Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Love\'s Effect.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE FAY - GOOD SUNDAY ! Thnaks for sharing & expessing just how I feelin the first fush of Marriage ! BRIAN is an Angel in Bed and so gentle after Ive had a hard day in Clinic ! Also he is a good Sleeper ! Sometimes I just look at Him sleeping & thank God for bringing us together ! Ive grown acustomed to his FACE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
April 5th, 2020 10:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE FAY - GOOD SUNDAY ! Thnaks for sharing & expessing just how I feelin the first fush of Marriage ! BRIAN is an Angel in Bed and so gentle after Ive had a hard day in Clinic ! Also he is a good Sleeper ! Sometimes I just look at Him sleeping & thank God for bringing us together ! Ive grown acustomed to his FACE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
April 5th, 2020 10:28
Love\'s Effect.
dusk arising said:
It\'s what breathings for surely? Careful with that breathlessness at the moment.
April 5th, 2020 08:42
dusk arising said:
It\'s what breathings for surely? Careful with that breathlessness at the moment.
April 5th, 2020 08:42
Love\'s Effect.
Neville said:
A truly splendid poem Fay and then some.... Neville
April 5th, 2020 05:41
Neville said:
A truly splendid poem Fay and then some.... Neville
April 5th, 2020 05:41
Perfection.
Neville said:
so deserving of all the positivity already heaped upon it by your loyal peers dear Fay.. and for what its worth..... I love it too..
Neville
April 4th, 2020 17:17
Neville said:
so deserving of all the positivity already heaped upon it by your loyal peers dear Fay.. and for what its worth..... I love it too..
Neville
April 4th, 2020 17:17
Perfection.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY.. Thanks for another gem - euloguising feathers ! Each individual Feather is a masterpiece of design. Each species of Bird has its own specific set of feathers - suited to their size & habitat. Seeing a Golden Eagle gliding on a thermal is an unforgettable experience - and one of the miracles of Nature - There is a GOD - AMEN. Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 3rd, 2020 15:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY.. Thanks for another gem - euloguising feathers ! Each individual Feather is a masterpiece of design. Each species of Bird has its own specific set of feathers - suited to their size & habitat. Seeing a Golden Eagle gliding on a thermal is an unforgettable experience - and one of the miracles of Nature - There is a GOD - AMEN. Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 3rd, 2020 15:42
Perfection.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderful theme Fay. These creatures are as beautiful at rest as they are in flight.
Ex animo, Alan
April 3rd, 2020 08:24
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderful theme Fay. These creatures are as beautiful at rest as they are in flight.
Ex animo, Alan
April 3rd, 2020 08:24
Perfection.
dusk arising said:
Aren\'t we all. by and large, envious of our aerial friends. I have often watched in awe with that childhood fantasy, still inside me, that i could fly among them.
But down to earth you may find me at dusk transfixed by the beauty of a blackbirds song.
You have the gift of taking your reader out of their environment to mentally romance with your chosen subject .... as i found myself doing once again today.
April 3rd, 2020 03:50
dusk arising said:
Aren\'t we all. by and large, envious of our aerial friends. I have often watched in awe with that childhood fantasy, still inside me, that i could fly among them.
But down to earth you may find me at dusk transfixed by the beauty of a blackbirds song.
You have the gift of taking your reader out of their environment to mentally romance with your chosen subject .... as i found myself doing once again today.
April 3rd, 2020 03:50
Perfection.
orchidee said:
Yes, good write Fay. Also, I saw a midge creature, less than 1mm long. Minute (as in small size) fascination with it.
No one\'s perfect - except me, of course! No one believes me though. heehee.
April 3rd, 2020 02:33
orchidee said:
Yes, good write Fay. Also, I saw a midge creature, less than 1mm long. Minute (as in small size) fascination with it.
No one\'s perfect - except me, of course! No one believes me though. heehee.
April 3rd, 2020 02:33
Apprehension.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a fantastic poem Fay, I was on that journey from the start.
This does not happen often but it is going into my favourites.
Thank you for that wonderful journey.
Andy
April 3rd, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
What a fantastic poem Fay, I was on that journey from the start.
This does not happen often but it is going into my favourites.
Thank you for that wonderful journey.
Andy
April 3rd, 2020 00:15
Apprehension.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Good Evening Fay - Love the visual. The aspect of the Poem that struck me was not so much the demise but the visual picture you painted of the transition form Town to Rural. A bit like J Betjemans *Journey to Diss*. I was raised up in London - so the transition to Rural Essex (which my Parents made while I was at University) was a real culture shock. I enjoyed the cultural amenities of London when I was a Teen and I had to adjust to *Small Town Life* and work @ the Local Hospital. It is interesting the Brian (brought up in Liverpool) and I in London should have chosen a House in a rural setting. Your poem stirred my memory - thanks for sharing ! I liked your last line which is very important in the present crisis *And then she started to PRAY - AMEN*
Blessings and Peace and joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
April 2nd, 2020 18:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Good Evening Fay - Love the visual. The aspect of the Poem that struck me was not so much the demise but the visual picture you painted of the transition form Town to Rural. A bit like J Betjemans *Journey to Diss*. I was raised up in London - so the transition to Rural Essex (which my Parents made while I was at University) was a real culture shock. I enjoyed the cultural amenities of London when I was a Teen and I had to adjust to *Small Town Life* and work @ the Local Hospital. It is interesting the Brian (brought up in Liverpool) and I in London should have chosen a House in a rural setting. Your poem stirred my memory - thanks for sharing ! I liked your last line which is very important in the present crisis *And then she started to PRAY - AMEN*
Blessings and Peace and joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
April 2nd, 2020 18:15
Apprehension.
MendedFences27 said:
This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the worst outcome hit home to me. Loved the exquisite way the description evolves, from minimum concern to prayer as she nears home. A great sense of empathy here. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2020 15:26
MendedFences27 said:
This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the worst outcome hit home to me. Loved the exquisite way the description evolves, from minimum concern to prayer as she nears home. A great sense of empathy here. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2020 15:26
Apprehension.
orchidee said:
Bit dangerous for that gal standing so near the line and the train! I would rescue her, but as I say, me knight\'s shining armour has gone rusty. lol. A fine write Fay.
April 2nd, 2020 06:45
orchidee said:
Bit dangerous for that gal standing so near the line and the train! I would rescue her, but as I say, me knight\'s shining armour has gone rusty. lol. A fine write Fay.
April 2nd, 2020 06:45
Apprehension.
dusk arising said:
Wonderful drama in this Fay as you once again own the dawning day and morning atmosphere taking us from urban to rural. But thats just your poetic backdrop to this plot. You weave the two together beautifully here and yes.... leave us with baited breath - suspended.
Truly shows your mastery of this poetic art.
April 2nd, 2020 03:55
dusk arising said:
Wonderful drama in this Fay as you once again own the dawning day and morning atmosphere taking us from urban to rural. But thats just your poetic backdrop to this plot. You weave the two together beautifully here and yes.... leave us with baited breath - suspended.
Truly shows your mastery of this poetic art.
April 2nd, 2020 03:55
Revived.
dusk arising said:
Each love is different isn\'t it. Maybe more learned as we realise how resilient we can be.
The pleasure love brings to the bells and whistles of life does indeed encourage us to dip the toe in when the water looks freshly inviting.
April 1st, 2020 11:51
dusk arising said:
Each love is different isn\'t it. Maybe more learned as we realise how resilient we can be.
The pleasure love brings to the bells and whistles of life does indeed encourage us to dip the toe in when the water looks freshly inviting.
April 1st, 2020 11:51
Revived.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Just finished my Shift (Orthopedic Ward) and checking MPS ! This is an interesting Poem for US in the first flush of married LOVE ! Loving each other seems natural and smooth and consumation beautiful & coordinated ! We can relate to the first three lines ! Lines 4 & 5 frighten me but we know that could never happento us ! We anticipate that in 2070 (When Im 82 & Brian is 86) our love will be just a joyful - but less gymnastic ! Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
April 1st, 2020 10:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Just finished my Shift (Orthopedic Ward) and checking MPS ! This is an interesting Poem for US in the first flush of married LOVE ! Loving each other seems natural and smooth and consumation beautiful & coordinated ! We can relate to the first three lines ! Lines 4 & 5 frighten me but we know that could never happento us ! We anticipate that in 2070 (When Im 82 & Brian is 86) our love will be just a joyful - but less gymnastic ! Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
April 1st, 2020 10:25
Revived.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Erm, I didn\'t get the hang of things. I said \'Who\'s Karma? (lol).
April 1st, 2020 06:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Erm, I didn\'t get the hang of things. I said \'Who\'s Karma? (lol).
April 1st, 2020 06:03
Treasure.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Treasure indeed Fay. A very fine composition from you.
Ex animo, Alan
March 31st, 2020 07:10
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Treasure indeed Fay. A very fine composition from you.
Ex animo, Alan
March 31st, 2020 07:10
Treasure.
dusk arising said:
\"Shall i compare thee to an alcoholic ... one who doth constantly drink of natures intoxicants\"...
LOL that\'s you that is (as Baddiel use to say).
Yep, nature is so inspiring.
March 31st, 2020 05:31
dusk arising said:
\"Shall i compare thee to an alcoholic ... one who doth constantly drink of natures intoxicants\"...
LOL that\'s you that is (as Baddiel use to say).
Yep, nature is so inspiring.
March 31st, 2020 05:31
Sistership.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that closeness will never fail.
Andy
March 31st, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that closeness will never fail.
Andy
March 31st, 2020 00:59
Sistership.
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific and sensitive piece. MM would surely have treasured it. Sibling connections seem to be the same worldwide, an unbreakable bond, no matter what. You have beautifully flavored this one with the taste of \"lemonade.\' I am now saddened remembering siblings lost. Beautiful words Fay. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:17
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific and sensitive piece. MM would surely have treasured it. Sibling connections seem to be the same worldwide, an unbreakable bond, no matter what. You have beautifully flavored this one with the taste of \"lemonade.\' I am now saddened remembering siblings lost. Beautiful words Fay. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:17
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