Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Somewhere.
Neville said:
Perfectly penned.. so well rounded and rarely do they get any better...
Neville
March 26th, 2020 13:43
Neville said:
Perfectly penned.. so well rounded and rarely do they get any better...
Neville
March 26th, 2020 13:43
Somewhere.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brian Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brian Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
Somewhere.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brain Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks FAY for sharing a very evocative Picture & Poem. For me (being Mrs Brain Williams) each New Day is a Paradise expecially as we are Self ~ Isolating - NO VISITORS ! BRIAN is my *OSO DE PELUCHE GRANDE* (Big Teddy Bear) and I want to hug him 24/7 and he ME ! Is that appropriate behaviour for a Married Couple (3 days) ? From now on every New Day will fulfil all our DREAMS - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *Count Your Blessings* Thanks !
March 26th, 2020 12:09
Somewhere.
orchidee said:
Somewhere there are fine poems - here\'s one right here! heehee. Will flattery get me everywhere?!
March 26th, 2020 09:22
orchidee said:
Somewhere there are fine poems - here\'s one right here! heehee. Will flattery get me everywhere?!
March 26th, 2020 09:22
Tasting.
Saxon Crow said:
You\'d already get high praise for using one of my favourite words, \'autumnal\'. This is a lovely piece Fay and all the better that I can relate to it.
March 25th, 2020 13:16
Saxon Crow said:
You\'d already get high praise for using one of my favourite words, \'autumnal\'. This is a lovely piece Fay and all the better that I can relate to it.
March 25th, 2020 13:16
Tasting.
dusk arising said:
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful, beautiful world we live in. The great outdoors i describe as god\'s real church.... you can feel the presence... there is no need of song or prayer though one may feel so moved to do both.... i know i do.
Great words from you and hopefully encouraging folk to go out into places where these exhilarating vibrations will us.
March 25th, 2020 12:09
dusk arising said:
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful, beautiful world we live in. The great outdoors i describe as god\'s real church.... you can feel the presence... there is no need of song or prayer though one may feel so moved to do both.... i know i do.
Great words from you and hopefully encouraging folk to go out into places where these exhilarating vibrations will us.
March 25th, 2020 12:09
Tasting.
Michael Edwards said:
Just read through it twice - sheer poetry - but then, of course, it is.
March 25th, 2020 10:20
Michael Edwards said:
Just read through it twice - sheer poetry - but then, of course, it is.
March 25th, 2020 10:20
Tasting.
orchidee said:
That lass is having fine old time as described by you Fay!
March 25th, 2020 10:16
orchidee said:
That lass is having fine old time as described by you Fay!
March 25th, 2020 10:16
Tasting.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sounds like my almost daily routine here in Yorkshire Fay. I wonder how you knew. Even during \'normal\' times I see no one out on the moor, save for a rider in the distance.
Thank you for allowing us to journey alongside you a way, and for the image of a (I think) quarter horse and rider with the wind in their hair.
Ex animo, Alan
March 25th, 2020 07:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sounds like my almost daily routine here in Yorkshire Fay. I wonder how you knew. Even during \'normal\' times I see no one out on the moor, save for a rider in the distance.
Thank you for allowing us to journey alongside you a way, and for the image of a (I think) quarter horse and rider with the wind in their hair.
Ex animo, Alan
March 25th, 2020 07:39
Lost.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I am flowing all the way with your words.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I am flowing all the way with your words.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:01
Lost.
Neville said:
A superb dedication and tribute to that all important life giving H2O..
the very stuff that not only our world, but our individual selves are each comprised of... The very stuff of life itself.. that which has been written about by man since he could first scribe.. I have read many such dedications, but none so detailed, captivating and refreshing as these...
March 24th, 2020 14:07
Neville said:
A superb dedication and tribute to that all important life giving H2O..
the very stuff that not only our world, but our individual selves are each comprised of... The very stuff of life itself.. that which has been written about by man since he could first scribe.. I have read many such dedications, but none so detailed, captivating and refreshing as these...
March 24th, 2020 14:07
Lost.
dusk arising said:
Love the second part especially Fay. Reminds us all who still have the younger self surviving, with a glint in the eye, in an ageing body that... yes a babbling brook we shall ever be.
March 24th, 2020 13:07
dusk arising said:
Love the second part especially Fay. Reminds us all who still have the younger self surviving, with a glint in the eye, in an ageing body that... yes a babbling brook we shall ever be.
March 24th, 2020 13:07
Lost.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I have to say that this piece flows well Fay, as all good poems should.
Ex animo, Alan
March 24th, 2020 10:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I have to say that this piece flows well Fay, as all good poems should.
Ex animo, Alan
March 24th, 2020 10:39
Lost.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - another move forward to your long waited wedding - - may I add my very best wishes as you make your vows this afternoon.......... blessings galore and loads of glad hugs for you both...xxxx from Fay
March 24th, 2020 07:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - another move forward to your long waited wedding - - may I add my very best wishes as you make your vows this afternoon.......... blessings galore and loads of glad hugs for you both...xxxx from Fay
March 24th, 2020 07:31
Lost.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Morning FAY - BRIAN & I love Mountain Streams especially in the Lake District where you can trace them from Spring to Brook to Stream to River to Lake - One of Natures greatest sights & sounds perfectly described for us in Verse 1. Verse 2. aptly describes how out lives are mirrored in Stream form Source to Ocean - Beautiful - Thanks for sharing.
Brian & His Technician are planning a Waterfall and stream in our new Garden there is already a very nice Pond !
Due to the new restrictions BRIAN & I are now getting Married this afternoon with out two MAMAS as Matrons of Honour. My PAPA will give us away and Brians Dad will be the Best Man. Fortunatley we are all seeing the funny side of it and Mama & I cant stop giggling ! Their Maid / Cook wil prepare a Spanish Meal for us (roast ham) and plenty of RIOJA TINTA ! We will go to Cambrige for our Honemoon on Thursday and then back to BETHANY our First Home - AMEN - Better get my dress on its almost time for PAPA to *Get Me to the Church on Time !*
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
We are not too disappointed - Just Happy
That we can be Married in the sight of GOD
before we move into our New Home - AMEN
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
March 24th, 2020 07:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Morning FAY - BRIAN & I love Mountain Streams especially in the Lake District where you can trace them from Spring to Brook to Stream to River to Lake - One of Natures greatest sights & sounds perfectly described for us in Verse 1. Verse 2. aptly describes how out lives are mirrored in Stream form Source to Ocean - Beautiful - Thanks for sharing.
Brian & His Technician are planning a Waterfall and stream in our new Garden there is already a very nice Pond !
Due to the new restrictions BRIAN & I are now getting Married this afternoon with out two MAMAS as Matrons of Honour. My PAPA will give us away and Brians Dad will be the Best Man. Fortunatley we are all seeing the funny side of it and Mama & I cant stop giggling ! Their Maid / Cook wil prepare a Spanish Meal for us (roast ham) and plenty of RIOJA TINTA ! We will go to Cambrige for our Honemoon on Thursday and then back to BETHANY our First Home - AMEN - Better get my dress on its almost time for PAPA to *Get Me to the Church on Time !*
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
We are not too disappointed - Just Happy
That we can be Married in the sight of GOD
before we move into our New Home - AMEN
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
March 24th, 2020 07:25
Losing You.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - In my exerience over the last 16 years the temperature of *Love* has a wide range Cool - warm - hot - red hot ! But *True Love* is often found at the *KOOLER* end because it is not obsessive or posessive and each partner is given SPACE ! The love between Brian & I is warm but of course we are not married yet. The Wedding has now been brought forward to Saturday (28 March 2020)and I will be 32 on Monday 30th March. After we are married and move into our First House - the temperature may rise ! I love the Koolness of the Love you describe and how it developed. When this gentle love which gradually brought you closer & closer together was cut short by death - I can fully understand why emotionally you died also. A very emotional & salutary Poem thanks for sharing.
Love - Joy & Peace
Angela 💛💛💛💛💛
March 23rd, 2020 18:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - In my exerience over the last 16 years the temperature of *Love* has a wide range Cool - warm - hot - red hot ! But *True Love* is often found at the *KOOLER* end because it is not obsessive or posessive and each partner is given SPACE ! The love between Brian & I is warm but of course we are not married yet. The Wedding has now been brought forward to Saturday (28 March 2020)and I will be 32 on Monday 30th March. After we are married and move into our First House - the temperature may rise ! I love the Koolness of the Love you describe and how it developed. When this gentle love which gradually brought you closer & closer together was cut short by death - I can fully understand why emotionally you died also. A very emotional & salutary Poem thanks for sharing.
Love - Joy & Peace
Angela 💛💛💛💛💛
March 23rd, 2020 18:36
Mother-Fed.
Amon said:
I feel like embracing mine mom right now, thanks mom Fay
March 23rd, 2020 04:29
Amon said:
I feel like embracing mine mom right now, thanks mom Fay
March 23rd, 2020 04:29
Losing You.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, so moving, that lost love that became such close friendship can be so important in our lives.
Andy
March 23rd, 2020 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Fay, so moving, that lost love that became such close friendship can be so important in our lives.
Andy
March 23rd, 2020 02:47
Mother-Fed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, mothers held all their families together in life.
Andy
March 23rd, 2020 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, mothers held all their families together in life.
Andy
March 23rd, 2020 01:07
Mother-Fed.
dusk arising said:
Wow Fay Wow! I loved every word of this.... i pictured so vividly mum\'s morning, so much so, i thought you were presenting the scenery for a screenplay before me.
Capturing my heart and I\'m sure every readers heart for we all (mostly) had this loving, caring, dutiful person in our life. Definitely touched me.
Yes, a must for my favourites.
March 22nd, 2020 18:16
dusk arising said:
Wow Fay Wow! I loved every word of this.... i pictured so vividly mum\'s morning, so much so, i thought you were presenting the scenery for a screenplay before me.
Capturing my heart and I\'m sure every readers heart for we all (mostly) had this loving, caring, dutiful person in our life. Definitely touched me.
Yes, a must for my favourites.
March 22nd, 2020 18:16
Mother-Fed.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY thanks for your Poem in praise of Mothers ! Im fortunate that I sill have my MUM ! She has been the focus of all things in my life. She always devoted herself 100% to me my Brother & Sister we have all fled the nest so now she just looks after my Dad ! She cooked all the food washed all the Clothes - and fought our corners 24/7. My MUM is still my best friend and (until) I get married I enjoy Sunday Lunch at my Mums every other week ! Fortunately My Mum is more than happy to pass on her responsibilities to ANGELA ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
Please check *God is my Shepherd* Thanks !
March 22nd, 2020 16:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY thanks for your Poem in praise of Mothers ! Im fortunate that I sill have my MUM ! She has been the focus of all things in my life. She always devoted herself 100% to me my Brother & Sister we have all fled the nest so now she just looks after my Dad ! She cooked all the food washed all the Clothes - and fought our corners 24/7. My MUM is still my best friend and (until) I get married I enjoy Sunday Lunch at my Mums every other week ! Fortunately My Mum is more than happy to pass on her responsibilities to ANGELA ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
Please check *God is my Shepherd* Thanks !
March 22nd, 2020 16:45
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