Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Lost.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
from a spring to an ocean,,and you wrote it on my birthday
March 30th, 2020 16:04
ron parrish aka wordman said:
from a spring to an ocean,,and you wrote it on my birthday
March 30th, 2020 16:04
Sistership.
dusk arising said:
Glorious and sad. Very touching to me because I was so close to my older brother when we were kids. Your memories of long ago are so similar to mine.
Whatever the afterlife is i sometimes speak to my brother\'s spirit.... though i am a firm believer in reincarnation.
Sisterhood - brotherhood, sharing childhood, growing in a shared bedroom..... really brings an incomparable bond.
Memories and tears today.
March 30th, 2020 08:22
dusk arising said:
Glorious and sad. Very touching to me because I was so close to my older brother when we were kids. Your memories of long ago are so similar to mine.
Whatever the afterlife is i sometimes speak to my brother\'s spirit.... though i am a firm believer in reincarnation.
Sisterhood - brotherhood, sharing childhood, growing in a shared bedroom..... really brings an incomparable bond.
Memories and tears today.
March 30th, 2020 08:22
Aurora.
Goldfinch60 said:
Aurora is always with us Fay as your wonderful words describe.
Andy
March 29th, 2020 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Aurora is always with us Fay as your wonderful words describe.
Andy
March 29th, 2020 01:07
Aurora.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENIBG FAY ~ Love the visual ~ SPRING is always the best Season for misty & breathtaking Dawns ! Love the POEM
V 1. The light does curl & the Birds do prepare to sing
V 2. Once the Dawn Chorus Starts it is unstoppable until complete !
V 3. Aurora & Birdsong~ PARADISE
WE have dome lovelry Dawn Choruses in our new Home !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *HAPPINESS* Thanks !
March 28th, 2020 17:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENIBG FAY ~ Love the visual ~ SPRING is always the best Season for misty & breathtaking Dawns ! Love the POEM
V 1. The light does curl & the Birds do prepare to sing
V 2. Once the Dawn Chorus Starts it is unstoppable until complete !
V 3. Aurora & Birdsong~ PARADISE
WE have dome lovelry Dawn Choruses in our new Home !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *HAPPINESS* Thanks !
March 28th, 2020 17:15
Aurora.
dusk arising said:
You led me through a woodland with freshened senses as i read and re-read your poem today. Yes i felt the chill of damp March air upon my imaginings as light from afar promised through the tree trunk spacing.
March 28th, 2020 11:41
dusk arising said:
You led me through a woodland with freshened senses as i read and re-read your poem today. Yes i felt the chill of damp March air upon my imaginings as light from afar promised through the tree trunk spacing.
March 28th, 2020 11:41
Aurora.
orchidee said:
That Aurora will be with us, as we lose the hour tonight. But thankfully not darker morning again yet, unless up really early.
March 28th, 2020 10:47
orchidee said:
That Aurora will be with us, as we lose the hour tonight. But thankfully not darker morning again yet, unless up really early.
March 28th, 2020 10:47
Frustration.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah great - who said you don\'t write light? More please.
March 27th, 2020 14:45
Michael Edwards said:
Ah great - who said you don\'t write light? More please.
March 27th, 2020 14:45
Frustration.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Ah! A common mistake made by ladies like the one in the image ~ she is a little overdressed for the occasion.
Thanks for the fun write Fay...
Ex animo, Alan
March 27th, 2020 08:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Ah! A common mistake made by ladies like the one in the image ~ she is a little overdressed for the occasion.
Thanks for the fun write Fay...
Ex animo, Alan
March 27th, 2020 08:58
Frustration.
dusk arising said:
LOL sometimes its not easy to read the other genders needs and that works both ways.
Shame we can\'t just be receptive to our partner saying \'hey i need xyzxyz, sort me out will you?\' ... it would solve so many issues and keep the peace. Oh and there\'s a pill for nearly everything these days, even if it has to be crushed and put into his herbal tea for disguise.
Good fun entertainment. Hope you are looking after yourself in these strange times. Still waiting for local gov to get back to me with string of volunteers to keep \'isolated vulnerable\' yours truly serviced LOL.
March 27th, 2020 04:50
dusk arising said:
LOL sometimes its not easy to read the other genders needs and that works both ways.
Shame we can\'t just be receptive to our partner saying \'hey i need xyzxyz, sort me out will you?\' ... it would solve so many issues and keep the peace. Oh and there\'s a pill for nearly everything these days, even if it has to be crushed and put into his herbal tea for disguise.
Good fun entertainment. Hope you are looking after yourself in these strange times. Still waiting for local gov to get back to me with string of volunteers to keep \'isolated vulnerable\' yours truly serviced LOL.
March 27th, 2020 04:50
Somewhere.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A beautifully written poem.
Looking at the pic and reading your scripted words, I feel them.
“- - Lead me and leave me there - -“
Love is a wonderful thing!
Thank you for sharing your pen.
You are an amazing poetess!
Stay safe and well!❤️
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 17:05
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A beautifully written poem.
Looking at the pic and reading your scripted words, I feel them.
“- - Lead me and leave me there - -“
Love is a wonderful thing!
Thank you for sharing your pen.
You are an amazing poetess!
Stay safe and well!❤️
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 17:05
Somewhere.
Neville said:
Perfectly penned.. so well rounded and rarely do they get any better...
Neville
March 26th, 2020 13:43
Neville said:
Perfectly penned.. so well rounded and rarely do they get any better...
Neville
March 26th, 2020 13:43
Somewhere.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brian Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brian Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
Somewhere.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brain Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brain Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
Somewhere.
orchidee said:
Somewhere there are fine poems - here\'s one right here! heehee. Will flattery get me everywhere?!
March 26th, 2020 09:22
orchidee said:
Somewhere there are fine poems - here\'s one right here! heehee. Will flattery get me everywhere?!
March 26th, 2020 09:22
Tasting.
Saxon Crow said:
You\'d already get high praise for using one of my favourite words, \'autumnal\'. This is a lovely piece Fay and all the better that I can relate to it.
March 25th, 2020 13:16
Saxon Crow said:
You\'d already get high praise for using one of my favourite words, \'autumnal\'. This is a lovely piece Fay and all the better that I can relate to it.
March 25th, 2020 13:16
Tasting.
dusk arising said:
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful, beautiful world we live in. The great outdoors i describe as god\'s real church.... you can feel the presence... there is no need of song or prayer though one may feel so moved to do both.... i know i do.
Great words from you and hopefully encouraging folk to go out into places where these exhilarating vibrations will us.
March 25th, 2020 12:09
dusk arising said:
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful, beautiful world we live in. The great outdoors i describe as god\'s real church.... you can feel the presence... there is no need of song or prayer though one may feel so moved to do both.... i know i do.
Great words from you and hopefully encouraging folk to go out into places where these exhilarating vibrations will us.
March 25th, 2020 12:09
Tasting.
Michael Edwards said:
Just read through it twice - sheer poetry - but then, of course, it is.
March 25th, 2020 10:20
Michael Edwards said:
Just read through it twice - sheer poetry - but then, of course, it is.
March 25th, 2020 10:20
Tasting.
orchidee said:
That lass is having fine old time as described by you Fay!
March 25th, 2020 10:16
orchidee said:
That lass is having fine old time as described by you Fay!
March 25th, 2020 10:16
Tasting.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sounds like my almost daily routine here in Yorkshire Fay. I wonder how you knew. Even during \'normal\' times I see no one out on the moor, save for a rider in the distance.
Thank you for allowing us to journey alongside you a way, and for the image of a (I think) quarter horse and rider with the wind in their hair.
Ex animo, Alan
March 25th, 2020 07:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sounds like my almost daily routine here in Yorkshire Fay. I wonder how you knew. Even during \'normal\' times I see no one out on the moor, save for a rider in the distance.
Thank you for allowing us to journey alongside you a way, and for the image of a (I think) quarter horse and rider with the wind in their hair.
Ex animo, Alan
March 25th, 2020 07:39
Lost.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I am flowing all the way with your words.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I am flowing all the way with your words.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:01
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