Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Mother-Fed.
FredPeyer said:
Mothers are a special species, and you said it well. Like the picture too. It reminded me of another saying:
Duct Tape is like the Force, it has a dark side and a bright side, and it holds the world together!
March 22nd, 2020 12:35
FredPeyer said:
Mothers are a special species, and you said it well. Like the picture too. It reminded me of another saying:
Duct Tape is like the Force, it has a dark side and a bright side, and it holds the world together!
March 22nd, 2020 12:35
Mother-Fed.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A wake up call for anyone who has forgotten their mum today Fay. Well writ.
Ex animo, Alan
March 22nd, 2020 09:15
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A wake up call for anyone who has forgotten their mum today Fay. Well writ.
Ex animo, Alan
March 22nd, 2020 09:15
Diversity.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
What you say in your wonderful piece (and book) is quite right Fay. The word does reside among us, maybe more so with the advent of the internet.
Words are judges by the company they keep.
ex animo, Alan
March 20th, 2020 10:23
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
What you say in your wonderful piece (and book) is quite right Fay. The word does reside among us, maybe more so with the advent of the internet.
Words are judges by the company they keep.
ex animo, Alan
March 20th, 2020 10:23
Diversity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY - Our Creator God sure is the Author of Diversity ! Modern Poetry has been described as *Any WORDS in Any ORDER !* We who favour Classical Poetry select our WORDS much more carefully - to Scan perhaps to Rhyme and to fit like a jigsaw - into Pantoums - Acrostics - Sonnets - Haiku etc etc. We seek for perfection of Form - and by the careful choice of words Function ! Every Word in a Poem has value (but not as in scrabble) but in relation to the adjacent words and the overall message of the Poem ! Every Poem should carry a message ! Your elegant Poem perfectly defines & describes - DIVERSITY - Thank you !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 12:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY - Our Creator God sure is the Author of Diversity ! Modern Poetry has been described as *Any WORDS in Any ORDER !* We who favour Classical Poetry select our WORDS much more carefully - to Scan perhaps to Rhyme and to fit like a jigsaw - into Pantoums - Acrostics - Sonnets - Haiku etc etc. We seek for perfection of Form - and by the careful choice of words Function ! Every Word in a Poem has value (but not as in scrabble) but in relation to the adjacent words and the overall message of the Poem ! Every Poem should carry a message ! Your elegant Poem perfectly defines & describes - DIVERSITY - Thank you !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 12:15
Diversity.
dusk arising said:
Not half - and what diverse lot of poetic believers we are too here on mps. From those who\'s god eminates from being taught from aman made book to those who simply feel god spiritually everyday in their love of this life and all around us.
March 19th, 2020 06:21
dusk arising said:
Not half - and what diverse lot of poetic believers we are too here on mps. From those who\'s god eminates from being taught from aman made book to those who simply feel god spiritually everyday in their love of this life and all around us.
March 19th, 2020 06:21
Readied.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Evening FAY ! Love the visual - Looks like me @ the Hospital Fairy Dress Ball @ Christmas ! This is a very enticing Poem - to read - for a Young Couple about to get Married !
You have encapsulated into poetic language - the Biochemistry of how the libido is raised by Human pheremones and also by the scent of male & female perfumes. On the first night of our honeymoon I will wear nothing but Anais Anais ! Brian & I will consumate our LOVE @ Easter no better time for a Revelation of a New Life & Love ! We have both been very patent & circumspect but NOW our Ardour can (and will) be UNCOVERED ~ AMEN Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY - I cant wait for my Knight to replace his Armour with Ardour !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *FEMALE SCIENTISTS* Thanks !
March 17th, 2020 19:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Evening FAY ! Love the visual - Looks like me @ the Hospital Fairy Dress Ball @ Christmas ! This is a very enticing Poem - to read - for a Young Couple about to get Married !
You have encapsulated into poetic language - the Biochemistry of how the libido is raised by Human pheremones and also by the scent of male & female perfumes. On the first night of our honeymoon I will wear nothing but Anais Anais ! Brian & I will consumate our LOVE @ Easter no better time for a Revelation of a New Life & Love ! We have both been very patent & circumspect but NOW our Ardour can (and will) be UNCOVERED ~ AMEN Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY - I cant wait for my Knight to replace his Armour with Ardour !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *FEMALE SCIENTISTS* Thanks !
March 17th, 2020 19:41
Readied.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a nicely languaged piece Fay. A wonderful reading experience.
Ex animo, Alan
March 17th, 2020 15:39
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a nicely languaged piece Fay. A wonderful reading experience.
Ex animo, Alan
March 17th, 2020 15:39
Readied.
dusk arising said:
Wherefore art thy certificate of X ? Forsooth my doublet dampens as perspiring beads course my being.
March 17th, 2020 13:19
dusk arising said:
Wherefore art thy certificate of X ? Forsooth my doublet dampens as perspiring beads course my being.
March 17th, 2020 13:19
Readied.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not getting anywhere. Me armour has rusted, and I can\'t get it off, let alone being ardorous - if that\'s even a word?!
The problems old Orchi has. lol.
March 17th, 2020 10:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not getting anywhere. Me armour has rusted, and I can\'t get it off, let alone being ardorous - if that\'s even a word?!
The problems old Orchi has. lol.
March 17th, 2020 10:15
Enticing.
anonymousblue said:
Such an elegant, visual poem. Indeed, you\'ve extolled the virtues of one of life\'s simplest yet biggest pleasures. Well done.
March 16th, 2020 17:25
anonymousblue said:
Such an elegant, visual poem. Indeed, you\'ve extolled the virtues of one of life\'s simplest yet biggest pleasures. Well done.
March 16th, 2020 17:25
Enticing.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart but it is equally magnificent.
I often think of Celia Thaxter early morn:-
The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet.
Ex animo, Alan
March 16th, 2020 14:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart but it is equally magnificent.
I often think of Celia Thaxter early morn:-
The blush of dawn may yet restore
Our light and joy and hope once more.
Sad soul take comfort, nor forget
That sunrise never failed us yet.
Ex animo, Alan
March 16th, 2020 14:58
Enticing.
Saxon Crow said:
You\'re just a complete genius Fay. Another amazing one
March 16th, 2020 10:04
Saxon Crow said:
You\'re just a complete genius Fay. Another amazing one
March 16th, 2020 10:04
Enticing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! Your Poem tcday answered my Question *How does the enticement of love operate ?* Impeccably - Impressive - Imposingly - Impassively & Impellingly ! Brian & I are finding that there is NO ESCAPE from TRUE LOVE - AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check COVID 19 - Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 09:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! Your Poem tcday answered my Question *How does the enticement of love operate ?* Impeccably - Impressive - Imposingly - Impassively & Impellingly ! Brian & I are finding that there is NO ESCAPE from TRUE LOVE - AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check COVID 19 - Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 09:46
Enticing.
Daydream Believer said:
“From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day\'s entrance shatter dark chains”
Stunning start to a beautiful piece. A breath of fresh air to read and inhale the beauty of the morning light
Thank you so much
March 16th, 2020 08:01
Daydream Believer said:
“From the first finger of hazy light
fresh rays from
day\'s entrance shatter dark chains”
Stunning start to a beautiful piece. A breath of fresh air to read and inhale the beauty of the morning light
Thank you so much
March 16th, 2020 08:01
Enticing.
dusk arising said:
Unlike me lately, you must be an early riser. As a busy bee i was too but rarely able to enjoy the dawn as it seems you do. I\'m thinking one of your several muses\' must be the your love of natural surroundings.
Here once again you are our lady of the dawns beauty.
March 16th, 2020 05:04
dusk arising said:
Unlike me lately, you must be an early riser. As a busy bee i was too but rarely able to enjoy the dawn as it seems you do. I\'m thinking one of your several muses\' must be the your love of natural surroundings.
Here once again you are our lady of the dawns beauty.
March 16th, 2020 05:04
Enticing.
orchidee said:
An impeccable, impressive, imposing, etc, poem Fay. Am I flattering now?! heehee.
March 16th, 2020 03:49
orchidee said:
An impeccable, impressive, imposing, etc, poem Fay. Am I flattering now?! heehee.
March 16th, 2020 03:49
Enticing.
Poetic Dan said:
Enchanting as ever, taking my mind to me places.
Much appreciated
March 16th, 2020 03:29
Poetic Dan said:
Enchanting as ever, taking my mind to me places.
Much appreciated
March 16th, 2020 03:29
Movement.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY Angela here - Ahhhh Sunrise and the dawn of a New Day ! For us working People it sure does *waken bleary dreams* and *banishes lethargic sleep * ! Love the final line *Night hooks day to my use* WICKED ! Once gain you*ve penned a GEM ! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 13th, 2020 16:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY Angela here - Ahhhh Sunrise and the dawn of a New Day ! For us working People it sure does *waken bleary dreams* and *banishes lethargic sleep * ! Love the final line *Night hooks day to my use* WICKED ! Once gain you*ve penned a GEM ! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 13th, 2020 16:12
Movement.
dusk arising said:
Splendid, our lady of the dawns mischief.
It\'s been a while since i saw a dawn shake the world from slumbers but you always give me a vivid insight to this happening when dawn is your chosen subject. Today i felt guilty for there was not much \'movement\' from me till much later this morning.
March 13th, 2020 06:01
dusk arising said:
Splendid, our lady of the dawns mischief.
It\'s been a while since i saw a dawn shake the world from slumbers but you always give me a vivid insight to this happening when dawn is your chosen subject. Today i felt guilty for there was not much \'movement\' from me till much later this morning.
March 13th, 2020 06:01
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