Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Nearest.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay, Dandelions are beautiful to gaze upon.

Andy

April 14th, 2020 00:55

Nearest.
FredPeyer said:

I always liked dandelions, and now after reading your poem I like them even more!

April 13th, 2020 18:42

Nearest.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ~ I love DANDELIONS in all their stages. Elegant BUD - Beautiful Flower perfect structure - Awesome YELLOW HUE - Delicate in Parachute Form - I always blow them to the four winds to generate more & more beautiful FLOWERS ! My Gramps made delicious Dandelion & Burdock from Dandelion roots. As your poem says the Dandelion has its place in the Food Chains & Food Webs. Who are we (mere mortals) to argur with that ! I teach my Nursery Nurses (Environmental Studies) to teach the Children - to respect all Flora & Fauna & Insectivora equally and never to destroy it ! Some of them have never handled a Worm or a Spider and unfortunately they pass their PHOBIAS on to the Kids. If we are wise we wont upset Mother nature (again) by despising one of her most lovely of FLOWERS - the DANDELION - AMEN !

Blessings - Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 13th, 2020 14:46

Nearest.
Michael Edwards said:

I am one of those who love the humble dandelion - there are banks of them locally and their bright cheerful blooms are a sheer delight. Fine tribute to a great plant.

April 13th, 2020 12:50

Nearest.
Neville said:


these \'piss the beds\' are without doubt beautiful to look at... but I prefer to view them in someone else\'s garden

I guess they are a bit like Marmite.. well depicted here....

Neville

April 13th, 2020 08:37

Nearest.
dusk arising said:

Indeed the dandelion is a beautiful creation though scorned by me and most for its reproductive efficiency mocking our desire for bowling green lawns of unnatural domination.

A wonderful tribute to the positives of this plant/weed/abomination/curse. At a time when most gardners are engaged in a war upon it. Why are we robbed of our elms when it could have been the dandy?

April 13th, 2020 07:02

Nearest.
orchidee said:

A lovely write and pic Fay. I saw an insect thingy - alive, but about half-a-millimetre long!

April 13th, 2020 04:44

Nearest.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Beautiful Fay
A much hated weed by the lawn-lovers
but such a display to achieve it\'s potential
I like it when they go to seed but don\'t tell the neighbors


April 13th, 2020 03:50

Enchanted.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Angela Here - Ahhhhhhh FAY the many many Glories of Spring - Birds & Bird Song & Fledglings. We inherited four Birdboxes with our New Home. We cleaned them up amd replaced them ! Now we have ROBINS - nesting in one & BLUE TITS in another. We see this as a sign that we will be very happy here ! Love the visual & Poem - thanks for Caring !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 10th, 2020 14:39

Enchanted.
Neville said:

impossible to read without the corners of me mouth movin heavenward and showing off my crow\'s-feet big time..... this is smashin Fay...….

Neville

April 10th, 2020 07:50

Enchanted.
dusk arising said:

This is just such pleasure, so pleasing to read and i\'ll bet it gave you much pleasure to see what you had written.

A favourite for sure.

April 10th, 2020 07:22

Enchanted.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful wards and picture Fay. New life is so precious.

Andy

April 10th, 2020 05:40

Enchanted.
SerenWise said:

Simple and beautiful!

April 10th, 2020 05:01

Enchanted.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

An enchanting write Fay.

Ex animo, Alan

April 10th, 2020 03:36

Enchanted.
orchidee said:

A truly enchanting write Fay. We\'re \'seeing\' nature more these days, hopefully, if only from our gardens in some cases.

April 10th, 2020 03:21

Gold Vision.
Goldfinch60 said:

I could see that deer in your words Fay. It is so wonderful to sit in silence and see those deer.

Andy

April 10th, 2020 01:07

Gold Vision.
Michael Edwards said:

Took me to a time and place that , in these difficult times, can only be seen in dreams.

April 9th, 2020 16:12

Gold Vision.
dusk arising said:

Painted vivvidly as ever with sophistication of your unique brush strokes..... i watched this scene unfold as the breeze raked those trees.
Can\'t but think you live in a idyllic spot surrounded by such marvels. Or is it all in your mind?

April 9th, 2020 13:40

Gold Vision.
orchidee said:

A lovely write Fay.

April 9th, 2020 07:27

Gold Vision.
Neville said:

Mr. Andrew C. Forrest took the words right out of my mouth, so he did...

Lovely Fay and true

Neville

April 9th, 2020 07:20

Gold Vision.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Wonderful brush with Nature Fay very well captured

April 9th, 2020 06:02

Chance.
Goldfinch60 said:

That destiny will take me back to my lover so that we can go forward to eternity.
Wonderful words Fay.

Andy

April 9th, 2020 00:22

Chance.
Neville said:

This put a smile on this old fella’s face... there’s hope for me yet it seems..... maybe πŸ˜ŽπŸ’•

Neville

April 8th, 2020 16:23

Chance.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

April 8th, 2020 11:32

Chance.
Jane Frye said:

You strung this poem so beautifully.

April 8th, 2020 10:24

Chance.
dusk arising said:

Age brings knowledge, so when certain feelings are aroused, we know what\'s going on inside us. In later years a loving bond would be so precious. Holding hands.... just the tip of the iceberg so to speak.

The thought of relaxing into a super-mature loving relationship has a very comfortable warmth for me. Needless to say your words kindled it.

April 8th, 2020 07:57

Chance.
Fay Slimm. said:

Never too late Joe eh ? - - Glad you enjoyed the read.

April 8th, 2020 05:52

Hunger.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay, may you sail the sea together on a calm sea of love.

Andy

April 8th, 2020 00:42

Hunger.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY - A lovely emotional Poem *Waitin* fer the Boat to cum in* AMEN !

Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 7th, 2020 16:57

Hunger.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

beautiful longing poem of love

April 7th, 2020 16:07



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