Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Tudor Love Note.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I hope she gets a favourable reply Fay ~ the age of chivalry is not yet dead!
Nicely written in Albion.
I bid you good knight.
Ex animo, Alan
March 12th, 2020 15:24
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I hope she gets a favourable reply Fay ~ the age of chivalry is not yet dead!
Nicely written in Albion.
I bid you good knight.
Ex animo, Alan
March 12th, 2020 15:24
Tudor Love Note.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was a knight, but stayed out in the rain. Me armour rusted up! lol.
March 12th, 2020 10:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I was a knight, but stayed out in the rain. Me armour rusted up! lol.
March 12th, 2020 10:11
Tudor Love Note.
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my youth when we spoke proper - nice one Fay.
March 12th, 2020 09:44
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my youth when we spoke proper - nice one Fay.
March 12th, 2020 09:44
Tudor Love Note.
Neville said:
call him an old fashioned guy, but he thinks this is simply sublime in an old fashioned way..
March 12th, 2020 09:06
Neville said:
call him an old fashioned guy, but he thinks this is simply sublime in an old fashioned way..
March 12th, 2020 09:06
Tudor Love Note.
Saxon Crow said:
How very scandalous! And so romantic fair maiden that you are!
March 12th, 2020 07:30
Saxon Crow said:
How very scandalous! And so romantic fair maiden that you are!
March 12th, 2020 07:30
Change.
MendedFences27 said:
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that feeling to most of us.Yet to \"float in dreams of contentment\" is one of those inner feelings that exist purely in one\'s heart. A wonderful and exhilarating poem. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2020 18:35
MendedFences27 said:
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that feeling to most of us.Yet to \"float in dreams of contentment\" is one of those inner feelings that exist purely in one\'s heart. A wonderful and exhilarating poem. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2020 18:35
Change.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Fay, all things in life are good.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 16:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Fay, all things in life are good.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 16:33
Change.
dusk arising said:
Oh take me once again to the stage
before the crowd where i was reborn
let my breath and fingers play
my life and soul through shining horn
Love your words today and your last verse took me back to the elation of playing music of ones self to an appreciative crowd.
March 11th, 2020 11:59
dusk arising said:
Oh take me once again to the stage
before the crowd where i was reborn
let my breath and fingers play
my life and soul through shining horn
Love your words today and your last verse took me back to the elation of playing music of ones self to an appreciative crowd.
March 11th, 2020 11:59
Change.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Oooooh FAY - Just a Month to My Wedding (Easter Saturday !) so much to do so little time - and a House to get ready as well ! This Poem was just the *Power of Positive Thinking* I needed ! Ive copied it and I will stick it on My Bedroom Wall !
I love all the NINE POSITIVES ! Without Resentment - Jubilation - Exhilaration (Thrill) - Contentment - Satisfaction - Exultation - Excitement - Exhilaration (Bliss) & Elation - AMEN ! I was praying for sign that everything would run smoothly - and this is it - Hallelujah ! I may use these NINE words in a POEM is that OK ?
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
NINE Golden Hearts for NINE Golden Words !
March 11th, 2020 11:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Oooooh FAY - Just a Month to My Wedding (Easter Saturday !) so much to do so little time - and a House to get ready as well ! This Poem was just the *Power of Positive Thinking* I needed ! Ive copied it and I will stick it on My Bedroom Wall !
I love all the NINE POSITIVES ! Without Resentment - Jubilation - Exhilaration (Thrill) - Contentment - Satisfaction - Exultation - Excitement - Exhilaration (Bliss) & Elation - AMEN ! I was praying for sign that everything would run smoothly - and this is it - Hallelujah ! I may use these NINE words in a POEM is that OK ?
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
NINE Golden Hearts for NINE Golden Words !
March 11th, 2020 11:44
Change.
Saxon Crow said:
Awesomely optimisitc and uplifting Fay. Bring on the world!!!
March 11th, 2020 09:31
Saxon Crow said:
Awesomely optimisitc and uplifting Fay. Bring on the world!!!
March 11th, 2020 09:31
Change.
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m drift to the other side with you! Fantastic stuff!
March 11th, 2020 08:52
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m drift to the other side with you! Fantastic stuff!
March 11th, 2020 08:52
Smitten.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY - love the picture of KITTY - WICKED ! Im pleased she stirred your MUSE cos you shared Her with us. Its nearly a MONTH since VALENTINES DAY ! But sometimes LOVE does take time to materialise !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *Sport is Good for Body & Soul* - Thanks A & B
March 10th, 2020 15:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY - love the picture of KITTY - WICKED ! Im pleased she stirred your MUSE cos you shared Her with us. Its nearly a MONTH since VALENTINES DAY ! But sometimes LOVE does take time to materialise !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *Sport is Good for Body & Soul* - Thanks A & B
March 10th, 2020 15:36
Smitten.
Saxon Crow said:
Everyday is valentines. Especially for poets... its the law!
March 10th, 2020 14:20
Saxon Crow said:
Everyday is valentines. Especially for poets... its the law!
March 10th, 2020 14:20
Smitten.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Fay, this is far too early for Valentine\'s day \'21. Guess you just couldn\'t wait, eh!
Ex animo, Alan
March 10th, 2020 14:19
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Fay, this is far too early for Valentine\'s day \'21. Guess you just couldn\'t wait, eh!
Ex animo, Alan
March 10th, 2020 14:19
Protector.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, your way with words is quite phenomenal.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, your way with words is quite phenomenal.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:22
Protector.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A colourful and Kaleidoscopic piece Fay. I enjoyed my visit.
Ex animo, Alan
March 9th, 2020 16:57
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A colourful and Kaleidoscopic piece Fay. I enjoyed my visit.
Ex animo, Alan
March 9th, 2020 16:57
Protector.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hello Fay - You have taken a familiar subject *A RAINBOW* and sanctified it. GOD provided the Rainbow as a reminder that He would never again destroy Planet earth witha Universal Flood ! However we have come close in some places in the UK this year. Brian & I are buying a house on a Hill and away from the River ! Your poem is a cornucopia of elegantly matched free-verse triplets ! Love the phrases -
Such a myth of rain-drop striation
You curved secreter of sought potted gold - WICKED !
Thanks for sharing such a prismatic & polished poetic gem !
Love the visual - so so appropriate - awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 9th, 2020 13:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hello Fay - You have taken a familiar subject *A RAINBOW* and sanctified it. GOD provided the Rainbow as a reminder that He would never again destroy Planet earth witha Universal Flood ! However we have come close in some places in the UK this year. Brian & I are buying a house on a Hill and away from the River ! Your poem is a cornucopia of elegantly matched free-verse triplets ! Love the phrases -
Such a myth of rain-drop striation
You curved secreter of sought potted gold - WICKED !
Thanks for sharing such a prismatic & polished poetic gem !
Love the visual - so so appropriate - awesome !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 9th, 2020 13:22
Protector.
Saxon Crow said:
Another wonderful poem Fay. You\'ve got such a gift!
March 9th, 2020 09:06
Saxon Crow said:
Another wonderful poem Fay. You\'ve got such a gift!
March 9th, 2020 09:06
Protector.
Neville said:
this is so good Fay.. if I was both a poet and quite a few years younger.. I would both arc and do a double back flip for thee... beautiful words and true.... sadly its not just my eyes that have gone.... my knees are not so young as they once were.....
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:27
Neville said:
this is so good Fay.. if I was both a poet and quite a few years younger.. I would both arc and do a double back flip for thee... beautiful words and true.... sadly its not just my eyes that have gone.... my knees are not so young as they once were.....
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:27
Protector.
angmaria said:
I really like this! and I love the photo shared with it very mystical:)x
March 9th, 2020 06:38
angmaria said:
I really like this! and I love the photo shared with it very mystical:)x
March 9th, 2020 06:38
Mischief.
Neville said:
More magic than a magicians wotsits
warming on a windowsill midwinter .. this is a super post dear Fay .. in fact I was quite blown away by it...…
Neville
March 8th, 2020 10:15
Neville said:
More magic than a magicians wotsits
warming on a windowsill midwinter .. this is a super post dear Fay .. in fact I was quite blown away by it...…
Neville
March 8th, 2020 10:15
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