Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Change.
Saxon Crow said:
Awesomely optimisitc and uplifting Fay. Bring on the world!!!
March 11th, 2020 09:31
Saxon Crow said:
Awesomely optimisitc and uplifting Fay. Bring on the world!!!
March 11th, 2020 09:31
Change.
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m drift to the other side with you! Fantastic stuff!
March 11th, 2020 08:52
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m drift to the other side with you! Fantastic stuff!
March 11th, 2020 08:52
Smitten.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY - love the picture of KITTY - WICKED ! Im pleased she stirred your MUSE cos you shared Her with us. Its nearly a MONTH since VALENTINES DAY ! But sometimes LOVE does take time to materialise !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *Sport is Good for Body & Soul* - Thanks A & B
March 10th, 2020 15:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY - love the picture of KITTY - WICKED ! Im pleased she stirred your MUSE cos you shared Her with us. Its nearly a MONTH since VALENTINES DAY ! But sometimes LOVE does take time to materialise !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *Sport is Good for Body & Soul* - Thanks A & B
March 10th, 2020 15:36
Smitten.
Saxon Crow said:
Everyday is valentines. Especially for poets... its the law!
March 10th, 2020 14:20
Saxon Crow said:
Everyday is valentines. Especially for poets... its the law!
March 10th, 2020 14:20
Smitten.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Fay, this is far too early for Valentine\'s day \'21. Guess you just couldn\'t wait, eh!
Ex animo, Alan
March 10th, 2020 14:19
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Fay, this is far too early for Valentine\'s day \'21. Guess you just couldn\'t wait, eh!
Ex animo, Alan
March 10th, 2020 14:19
Protector.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, your way with words is quite phenomenal.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, your way with words is quite phenomenal.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:22
Protector.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A colourful and Kaleidoscopic piece Fay. I enjoyed my visit.
Ex animo, Alan
March 9th, 2020 16:57
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A colourful and Kaleidoscopic piece Fay. I enjoyed my visit.
Ex animo, Alan
March 9th, 2020 16:57
Protector.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hello Fay - You have taken a familiar subject *A RAINBOW* and sanctified it. GOD provided the Rainbow as a reminder that He would never again destroy Planet earth witha Universal Flood ! However we have come close in some places in the UK this year. Brian & I are buying a house on a Hill and away from the River ! Your poem is a cornucopia of elegantly matched free-verse triplets ! Love the phrases -
Such a myth of rain-drop striation
You curved secreter of sought potted gold - WICKED !
Thanks for sharing such a prismatic & polished poetic gem !
Love the visual - so so appropriate - awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 9th, 2020 13:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hello Fay - You have taken a familiar subject *A RAINBOW* and sanctified it. GOD provided the Rainbow as a reminder that He would never again destroy Planet earth witha Universal Flood ! However we have come close in some places in the UK this year. Brian & I are buying a house on a Hill and away from the River ! Your poem is a cornucopia of elegantly matched free-verse triplets ! Love the phrases -
Such a myth of rain-drop striation
You curved secreter of sought potted gold - WICKED !
Thanks for sharing such a prismatic & polished poetic gem !
Love the visual - so so appropriate - awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 9th, 2020 13:22
Protector.
Saxon Crow said:
Another wonderful poem Fay. You\'ve got such a gift!
March 9th, 2020 09:06
Saxon Crow said:
Another wonderful poem Fay. You\'ve got such a gift!
March 9th, 2020 09:06
Protector.
Neville said:
this is so good Fay.. if I was both a poet and quite a few years younger.. I would both arc and do a double back flip for thee... beautiful words and true.... sadly its not just my eyes that have gone.... my knees are not so young as they once were.....
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:27
Neville said:
this is so good Fay.. if I was both a poet and quite a few years younger.. I would both arc and do a double back flip for thee... beautiful words and true.... sadly its not just my eyes that have gone.... my knees are not so young as they once were.....
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:27
Protector.
angmaria said:
I really like this! and I love the photo shared with it very mystical:)x
March 9th, 2020 06:38
angmaria said:
I really like this! and I love the photo shared with it very mystical:)x
March 9th, 2020 06:38
Mischief.
Neville said:
More magic than a magicians wotsits
warming on a windowsill midwinter .. this is a super post dear Fay .. in fact I was quite blown away by it...…
Neville
March 8th, 2020 10:15
Neville said:
More magic than a magicians wotsits
warming on a windowsill midwinter .. this is a super post dear Fay .. in fact I was quite blown away by it...…
Neville
March 8th, 2020 10:15
Only Love.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks FAY for a very precious Love Poem ~ All about us!
ANGELA ~ Only SHE could make this change in ME
Only SHE could seal my Destiny
Only SHE and SHE alone ~ could thrill me like SHE do
And fill my Heart with Love ~ the whole Day through .......
ANGELA ~ the same Yesterday ~ Today & Forever
Because together we have found TRUE LOVE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 7th, 2020 12:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks FAY for a very precious Love Poem ~ All about us!
ANGELA ~ Only SHE could make this change in ME
Only SHE could seal my Destiny
Only SHE and SHE alone ~ could thrill me like SHE do
And fill my Heart with Love ~ the whole Day through .......
ANGELA ~ the same Yesterday ~ Today & Forever
Because together we have found TRUE LOVE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 7th, 2020 12:48
Over ?
Neville said:
Its not over until the fat lady sings..... You have crafted a little belter here Fay.... dunno why I suddenly felt a pang of guilt...
Neville x
March 7th, 2020 12:46
Neville said:
Its not over until the fat lady sings..... You have crafted a little belter here Fay.... dunno why I suddenly felt a pang of guilt...
Neville x
March 7th, 2020 12:46
Only Love.
Saxon Crow said:
So so true. Love does only understand love. Where do your words all come from Fay? Mesmerising!
March 6th, 2020 16:57
Saxon Crow said:
So so true. Love does only understand love. Where do your words all come from Fay? Mesmerising!
March 6th, 2020 16:57
Only Love.
Michael Edwards said:
Love - such a wonderful thing - mind you after 56 years of marriage we couldn\'t give a darn whether or not the lights on or off. Just so pleased to be still together.
March 6th, 2020 14:15
Michael Edwards said:
Love - such a wonderful thing - mind you after 56 years of marriage we couldn\'t give a darn whether or not the lights on or off. Just so pleased to be still together.
March 6th, 2020 14:15
Only Love.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, from nature to human nature, you really know how to say it well. Kudos!
March 6th, 2020 11:57
FredPeyer said:
Fay, from nature to human nature, you really know how to say it well. Kudos!
March 6th, 2020 11:57
Only Love.
dusk arising said:
OK I get it, so you only see your lover when the lights are out. Least ways its the image of him in dim light which stays with you... hmmmm mind wandering now.... why would that be so?
Very sensual poetic Fay today.
March 6th, 2020 10:32
dusk arising said:
OK I get it, so you only see your lover when the lights are out. Least ways its the image of him in dim light which stays with you... hmmmm mind wandering now.... why would that be so?
Very sensual poetic Fay today.
March 6th, 2020 10:32
Only Love.
Neville said:
A seriously sublime and somewhat subtly sensual love 💕 poem is what we have here, thanks to thee dear Fay... Cheers 🍷
Neville 😎
March 6th, 2020 08:37
Neville said:
A seriously sublime and somewhat subtly sensual love 💕 poem is what we have here, thanks to thee dear Fay... Cheers 🍷
Neville 😎
March 6th, 2020 08:37
Only Love.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Only love makes me swoon! Poor old Orchi. Will it be too much for him?! heehee.
March 6th, 2020 03:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Only love makes me swoon! Poor old Orchi. Will it be too much for him?! heehee.
March 6th, 2020 03:52
Mischief.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, that wind can be very tormenting at times.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, that wind can be very tormenting at times.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:23
Mischief.
Clara said:
Oh, this is such a fun little piece. Aptly titled... Very much enjoyed it.
March 5th, 2020 14:36
Clara said:
Oh, this is such a fun little piece. Aptly titled... Very much enjoyed it.
March 5th, 2020 14:36
Mischief.
FredPeyer said:
Der Wind, der Wind, das himmlische Kind! Your poem really is full of mischief. Like it lot.
March 5th, 2020 12:43
FredPeyer said:
Der Wind, der Wind, das himmlische Kind! Your poem really is full of mischief. Like it lot.
March 5th, 2020 12:43
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