes, of course, into my favourites with top billing.
January 15th, 2021 06:58
Specialness
L. B. Mek said:
\'and love
waltzed thru\' former convention
without taking note
of doubt\'s regret or retreat\',
aint it always that way, invading: without warning...
Brilliant!
how lucky the recipient of this masterly words of dedication,
I\'m sorry for your loss dear Fay, may your words aid their status of well earned peaceful rest
January 15th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'and love
waltzed thru\' former convention
without taking note
of doubt\'s regret or retreat\',
aint it always that way, invading: without warning...
Brilliant!
how lucky the recipient of this masterly words of dedication,
I\'m sorry for your loss dear Fay, may your words aid their status of well earned peaceful rest
January 15th, 2021 06:08
My Friend
L. B. Mek said:
\'that anticipatory gift of looked-for shine
as I open my night weighted eyes\',
I: am a Devout lover of Dog\'s, so once more your words - penetrate deep...
January 15th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'that anticipatory gift of looked-for shine
as I open my night weighted eyes\',
I: am a Devout lover of Dog\'s, so once more your words - penetrate deep...
January 15th, 2021 05:22
Specialness
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fay, it is one year ago when Joyce passed and those words are so true, I used those words in a poem I wrote and it is hanging on the wall in our dining room, it ends
\"I am learning,
Learning not to live without her,
But learning to live with the love,
The love that she left behind,
That love she has left for me,
Just for me.\"
Andy
January 15th, 2021 03:55
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fay, it is one year ago when Joyce passed and those words are so true, I used those words in a poem I wrote and it is hanging on the wall in our dining room, it ends
\"I am learning,
Learning not to live without her,
But learning to live with the love,
The love that she left behind,
That love she has left for me,
Just for me.\"
Andy
January 15th, 2021 03:55
Specialness
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I hope you won\'t have to write this about sweet Tessa for years and years!
January 15th, 2021 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I hope you won\'t have to write this about sweet Tessa for years and years!
January 15th, 2021 03:07
My Friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs are so wonderful Fay and yours looks delightful. I was brought up with dogs and recently my children have said why do I not get a dog but I do not think I could have one at the moment as I have too many things going on, at least I will do once lockdown ceases.
Andy
January 15th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs are so wonderful Fay and yours looks delightful. I was brought up with dogs and recently my children have said why do I not get a dog but I do not think I could have one at the moment as I have too many things going on, at least I will do once lockdown ceases.
Andy
January 15th, 2021 01:49
My Friend
Michael Edwards said:
Love this but I\'m a dog lover. we\'ve often talked about getting one again (we used to always have a dog) but have been put off by the fact that we travel a lot - or at least we used to - perhaps the time has come. But then we be off again if ever we get out of this current impasse.
January 14th, 2021 15:10
Michael Edwards said:
Love this but I\'m a dog lover. we\'ve often talked about getting one again (we used to always have a dog) but have been put off by the fact that we travel a lot - or at least we used to - perhaps the time has come. But then we be off again if ever we get out of this current impasse.
January 14th, 2021 15:10
My Friend
dusk arising said:
Doggies, so loveable but..... i have a problem... You see, I always read your poetry and have been captured by you take on the natural worlds little beauties and your affinity with them but...... surely a dog won\'t allow such peaceful contemplation by the side of a stream full of interesting things to chase and bite? Grrrrrr
January 14th, 2021 14:35
dusk arising said:
Doggies, so loveable but..... i have a problem... You see, I always read your poetry and have been captured by you take on the natural worlds little beauties and your affinity with them but...... surely a dog won\'t allow such peaceful contemplation by the side of a stream full of interesting things to chase and bite? Grrrrrr
January 14th, 2021 14:35
My Friend
Neville said:
its a dogs life innit ... lucky dog she is too have a mistress like thee ..
what a delightful canine pawtrait you have poemed for us to paw over today dear poet ...............
January 14th, 2021 13:03
Neville said:
its a dogs life innit ... lucky dog she is too have a mistress like thee ..
what a delightful canine pawtrait you have poemed for us to paw over today dear poet ...............
January 14th, 2021 13:03
My Friend
orchidee said:
Ahhh, the sweetest thing! What more could one want?! Not a lot more besides. A little, or maybe large dog as companion, or maybe a cat, or both?! Well, human company too.
January 14th, 2021 11:07
orchidee said:
Ahhh, the sweetest thing! What more could one want?! Not a lot more besides. A little, or maybe large dog as companion, or maybe a cat, or both?! Well, human company too.
January 14th, 2021 11:07
Stopped Clocks
L. B. Mek said:
\'Potent those smiles brushed with intrigue.\'
immersive lines, with words utilising vivid imagery - perfectly, I can\'t help but recall some of my own highlights of love...
what a wonderful gift you\'ve given us readers, dear Fay
January 14th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Potent those smiles brushed with intrigue.\'
immersive lines, with words utilising vivid imagery - perfectly, I can\'t help but recall some of my own highlights of love...
what a wonderful gift you\'ve given us readers, dear Fay
January 14th, 2021 05:58
Surrender
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful serenade: to all things \'morning sunshine\' - seeped, in that untapped possibility of a new day...
simply wonderful dear Fay, thanks for sharing again
January 14th, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful serenade: to all things \'morning sunshine\' - seeped, in that untapped possibility of a new day...
simply wonderful dear Fay, thanks for sharing again
January 14th, 2021 05:52
Imprinted
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderfully versed dissection of the nurturing elements within life\'s natural traits,
a good read dear Fay
January 14th, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderfully versed dissection of the nurturing elements within life\'s natural traits,
a good read dear Fay
January 14th, 2021 05:40
Stopped Clocks
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay and may that tinge of gold be forever in your memory.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay and may that tinge of gold be forever in your memory.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 01:31
Stopped Clocks
RDS said:
Haha you write such beautiful vivid verses Fay and I get to the end and lose grip of the delicate sense you weave to be left with wistful and coy thoughts. Great work again dear poet friend.
J
January 13th, 2021 18:27
RDS said:
Haha you write such beautiful vivid verses Fay and I get to the end and lose grip of the delicate sense you weave to be left with wistful and coy thoughts. Great work again dear poet friend.
J
January 13th, 2021 18:27
Stopped Clocks
Neville said:
.. this is magnificent ... I cannot surely be the only one here who would have given his eye teeth to have penned these words ....
January 13th, 2021 07:09
Neville said:
.. this is magnificent ... I cannot surely be the only one here who would have given his eye teeth to have penned these words ....
January 13th, 2021 07:09
Stopped Clocks
dusk arising said:
Such treasures are memories made when the heart was winged and flew in the paired dance of loves entwined rhythms through a wonderland of life\'s finest sensations.
Such can only be told by those who so flew.
Now smile at the thought.
January 13th, 2021 06:32
dusk arising said:
Such treasures are memories made when the heart was winged and flew in the paired dance of loves entwined rhythms through a wonderland of life\'s finest sensations.
Such can only be told by those who so flew.
Now smile at the thought.
January 13th, 2021 06:32
Surrender
Goldfinch60 said:
My time of day, the beauty of dawn is so wonderful as are your words Fay.
Andy
January 13th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
My time of day, the beauty of dawn is so wonderful as are your words Fay.
Andy
January 13th, 2021 01:55
Surrender
dusk arising said:
Wow Fay! An extravaganza of dawn\'s delights. Took me through every waking feeling with this one.
I think you milked it as they say....
Nice one.
January 12th, 2021 16:27
dusk arising said:
Wow Fay! An extravaganza of dawn\'s delights. Took me through every waking feeling with this one.
I think you milked it as they say....
Nice one.
January 12th, 2021 16:27
Surrender
Suresh said:
The quiet of the slumbering night,
Pierced to movement by your light.
As always enthralled by your words
January 12th, 2021 14:27
Suresh said:
The quiet of the slumbering night,
Pierced to movement by your light.
As always enthralled by your words
January 12th, 2021 14:27
Surrender
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... I gripped slowly onto every word, already a pleasure!
Thank you so much
January 12th, 2021 08:27
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... I gripped slowly onto every word, already a pleasure!
Thank you so much
January 12th, 2021 08:27
Imprinted
Neville said:
wondrously natureful and brimming with nurturing truth ... so good to come home to and easy on the eye ...
January 12th, 2021 05:26
Neville said:
wondrously natureful and brimming with nurturing truth ... so good to come home to and easy on the eye ...
January 12th, 2021 05:26
Imprinted
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is such a wonderful place, even now with my memories.
Andy
January 12th, 2021 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is such a wonderful place, even now with my memories.
Andy
January 12th, 2021 01:59
Imprinted
Doggerel Dave said:
I enjoyed that, Fay. And engineered with your usual meticulousness.
Just on the edge of my thought was...well, lucky for them wot has it...
Didn\'t spoil your poem though!
Dave
January 11th, 2021 18:30
Doggerel Dave said:
I enjoyed that, Fay. And engineered with your usual meticulousness.
Just on the edge of my thought was...well, lucky for them wot has it...
Didn\'t spoil your poem though!
Dave
January 11th, 2021 18:30
Imprinted
Michael Edwards said:
I know all about home - all the jobs done . painting (art) completed, too darn cold for gardening, dinner prepared and now bored out of my mind - and inside it! but a great write Fay nonetheless.
January 11th, 2021 11:34
Michael Edwards said:
I know all about home - all the jobs done . painting (art) completed, too darn cold for gardening, dinner prepared and now bored out of my mind - and inside it! but a great write Fay nonetheless.
January 11th, 2021 11:34
Imprinted
dusk arising said:
he he he.. how do you do it Fay. You make a hole in the ground sound so cosy.
January 11th, 2021 10:44
dusk arising said:
he he he.. how do you do it Fay. You make a hole in the ground sound so cosy.
January 11th, 2021 10:44
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