Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Readied.
dusk arising said:
Wherefore art thy certificate of X ? Forsooth my doublet dampens as perspiring beads course my being.
March 17th, 2020 13:19
dusk arising said:
Wherefore art thy certificate of X ? Forsooth my doublet dampens as perspiring beads course my being.
March 17th, 2020 13:19
Readied.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not getting anywhere. Me armour has rusted, and I can\'t get it off, let alone being ardorous - if that\'s even a word?!
The problems old Orchi has. lol.
March 17th, 2020 10:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not getting anywhere. Me armour has rusted, and I can\'t get it off, let alone being ardorous - if that\'s even a word?!
The problems old Orchi has. lol.
March 17th, 2020 10:15
Enticing.
anonymousblue said:
Such an elegant, visual poem. Indeed, you\'ve extolled the virtues of one of life\'s simplest yet biggest pleasures. Well done.
March 16th, 2020 17:25
anonymousblue said:
Such an elegant, visual poem. Indeed, you\'ve extolled the virtues of one of life\'s simplest yet biggest pleasures. Well done.
March 16th, 2020 17:25
Enticing.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart but it is equally magnificent.
I often think of Celia Thaxter early morn:-
The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet.
Ex animo, Alan
March 16th, 2020 14:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart but it is equally magnificent.
I often think of Celia Thaxter early morn:-
The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet.
Ex animo, Alan
March 16th, 2020 14:58
Enticing.
Saxon Crow said:
You\'re just a complete genius Fay. Another amazing one
March 16th, 2020 10:04
Saxon Crow said:
You\'re just a complete genius Fay. Another amazing one
March 16th, 2020 10:04
Enticing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! Your Poem tcday answered my Question *How does the enticement of love operate ?* Impeccably - Impressive - Imposingly - Impassively & Impellingly ! Brian & I are finding that there is NO ESCAPE from TRUE LOVE - AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check COVID 19 - Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 09:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! Your Poem tcday answered my Question *How does the enticement of love operate ?* Impeccably - Impressive - Imposingly - Impassively & Impellingly ! Brian & I are finding that there is NO ESCAPE from TRUE LOVE - AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check COVID 19 - Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 09:46
Enticing.
Daydream Believer said:
“From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day\'s entrance shatter dark chains”
Stunning start to a beautiful piece. A breath of fresh air to read and inhale the beauty of the morning light
Thank you so much
March 16th, 2020 08:01
Daydream Believer said:
“From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day\'s entrance shatter dark chains”
Stunning start to a beautiful piece. A breath of fresh air to read and inhale the beauty of the morning light
Thank you so much
March 16th, 2020 08:01
Enticing.
dusk arising said:
Unlike me lately, you must be an early riser. As a busy bee i was too but rarely able to enjoy the dawn as it seems you do. I\'m thinking one of your several muses\' must be the your love of natural surroundings.
Here once again you are our lady of the dawns beauty.
March 16th, 2020 05:04
dusk arising said:
Unlike me lately, you must be an early riser. As a busy bee i was too but rarely able to enjoy the dawn as it seems you do. I\'m thinking one of your several muses\' must be the your love of natural surroundings.
Here once again you are our lady of the dawns beauty.
March 16th, 2020 05:04
Enticing.
orchidee said:
An impeccable, impressive, imposing, etc, poem Fay. Am I flattering now?! heehee.
March 16th, 2020 03:49
orchidee said:
An impeccable, impressive, imposing, etc, poem Fay. Am I flattering now?! heehee.
March 16th, 2020 03:49
Enticing.
Poetic Dan said:
Enchanting as ever, taking my mind to me places.
Much appreciated
March 16th, 2020 03:29
Poetic Dan said:
Enchanting as ever, taking my mind to me places.
Much appreciated
March 16th, 2020 03:29
Movement.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY Angela here - Ahhhh Sunrise and the dawn of a New Day ! For us working People it sure does *waken bleary dreams* and *banishes lethargic sleep * ! Love the final line *Night hooks day to my use* WICKED ! Once gain you*ve penned a GEM ! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 13th, 2020 16:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY Angela here - Ahhhh Sunrise and the dawn of a New Day ! For us working People it sure does *waken bleary dreams* and *banishes lethargic sleep * ! Love the final line *Night hooks day to my use* WICKED ! Once gain you*ve penned a GEM ! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 13th, 2020 16:12
Movement.
dusk arising said:
Splendid, our lady of the dawns mischief.
It\'s been a while since i saw a dawn shake the world from slumbers but you always give me a vivid insight to this happening when dawn is your chosen subject. Today i felt guilty for there was not much \'movement\' from me till much later this morning.
March 13th, 2020 06:01
dusk arising said:
Splendid, our lady of the dawns mischief.
It\'s been a while since i saw a dawn shake the world from slumbers but you always give me a vivid insight to this happening when dawn is your chosen subject. Today i felt guilty for there was not much \'movement\' from me till much later this morning.
March 13th, 2020 06:01
Tudor Love Note.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I hope she gets a favourable reply Fay ~ the age of chivalry is not yet dead!
Nicely written in Albion.
I bid you good knight.
Ex animo, Alan
March 12th, 2020 15:24
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I hope she gets a favourable reply Fay ~ the age of chivalry is not yet dead!
Nicely written in Albion.
I bid you good knight.
Ex animo, Alan
March 12th, 2020 15:24
Tudor Love Note.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was a knight, but stayed out in the rain. Me armour rusted up! lol.
March 12th, 2020 10:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was a knight, but stayed out in the rain. Me armour rusted up! lol.
March 12th, 2020 10:11
Tudor Love Note.
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my youth when we spoke proper - nice one Fay.
March 12th, 2020 09:44
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my youth when we spoke proper - nice one Fay.
March 12th, 2020 09:44
Tudor Love Note.
Neville said:
call him an old fashioned guy, but he thinks this is simply sublime in an old fashioned way..
March 12th, 2020 09:06
Neville said:
call him an old fashioned guy, but he thinks this is simply sublime in an old fashioned way..
March 12th, 2020 09:06
Tudor Love Note.
Saxon Crow said:
How very scandalous! And so romantic fair maiden that you are!
March 12th, 2020 07:30
Saxon Crow said:
How very scandalous! And so romantic fair maiden that you are!
March 12th, 2020 07:30
Change.
MendedFences27 said:
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that feeling to most of us.Yet to \"float in dreams of contentment\" is one of those inner feelings that exist purely in one\'s heart. A wonderful and exhilarating poem. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2020 18:35
MendedFences27 said:
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that feeling to most of us.Yet to \"float in dreams of contentment\" is one of those inner feelings that exist purely in one\'s heart. A wonderful and exhilarating poem. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2020 18:35
Change.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Fay, all things in life are good.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 16:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Fay, all things in life are good.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 16:33
Change.
dusk arising said:
Oh take me once again to the stage
before the crowd where i was reborn
let my breath and fingers play
my life and soul through shining horn
Love your words today and your last verse took me back to the elation of playing music of ones self to an appreciative crowd.
March 11th, 2020 11:59
dusk arising said:
Oh take me once again to the stage
before the crowd where i was reborn
let my breath and fingers play
my life and soul through shining horn
Love your words today and your last verse took me back to the elation of playing music of ones self to an appreciative crowd.
March 11th, 2020 11:59
Change.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Oooooh FAY - Just a Month to My Wedding (Easter Saturday !) so much to do so little time - and a House to get ready as well ! This Poem was just the *Power of Positive Thinking* I needed ! Ive copied it and I will stick it on My Bedroom Wall !
I love all the NINE POSITIVES ! Without Resentment - Jubilation - Exhilaration (Thrill) - Contentment - Satisfaction - Exultation - Excitement - Exhilaration (Bliss) & Elation - AMEN ! I was praying for sign that everything would run smoothly - and this is it - Hallelujah ! I may use these NINE words in a POEM is that OK ?
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
NINE Golden Hearts for NINE Golden Words !
March 11th, 2020 11:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Oooooh FAY - Just a Month to My Wedding (Easter Saturday !) so much to do so little time - and a House to get ready as well ! This Poem was just the *Power of Positive Thinking* I needed ! Ive copied it and I will stick it on My Bedroom Wall !
I love all the NINE POSITIVES ! Without Resentment - Jubilation - Exhilaration (Thrill) - Contentment - Satisfaction - Exultation - Excitement - Exhilaration (Bliss) & Elation - AMEN ! I was praying for sign that everything would run smoothly - and this is it - Hallelujah ! I may use these NINE words in a POEM is that OK ?
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
NINE Golden Hearts for NINE Golden Words !
March 11th, 2020 11:44
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